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was pretty fun until she was forced to join luffy's crew due to some fate bs, got relatively boring from there on.
Trash. Another yuri trash. Full of cringe lines. MC is pathetic, reborn cultivator? nah, just pathetic. Also mc is not the only reincarnated person, so feel free not to even bother with this trash. You're welcome.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Start was very good, it felt unique too, but now matter what mc does and how much ever changes she makes, events are happening almost the exact same way. It feels like there is no consequence of mc's actions.
This might be my favourite one piece fanfiction. Writing quality and story development is vety good. It follows the original story but with authors own twist.
I really like this fic. The others fic with a female protagonist on this page did not attract me for a long time, but I read this one completely. As a critic, I know that you avoid Cherry getting too involved in the arcs to promote the growth of the Mugiwara and avoid repeating so many scenes from the canon, but as a result of that Cherry feels a bit out of the crew, more like a teacher watching over them than a partner. I know the Mugiwara don't feel that way about all the time they spend together on the ship, but since you don't write many of those moments, it feels that way to me. I would recommend a little more Slice of Life ish, one-on-one talks, hobbies, so we can see the relationship he has with each Mugiwara beyond fighting or teaching.
i don't really do a review that much i guess this is my third time doing this 😂 but i fell like this story deserves it i like it very much😉.
Starts out very interesting but then it is just the normal main story just less cool and with less struggles as the MC is "helping" everything go along "smoothly" overall the MC is not only the 3rd wheel of this story, she is also actively making everything boring.
oooga booga neurons activated :) its good I guess doesn't have enough nonsensical cultivator nonsense tho
Nice story, but I don't appreciate the fact that every single one piece arc has a twist with a made up characters where everything becomes harder just for the mc to have something to do in the story. Why I don't like it? Because it's whimsical and your decisions just happen for no good reason.
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This is my first time reading a novel with both cultivation and one piece so yeah I'm in
At first I didn't know what to do, its a one piece fic...hmmm- but its a fm mc! Never seen before....seein the tags "Yuri" detected! But am still more okay with a male hmmm.. BUT- its more fun this way - conclusion
It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story
the only bad thing about this novel is Yuri but I'm glad she is collecting harem members and acting cringe with cringe women from harem. All harem novels are cringe with those arrogant woman and obviously the cringe screw head mc who acts like a 14 y/o kid. maybe most authors in Webnovel are 14 y/o because it's full of third rate villains, harem and Yuri who can't accept normal relationship between man and woman. Most of this content isn't directed to author of this novel or his work because it's good except Yuri.
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Need more,cheers and Hope u reach laught tale and give me a good laugth. Good story ,good writting. And even if Destiny make her join the straw hasta It Will not feel force. Hope she does(even if she maybe go away on her own for 1or 2 "minor arcs" if their adventure)
It's very interesting, even though the main character is a cultivator, he doesn't become the strongest already during the canon, he is not even considered strong in this world at that time, which makes the story more interesting.
Plz continue to the end and I will never drop ooooooooooooooooooo off oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
very fun read i laughed and got hooked with this i recommend this fanfic my only problem with it was the yuri tag however it is not the focus in this novel.
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
that title .... are you holy joker? .................................................................................................
If you need inspiration, read Atlas Shrugged "The ultimate value which, to be kept, must be gain through every moment, is life." I also suggest you remember that free will exists, so no matter how similar the world your character's in & Oda's world, the moment she entered it at least you should comprehend that it's not exactly the same world
Writing Quality ---------- ✪✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Character Design ------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ----- ✪✪✪✪✪
Ini benar-benar bagus, saya menyukai semua yang anda telah tulis sejauh ini, hanya saja, saya ingin tahu apakah mc akan menjadi seorang pendekar pedang atau sekedar pengguna pedang untuk meluncurkan serangan buah iblis? Saya harap anda menjadikannya seorang pendekar pedang dari pada menggunakan trik-trik lainnya. Jika anda memutuskan mc sebagai pengguna buah iblis, setidaknya, jangan yang terkait dengan kekuatan langsung seperti buah elemental atau yang lainnya. Saya setuju anda membiarkannya memakan buah iblis untuk menempa, namun bagaimana dengan buah iblis yang lain?
Writing Quality ---------- ✪✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Character Design ------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ----- ✪✪✪✪✪
It's a very good fanfic, still too early for any in-depth analysis, but in general I can say that the quality of the writing is good, I didn't see any problems with the story or even the details and so far it seems to have a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops in the future. I would like to say to the author that if the fanfic remains this good, I would be willing to subscribe to patreon in the future if the price is good like about 3$ for 10 chapters. Being a fanfic I don't really subscribe to patreon if they charge above that because I just don't think it's worth it since the dollar is expensive in my country.
i like the funny moment in the story , i hope to see end of this good Ff ...................................................................
Loving this story already!!! Also loving the main character and her interactions with everyone!! Cannot wait for more and to see where this story goes in the future!!
I Love this One Piece fanfiction the most....Why not give fmc the power to absorb and release kinetic energy,Redirecting attacks like Bang (One Punch Man),Royal Guard (DMC3,4,5),Full Counter(Physical and Elemental,Spiritual),Demon Slayer Breathing/Overclocking,King Punch,Kiai,Electro,Diable Jambe,Red Hawk,Hawk Gattling,Iron Cutting,Flying Slashes per will,Brooks delayed cut Arrownot Slash(or Something),Cutting Fire,Advanced Observation Haki 5 sec.Precognitive future vision,Learn to avoid other people's future vision,Advanced Refined Armament like Sentoumaru,Armament Emission and Internal Destruction,Conqueror Coating/Infusion,Shunko with Conqueror coating,Internal Bones Permanent armament haki Coating,Internal Organs Temporary haki Coating,Coating your Ship (Haki Coating Thousand Sunny) to protect It or attack enemies with haki coated cannons,Coating the floor with haki to Slam your Enemy to the Ground,Seimei Kikan(Increased metabolism+Reposition Internal Organs/Heart Position to avoid fatal injuries/Stab wounds),Devil Fruit Awakening,Learn about Pure Gold,Immortality Surgery,Secrets of Blackbeard,History of Rocks D.Xebec,Will of D,Void Century,Pluton,Uranus,Raftel,Im.Also lastly don't make her too op before post-timeskip...only make her op from Wano arc fighting Kaido and afterwards you should breakthrough the fifth body tempering realm.Anyway keep up the good work.
was pretty fun until she was forced to join luffy's crew due to some fate bs, got relatively boring from there on.
Trash. Another yuri trash. Full of cringe lines. MC is pathetic, reborn cultivator? nah, just pathetic. Also mc is not the only reincarnated person, so feel free not to even bother with this trash. You're welcome.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Start was very good, it felt unique too, but now matter what mc does and how much ever changes she makes, events are happening almost the exact same way. It feels like there is no consequence of mc's actions.
This might be my favourite one piece fanfiction. Writing quality and story development is vety good. It follows the original story but with authors own twist.
I really like this fic. The others fic with a female protagonist on this page did not attract me for a long time, but I read this one completely. As a critic, I know that you avoid Cherry getting too involved in the arcs to promote the growth of the Mugiwara and avoid repeating so many scenes from the canon, but as a result of that Cherry feels a bit out of the crew, more like a teacher watching over them than a partner. I know the Mugiwara don't feel that way about all the time they spend together on the ship, but since you don't write many of those moments, it feels that way to me. I would recommend a little more Slice of Life ish, one-on-one talks, hobbies, so we can see the relationship he has with each Mugiwara beyond fighting or teaching.
i don't really do a review that much i guess this is my third time doing this 😂 but i fell like this story deserves it i like it very much😉.
Starts out very interesting but then it is just the normal main story just less cool and with less struggles as the MC is "helping" everything go along "smoothly" overall the MC is not only the 3rd wheel of this story, she is also actively making everything boring.
oooga booga neurons activated :) its good I guess doesn't have enough nonsensical cultivator nonsense tho
Nice story, but I don't appreciate the fact that every single one piece arc has a twist with a made up characters where everything becomes harder just for the mc to have something to do in the story. Why I don't like it? Because it's whimsical and your decisions just happen for no good reason.
............................................................................................................................................
This is my first time reading a novel with both cultivation and one piece so yeah I'm in
At first I didn't know what to do, its a one piece fic...hmmm- but its a fm mc! Never seen before....seein the tags "Yuri" detected! But am still more okay with a male hmmm.. BUT- its more fun this way - conclusion
It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story
the only bad thing about this novel is Yuri but I'm glad she is collecting harem members and acting cringe with cringe women from harem. All harem novels are cringe with those arrogant woman and obviously the cringe screw head mc who acts like a 14 y/o kid. maybe most authors in Webnovel are 14 y/o because it's full of third rate villains, harem and Yuri who can't accept normal relationship between man and woman. Most of this content isn't directed to author of this novel or his work because it's good except Yuri.
Writing Quality--------------⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎ Stability of Updates---------⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎ Story Development----------⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎ Character Design------------⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎ World Background-----------⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎⭐︎
Need more,cheers and Hope u reach laught tale and give me a good laugth. Good story ,good writting. And even if Destiny make her join the straw hasta It Will not feel force. Hope she does(even if she maybe go away on her own for 1or 2 "minor arcs" if their adventure)
It's very interesting, even though the main character is a cultivator, he doesn't become the strongest already during the canon, he is not even considered strong in this world at that time, which makes the story more interesting.
Plz continue to the end and I will never drop ooooooooooooooooooo off oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
very fun read i laughed and got hooked with this i recommend this fanfic my only problem with it was the yuri tag however it is not the focus in this novel.
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
that title .... are you holy joker? .................................................................................................
If you need inspiration, read Atlas Shrugged "The ultimate value which, to be kept, must be gain through every moment, is life." I also suggest you remember that free will exists, so no matter how similar the world your character's in & Oda's world, the moment she entered it at least you should comprehend that it's not exactly the same world
Writing Quality ---------- ✪✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Character Design ------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ----- ✪✪✪✪✪
Ini benar-benar bagus, saya menyukai semua yang anda telah tulis sejauh ini, hanya saja, saya ingin tahu apakah mc akan menjadi seorang pendekar pedang atau sekedar pengguna pedang untuk meluncurkan serangan buah iblis? Saya harap anda menjadikannya seorang pendekar pedang dari pada menggunakan trik-trik lainnya. Jika anda memutuskan mc sebagai pengguna buah iblis, setidaknya, jangan yang terkait dengan kekuatan langsung seperti buah elemental atau yang lainnya. Saya setuju anda membiarkannya memakan buah iblis untuk menempa, namun bagaimana dengan buah iblis yang lain?
Writing Quality ---------- ✪✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Character Design ------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ----- ✪✪✪✪✪
It's a very good fanfic, still too early for any in-depth analysis, but in general I can say that the quality of the writing is good, I didn't see any problems with the story or even the details and so far it seems to have a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops in the future. I would like to say to the author that if the fanfic remains this good, I would be willing to subscribe to patreon in the future if the price is good like about 3$ for 10 chapters. Being a fanfic I don't really subscribe to patreon if they charge above that because I just don't think it's worth it since the dollar is expensive in my country.
i like the funny moment in the story , i hope to see end of this good Ff ...................................................................
Loving this story already!!! Also loving the main character and her interactions with everyone!! Cannot wait for more and to see where this story goes in the future!!
I Love this One Piece fanfiction the most....Why not give fmc the power to absorb and release kinetic energy,Redirecting attacks like Bang (One Punch Man),Royal Guard (DMC3,4,5),Full Counter(Physical and Elemental,Spiritual),Demon Slayer Breathing/Overclocking,King Punch,Kiai,Electro,Diable Jambe,Red Hawk,Hawk Gattling,Iron Cutting,Flying Slashes per will,Brooks delayed cut Arrownot Slash(or Something),Cutting Fire,Advanced Observation Haki 5 sec.Precognitive future vision,Learn to avoid other people's future vision,Advanced Refined Armament like Sentoumaru,Armament Emission and Internal Destruction,Conqueror Coating/Infusion,Shunko with Conqueror coating,Internal Bones Permanent armament haki Coating,Internal Organs Temporary haki Coating,Coating your Ship (Haki Coating Thousand Sunny) to protect It or attack enemies with haki coated cannons,Coating the floor with haki to Slam your Enemy to the Ground,Seimei Kikan(Increased metabolism+Reposition Internal Organs/Heart Position to avoid fatal injuries/Stab wounds),Devil Fruit Awakening,Learn about Pure Gold,Immortality Surgery,Secrets of Blackbeard,History of Rocks D.Xebec,Will of D,Void Century,Pluton,Uranus,Raftel,Im.Also lastly don't make her too op before post-timeskip...only make her op from Wano arc fighting Kaido and afterwards you should breakthrough the fifth body tempering realm.Anyway keep up the good work.