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Es una historia increible de las que hay pocas tan buenas como esta y si mete al harem a ronal o su hija si tienes ganas que sigan los capitulos y que no te falte la inspiracion para mas historias bendiciones mi rey
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Please update more it’ a great story and I enjoy reading I can’t wait for more!!
I got tired of reading this, the MC is stupid, plus he doesn't have a name, his name is T/N or Y/N idk, it seems that the author wants us to identify with the MC but clearly I don't identify with someone idiot. There is no seriousness in the fanfic it's like everyone is friends, the plot is quite ridiculous and the MC seems to have no IQ because he almost got killed and then he's smiling happily with his attackers, it is certainly impossible for me to sympathize or identify with someone like that. In addition, all the characters that have appeared they are like fake characters, there is no representation of their thoughts or emotions, they are simply there to facilitate the plot
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The idea of the story is interesting and that the reader himself is the main character makes it even better. Although I fail everytime to place my name in the space. I hope you will continue with the same quality and creativity of the story
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Es una historia increible de las que hay pocas tan buenas como esta y si mete al harem a ronal o su hija si tienes ganas que sigan los capitulos y que no te falte la inspiracion para mas historias bendiciones mi rey
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Please update more it’ a great story and I enjoy reading I can’t wait for more!!
I got tired of reading this, the MC is stupid, plus he doesn't have a name, his name is T/N or Y/N idk, it seems that the author wants us to identify with the MC but clearly I don't identify with someone idiot. There is no seriousness in the fanfic it's like everyone is friends, the plot is quite ridiculous and the MC seems to have no IQ because he almost got killed and then he's smiling happily with his attackers, it is certainly impossible for me to sympathize or identify with someone like that. In addition, all the characters that have appeared they are like fake characters, there is no representation of their thoughts or emotions, they are simply there to facilitate the plot
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The idea of the story is interesting and that the reader himself is the main character makes it even better. Although I fail everytime to place my name in the space. I hope you will continue with the same quality and creativity of the story
Yep 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽