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I think it is a very good book, the story don’t develop slowly what is a good point for me and I think it is well written. I hope you continue with it and don’t drop it.
I really tried to give this novel a chance. I made it to chapter 25 n gave up. The mc and the story itself are a disappointment. Save yourself the trouble.
A very stupid story with brainless mc. Author is 16 at most, or a grown up as stupid, without imagination and proper understanding of art (novels are no less) who just played minecraft and watched few anime. The world and background is totally cliche and chinese way. Dialogs are of a retard speaking to a goat. A disappointment of fanfiction, my conclusion.
This book is really good ,the only problem is the use of wrong pronouns many time, please don't drop this book I have a question is there any NTR in this book?
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i cant read it any more with the stupidity of the mc and irrational action like a fic**ng 8 year old kid and when the author use force(plot) exposing him self to his friend like that when he can take the discount dio alone to the ****
The Mc is stupid he is under pricing everything he sells he gives away hella expensiv items to one off characs and he didn’ even understand the potential of his power also there are a lo of typos and grammar mistakes use grammaly for god sake
This novel is just a waste of time if you are that desperate to read something then, try I guess
Grammar is bad MC is stupid Everyone in the world somehow has an IQ lower than the mc.
I've Love this because it Has very good quality And it's not too ever powered Yet
I mean it's unreadable with that kind of grammar. How can I review other things when its unreadable. It gets worst when you read more. She he always mixed up. You have to read two sometimes five times to understand what is written... It's interesting but only if someone fixes the grammar. I mean what is stopping you from doing it right? You can use translators and grammar programs, it shows you easily where are mistakes. It's just becomes huge pile of words thrown in this app. What's up author?
Honestly the most annoying part about this entire novel is the incredibly low intelligence of the MC. Utterly shocking how someone could be so dumb
I love this one it's very interesting I love how the main character's Powers work And please make more chapters
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The author keeps changing the gender. The MC is an idiot, he undersells his products for no reason. I don't care that for him it's easy to obtain those items, all your doing is throwing away free money.
it's great, but horrible execution, the horrible thing is the grammar, it feels like an mtl but with a short upgrade, but the idea of this fanfic is good, and please if you're going to translate it please use deepl translation and download Grammarly so it makes a good read for readers, and If you want, I can just fix it.
now honestly it has a story that makes you want to continue but the writing is like reading improved mtl it's really hard to read. and some decisions are down bad it had potential but i lost the spark but u should give it a try.
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My expectations are too high. Difficult to explain, it would be better if you read it yourself. 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😞😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓
I haven't started the book yet but when I read the synopsis I liked it, I don't speak Spanish/Español but when I went to check your other book there where not many people who read your book so I hope your book can make it into a million views and reach the top 10. Although I have not read this but I'mma read it now. so fellow SPARTA.. I mean webnovel readers let's conquer this book!!!!!
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the concept is interesting and fun to read, unfortunately the story is very slow
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This looks a lot like one of those mass-produced Chinese fics where except for the MC who has information on his past lives, the whole world is completely stupid and can't figure out some obvious and basic information on his own. Some examples in the first few chapters are how a Runner (tower player) was attacked by an enderman and thought it was another Runner. In 5 years of the tower it was to be expected that at least the monsters in the tutorial were all well known!!! Another thing is that I can't believe that even after 5 years in an obviously game-based world, with health bar and all, nobody but the MC has tried to see if there is an inventory or crafting function, killing an enderman or stealing a bow of the hand of a skeleton. Conveniently the MC was the first person in the world to kill an enderman, on the same day a guild tried to do the same and the MC was the first to try to steal a bow from a skeleton.
The Mc is stupid he is under pricing everything he sells he gives away hella expensiv items to one off characs and he didn’ even understand the potential of his power also there are a lo of typos and grammar mistakes use grammaly for god sake
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One of the best world building I've seen in fanfic, good pacing and ways of giving MC power without making him instantly overpowered. My only complaint is that sometimes it gets confusing, for me there's at least 5 blonde young men wearing a cross earings and white robes 😂
I think it is a very good book, the story don’t develop slowly what is a good point for me and I think it is well written. I hope you continue with it and don’t drop it.
I really tried to give this novel a chance. I made it to chapter 25 n gave up. The mc and the story itself are a disappointment. Save yourself the trouble.
A very stupid story with brainless mc. Author is 16 at most, or a grown up as stupid, without imagination and proper understanding of art (novels are no less) who just played minecraft and watched few anime. The world and background is totally cliche and chinese way. Dialogs are of a retard speaking to a goat. A disappointment of fanfiction, my conclusion.
This book is really good ,the only problem is the use of wrong pronouns many time, please don't drop this book I have a question is there any NTR in this book?
XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
Reveal Spoiler i cant read it any more with the stupidity of the mc and irrational action like a fic**ng 8 year old kid and when the author use force(plot) exposing him self to his friend like that when he can take the discount dio alone to the ****
The Mc is stupid he is under pricing everything he sells he gives away hella expensiv items to one off characs and he didn’ even understand the potential of his power also there are a lo of typos and grammar mistakes use grammaly for god sake
This novel is just a waste of time if you are that desperate to read something then, try I guess
Grammar is bad MC is stupid Everyone in the world somehow has an IQ lower than the mc.
I've Love this because it Has very good quality And it's not too ever powered Yet
I mean it's unreadable with that kind of grammar. How can I review other things when its unreadable. It gets worst when you read more. She he always mixed up. You have to read two sometimes five times to understand what is written... It's interesting but only if someone fixes the grammar. I mean what is stopping you from doing it right? You can use translators and grammar programs, it shows you easily where are mistakes. It's just becomes huge pile of words thrown in this app. What's up author?
Honestly the most annoying part about this entire novel is the incredibly low intelligence of the MC. Utterly shocking how someone could be so dumb
I love this one it's very interesting I love how the main character's Powers work And please make more chapters
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The author keeps changing the gender. The MC is an idiot, he undersells his products for no reason. I don't care that for him it's easy to obtain those items, all your doing is throwing away free money.
it's great, but horrible execution, the horrible thing is the grammar, it feels like an mtl but with a short upgrade, but the idea of this fanfic is good, and please if you're going to translate it please use deepl translation and download Grammarly so it makes a good read for readers, and If you want, I can just fix it.
now honestly it has a story that makes you want to continue but the writing is like reading improved mtl it's really hard to read. and some decisions are down bad it had potential but i lost the spark but u should give it a try.
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My expectations are too high. Difficult to explain, it would be better if you read it yourself. 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😞😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓
I haven't started the book yet but when I read the synopsis I liked it, I don't speak Spanish/Español but when I went to check your other book there where not many people who read your book so I hope your book can make it into a million views and reach the top 10. Although I have not read this but I'mma read it now. so fellow SPARTA.. I mean webnovel readers let's conquer this book!!!!!
i gave you my ps please more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the concept is interesting and fun to read, unfortunately the story is very slow
Reveal Spoiler This looks a lot like one of those mass-produced Chinese fics where except for the MC who has information on his past lives, the whole world is completely stupid and can't figure out some obvious and basic information on his own. Some examples in the first few chapters are how a Runner (tower player) was attacked by an enderman and thought it was another Runner. In 5 years of the tower it was to be expected that at least the monsters in the tutorial were all well known!!! Another thing is that I can't believe that even after 5 years in an obviously game-based world, with health bar and all, nobody but the MC has tried to see if there is an inventory or crafting function, killing an enderman or stealing a bow of the hand of a skeleton. Conveniently the MC was the first person in the world to kill an enderman, on the same day a guild tried to do the same and the MC was the first to try to steal a bow from a skeleton.
The Mc is stupid he is under pricing everything he sells he gives away hella expensiv items to one off characs and he didn’ even understand the potential of his power also there are a lo of typos and grammar mistakes use grammaly for god sake
Reveal Spoiler One of the best world building I've seen in fanfic, good pacing and ways of giving MC power without making him instantly overpowered. My only complaint is that sometimes it gets confusing, for me there's at least 5 blonde young men wearing a cross earings and white robes 😂
every one in this fic is mentally challenged especially the main character