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Write a reviewI dont think u can say this is a percy jackson novel only coz the author changed the plot saying this however i liked the fact that the primordials were far more powerful than Rick Riordans world. Also suprised by the unwritten Racism eg, every other pantheon from Egypt to China is mentioned as powerful beings but the African Gods are make believe? or mc saying that kaos is probably disappointed in the Egyptian gods only coz egypt get rid of there deities.
This is a very good fanfic that I very much enjoyed. (Though I don't know if one can call it a fanfic as there aren't many elements of Percy Jackson world in it...) The grammar is excellent, the story flow is good, and I couldn't spot any problems with plot holes. I'm writing this review as of chapter 42 that was published last year, I don't know if the author intends to continue this story but I very much hope so. Anyway for me this is the five star easy
Love this fanfic and wish there were more Percy Jackson fanfics about the primordials. Please write more author馃檹
A pretty good fic that has all corners of being a primordial filled and explained
Reveal SpoilerMore stories please... also might I suggest you do one for Thanatos but instead of peaceful death how about just Death overall :D just a suggestion
I love this, I don't have anything to say but I Love it! I love this 鉂わ笍 hope for more updates though 10/10 鉂わ笍鉂わ笍
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Very good novel, well written with grammar that made me interested. Love the format of long chapters, and the romance hope to see more chapters soon
really liked the story so far hope you update it soon havent read a story like this before prob one of my favorites for this series
ME encanta el mejor FanFiction de mitolog铆a que e le铆do se ve que tiene toques de la serie sadma pero es genial un buen desarrollo de personajes me muero por la pr贸xima actualizaci贸n y ver c贸mo se desarrolla la historia
it was excellent, best pjo I have ever read. until the horrible forced romance between hera and mc. It made not sense how it was developed and on top of that we had hecate who would have been a much better fit based on personality etc.
Reveal SpoilerEverything was going quite well. Was. Writing quality is excellent, Story development is great (a little slow, but it does not really detract from the story), I can't really speak to the update frequency as I had just started reading so I left it as a 4 of 5, and the world background is really fantastic. what really lost me was the extremely forced romance between the Mc and Hera. It was... abrupt, jarring even. Personally, I dislike the pairing altogether, but that is not why I gave a 2 of 5 for character design. In my opinion, the whole interaction (which takes place between 2 chapters and a single party) was entirely forced and ruined any sort of prior character building for the Mc (in my opinion). The Mc was just recently described as extremely indifferent. Except, apparently, for the goddess of marriage, whom he quite literally just met and makes his little heart just flutter (she is literally a hot headed and brash character at the moment, who questioned his power infront of everyone, and is now somehow enraptured by him). It's a "love at first sight" type story (which I abhor and do not believe in). I stopped reading at the "as they drew closer to each other" part. If love at first instant is your sort of story, give it a read. everything else was great.
It's an alright story, almost no grammar mistakes and world building and lore is quite good. But the personal turn down for me that make it unbearable for me to continue reading this story is romance, it was too fast and unrealistic and corniest thing I've ever read. If you can bear the unrealistic romance then go ahead read it, it is good.
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I enjoyed the beginning. Then the MC became the "chosen one". He's fateless, the harbinger of chaos, etc. Everything became about fate and how he was affecting it. Then the forced romance with Hera. I was hoping for a cool story where the MC explores the world and his powers but it became just like every other novel that has the MC be the 'chosen one' trope. So as long as something I rate is at least 3 stars then I can recommend you try the story yourself and see if you like it.
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I dont think u can say this is a percy jackson novel only coz the author changed the plot saying this however i liked the fact that the primordials were far more powerful than Rick Riordans world. Also suprised by the unwritten Racism eg, every other pantheon from Egypt to China is mentioned as powerful beings but the African Gods are make believe? or mc saying that kaos is probably disappointed in the Egyptian gods only coz egypt get rid of there deities.
This is a very good fanfic that I very much enjoyed. (Though I don't know if one can call it a fanfic as there aren't many elements of Percy Jackson world in it...) The grammar is excellent, the story flow is good, and I couldn't spot any problems with plot holes. I'm writing this review as of chapter 42 that was published last year, I don't know if the author intends to continue this story but I very much hope so. Anyway for me this is the five star easy
Love this fanfic and wish there were more Percy Jackson fanfics about the primordials. Please write more author馃檹
A pretty good fic that has all corners of being a primordial filled and explained
Reveal SpoilerMore stories please... also might I suggest you do one for Thanatos but instead of peaceful death how about just Death overall :D just a suggestion
I love this, I don't have anything to say but I Love it! I love this 鉂わ笍 hope for more updates though 10/10 鉂わ笍鉂わ笍
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Very good novel, well written with grammar that made me interested. Love the format of long chapters, and the romance hope to see more chapters soon
really liked the story so far hope you update it soon havent read a story like this before prob one of my favorites for this series
ME encanta el mejor FanFiction de mitolog铆a que e le铆do se ve que tiene toques de la serie sadma pero es genial un buen desarrollo de personajes me muero por la pr贸xima actualizaci贸n y ver c贸mo se desarrolla la historia
it was excellent, best pjo I have ever read. until the horrible forced romance between hera and mc. It made not sense how it was developed and on top of that we had hecate who would have been a much better fit based on personality etc.
Reveal SpoilerEverything was going quite well. Was. Writing quality is excellent, Story development is great (a little slow, but it does not really detract from the story), I can't really speak to the update frequency as I had just started reading so I left it as a 4 of 5, and the world background is really fantastic. what really lost me was the extremely forced romance between the Mc and Hera. It was... abrupt, jarring even. Personally, I dislike the pairing altogether, but that is not why I gave a 2 of 5 for character design. In my opinion, the whole interaction (which takes place between 2 chapters and a single party) was entirely forced and ruined any sort of prior character building for the Mc (in my opinion). The Mc was just recently described as extremely indifferent. Except, apparently, for the goddess of marriage, whom he quite literally just met and makes his little heart just flutter (she is literally a hot headed and brash character at the moment, who questioned his power infront of everyone, and is now somehow enraptured by him). It's a "love at first sight" type story (which I abhor and do not believe in). I stopped reading at the "as they drew closer to each other" part. If love at first instant is your sort of story, give it a read. everything else was great.
It's an alright story, almost no grammar mistakes and world building and lore is quite good. But the personal turn down for me that make it unbearable for me to continue reading this story is romance, it was too fast and unrealistic and corniest thing I've ever read. If you can bear the unrealistic romance then go ahead read it, it is good.
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I enjoyed the beginning. Then the MC became the "chosen one". He's fateless, the harbinger of chaos, etc. Everything became about fate and how he was affecting it. Then the forced romance with Hera. I was hoping for a cool story where the MC explores the world and his powers but it became just like every other novel that has the MC be the 'chosen one' trope. So as long as something I rate is at least 3 stars then I can recommend you try the story yourself and see if you like it.
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pretty good overall. could have focused more on development instead of telling what he did.