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Great story and incredible translation. The MC is very strong, but the story has respect for the DD universe and power system. The characters all feel unique and real with their own motivations. I really hope it gets picked back up.
Очень понравился ФИК, Автор продолжай в том же неторопливом духе! Персонажи живые, со своим стержнем. Мир можно немного более подробно описать, например добавить маленькие детали с второстепенно-третьестепенными персонажами. (Главное чтобы это не отвлекало от основного сюжета). Напрягает меня только 2-рая душа ГГ (хрен пойми какое копьё). Я считаю что с его топовым духом золотого дракона и не стандартными кольцами + костями духа он спокойно вывез бы все DD1 на easy. Второй дух абсолютно лишний. По крайней мере ему точно не нужен БОЕВОЙ второй дух. Можно вместе копья дать ему например тыкву с жидкостью. И ГГ типо будет пьяным мастером. А вино из тыквы ну например пусть улучшает конституцию тела и качество духа (не сильно). И например 1 раз в 10уровней этот дух может дать шанс кому-то развить свой дух (не 100%, к примеру Сяо Ву нужно 2-3 раза выпить, чтобы из Мягкого кролика получить Молниеносного или Пустоты). Ну как-то так.
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This novel is great! ♥️ more than great than the previous authors novel work (in my opinion) the only down side is very slow inconsistent updates 😢
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I am not really sure about the novel, since I haven't read it but isn't this a translation of another Chinese novel..can't remember the name of it though.
I am liking this fanfiction more and more but I would like to request the author to release the chapters more frequently please 🥺🥺🥺...
Simply Wonderful....There aren't any fast updates but this is worth the wait... ✓MC is OP but not outrageously OP ✓Tang San is shown as the jerk he is...not in the initial chaps but later ✓MC is not Grand Masters disciple ✓No Forced Harem.... Author has described relationships all too well .......Story may not be perfect but it's better than most out there
this is a very good fanfiction. The plot is interesting and the main character is not a beta male. I hope that some Chinese clichés and pretending will not be adapted for an English-speaking audience. It would be nice if the plot moved logically and not too slowly. After all, Chinese writers abuse a lot of unnecessary information. And so everything is fine. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language
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I am quite enjoying this fanfic, and as a disciple of the Heavenly Celestial Everlasting Harem Sect, I can say that the prospect of the story excites me
Good MC, Decent Development, Great writing,( Imma leave the character design and World background since this is Fanfic) hope you continue your writing since i love too the other one you's translating, I drop that 3 month ago cause i am waiting that to have more chapter, Imma give this Gold Stamp Approval
really good , At first I felt that it was just a good translation but after a few chapters I can see that the author had made significant changes and made it really good
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................
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Hello guys if you like novels go read douluo: douluo with multiverse Villain Chat Group and douluo: douluo different God
Escrita boa, apesar do MC ter um alma poderosa ele não deixa de treinar, na verdade ele treina mais que todos. O romance é lento mais divertido, simplificando é muito bom
Is this original or TRanslated because I have seen another just like this it is called Douluo: Era of the Dragon Emperor it is on readwn.com
Reveal Spoiler
Tengo una preguntar no sé si el dios dragón creo a las bestia espirituales o solamente los dragones sería bueno que gu yuena el lobo de tres ojos rojo no sé cómo se llamaba pero tenía el poder del destino con los ojos etc
Muy buena la historia sería bueno que tuviera el protagonista el linaje o la rencarnación del dios dragón para que se encuentre con gu yuena etc entonces si
Another novel, I hope the author can mantain the stability to update 2 novel simultaneously. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .
I don't have any experience writing proper reviews so excuse me if there are any mistakes 👍. Writing Quality: Author's Translation is very good and there are no mistakes that I can make out with my limited ability. Story Development: can't say much since it's still in the early chapters but I like where it is going. Character Design : Characters feel real and interaction between them doesn't feel like Reading out dialogues from paper. Update Stability: Author has solid Update schedule and doesn't deviate from it so no problem in this end and sometimes there are suprise bonuses too😉. World Background: It's DD so I don't need to say about this I guess. imo this is a very good read but I don't like him favouring Grandmaster but that's my personal view and doesn't have any impact on the Story.👋👋👋
Hi guys! This is my second project and one that is planned to be long-term. I will mention a few points that might help you decide if this story is for you or not: WARNING: There might be some spoilers for future events! .... ... .. 1) The MC will be calm and rational most of the time, his Martial Soul and some personal experiences may influence his personality over time, such as hating deplorable and shameless acts, however, he will always appreciate the bonds of friendship very much. In front of his women, he will be very attentive and affectionate. So for those who prefer very dominating or evil MC's, etc. This MC will not be to their liking. 2) The plot is quite generic regarding the Martial Soul and joining the Spirit Hall, do not expect anything different in that aspect, as it is not the purpose of this story. The plot will be the basis for the interactions between the MC and his love interests, which will be the main focus of the story. 3) The harem will be quite large (check the auxiliary chapter for the chosen members). However, I will try to give each girl her own moment in the story. Inevitably some girls will be more relevant than others. 4) Each girl will have her own personality, some will be quite submissive and supportive; others quite arrogant, and possessive; and the relationship between them will vary. It is likely that some girls will behave selfishly or there will be disagreements between them or with the MC, this will be part of the story and I will try to base it on their canonical personalities. 5) This story will be the adaptation of an MTL ( auxiliary chapter for the name). This decision was made to have a base to work on and to be able to keep a constant update rate, however, many things will be modified, and whole plots can be added or deleted, so don't confuse it with a literal translation. Other than that, take the story as an AU, so there will be some changes that the author of the original material will do or that I will do. 6) As I mention in the auxiliary chapter, this story will be my side project, and I will write it when I have free time, however, it is almost guaranteed that I will keep it going until the end (unless it is not to people's liking). Each month the update schedule will vary. 7) The story will be pretty slow-paced. 8) Lemon scenes will be included in the story, however, they are not the main purpose of the novel, but only a natural part of the plot. So they will be divided into three types: Explicit scenes, small descriptions, and mentions. The last two will be the most abundant and when there are explicit scenes, I will warn in advance. Although there is a lot to talk about, I don't want to go into too much detail, so if you have any doubts, write them in the comments. That's all, I hope you enjoy the reading!
Great story and incredible translation. The MC is very strong, but the story has respect for the DD universe and power system. The characters all feel unique and real with their own motivations. I really hope it gets picked back up.
Очень понравился ФИК, Автор продолжай в том же неторопливом духе! Персонажи живые, со своим стержнем. Мир можно немного более подробно описать, например добавить маленькие детали с второстепенно-третьестепенными персонажами. (Главное чтобы это не отвлекало от основного сюжета). Напрягает меня только 2-рая душа ГГ (хрен пойми какое копьё). Я считаю что с его топовым духом золотого дракона и не стандартными кольцами + костями духа он спокойно вывез бы все DD1 на easy. Второй дух абсолютно лишний. По крайней мере ему точно не нужен БОЕВОЙ второй дух. Можно вместе копья дать ему например тыкву с жидкостью. И ГГ типо будет пьяным мастером. А вино из тыквы ну например пусть улучшает конституцию тела и качество духа (не сильно). И например 1 раз в 10уровней этот дух может дать шанс кому-то развить свой дух (не 100%, к примеру Сяо Ву нужно 2-3 раза выпить, чтобы из Мягкого кролика получить Молниеносного или Пустоты). Ну как-то так.
Good, please moreeee!!! -_-_-_--_-_-_-_-__--_-_-_-_-_-_--_---_--___-_---_--_-_-__---_-_---_----__-_-_-_--_---_--___-_---_--_-_-__---_-_---_----__---_-_-_-_--_---_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_---_--___-_---_--_-_-__---_-_---_----__---_-_-_-_--_--_-
This novel is great! ♥️ more than great than the previous authors novel work (in my opinion) the only down side is very slow inconsistent updates 😢
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I am not really sure about the novel, since I haven't read it but isn't this a translation of another Chinese novel..can't remember the name of it though.
I am liking this fanfiction more and more but I would like to request the author to release the chapters more frequently please 🥺🥺🥺...
Simply Wonderful....There aren't any fast updates but this is worth the wait... ✓MC is OP but not outrageously OP ✓Tang San is shown as the jerk he is...not in the initial chaps but later ✓MC is not Grand Masters disciple ✓No Forced Harem.... Author has described relationships all too well .......Story may not be perfect but it's better than most out there
this is a very good fanfiction. The plot is interesting and the main character is not a beta male. I hope that some Chinese clichés and pretending will not be adapted for an English-speaking audience. It would be nice if the plot moved logically and not too slowly. After all, Chinese writers abuse a lot of unnecessary information. And so everything is fine. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language
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I am quite enjoying this fanfic, and as a disciple of the Heavenly Celestial Everlasting Harem Sect, I can say that the prospect of the story excites me
Good MC, Decent Development, Great writing,( Imma leave the character design and World background since this is Fanfic) hope you continue your writing since i love too the other one you's translating, I drop that 3 month ago cause i am waiting that to have more chapter, Imma give this Gold Stamp Approval
really good , At first I felt that it was just a good translation but after a few chapters I can see that the author had made significant changes and made it really good
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................
Buena historia 100%[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello guys if you like novels go read douluo: douluo with multiverse Villain Chat Group and douluo: douluo different God
Escrita boa, apesar do MC ter um alma poderosa ele não deixa de treinar, na verdade ele treina mais que todos. O romance é lento mais divertido, simplificando é muito bom
Is this original or TRanslated because I have seen another just like this it is called Douluo: Era of the Dragon Emperor it is on readwn.com
Reveal Spoiler Tengo una preguntar no sé si el dios dragón creo a las bestia espirituales o solamente los dragones sería bueno que gu yuena el lobo de tres ojos rojo no sé cómo se llamaba pero tenía el poder del destino con los ojos etc
Muy buena la historia sería bueno que tuviera el protagonista el linaje o la rencarnación del dios dragón para que se encuentre con gu yuena etc entonces si
Another novel, I hope the author can mantain the stability to update 2 novel simultaneously. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .
I don't have any experience writing proper reviews so excuse me if there are any mistakes 👍. Writing Quality: Author's Translation is very good and there are no mistakes that I can make out with my limited ability. Story Development: can't say much since it's still in the early chapters but I like where it is going. Character Design : Characters feel real and interaction between them doesn't feel like Reading out dialogues from paper. Update Stability: Author has solid Update schedule and doesn't deviate from it so no problem in this end and sometimes there are suprise bonuses too😉. World Background: It's DD so I don't need to say about this I guess. imo this is a very good read but I don't like him favouring Grandmaster but that's my personal view and doesn't have any impact on the Story.👋👋👋
Hi guys! This is my second project and one that is planned to be long-term. I will mention a few points that might help you decide if this story is for you or not: WARNING: There might be some spoilers for future events! .... ... .. 1) The MC will be calm and rational most of the time, his Martial Soul and some personal experiences may influence his personality over time, such as hating deplorable and shameless acts, however, he will always appreciate the bonds of friendship very much. In front of his women, he will be very attentive and affectionate. So for those who prefer very dominating or evil MC's, etc. This MC will not be to their liking. 2) The plot is quite generic regarding the Martial Soul and joining the Spirit Hall, do not expect anything different in that aspect, as it is not the purpose of this story. The plot will be the basis for the interactions between the MC and his love interests, which will be the main focus of the story. 3) The harem will be quite large (check the auxiliary chapter for the chosen members). However, I will try to give each girl her own moment in the story. Inevitably some girls will be more relevant than others. 4) Each girl will have her own personality, some will be quite submissive and supportive; others quite arrogant, and possessive; and the relationship between them will vary. It is likely that some girls will behave selfishly or there will be disagreements between them or with the MC, this will be part of the story and I will try to base it on their canonical personalities. 5) This story will be the adaptation of an MTL ( auxiliary chapter for the name). This decision was made to have a base to work on and to be able to keep a constant update rate, however, many things will be modified, and whole plots can be added or deleted, so don't confuse it with a literal translation. Other than that, take the story as an AU, so there will be some changes that the author of the original material will do or that I will do. 6) As I mention in the auxiliary chapter, this story will be my side project, and I will write it when I have free time, however, it is almost guaranteed that I will keep it going until the end (unless it is not to people's liking). Each month the update schedule will vary. 7) The story will be pretty slow-paced. 8) Lemon scenes will be included in the story, however, they are not the main purpose of the novel, but only a natural part of the plot. So they will be divided into three types: Explicit scenes, small descriptions, and mentions. The last two will be the most abundant and when there are explicit scenes, I will warn in advance. Although there is a lot to talk about, I don't want to go into too much detail, so if you have any doubts, write them in the comments. That's all, I hope you enjoy the reading!