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It's nice that you are back to writing this novel. Welcome back! Also try showing this to a trustworthy friend who spoke English from childhood, so they can help you edit it.
There is too much drama, the whole story is just tears and drama, this is the type of fan fiction where you write chapters up to birth and old age mc that is dull and not interesting, I think it is impossible to get attached to a person so easily and I think it is absolutely stupid to waste your 2 life on someone else (Google translete)
its a good story if only it was better translated ............................................................................................................
i was hoping for an English version of this fanfic as it looked good---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"I gave it 4 stars across the board because I think it's better that way, so I don't handicap myself too much. I didn't give it 5 stars either, since, to me, there's always room for improvement. I hope you'll enjoy my story or at least give it a chance. Have a great day!"
It's nice that you are back to writing this novel. Welcome back! Also try showing this to a trustworthy friend who spoke English from childhood, so they can help you edit it.
There is too much drama, the whole story is just tears and drama, this is the type of fan fiction where you write chapters up to birth and old age mc that is dull and not interesting, I think it is impossible to get attached to a person so easily and I think it is absolutely stupid to waste your 2 life on someone else (Google translete)
its a good story if only it was better translated ............................................................................................................
i was hoping for an English version of this fanfic as it looked good---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"I gave it 4 stars across the board because I think it's better that way, so I don't handicap myself too much. I didn't give it 5 stars either, since, to me, there's always room for improvement. I hope you'll enjoy my story or at least give it a chance. Have a great day!"