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it gets very wierd at later chapters with clone and stuff. Basically clone NTR as clones have their individual soles and stuff. Also MC is very unlikeable , simp and staying within his sister's garsps. The whole novel give NTR vibes sorry :(
it's an "alternative" story focusing on the 3rd gender and focuses on the fantastical life of such family
Caution: NTR by clone .... it gets real weird when it comes to the alter egos and clones...had to drop there since this is the first time Ive seen clones that are basically just new characters but share memories and are connected to the host, + gender bender. It got really strange out of nowhere. Authors taste is unique.
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I find this story really very good, a development that advances characters that seem to exist, and above all we are not in a world where the mc must fight every day to save the world by not taking advantage of life, in any case for the moment. I understand criticizing her with respect to the servile Mc with his family but it's just because he adores them, his sister hasn't put a collar on his heart that I know of, right? to conclude very interesting story to see to judge.
one of the novels that I like the most, please do not abandon it,cheer up[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the story so far but I belave their needs to be more stakes involved in the story like stronger enemies from the south and thier need to be threat like if x happens in the south enemies that are capable of harming MC become involved in the MC's life. otherwise I also beleave a battle taking more than 10 chapter is a bit overkill unless it involves different groups over a larger time scale otherwise it becomes a bit repetitive. it's a good story and I hope it become more flushed out and the MC gets into more smutty situations.
everyone saying mc is a beta despite him being less than 15makes me wonder if they have brains, also all the painful waiting is worth it by chapter 100 when the best part begins
Not to be that guy, but what happened to "my first time is reserved for Sophie".
writing quality is just OK. There are mistakes character design leaves much to be desired. It's like the bare minimum story development is way too slow
The MC is a deplorable and submissive S.I.M.P. There really is no reason for it and just seems to happen for gags and giggles, but it gets old really fast. The story also gets derailed often and many times where the mc could just say 'no' to bothersome stuff, he took it upon himself to say yes and whine about it. The simpening started around 23 ch.
Gotta be honest, only getting one chapter a day is kinda irking me, though that's only cause what you have so far has me hooked. I wish the author would maybe step up to two a day, but I'm not going to complain if they don't. Just please keep them coming.
He gives in way to much he like a dog his sister told him she wanted to put him on a leash and convince himself that it for a good reason he is weak minded he needs to be a man change that and he would be perfect
Huge amounts of info drops at the start and the writing quality could be better but overall a decent read.But i would prefer the mc to be less submissive to his sister.
So far, chapter 9, I'm enjoying it, the writing is good, it has good ideas, he knew how to build the world, but has failed miserably so far to give charisma to other characters, his 2 mothers and his sister, I hope it improves and that it shows a more affectionate relationship between them. But it's a pity that this novel isn't R18/SMUT, maybe the actor doesn't put in some scenes? RS, well I'm at the beginning so I can't say much more.
Honestly I want to like this novel. I really do. Like, I see the potential it has but theres just that one thing thats really bugging me. It's the fact that he is so... submissive. Now what do I mean by that? He's clearly a dork who has never had a girlfriend in his life. He's a simpleton who would likely give up all his powers if his mom, mother (He has two moms) and sister asked him to. In our everyday language he would definitely be a simp. I think the thing that really bugged me was him admitting his secret to his sister. I said it in a comment but I found the build up for him telling the secret to be plainly infuriating and terrible. Author, in the nicest way possible I want to tell you that it was bad. But the big kicker is the fact that although he has all this power his real personality is still so...wimpy. It's Honestly disappointing and I unfortunately will choose to drop this novel. If anyone else can stand a simpleton who acts like he's chasing skirts with the mind of a 30 year old man whose never been a women then feel free.
Big question I haven’t started yet but I looks good. Will the moms be in the harem that would be amazing?
will there be yuri in harem?....,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
I feel uncomfortable at chapter 192 ..... the mc is still going even his partner pass out ...and he still show that to his sister ...poor sister
it gets very wierd at later chapters with clone and stuff. Basically clone NTR as clones have their individual soles and stuff. Also MC is very unlikeable , simp and staying within his sister's garsps. The whole novel give NTR vibes sorry :(
it's an "alternative" story focusing on the 3rd gender and focuses on the fantastical life of such family
Caution: NTR by clone .... it gets real weird when it comes to the alter egos and clones...had to drop there since this is the first time Ive seen clones that are basically just new characters but share memories and are connected to the host, + gender bender. It got really strange out of nowhere. Authors taste is unique.
Reveal Spoiler I find this story really very good, a development that advances characters that seem to exist, and above all we are not in a world where the mc must fight every day to save the world by not taking advantage of life, in any case for the moment. I understand criticizing her with respect to the servile Mc with his family but it's just because he adores them, his sister hasn't put a collar on his heart that I know of, right? to conclude very interesting story to see to judge.
one of the novels that I like the most, please do not abandon it,cheer up[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the story so far but I belave their needs to be more stakes involved in the story like stronger enemies from the south and thier need to be threat like if x happens in the south enemies that are capable of harming MC become involved in the MC's life. otherwise I also beleave a battle taking more than 10 chapter is a bit overkill unless it involves different groups over a larger time scale otherwise it becomes a bit repetitive. it's a good story and I hope it become more flushed out and the MC gets into more smutty situations.
everyone saying mc is a beta despite him being less than 15makes me wonder if they have brains, also all the painful waiting is worth it by chapter 100 when the best part begins
Not to be that guy, but what happened to "my first time is reserved for Sophie".
writing quality is just OK. There are mistakes character design leaves much to be desired. It's like the bare minimum story development is way too slow
The MC is a deplorable and submissive S.I.M.P. There really is no reason for it and just seems to happen for gags and giggles, but it gets old really fast. The story also gets derailed often and many times where the mc could just say 'no' to bothersome stuff, he took it upon himself to say yes and whine about it. The simpening started around 23 ch.
Gotta be honest, only getting one chapter a day is kinda irking me, though that's only cause what you have so far has me hooked. I wish the author would maybe step up to two a day, but I'm not going to complain if they don't. Just please keep them coming.
He gives in way to much he like a dog his sister told him she wanted to put him on a leash and convince himself that it for a good reason he is weak minded he needs to be a man change that and he would be perfect
Huge amounts of info drops at the start and the writing quality could be better but overall a decent read.But i would prefer the mc to be less submissive to his sister.
So far, chapter 9, I'm enjoying it, the writing is good, it has good ideas, he knew how to build the world, but has failed miserably so far to give charisma to other characters, his 2 mothers and his sister, I hope it improves and that it shows a more affectionate relationship between them. But it's a pity that this novel isn't R18/SMUT, maybe the actor doesn't put in some scenes? RS, well I'm at the beginning so I can't say much more.
Honestly I want to like this novel. I really do. Like, I see the potential it has but theres just that one thing thats really bugging me. It's the fact that he is so... submissive. Now what do I mean by that? He's clearly a dork who has never had a girlfriend in his life. He's a simpleton who would likely give up all his powers if his mom, mother (He has two moms) and sister asked him to. In our everyday language he would definitely be a simp. I think the thing that really bugged me was him admitting his secret to his sister. I said it in a comment but I found the build up for him telling the secret to be plainly infuriating and terrible. Author, in the nicest way possible I want to tell you that it was bad. But the big kicker is the fact that although he has all this power his real personality is still so...wimpy. It's Honestly disappointing and I unfortunately will choose to drop this novel. If anyone else can stand a simpleton who acts like he's chasing skirts with the mind of a 30 year old man whose never been a women then feel free.
Big question I haven’t started yet but I looks good. Will the moms be in the harem that would be amazing?
will there be yuri in harem?....,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
I feel uncomfortable at chapter 192 ..... the mc is still going even his partner pass out ...and he still show that to his sister ...poor sister