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Honestly I feel the story is amazing and has a lot of potential. Though the story is starting to get predictable, and the stability of updates is horrendous but at least the updates are still coming. But other than that this isn't a bad fanfic.
it's good ff and I hope the author continues writing and I hope the mc will not focus on a large harem
i like the story. sure a few thinks could be better but it is really hard to make the Angel setting work. there is not much known about this time as well. So Overall you do a good job and i pry to god(haha) you dont drop it. idc about waiting a month but i really want to know what you are gona di with this Story on a sidenote will god still die in the great war?
I really like your story.....but please try to update more frequently...i won't say much about the storyline...as it's already messed up.. after all the 72 pillers of demons are made by lillth ...but now it's under mc protection so I don't know what future will have unfold onto us....but I like the way you try to make your story ongoing in completely different route...for that I appreciate your time and efforts.....we will also support you..so don't drop it
So I have genuinely really enjoyed this story even though there were a couple of plot points that I could have done without. I also wish that the power of the MC was explained more because it was just kind of brushed over. Also, apparently the MC is in the form of another fictional character with the same powers, but I don't know who it is because it was not talked about. But I have been enjoying the story development so far and I look forward too how it will progress in the future. I think it will be nice to see alternate POV's to show what other characters think about the MC, and also show how the MC becomes known throughout Christian lore. One think I have to mention though is that the stability of updates for this story is atrocious. I mean it has been 5 months and we have only gotten about 21 chapters. I think the author is stretching himself too thin because I checked his profile, and there are like 5 other stories that he is working on all at the same time. I think it will be better to focus more on the stories that are being received better by the community, that way he can deliver more chapters in a timely manner, while having to focus on fewer plotlines at the same time. Overall author, I hope to see you continue this story and I pray that this will be updated faster. Keep up the good work!
This is pretty good doesn't update that often but first of all this gives very little information about what's going on in the chapters second it's to the point where in these first 24 chapters you know even less about the mc than the other angels which is very little and all his interactions are just him training him training his siblings getting worshiped for unkown reasons cause there was a 2 year time skip and god making new people and the war was just him being like one shot you one shot you he didn't even talk about his abilities once so very little information about the Mc is given he could even be considered a mysterious side character
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the only thing that I can say is that you won't regret reading it ( currently only 20 chapters are published which are amazing)
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Nice power system and world building, character development is also good the only problem is the updates.
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I Love this novel. Your characters setting and plot is very nice. I like the story background and mc. The storyline is fascinating. I wish to ask that will your story include conflicts with other patheons. I don't why people are giving you harsh comments without any reason. They are jealous of your story or plot setting. Keep it up author
Hey author-san, this is my second time giving you a review and I'll be as direct as last time. This fanfic is Golden. True. But what's with the release frequency? I know you have a life out there, we all do, but you leaving us hanging is not the way to go man. It's frustrating. Also, your number of viewers would increase with more frequent release. Sigh. Just think about it.
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I find it a promising story, the character development could use some work (mostly on the romance side of things, the girls act like robots made to love the MC…). But the fights are cool, and the seating of the story fits really well with the powers of the MC (not like other stories that introduce the most outlandish powers like akuma no mi to some random mythology) The plot also looks good enough, I liked the author’s spin on how God’s power’s work/look and how he uses them. Last thing, and a really minor one, is that i didnt like the inconsistency of the OC’s aperances in relation to the other angels (like taking chacters of fire emblem and making them ”shiny” angels out of nowhere, even if in apearance only) But that just me 🤚
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Im lovin the epic action scenes and the opossing thoughts of the mc and his girls. keep postibg regularly!
so far love it the plot and character development I just wish the chapters dropped faster
It’s good but the updates are so far between. it’s a little wholesome even though it’s in the dxd world
writing quality top notch anything else not so much. The start of the story was interesting but then it became like any fanfic where the mc is changed randomly in a dumb idiot for plot reasons. The mc should be smart and powerful and a self insert but the author don't have him act as such. The last 4 chapters from 13 to 17 where painful to read because of this. In my book is not worth reading at least if you plan to keep your neurons active
At chapter 8 all is very good. Author don’t know why but everyone gives you hella hate in the comments they are idiots. Good job
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great dxd fanfic loving the fact that he has titles like thinking is albion or draig going to be like "be careful partner! the one your facing now is a slayer of gods and titans the king of salt!!!"
Honestly I feel the story is amazing and has a lot of potential. Though the story is starting to get predictable, and the stability of updates is horrendous but at least the updates are still coming. But other than that this isn't a bad fanfic.
it's good ff and I hope the author continues writing and I hope the mc will not focus on a large harem
i like the story. sure a few thinks could be better but it is really hard to make the Angel setting work. there is not much known about this time as well. So Overall you do a good job and i pry to god(haha) you dont drop it. idc about waiting a month but i really want to know what you are gona di with this Story on a sidenote will god still die in the great war?
I really like your story.....but please try to update more frequently...i won't say much about the storyline...as it's already messed up.. after all the 72 pillers of demons are made by lillth ...but now it's under mc protection so I don't know what future will have unfold onto us....but I like the way you try to make your story ongoing in completely different route...for that I appreciate your time and efforts.....we will also support you..so don't drop it
So I have genuinely really enjoyed this story even though there were a couple of plot points that I could have done without. I also wish that the power of the MC was explained more because it was just kind of brushed over. Also, apparently the MC is in the form of another fictional character with the same powers, but I don't know who it is because it was not talked about. But I have been enjoying the story development so far and I look forward too how it will progress in the future. I think it will be nice to see alternate POV's to show what other characters think about the MC, and also show how the MC becomes known throughout Christian lore. One think I have to mention though is that the stability of updates for this story is atrocious. I mean it has been 5 months and we have only gotten about 21 chapters. I think the author is stretching himself too thin because I checked his profile, and there are like 5 other stories that he is working on all at the same time. I think it will be better to focus more on the stories that are being received better by the community, that way he can deliver more chapters in a timely manner, while having to focus on fewer plotlines at the same time. Overall author, I hope to see you continue this story and I pray that this will be updated faster. Keep up the good work!
This is pretty good doesn't update that often but first of all this gives very little information about what's going on in the chapters second it's to the point where in these first 24 chapters you know even less about the mc than the other angels which is very little and all his interactions are just him training him training his siblings getting worshiped for unkown reasons cause there was a 2 year time skip and god making new people and the war was just him being like one shot you one shot you he didn't even talk about his abilities once so very little information about the Mc is given he could even be considered a mysterious side character
Reveal Spoiler the only thing that I can say is that you won't regret reading it ( currently only 20 chapters are published which are amazing)
trop decu du dernier chapitre , attendre tout ce temps pour ca , t serieux auteur ? [img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle]
Nice power system and world building, character development is also good the only problem is the updates.
Muito Bom ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler I Love this novel. Your characters setting and plot is very nice. I like the story background and mc. The storyline is fascinating. I wish to ask that will your story include conflicts with other patheons. I don't why people are giving you harsh comments without any reason. They are jealous of your story or plot setting. Keep it up author
Hey author-san, this is my second time giving you a review and I'll be as direct as last time. This fanfic is Golden. True. But what's with the release frequency? I know you have a life out there, we all do, but you leaving us hanging is not the way to go man. It's frustrating. Also, your number of viewers would increase with more frequent release. Sigh. Just think about it.
Amazing usiiaoqiehvshaawihebshwuis😀😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘👌😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😘😕😘😕😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😕😘😕😘😍😘😕😘😘😍
I find it a promising story, the character development could use some work (mostly on the romance side of things, the girls act like robots made to love the MC…). But the fights are cool, and the seating of the story fits really well with the powers of the MC (not like other stories that introduce the most outlandish powers like akuma no mi to some random mythology) The plot also looks good enough, I liked the author’s spin on how God’s power’s work/look and how he uses them. Last thing, and a really minor one, is that i didnt like the inconsistency of the OC’s aperances in relation to the other angels (like taking chacters of fire emblem and making them ”shiny” angels out of nowhere, even if in apearance only) But that just me 🤚
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Im lovin the epic action scenes and the opossing thoughts of the mc and his girls. keep postibg regularly!
so far love it the plot and character development I just wish the chapters dropped faster
It’s good but the updates are so far between. it’s a little wholesome even though it’s in the dxd world
writing quality top notch anything else not so much. The start of the story was interesting but then it became like any fanfic where the mc is changed randomly in a dumb idiot for plot reasons. The mc should be smart and powerful and a self insert but the author don't have him act as such. The last 4 chapters from 13 to 17 where painful to read because of this. In my book is not worth reading at least if you plan to keep your neurons active
At chapter 8 all is very good. Author don’t know why but everyone gives you hella hate in the comments they are idiots. Good job
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great dxd fanfic loving the fact that he has titles like thinking is albion or draig going to be like "be careful partner! the one your facing now is a slayer of gods and titans the king of salt!!!"