One Piece: Dream of Immortality

LV 4

ZoneTail

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LV 1

InternetSaint

Starts out very interesting but then it is just the normal main story just less cool and with less struggles as the MC is "helping" everything go along "smoothly" overall the MC is not only the 3rd wheel of this story, she is also actively making everything boring.

LV 13

DaddyDavo

In my opinion this started off good but then the mc got forced to join the straw hats by ‘fate’ then it became like every other one piece ff in existence.

LV 11

Spelloyal

It's a very good fanfic, still too early for any in-depth analysis, but in general I can say that the quality of the writing is good, I didn't see any problems with the story or even the details and so far it seems to have a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops in the future. I would like to say to the author that if the fanfic remains this good, I would be willing to subscribe to patreon in the future if the price is good like about 3$ for 10 chapters. Being a fanfic I don't really subscribe to patreon if they charge above that because I just don't think it's worth it since the dollar is expensive in my country.

LV 4

faucheusestar

It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story

LV 1

timeawayfromstress

mc has no brain. He has lived so many years, he has become stronger, but he does not have a brain. Mc has the brain of the characters in mtl novels. as someone who has never fought, as someone who has practiced xulian in his previous life and gained superior powers. mc does not have a brain, it can be called no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The novel is garbage The author tried to make his novel look like Naruto Dream to Immortaly.

LV 2

Gratiz_

Nice story, but I don't appreciate the fact that every single one piece arc has a twist with a made up characters where everything becomes harder just for the mc to have something to do in the story. Why I don't like it? Because it's whimsical and your decisions just happen for no good reason.

LV 4

LittleDemon47

Start was very good, it felt unique too, but now matter what mc does and how much ever changes she makes, events are happening almost the exact same way. It feels like there is no consequence of mc's actions.

LV 4

Reiya9

Great story until she joined the straw hats then it went downhill

LV 5

BrabbitX

Trash. Another yuri trash. Full of cringe lines. MC is pathetic, reborn cultivator? nah, just pathetic. Also mc is not the only reincarnated person, so feel free not to even bother with this trash. You're welcome.

LV 14

Lorenzo

was pretty fun until she was forced to join luffy's crew due to some fate bs, got relatively boring from there on.

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LV 4

FrogGodKing

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

LV 13

NonexistanceRose

i don't really do a review that much i guess this is my third time doing this 😂 but i fell like this story deserves it i like it very much😉.

LV 4

Dowauroval

very fun read i laughed and got hooked with this i recommend this fanfic my only problem with it was the yuri tag however it is not the focus in this novel.

LV 4

itsmeyukiedcqii

One of the best one piece fanfiction that the lead was a female. Instead of the usual men oriented fanfiction in this novel world called earth. 🙌🤸👑

LV 4

Joshp447

Really awesome story it’s been one of my favorites.

LV 4

ghostjk

ngl I thought this this was holy joker for a second cus of the one piece and immortality😅

LV 3

Hasan_Shopnil

I Love this One Piece fanfiction the most....Why not give fmc the power to absorb and release kinetic energy,Redirecting attacks like Bang (One Punch Man),Royal Guard (DMC3,4,5),Full Counter(Physical and Elemental,Spiritual),Demon Slayer Breathing/Overclocking,King Punch,Kiai,Electro,Diable Jambe,Red Hawk,Hawk Gattling,Iron Cutting,Flying Slashes per will,Brooks delayed cut Arrownot Slash(or Something),Cutting Fire,Advanced Observation Haki 5 sec.Precognitive future vision,Learn to avoid other people's future vision,Advanced Refined Armament like Sentoumaru,Armament Emission and Internal Destruction,Conqueror Coating/Infusion,Shunko with Conqueror coating,Internal Bones Permanent armament haki Coating,Internal Organs Temporary haki Coating,Coating your Ship (Haki Coating Thousand Sunny) to protect It or attack enemies with haki coated cannons,Coating the floor with haki to Slam your Enemy to the Ground,Seimei Kikan(Increased metabolism+Reposition Internal Organs/Heart Position to avoid fatal injuries/Stab wounds),Devil Fruit Awakening,Learn about Pure Gold,Immortality Surgery,Secrets of Blackbeard,History of Rocks D.Xebec,Will of D,Void Century,Pluton,Uranus,Raftel,Im.Also lastly don't make her too op before post-timeskip...only make her op from Wano arc fighting Kaido and afterwards you should breakthrough the fifth body tempering realm.Anyway keep up the good work.

LV 14

lindre

This might be my favourite one piece fanfiction. Writing quality and story development is vety good. It follows the original story but with authors own twist.