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Write a reviewThere isn't much to say about this novel. The author is chinese and he is an incel. From the very beginning there is chinese propaganda, something, something chinese girls, something, something chinese food, etc.
Excellentπππππ Finally the end... I really liked the novel, even though there weren't many fights. The protagonist doesn't go around killing anyone at will, just his enemies, even when some friends are against him, they aren't enemies, they just have different ideas. The MC makes friends, allies and subordinates, values ββthose he spends time with, plans all movements well. Furthermore, I really liked the harem, it has a light romance, it develops the characters' relationships and basically remembers them, the best of all is that there is no smut, I was tired of always looking for a cool novel to read, and ending up reading basically one then. Google tlanslate
Thanks, I'm sad it's over. Perfect π«‘π«‘. I wanted to see at least a snippet of the characters' future romance, but I still really liked it, thank you.[img=Mad]
Quite honestly one of the best Chinese fanfics I've read so far. I've seen comments complaining about nationalism, well, that's a lie. The very few times China is ever mentioned is when the MC misses the food. Writing Quality: The translator did a very good job. Very few instances where gender is mistranslated. From what I read in other reviews, the translator took it upon themselves to correct any inconsistencies in the story during translation. Props for that, very few areas were missed. Story Development: The system aspect is mid-range OP. You won't see the story stagnating on the boring parts most H.P. fanfics get stuck on. It's a rather fluid slice of life style with a system. Very few combat scenes. The main focus is the MC developing his personal relationships with his harem, as well as, his political/underworld relationships. Character Development: You can expect an intelligent and comedic MC. One that is ruthless and cunning when he needs to be. In my personal opinion the cast was rather true to canon. World Background: pretty sure the author tried their best to stick to canon as close as possible. Other than getting the RoR location incorrect, there isn't much fault I can find. With that said, there isn'tuch to praise either. Just my personal preference, but I prefer AU style fanfics. I won't hate too much though, the author still did well. Harem: Read below if you want names. I'd say a good 45% of this book is him building his relationship and caring for these girls. I'd give the development a 4/5. The relationships feel rushed due to many, many times skips. Can't do much when you're stuck in a boarding school though, so I believe the author handled it quite well. Could have added a few more chapters to better cement things between a few of them though. The most fleshed out were 1, 3, and 4 (Read below to find the names). As a simp for 4, I can rate that development at a 4.5, could have used more screen time though. . . . . . 1st: Cho Chang 2nd: Hermione Granger 3rd: Fleur Delacour 4th: Luna Lovegood 5th: Cassandra Vole 6th: Astoria Greengrass The book also mentions him sleeping with Nagini multiple times, but never making anything official.
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Great fanfic! Among one of the best fanfics I've ever read! If I had known I wouldn't have let it linger on my "to read" list for so long! I've finished it and highly recommend it! Don't listen to the comments that criticise her just because she's Chinese and most of these comments have only read a few chapters, in this fanfic there's no racism and no patriotism, just the author putting her own taste into her character(and it's pretty light), it's normal! It's like complaining that a resident of the United States likes hamburgers!
one of few stories that have a complete ending, although not the best fanfic I have read it still can be considered a fairly good story. The protagonist's journey is a bit smooth sealing, with not many challenges, and the worldview is a bit abrupt good story for passing the time reading.
This is unbearably bad. If youβre coming into this actually expecting a Harry Potter fic just leave, the author has no knowledge on the actual setting Ex. Light creation spell = Lumos. Itβs also hard to understand what the author tries to say like somehow Old Bee is maybe Dumbledore?
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Walking to Cho's side, and looking at Cho's surprised eyes, Alvin sat down and hugged Cho tightly. whispered to her "I am coming." "Welcome to Ravenclaw!" Cho was very excited, seeing that the boy in front of him had become the first person in Hogwarts history to openly change the will of the Sorting Hat because of herself. Very moved. I laughed so hard here, he said it like he bust a nutπ€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
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Oye amigo deje de verlo ase mucho tiempo apenas lo acabo de retomar y me encantΓ³ claro ubo algunas cosas malas pero en fin fue buena la historia o novelas ligera como les guste decirle gracias por todo el tiempo que invertiste y por finalizarlo
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Great story. There are some errors with the consistency of the genders of the characters, and the build-up of the main character seems a little much, but other than that, it is very good.
I finished the bookπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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uhmmm... this is a wierd one. I was hopeful but can't find the strength to get past the "what the f* "moments.I understand that its a fan-fic( although from what i read so far, the "fan" part is Debatable). But do you have to bombard the base story with ANY great(Debatable) idea you have.
This novel had a good start and base to go off of but the translator either didn't read the translations before posting or didn't care and butchered obvious titles, names and locations such as Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor with Florin' cold drink shop.
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so.... I'm not sure how this was translated or if it's accurate, but..... this needs editing...... heavy editing. can I understand it? yes, but only through auto-correction that my brain does.... constant misuse of he/she, use of the term senior or junior when upper/underclassmen is the appropriate term, 7th grader instead of 7th year as examples of the many issues..... there are more issues, but I won't go too far into. the short version? please make it readable regardless of what the original text says..... p.s. writing quality can't go lower for some reason....
There isn't much to say about this novel. The author is chinese and he is an incel. From the very beginning there is chinese propaganda, something, something chinese girls, something, something chinese food, etc.
Excellentπππππ Finally the end... I really liked the novel, even though there weren't many fights. The protagonist doesn't go around killing anyone at will, just his enemies, even when some friends are against him, they aren't enemies, they just have different ideas. The MC makes friends, allies and subordinates, values ββthose he spends time with, plans all movements well. Furthermore, I really liked the harem, it has a light romance, it develops the characters' relationships and basically remembers them, the best of all is that there is no smut, I was tired of always looking for a cool novel to read, and ending up reading basically one then. Google tlanslate
Thanks, I'm sad it's over. Perfect π«‘π«‘. I wanted to see at least a snippet of the characters' future romance, but I still really liked it, thank you.[img=Mad]
Quite honestly one of the best Chinese fanfics I've read so far. I've seen comments complaining about nationalism, well, that's a lie. The very few times China is ever mentioned is when the MC misses the food. Writing Quality: The translator did a very good job. Very few instances where gender is mistranslated. From what I read in other reviews, the translator took it upon themselves to correct any inconsistencies in the story during translation. Props for that, very few areas were missed. Story Development: The system aspect is mid-range OP. You won't see the story stagnating on the boring parts most H.P. fanfics get stuck on. It's a rather fluid slice of life style with a system. Very few combat scenes. The main focus is the MC developing his personal relationships with his harem, as well as, his political/underworld relationships. Character Development: You can expect an intelligent and comedic MC. One that is ruthless and cunning when he needs to be. In my personal opinion the cast was rather true to canon. World Background: pretty sure the author tried their best to stick to canon as close as possible. Other than getting the RoR location incorrect, there isn't much fault I can find. With that said, there isn'tuch to praise either. Just my personal preference, but I prefer AU style fanfics. I won't hate too much though, the author still did well. Harem: Read below if you want names. I'd say a good 45% of this book is him building his relationship and caring for these girls. I'd give the development a 4/5. The relationships feel rushed due to many, many times skips. Can't do much when you're stuck in a boarding school though, so I believe the author handled it quite well. Could have added a few more chapters to better cement things between a few of them though. The most fleshed out were 1, 3, and 4 (Read below to find the names). As a simp for 4, I can rate that development at a 4.5, could have used more screen time though. . . . . . 1st: Cho Chang 2nd: Hermione Granger 3rd: Fleur Delacour 4th: Luna Lovegood 5th: Cassandra Vole 6th: Astoria Greengrass The book also mentions him sleeping with Nagini multiple times, but never making anything official.
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Great fanfic! Among one of the best fanfics I've ever read! If I had known I wouldn't have let it linger on my "to read" list for so long! I've finished it and highly recommend it! Don't listen to the comments that criticise her just because she's Chinese and most of these comments have only read a few chapters, in this fanfic there's no racism and no patriotism, just the author putting her own taste into her character(and it's pretty light), it's normal! It's like complaining that a resident of the United States likes hamburgers!
one of few stories that have a complete ending, although not the best fanfic I have read it still can be considered a fairly good story. The protagonist's journey is a bit smooth sealing, with not many challenges, and the worldview is a bit abrupt good story for passing the time reading.
This is unbearably bad. If youβre coming into this actually expecting a Harry Potter fic just leave, the author has no knowledge on the actual setting Ex. Light creation spell = Lumos. Itβs also hard to understand what the author tries to say like somehow Old Bee is maybe Dumbledore?
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Walking to Cho's side, and looking at Cho's surprised eyes, Alvin sat down and hugged Cho tightly. whispered to her "I am coming." "Welcome to Ravenclaw!" Cho was very excited, seeing that the boy in front of him had become the first person in Hogwarts history to openly change the will of the Sorting Hat because of herself. Very moved. I laughed so hard here, he said it like he bust a nutπ€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
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Historia entretenida 5/5 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Oye amigo deje de verlo ase mucho tiempo apenas lo acabo de retomar y me encantΓ³ claro ubo algunas cosas malas pero en fin fue buena la historia o novelas ligera como les guste decirle gracias por todo el tiempo que invertiste y por finalizarlo
Reveal SpoilerProofreading needed, paragraph reconstruction, removal of blantant pedophile tendeices and characteristics. Execution of non Harry Potter scripts are quite good and build an intrest where it is going tobecome something.
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Great story. There are some errors with the consistency of the genders of the characters, and the build-up of the main character seems a little much, but other than that, it is very good.
I finished the bookπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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uhmmm... this is a wierd one. I was hopeful but can't find the strength to get past the "what the f* "moments.I understand that its a fan-fic( although from what i read so far, the "fan" part is Debatable). But do you have to bombard the base story with ANY great(Debatable) idea you have.
This novel had a good start and base to go off of but the translator either didn't read the translations before posting or didn't care and butchered obvious titles, names and locations such as Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor with Florin' cold drink shop.
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so.... I'm not sure how this was translated or if it's accurate, but..... this needs editing...... heavy editing. can I understand it? yes, but only through auto-correction that my brain does.... constant misuse of he/she, use of the term senior or junior when upper/underclassmen is the appropriate term, 7th grader instead of 7th year as examples of the many issues..... there are more issues, but I won't go too far into. the short version? please make it readable regardless of what the original text says..... p.s. writing quality can't go lower for some reason....