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Gracias al scan o a las personas que trasladaron y tradujo esta novela trate de leerlo en otras páginas pero era horrible de leer y encontrar los nombres correctos tk
Overall It's good novel.. .. Good Background(Wasteland VR)Good Story(Like Legendary Mechanic)Good Writing Quality(No MTL-like)Good Mystery(Cause Of World War)I Think you need to pay attention to your earlier charactercharacters...some are forgotten why? you said I have a list of character from alpha version 0.1–0.9 hehehehhGood Luck Author-san[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Good but it's like 200 chapters behind Otaku Translations translation of this novel, although to read to chapter 300 you have to pay alot of money because it's behind a paywall...
os primeiros capítulos são muito lentos posso dizer ate que são chatos, mas depois tudo fica muito melhor, tem uma parte em especial que os jogadores correm feito loucos para cima dos invasores gritando,`PELA HORDA`,´DEMARCIA´, eu me acabei de rir.
I have no problem with this fanfic, it's just nice and kind of satisfying to see the MC's haven grow. My only problem is the weird names of the secondary characters 😂😂
It's pretty nice the story development and all and the names as I just took a overview seemed nice...best regards for you man..keep going and don't stop ...
Gracias al scan o a las personas que trasladaron y tradujo esta novela trate de leerlo en otras páginas pero era horrible de leer y encontrar los nombres correctos tk
Overall It's good novel.. .. Good Background(Wasteland VR)Good Story(Like Legendary Mechanic)Good Writing Quality(No MTL-like)Good Mystery(Cause Of World War)I Think you need to pay attention to your earlier charactercharacters...some are forgotten why? you said I have a list of character from alpha version 0.1–0.9 hehehehhGood Luck Author-san[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler Good but it's like 200 chapters behind Otaku Translations translation of this novel, although to read to chapter 300 you have to pay alot of money because it's behind a paywall...
os primeiros capítulos são muito lentos posso dizer ate que são chatos, mas depois tudo fica muito melhor, tem uma parte em especial que os jogadores correm feito loucos para cima dos invasores gritando,`PELA HORDA`,´DEMARCIA´, eu me acabei de rir.
I have no problem with this fanfic, it's just nice and kind of satisfying to see the MC's haven grow. My only problem is the weird names of the secondary characters 😂😂
It's pretty nice the story development and all and the names as I just took a overview seemed nice...best regards for you man..keep going and don't stop ...
good translation, why stop updated though ?