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Honestly I was expecting something for the midnight spank bank. Instead I got 2 whole volumes of a boy who called himself a slave and his sister his master. (But not in a kinky way) Apparently the only hint of any ‘giggity’ moments are the ones you have to pay for and you’re left suffering in pure cuck foolery. His sister beds this chick every night and has been since she was 13. He’s still a virgin by the end of the second volume. (14 years old) Don’t expect the MC to be this super baddass, honestly he’s like every Japanese MC but worse. If anything his sister is clearly the MC. All and all. I hate my life for reading this but I’m too invested to give it up. What a man will do to so much as involve himself in anything 18* is astonishing. I am profoundly disappointed in myself.
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I love this story. I am reading this from the start and I am your one permanent fans of yours
Recommend! Should have more updates. Fight scenes and story development is good, but the spicy scenes are also frequent and well done. Sometimes there is a heavy split, but I’m happy in this case with more spice - or rather I like the story developing just to support the spice!
The story is very heavy with Yuri that is for sure. MC two mother is Yuri, his sister is Yuri and his servant is not Yuri but definitely gay and lord knows how many more are coming along the way in the story and we are just around 19 chapters. So, you might be asking what about MC jesus he is even worse in the family. If his sister says jump then MC will only ask how high my queen? I think that's the perfect way to describe the MC relationship with his sister. Anyway read it at your own discretion.
It's a good novel and it depends on person to person what they like. It has world building, adventures, 18+ amazing scenes and originality so good for me.
Sigh, who to say, of course the mc is submissive and a Simp he looks more like a slave than anything else and don't expect to see him f**k that has to happen 100 chaps later, but that's unfortunately not the worst. There are Ntr clones in it, all with an individual conscience and mind. Plus it's full of yuri and ntr, his mother r*ped many women and his sister molested the maids and took Sophie's virginity. In short, a good novel for cuckolds, masochists and submissives.
the grammar is horrendous, I would rather not have wasted my time with this novel. The grammar only gets worse the more you read
NTR vibes, cuck and submissive Mc that is basically a dog for his sister...currently on chapter 24, hope it changes
He start too overpower, he already born in a powerfull family plus he is 14 or 15 years old no f**k i want a time skip im at the 2 volume,plus he too submissive and what this I'm hearing about him create a girl clone of him self
Another addition to my previous review. In the past, mc's mother r*ped many women and took their virginity. And according to the logic of the author (the d*mbest in the world), if a man ra*ped a woman, that she would hate men all her life or become a lesb*an. And if a woman ra*pes another woman, then that woman, instead of hating women, will become a lesb*an herself. If it doesn't disgust you, then you don't have a brain.
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Basically 20 chapters for a single day to go by in that world after the first 100 chapters and mc doesn’t have his first time until early 100s not to mention the repetitive use of words with incorrect connotations like “affirmative” even the overall writing is so cringy with horrible references I got second hand embarrassment so many times when reading. what makes this book worse is that there are so many chapters for the mc’s other personas I almost skipped 100 chapters for that alone. Don’t recommend so save your time
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Well like others I wanted to like this story but it was just so hollow. Things just happen and there is no development of anykind. Honestly this feels more like a draft then a propper story.
I just finished reading up to the latest chapters(254). And I am Absolutely loving it. For those that are complaining and might complain I simply want to say Mc will improve and will be better as the story moves on {at least that is what I felt} so read the story and not drop in the middle bcoz you guys will be missing a Good story Alright, that being said I am Enjoying reading the story and I hope the Author will keep releasing more chapter so that I can read more as well [img=update][img=update][img=update] Thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Haven't started yet. I will post another review after reading, but I wanted ask something: Is there illustrations of characters anywhere(like a discord server or in the comments or paragraph comments)???It would be easier for me while reading (not in a weird way😜🤫) but to know how they look.
i started it and dropped it at chapter 20,due to mc being a simp, then picked it up again and now i'm at chapter 231. all i can say is the novel gets better fr. not like m2wbv but the simpness of the mc is less later on, the latest 30 chapters should determine whether man's a simp or a G
You read the story for mc to become strong and gain haremI read this story to watch mc getting cucked and degraded by his own siswe aren't the sameto me the sister is good protogantisti consider this yuri jam
i'll give it 4 star, the harem aspect is fine, but as the others said, the mc is a bit...well, underwhelming, otherwise it's fine
I saw a lot of reviews mentioning how submissive the protag is but I wanted to give the story a fair shot. But I’m at chapter 55 and it’s just getting worse it doesn’t even feel like he has any atvantages from his cheats. They still just equal to his sister who has no cheats and is only a year older than him. They feel more like master servant than a real family.
I really like this one, it doesn’t move too fast which is not really my type but it is still enjoyable in the end! The guy is born to the strongest women in the world, and he is given pretty much godly abilities and skills compared to other people, not even counting the fact he has such superior skills and abilities from his parents. He does not have to worry to much about the world and struggle I guess-? This is because of his parents who are awesome!
Not my cup of tea.But this one had great potential, things do seem to get better as the story progressed but this is complete TRASH! (atleast for me)You can go ahead and read it, if you don't mind how mc acts or the writing and character interactions.
people complain a lot about the MC being a beta but I don't see anything there, people should looked at MCs as imperfect, if they aren't how do you expect any character development! Ride on Author!
At first I quite liked it, but as other's have mentioned he's the oblivious or slow (to a crawl)-type MC typical of japanese writing, which in and of itself isn't inexcusable, but around chapter 60 I couldn't take it anymore. He starts creating underlings with his multiple minds, creates a part of 1 dude and 3 women (different bodies but all a copy of his own brain in them), and they immediately, for no reason, start having intimate group sessions while the main body has a wife (and a sister) he refuses to touch. 60 chapters of waiting for him to man up and do something on anyone, even his fiance, and within 2 paragraphs of making copies of himself they are having three ways.
Honestly I was expecting something for the midnight spank bank. Instead I got 2 whole volumes of a boy who called himself a slave and his sister his master. (But not in a kinky way) Apparently the only hint of any ‘giggity’ moments are the ones you have to pay for and you’re left suffering in pure cuck foolery. His sister beds this chick every night and has been since she was 13. He’s still a virgin by the end of the second volume. (14 years old) Don’t expect the MC to be this super baddass, honestly he’s like every Japanese MC but worse. If anything his sister is clearly the MC. All and all. I hate my life for reading this but I’m too invested to give it up. What a man will do to so much as involve himself in anything 18* is astonishing. I am profoundly disappointed in myself.
Reveal Spoiler I love this story. I am reading this from the start and I am your one permanent fans of yours
Recommend! Should have more updates. Fight scenes and story development is good, but the spicy scenes are also frequent and well done. Sometimes there is a heavy split, but I’m happy in this case with more spice - or rather I like the story developing just to support the spice!
The story is very heavy with Yuri that is for sure. MC two mother is Yuri, his sister is Yuri and his servant is not Yuri but definitely gay and lord knows how many more are coming along the way in the story and we are just around 19 chapters. So, you might be asking what about MC jesus he is even worse in the family. If his sister says jump then MC will only ask how high my queen? I think that's the perfect way to describe the MC relationship with his sister. Anyway read it at your own discretion.
It's a good novel and it depends on person to person what they like. It has world building, adventures, 18+ amazing scenes and originality so good for me.
Sigh, who to say, of course the mc is submissive and a Simp he looks more like a slave than anything else and don't expect to see him f**k that has to happen 100 chaps later, but that's unfortunately not the worst. There are Ntr clones in it, all with an individual conscience and mind. Plus it's full of yuri and ntr, his mother r*ped many women and his sister molested the maids and took Sophie's virginity. In short, a good novel for cuckolds, masochists and submissives.
the grammar is horrendous, I would rather not have wasted my time with this novel. The grammar only gets worse the more you read
NTR vibes, cuck and submissive Mc that is basically a dog for his sister...currently on chapter 24, hope it changes
He start too overpower, he already born in a powerfull family plus he is 14 or 15 years old no f**k i want a time skip im at the 2 volume,plus he too submissive and what this I'm hearing about him create a girl clone of him self
Another addition to my previous review. In the past, mc's mother r*ped many women and took their virginity. And according to the logic of the author (the d*mbest in the world), if a man ra*ped a woman, that she would hate men all her life or become a lesb*an. And if a woman ra*pes another woman, then that woman, instead of hating women, will become a lesb*an herself. If it doesn't disgust you, then you don't have a brain.
Reveal Spoiler Basically 20 chapters for a single day to go by in that world after the first 100 chapters and mc doesn’t have his first time until early 100s not to mention the repetitive use of words with incorrect connotations like “affirmative” even the overall writing is so cringy with horrible references I got second hand embarrassment so many times when reading. what makes this book worse is that there are so many chapters for the mc’s other personas I almost skipped 100 chapters for that alone. Don’t recommend so save your time
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Well like others I wanted to like this story but it was just so hollow. Things just happen and there is no development of anykind. Honestly this feels more like a draft then a propper story.
I just finished reading up to the latest chapters(254). And I am Absolutely loving it. For those that are complaining and might complain I simply want to say Mc will improve and will be better as the story moves on {at least that is what I felt} so read the story and not drop in the middle bcoz you guys will be missing a Good story Alright, that being said I am Enjoying reading the story and I hope the Author will keep releasing more chapter so that I can read more as well [img=update][img=update][img=update] Thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Haven't started yet. I will post another review after reading, but I wanted ask something: Is there illustrations of characters anywhere(like a discord server or in the comments or paragraph comments)???It would be easier for me while reading (not in a weird way😜🤫) but to know how they look.
i started it and dropped it at chapter 20,due to mc being a simp, then picked it up again and now i'm at chapter 231. all i can say is the novel gets better fr. not like m2wbv but the simpness of the mc is less later on, the latest 30 chapters should determine whether man's a simp or a G
You read the story for mc to become strong and gain haremI read this story to watch mc getting cucked and degraded by his own siswe aren't the sameto me the sister is good protogantisti consider this yuri jam
i'll give it 4 star, the harem aspect is fine, but as the others said, the mc is a bit...well, underwhelming, otherwise it's fine
I saw a lot of reviews mentioning how submissive the protag is but I wanted to give the story a fair shot. But I’m at chapter 55 and it’s just getting worse it doesn’t even feel like he has any atvantages from his cheats. They still just equal to his sister who has no cheats and is only a year older than him. They feel more like master servant than a real family.
I really like this one, it doesn’t move too fast which is not really my type but it is still enjoyable in the end! The guy is born to the strongest women in the world, and he is given pretty much godly abilities and skills compared to other people, not even counting the fact he has such superior skills and abilities from his parents. He does not have to worry to much about the world and struggle I guess-? This is because of his parents who are awesome!
Not my cup of tea.But this one had great potential, things do seem to get better as the story progressed but this is complete TRASH! (atleast for me)You can go ahead and read it, if you don't mind how mc acts or the writing and character interactions.
people complain a lot about the MC being a beta but I don't see anything there, people should looked at MCs as imperfect, if they aren't how do you expect any character development! Ride on Author!
At first I quite liked it, but as other's have mentioned he's the oblivious or slow (to a crawl)-type MC typical of japanese writing, which in and of itself isn't inexcusable, but around chapter 60 I couldn't take it anymore. He starts creating underlings with his multiple minds, creates a part of 1 dude and 3 women (different bodies but all a copy of his own brain in them), and they immediately, for no reason, start having intimate group sessions while the main body has a wife (and a sister) he refuses to touch. 60 chapters of waiting for him to man up and do something on anyone, even his fiance, and within 2 paragraphs of making copies of himself they are having three ways.
first there are lot of complexes , and will not my cup of tea