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NihilRuler

A weird guy transmigrated in a Villain's body in a Hardcore Dating Sim Game. Protagonist, Heroines, Villainess, Villain! Everything is there. Are you curious about what Edward will do in that Game-World? Then read it and enjoy! If you have any questions, I am all ears!

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Sebimon
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Review after 1st part of 2nd game ended NOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time! The good: - Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic. - Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!! - 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role. - Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good: - Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective. - At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed. - With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters. One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.

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Taddy_Tee

You addressed the annoyances that were there in the earlier chapters so good job on that. The story is good, plot, character development, world building, good stuff. Can't really complain. Elizabeth and the MC, don't know what happened there, bro said it won't work because she does not understand him, fair. But then bro turns around and starts liking Celeste I mean Celeste doesn't know bro either, should add context on that or at least provide a better reason as to why it can't work with Elizabeth but he can fall for Celeste. Miranda yeah we get it, Layla we get it too, Alvara if it does so happen in the future we get why it would too. With Elizabeth's past we get why it would work with her as well probably probably something along the lines of being able to understand each other. But not Celeste though. Well that's just my opinion. Also if it were up to me I'd boot Celeste and add Alvara. And also there's just too many girls like jeee. Though I don't mind it, just mind Celeste don't want her in the harem the rest are fine. That's just my bias though so don't take it to heart.

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Sushant_Dabade

Hiiii author I came again 😁🤩🥰 I just read novel chapter 482-483.. Why can't save his mother quickly, i know saving quickly impossible... But story developing forword and that i think something will happen to his mother 😤😭.....plz try to save his mother before something happens 🥺🥺... thank you for listening

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Daoist7fi3Wu

This is honestly straight peak I can’t believe more people aren’t on his. World building is honestly immaculate so is the mc and the female leads

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Theo3
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It’s really such a great novel I know It says I haven’t but I have read to chapter 321 it’s such a great novel but everyone keeps getting in the way of Amael(Edward) I’m not done with the novel but everyone should make way I mean it’s painfully obvious to me that he shall rule the world, the great reckoning is coming. Ok ok in all seriousness it’s a great novel, it has hella world building mc wanted to ensure his survival in the beginning so he acted a little spineless but everything will change trust me, the world building is insane and don’t worry even though mc in a new world his older world is still relevant, don’t worry it’s not predictable mc won’t be able to protect will go thru some traumatic experiences but it’s for his growth… JUST TRUST ME, READ THIS NOVEL YOU WONT REGRET IT, THANK ME LATER ALL OF YOU ARE VERY MUCH WELCOME HAHAHA

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codenoname0123

This is my second time writing a review, and just like the first, this is still one of the best stories I've read. Alvara and Cleenah are my favourite future wives for Amael, and I hope the author ensures Alvara stays with Amael no matter where he goes, even in the Underworld arc. I also hope Amael will become overpowered soon since his enemies are gods. I hope he’s OP after Game 2. As always, 5 stars—thank you, Nihilruler! Keep up the amazing work!

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Eldeel
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The first thing after reading this book that comes to my mind is “ unrefined potential” I actually quite enjoyed this book at times. Currently I am end of the first game arc. So I think it’s time for a proper in-depth review. With any book there are flaws and strengths. I rember dropping the book pretty early on when Edward stated that his main goal was to help build the main characters harem. But I decided to still give the book a try and I am happy that I did. The story is quite well written and one can see that the author has a plan for the story. The initial chapters had some of the most cringe and bland jokes that wanted me to hate comment on a regular basis. But as the story progressed one could see the story taking a more serious tone gone were the dumb Edward-Jarvis-Cleena conversations, they got replaced by a more focused tone with an understand of deeper feelings. The story itself was quite enjoyable as it didn’t follow the same norms as other books. Yes initially mc was sticking with the main lead but after some events decided to build his own path. He seemed to be more confident and self reliant as the story progressed. The reason I say the book is not able to achieve its full potential is because of lack character development and world building. This book severely needed more slice of life chapters. The whole focus of the story is in the events of the game but not about how all the cast interact with each other. I would loved to see a chapter where Amael and Aurora just spending their day together, having proper conversation. I would like to see what they were feeling towards each other and how their feeling matured. Same goes for characters like Layla, Myranda and Kleeah. I would want to see more chapters spent on them to flush out their characters more. These a chapters at the same time could help build the world as well. I would have to know more about Layla. Feelings from her pov towards Edward. Her proper reaction to learning the truth. Her determination to make him fall for her. Or a few chapters about Eric , on how he decided to finally influence the story. I would have liked to see Ed and Elanor go out together as bro and sister. And in a way show how much they cared abt each other. I know many don’t care about such things. But I feel these are important to show the weight of their relationship. For example Elanor’s death felt weak because we never did flush out Ed brotherly feelings for her. We never got to see him say how much he loved her and his feelings when he lost her. For a character to matter you have to spend time to build them first. All in all this still a pretty amazing story. With quite a lot of unexpected events. I would say try to endure through the book. As it gets better along the way.

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Direxts

I started reading this novel because I’m currently reading the author’s latest work, and I thought, “If the recent one is good, maybe this one will be too.” Unfortunately, I was wrong. I wouldn’t say this novel is bad—it’s just hard to read. The world-building is solid, the writing is good, and even the secondary characters mostly fulfill their roles well. You dislike who you’re supposed to dislike and like who you’re supposed to like. The real issue is the MC: Character improvement is slow (or non-existent): The author mentions that the MC improves after a few chapters, but how many chapters exactly? I’m at chapter 75, and he hasn’t gotten better; if anything, he’s worse. At the start, when transported to the game world, the MC is irritating, childish, and rude for no reason (even to people who could kill him instantly). He’s also indecisive, never knowing what he wants. He thinks one thing, says the opposite, regrets it moments later, then acts contrary to his own thoughts. His irrational fear of being killed: He believes everyone in this world will eventually try to kill him because he’s one of the “main villains.” However, this doesn’t make sense anymore since the original reason for him being considered a villain (joining a criminal organization and killing millions) is something he explicitly avoids. Yet, despite this paranoia, he places blind trust in his system and a goddess he made a contract with—when he really shouldn’t. The system openly admits it’s just there to monitor him and that its true master is the one who sent the MC to this world. The goddess only follows him out of necessity, and for all the MC knows, she might try to take over his body or betray him later. Acquiring the original body’s memories worsens his personality: When the MC gets the original body’s memories, you’d expect some improvement—he now knows the original was brainwashed into being the way he was. But instead, his personality worsens. He starts acting like a stereotypical young master from a Chinese novel: arrogant with no power to back it up, relying only on his family name. Ironically, he claims that the ducal family isn’t his family (since, in the original story, they helped kill him). But at the same time, he runs around yelling, “I’m the duke’s son! Do as I say!” while getting mad whenever anyone mentions his family. His obsession with the protagonist’s harem: The MC keeps insisting that the protagonist needs to build a harem to “save the world.” Why? There’s no reason other than, “That’s how it happened in the original story.” I wouldn’t mind if another character or even one of the female leads had a harem—male or female—but the MC spends all his time obsessing over making this happen for the protagonist. There’s no justification for this obsession. The female leads don’t need to be in love with the protagonist to fight against a world-ending threat. This would only make sense if the protagonist had some special ability that empowered others through relationships, but that’s not the case. Overall, there are so many flaws with this MC that it’s exhausting to read. I could go on, but these are the main issues.

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VoidSurge

I f*king hate you author you killed all my favorite characters and none showed any remorse or grief especially on his sisters death. None whatsoever mention of any funeral it was like he was speed breaking the game.

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Joshua_Suherman

The author attempts to deconstruct the isekai story, but it just feels like a forced and twisted mess to me. Just so you know, I only got through the first part. In the second part, two, most of the characters from the previous section do not reappear. Oh, and the MC starts going by a different name. But everything still same pattern, MC move to different school. When I began reading, I had certain expectations of this novel, as I enjoyed the MC's character and his interactions with the other characters, finding them vivid and engaging. It's enjoyable. The MC's already connection with many important character as childhood friend, except the main girl and the protaganist. Then, you get to see things from both main girl and the protaganist POV. They hanging out with the MC at school, thinking they're gonna grow and change as characters. But the author throws you for a loop, making you wonder if these are even the same people. Turns out, they stab the MC in the back. The protagonist, who was all about friendship but couldn't find the guts to back it up, turns into this monster who's all about 'collecting' girls like they're Pokémon. And the main heroine, who seemed so sweet and innocent, is actually some kind of mastermind in this weird twist. It's like everything's just being flipped around for the sake of shock. And don't even get me started on the characters who get killed off or the heroines forced into crappy arranged marriages, or the one who's a rape victim. I started reading hoping for a feel-good story, but I ended up pissed. The story just gets gorier and more depressing, turning into this total tragedy. The MC's up against a god, and the author really drives home how powerless the MC is against Zeus, who wants to make his girlfriend to become his wife. Instead of dragging the story out with more resolution, instead the author make part two with new academic story and similiar pattern from first part. The author should've just ended the first part by allowing the MC to achieve a successful revenge against those who wronged him. This make many reader satisfied with ending.

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food_love

seriously author? hands down the best girl, elona the foster sister, dies like that? no reason? he's like oops i forgot silly me. ruined everything for me

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Beyond_the_wall

I read till chapter 224, it's where first game ends and second game starts. Firstly author , I totally disagree with our mc trying to force everyone on Jayden like he was trying. it was unnecessary. Secondly, acting like nothing happened after Jayde betrayed him was too frustrating. I mean why the need of keeping that a secret?? Zeus already threatened him openly and Jayden already betrayed! for fuck's shake, I was too angry reading that. Lastly author, I really can't read on after the end of the first game. it is just too sad. 4 people whom he considered close all died. He is being exiled by the very kingdom he protected. It's too sad and frustrating. Just too sad. Also I don't like this new academy story thing. It's like the start of a new different story with new sister and new mother and new characters. So am dropping the story.

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THE_JAEGER

Truth to be told it was tiring to read the first 100 chapter but it was getting more interesting after that so you people who just start should bear with it until chapter 115 more or less

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Aaron_Owusu

Writing and story are really good my only problem is where I am in the story the kc doesn’t feel like an mc since whenever something important happens he stays passive or hides his identity still a good read tho 👌🏾

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Sushant_Dabade

Hallo author 😀 I read this novel 🥰 This is truly,i love this story 😍.I like this story and ameal character is good.but i wanted to ask you favour, don't kill someone close to him and plz make him stronger to protect who close to him..........

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MirazX
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A very addictive novel. I have already read this 3 times already and just remembered to give a 5 star review. So here! Also more chapters please!

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ARVIND_Kumar_8951

one of the best storyline and every character has development and backstories with utmost importance and fight scene novels!!! , worthy of getting anime and manga adaptation!!!

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No_Name_7403

I have to say, TGV is one of my favorite stories, and you, Nihilruler, are an amazing author. You've inspired so many people to create their own books, and many popular stories today are influenced by your work. That makes you a truly great author. As for the story, it's incredible. Amael's growth is one of the best character developments I've seen. I wish he could become a king—it would be such a fitting role for him. Game 2 has far surpassed Game 1, and I love Amael's new relationships, like with Celes, as well as future ones like Alvara. Lastly, I hope you can update more often, but I also respect your time and effort. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece!

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roshan3756

I really enjoy this novel, particularly how the main character utilizes every aspect of his identity, such as his personas as Falkrona or Olphean and showing his strength etc. in short I like the mc but still i don't understand many things hope all the mystery will solve soon

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Jackleell

I'm not sure, but the MC is kind of annoying—yelling and insulting people even when they try to help. I could understand if they were arrogant people, but the MC is super annoying for 27 chapters. I hope his personality changes by chapter 100; if not, I will never read this again.

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Saptarshi_Kar

The story is wholesome , I enjoyed reading it It is probably one of the best academy related novel I have read Although the author told First Game will be boring , i personally enjoyed it there are about 30 chapters of mc being wingman (although people complains about mc being wingman in the story , IT'S A TOTAL BULLSHIT mc is a rational character continuously going through character development facing difficulties and so on though the end of first game is overall good Author failed to put some more emotions on ELONA AND THEOMEN'S death from second game its totally good - no complaints

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Garvit_Singhal_3839

bro upload at least 1 chapter daily if you don't then the interest from novel faded away

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Abhijeet_Kumar_1645

to be honest I was very impressed by the character development and the twisted moment like many thing time travelling reincarnated others and many more and the last part where did Edward why you got two fiance is really touch my heart . it is the only the first game I finished now see how interesting the second game will be happen. 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

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No1For1
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Hello author I have questions would you like to answer it?

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Sieg44

A really good novel, at first the passivity of mc was very boring, but then it got better.[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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codenoname0123

This book is one of the best I've read on this platform. It's unique and different, and reading Game 1 was such a fun experience. Now, with Part 2 of Game 2, the story is peak. While I wish there were daily chapters, as long as we see the end of this story, I won’t complain. Keep up the great work, NihilRuler!"

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Abdulrhman78

"This novel is truly amazing, featuring a plethora of intriguing characters and a richly detailed world that captivates with its depth and complexity"

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cartor_gc710

a good read. I really like this book. I hope this person doesn't drop it

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Kai_Sai

i give it a 5 star i really like Amael story, though i want a daily chapter as long as the author finish the story i won't complain.

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FluxleX

honestly this type of novel I hate the second most, too many mysteries, too many foreshadowing, too many like really, the mystery along withanother mystery is okay but there is 7 and 8 mysteries introduced in short time and more mysteries still keep on adding, really I don't get it if the villains are so powerful that can streamroll one of the most powerful person in the world easily, I don't get the need to show them and spoiler warning author hate mother, like really he hate mother in general because i kid you not almost every kid hads ther mother dead lol. Moreover with too many foreshadowing and mystery it is now getting hard to keep track what is even happening.

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Der_Schnitter

I give your novel 4 stars max because of MC Bruh that mf's density is high as heaven but otherwise it was a good novel

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NihilRuler

A weird guy transmigrated in a Villain's body in a Hardcore Dating Sim Game. Protagonist, Heroines, Villainess, Villain! Everything is there. Are you curious about what Edward will do in that Game-World? Then read it and enjoy! If you have any questions, I am all ears!

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Sebimon
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Review after 1st part of 2nd game ended NOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time! The good: - Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic. - Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!! - 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role. - Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good: - Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective. - At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed. - With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters. One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.

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Taddy_Tee

You addressed the annoyances that were there in the earlier chapters so good job on that. The story is good, plot, character development, world building, good stuff. Can't really complain. Elizabeth and the MC, don't know what happened there, bro said it won't work because she does not understand him, fair. But then bro turns around and starts liking Celeste I mean Celeste doesn't know bro either, should add context on that or at least provide a better reason as to why it can't work with Elizabeth but he can fall for Celeste. Miranda yeah we get it, Layla we get it too, Alvara if it does so happen in the future we get why it would too. With Elizabeth's past we get why it would work with her as well probably probably something along the lines of being able to understand each other. But not Celeste though. Well that's just my opinion. Also if it were up to me I'd boot Celeste and add Alvara. And also there's just too many girls like jeee. Though I don't mind it, just mind Celeste don't want her in the harem the rest are fine. That's just my bias though so don't take it to heart.

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Sushant_Dabade

Hiiii author I came again 😁🤩🥰 I just read novel chapter 482-483.. Why can't save his mother quickly, i know saving quickly impossible... But story developing forword and that i think something will happen to his mother 😤😭.....plz try to save his mother before something happens 🥺🥺... thank you for listening

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Daoist7fi3Wu

This is honestly straight peak I can’t believe more people aren’t on his. World building is honestly immaculate so is the mc and the female leads

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Theo3
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It’s really such a great novel I know It says I haven’t but I have read to chapter 321 it’s such a great novel but everyone keeps getting in the way of Amael(Edward) I’m not done with the novel but everyone should make way I mean it’s painfully obvious to me that he shall rule the world, the great reckoning is coming. Ok ok in all seriousness it’s a great novel, it has hella world building mc wanted to ensure his survival in the beginning so he acted a little spineless but everything will change trust me, the world building is insane and don’t worry even though mc in a new world his older world is still relevant, don’t worry it’s not predictable mc won’t be able to protect will go thru some traumatic experiences but it’s for his growth… JUST TRUST ME, READ THIS NOVEL YOU WONT REGRET IT, THANK ME LATER ALL OF YOU ARE VERY MUCH WELCOME HAHAHA

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codenoname0123

This is my second time writing a review, and just like the first, this is still one of the best stories I've read. Alvara and Cleenah are my favourite future wives for Amael, and I hope the author ensures Alvara stays with Amael no matter where he goes, even in the Underworld arc. I also hope Amael will become overpowered soon since his enemies are gods. I hope he’s OP after Game 2. As always, 5 stars—thank you, Nihilruler! Keep up the amazing work!

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Eldeel
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The first thing after reading this book that comes to my mind is “ unrefined potential” I actually quite enjoyed this book at times. Currently I am end of the first game arc. So I think it’s time for a proper in-depth review. With any book there are flaws and strengths. I rember dropping the book pretty early on when Edward stated that his main goal was to help build the main characters harem. But I decided to still give the book a try and I am happy that I did. The story is quite well written and one can see that the author has a plan for the story. The initial chapters had some of the most cringe and bland jokes that wanted me to hate comment on a regular basis. But as the story progressed one could see the story taking a more serious tone gone were the dumb Edward-Jarvis-Cleena conversations, they got replaced by a more focused tone with an understand of deeper feelings. The story itself was quite enjoyable as it didn’t follow the same norms as other books. Yes initially mc was sticking with the main lead but after some events decided to build his own path. He seemed to be more confident and self reliant as the story progressed. The reason I say the book is not able to achieve its full potential is because of lack character development and world building. This book severely needed more slice of life chapters. The whole focus of the story is in the events of the game but not about how all the cast interact with each other. I would loved to see a chapter where Amael and Aurora just spending their day together, having proper conversation. I would like to see what they were feeling towards each other and how their feeling matured. Same goes for characters like Layla, Myranda and Kleeah. I would want to see more chapters spent on them to flush out their characters more. These a chapters at the same time could help build the world as well. I would have to know more about Layla. Feelings from her pov towards Edward. Her proper reaction to learning the truth. Her determination to make him fall for her. Or a few chapters about Eric , on how he decided to finally influence the story. I would have liked to see Ed and Elanor go out together as bro and sister. And in a way show how much they cared abt each other. I know many don’t care about such things. But I feel these are important to show the weight of their relationship. For example Elanor’s death felt weak because we never did flush out Ed brotherly feelings for her. We never got to see him say how much he loved her and his feelings when he lost her. For a character to matter you have to spend time to build them first. All in all this still a pretty amazing story. With quite a lot of unexpected events. I would say try to endure through the book. As it gets better along the way.

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Direxts

I started reading this novel because I’m currently reading the author’s latest work, and I thought, “If the recent one is good, maybe this one will be too.” Unfortunately, I was wrong. I wouldn’t say this novel is bad—it’s just hard to read. The world-building is solid, the writing is good, and even the secondary characters mostly fulfill their roles well. You dislike who you’re supposed to dislike and like who you’re supposed to like. The real issue is the MC: Character improvement is slow (or non-existent): The author mentions that the MC improves after a few chapters, but how many chapters exactly? I’m at chapter 75, and he hasn’t gotten better; if anything, he’s worse. At the start, when transported to the game world, the MC is irritating, childish, and rude for no reason (even to people who could kill him instantly). He’s also indecisive, never knowing what he wants. He thinks one thing, says the opposite, regrets it moments later, then acts contrary to his own thoughts. His irrational fear of being killed: He believes everyone in this world will eventually try to kill him because he’s one of the “main villains.” However, this doesn’t make sense anymore since the original reason for him being considered a villain (joining a criminal organization and killing millions) is something he explicitly avoids. Yet, despite this paranoia, he places blind trust in his system and a goddess he made a contract with—when he really shouldn’t. The system openly admits it’s just there to monitor him and that its true master is the one who sent the MC to this world. The goddess only follows him out of necessity, and for all the MC knows, she might try to take over his body or betray him later. Acquiring the original body’s memories worsens his personality: When the MC gets the original body’s memories, you’d expect some improvement—he now knows the original was brainwashed into being the way he was. But instead, his personality worsens. He starts acting like a stereotypical young master from a Chinese novel: arrogant with no power to back it up, relying only on his family name. Ironically, he claims that the ducal family isn’t his family (since, in the original story, they helped kill him). But at the same time, he runs around yelling, “I’m the duke’s son! Do as I say!” while getting mad whenever anyone mentions his family. His obsession with the protagonist’s harem: The MC keeps insisting that the protagonist needs to build a harem to “save the world.” Why? There’s no reason other than, “That’s how it happened in the original story.” I wouldn’t mind if another character or even one of the female leads had a harem—male or female—but the MC spends all his time obsessing over making this happen for the protagonist. There’s no justification for this obsession. The female leads don’t need to be in love with the protagonist to fight against a world-ending threat. This would only make sense if the protagonist had some special ability that empowered others through relationships, but that’s not the case. Overall, there are so many flaws with this MC that it’s exhausting to read. I could go on, but these are the main issues.

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VoidSurge

I f*king hate you author you killed all my favorite characters and none showed any remorse or grief especially on his sisters death. None whatsoever mention of any funeral it was like he was speed breaking the game.

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Joshua_Suherman

The author attempts to deconstruct the isekai story, but it just feels like a forced and twisted mess to me. Just so you know, I only got through the first part. In the second part, two, most of the characters from the previous section do not reappear. Oh, and the MC starts going by a different name. But everything still same pattern, MC move to different school. When I began reading, I had certain expectations of this novel, as I enjoyed the MC's character and his interactions with the other characters, finding them vivid and engaging. It's enjoyable. The MC's already connection with many important character as childhood friend, except the main girl and the protaganist. Then, you get to see things from both main girl and the protaganist POV. They hanging out with the MC at school, thinking they're gonna grow and change as characters. But the author throws you for a loop, making you wonder if these are even the same people. Turns out, they stab the MC in the back. The protagonist, who was all about friendship but couldn't find the guts to back it up, turns into this monster who's all about 'collecting' girls like they're Pokémon. And the main heroine, who seemed so sweet and innocent, is actually some kind of mastermind in this weird twist. It's like everything's just being flipped around for the sake of shock. And don't even get me started on the characters who get killed off or the heroines forced into crappy arranged marriages, or the one who's a rape victim. I started reading hoping for a feel-good story, but I ended up pissed. The story just gets gorier and more depressing, turning into this total tragedy. The MC's up against a god, and the author really drives home how powerless the MC is against Zeus, who wants to make his girlfriend to become his wife. Instead of dragging the story out with more resolution, instead the author make part two with new academic story and similiar pattern from first part. The author should've just ended the first part by allowing the MC to achieve a successful revenge against those who wronged him. This make many reader satisfied with ending.

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food_love

seriously author? hands down the best girl, elona the foster sister, dies like that? no reason? he's like oops i forgot silly me. ruined everything for me

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Beyond_the_wall

I read till chapter 224, it's where first game ends and second game starts. Firstly author , I totally disagree with our mc trying to force everyone on Jayden like he was trying. it was unnecessary. Secondly, acting like nothing happened after Jayde betrayed him was too frustrating. I mean why the need of keeping that a secret?? Zeus already threatened him openly and Jayden already betrayed! for fuck's shake, I was too angry reading that. Lastly author, I really can't read on after the end of the first game. it is just too sad. 4 people whom he considered close all died. He is being exiled by the very kingdom he protected. It's too sad and frustrating. Just too sad. Also I don't like this new academy story thing. It's like the start of a new different story with new sister and new mother and new characters. So am dropping the story.

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THE_JAEGER

Truth to be told it was tiring to read the first 100 chapter but it was getting more interesting after that so you people who just start should bear with it until chapter 115 more or less

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Aaron_Owusu

Writing and story are really good my only problem is where I am in the story the kc doesn’t feel like an mc since whenever something important happens he stays passive or hides his identity still a good read tho 👌🏾

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Sushant_Dabade

Hallo author 😀 I read this novel 🥰 This is truly,i love this story 😍.I like this story and ameal character is good.but i wanted to ask you favour, don't kill someone close to him and plz make him stronger to protect who close to him..........

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MirazX
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A very addictive novel. I have already read this 3 times already and just remembered to give a 5 star review. So here! Also more chapters please!

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ARVIND_Kumar_8951

one of the best storyline and every character has development and backstories with utmost importance and fight scene novels!!! , worthy of getting anime and manga adaptation!!!

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No_Name_7403

I have to say, TGV is one of my favorite stories, and you, Nihilruler, are an amazing author. You've inspired so many people to create their own books, and many popular stories today are influenced by your work. That makes you a truly great author. As for the story, it's incredible. Amael's growth is one of the best character developments I've seen. I wish he could become a king—it would be such a fitting role for him. Game 2 has far surpassed Game 1, and I love Amael's new relationships, like with Celes, as well as future ones like Alvara. Lastly, I hope you can update more often, but I also respect your time and effort. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece!

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roshan3756

I really enjoy this novel, particularly how the main character utilizes every aspect of his identity, such as his personas as Falkrona or Olphean and showing his strength etc. in short I like the mc but still i don't understand many things hope all the mystery will solve soon

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Jackleell

I'm not sure, but the MC is kind of annoying—yelling and insulting people even when they try to help. I could understand if they were arrogant people, but the MC is super annoying for 27 chapters. I hope his personality changes by chapter 100; if not, I will never read this again.

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Saptarshi_Kar

The story is wholesome , I enjoyed reading it It is probably one of the best academy related novel I have read Although the author told First Game will be boring , i personally enjoyed it there are about 30 chapters of mc being wingman (although people complains about mc being wingman in the story , IT'S A TOTAL BULLSHIT mc is a rational character continuously going through character development facing difficulties and so on though the end of first game is overall good Author failed to put some more emotions on ELONA AND THEOMEN'S death from second game its totally good - no complaints

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Garvit_Singhal_3839

bro upload at least 1 chapter daily if you don't then the interest from novel faded away

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Abhijeet_Kumar_1645

to be honest I was very impressed by the character development and the twisted moment like many thing time travelling reincarnated others and many more and the last part where did Edward why you got two fiance is really touch my heart . it is the only the first game I finished now see how interesting the second game will be happen. 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

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No1For1
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Hello author I have questions would you like to answer it?

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Sieg44

A really good novel, at first the passivity of mc was very boring, but then it got better.[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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codenoname0123

This book is one of the best I've read on this platform. It's unique and different, and reading Game 1 was such a fun experience. Now, with Part 2 of Game 2, the story is peak. While I wish there were daily chapters, as long as we see the end of this story, I won’t complain. Keep up the great work, NihilRuler!"

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Abdulrhman78

"This novel is truly amazing, featuring a plethora of intriguing characters and a richly detailed world that captivates with its depth and complexity"

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cartor_gc710

a good read. I really like this book. I hope this person doesn't drop it

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Kai_Sai

i give it a 5 star i really like Amael story, though i want a daily chapter as long as the author finish the story i won't complain.

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FluxleX

honestly this type of novel I hate the second most, too many mysteries, too many foreshadowing, too many like really, the mystery along withanother mystery is okay but there is 7 and 8 mysteries introduced in short time and more mysteries still keep on adding, really I don't get it if the villains are so powerful that can streamroll one of the most powerful person in the world easily, I don't get the need to show them and spoiler warning author hate mother, like really he hate mother in general because i kid you not almost every kid hads ther mother dead lol. Moreover with too many foreshadowing and mystery it is now getting hard to keep track what is even happening.

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Der_Schnitter

I give your novel 4 stars max because of MC Bruh that mf's density is high as heaven but otherwise it was a good novel

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