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Nevarus

so.... I'm not sure how this was translated or if it's accurate, but..... this needs editing...... heavy editing. can I understand it? yes, but only through auto-correction that my brain does.... constant misuse of he/she, use of the term senior or junior when upper/underclassmen is the appropriate term, 7th grader instead of 7th year as examples of the many issues..... there are more issues, but I won't go too far into. the short version? please make it readable regardless of what the original text says..... p.s. writing quality can't go lower for some reason....

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ButterKnight

There isn't much to say about this novel. The author is chinese and he is an incel. From the very beginning there is chinese propaganda, something, something chinese girls, something, something chinese food, etc.

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2Anjos

ExcellentπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– Finally the end... I really liked the novel, even though there weren't many fights. The protagonist doesn't go around killing anyone at will, just his enemies, even when some friends are against him, they aren't enemies, they just have different ideas. The MC makes friends, allies and subordinates, values ​​those he spends time with, plans all movements well. Furthermore, I really liked the harem, it has a light romance, it develops the characters' relationships and basically remembers them, the best of all is that there is no smut, I was tired of always looking for a cool novel to read, and ending up reading basically one then. Google tlanslate

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Yero_Vargas_2822

I want this fic to continue 😭, is was One of the best

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Aranha

Thanks, I'm sad it's over. Perfect 🫑🫑. I wanted to see at least a snippet of the characters' future romance, but I still really liked it, thank you.[img=Mad]

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Jose_Nazario

Quite honestly one of the best Chinese fanfics I've read so far. I've seen comments complaining about nationalism, well, that's a lie. The very few times China is ever mentioned is when the MC misses the food. Writing Quality: The translator did a very good job. Very few instances where gender is mistranslated. From what I read in other reviews, the translator took it upon themselves to correct any inconsistencies in the story during translation. Props for that, very few areas were missed. Story Development: The system aspect is mid-range OP. You won't see the story stagnating on the boring parts most H.P. fanfics get stuck on. It's a rather fluid slice of life style with a system. Very few combat scenes. The main focus is the MC developing his personal relationships with his harem, as well as, his political/underworld relationships. Character Development: You can expect an intelligent and comedic MC. One that is ruthless and cunning when he needs to be. In my personal opinion the cast was rather true to canon. World Background: pretty sure the author tried their best to stick to canon as close as possible. Other than getting the RoR location incorrect, there isn't much fault I can find. With that said, there isn'tuch to praise either. Just my personal preference, but I prefer AU style fanfics. I won't hate too much though, the author still did well. Harem: Read below if you want names. I'd say a good 45% of this book is him building his relationship and caring for these girls. I'd give the development a 4/5. The relationships feel rushed due to many, many times skips. Can't do much when you're stuck in a boarding school though, so I believe the author handled it quite well. Could have added a few more chapters to better cement things between a few of them though. The most fleshed out were 1, 3, and 4 (Read below to find the names). As a simp for 4, I can rate that development at a 4.5, could have used more screen time though. . . . . . 1st: Cho Chang 2nd: Hermione Granger 3rd: Fleur Delacour 4th: Luna Lovegood 5th: Cassandra Vole 6th: Astoria Greengrass The book also mentions him sleeping with Nagini multiple times, but never making anything official.

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Darkaline

Great fanfic! Among one of the best fanfics I've ever read! If I had known I wouldn't have let it linger on my "to read" list for so long! I've finished it and highly recommend it! Don't listen to the comments that criticise her just because she's Chinese and most of these comments have only read a few chapters, in this fanfic there's no racism and no patriotism, just the author putting her own taste into her character(and it's pretty light), it's normal! It's like complaining that a resident of the United States likes hamburgers!

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soumya_patranabish

one of few stories that have a complete ending, although not the best fanfic I have read it still can be considered a fairly good story. The protagonist's journey is a bit smooth sealing, with not many challenges, and the worldview is a bit abrupt good story for passing the time reading.

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DaoistUEC5in

Nice translation and intresting story but mising a completed end to the story.

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Youtube_U

This is unbearably bad. If you’re coming into this actually expecting a Harry Potter fic just leave, the author has no knowledge on the actual setting Ex. Light creation spell = Lumos. It’s also hard to understand what the author tries to say like somehow Old Bee is maybe Dumbledore?

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M_Shaz_3A

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Lance_Bussell

I loved it JJ jazz officers of of of of Fr to

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BlackRaven_

Walking to Cho's side, and looking at Cho's surprised eyes, Alvin sat down and hugged Cho tightly. whispered to her "I am coming." "Welcome to Ravenclaw!" Cho was very excited, seeing that the boy in front of him had become the first person in Hogwarts history to openly change the will of the Sorting Hat because of herself. Very moved. I laughed so hard here, he said it like he bust a nut🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

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Apisit_Chaivichit

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reyesreyj

Historia entretenida 5/5 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Brent_6064

as long as you see a harem tag it's 80 to 99% Chinese ff .

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Camilo_Nieto

Oye amigo deje de verlo ase mucho tiempo apenas lo acabo de retomar y me encantΓ³ claro ubo algunas cosas malas pero en fin fue buena la historia o novelas ligera como les guste decirle gracias por todo el tiempo que invertiste y por finalizarlo

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FrozenTidez

Proofreading needed, paragraph reconstruction, removal of blantant pedophile tendeices and characteristics. Execution of non Harry Potter scripts are quite good and build an intrest where it is going tobecome something.

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Deathwatch99999

Great story. There are some errors with the consistency of the genders of the characters, and the build-up of the main character seems a little much, but other than that, it is very good.

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Yahia_Diaa

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Quimeric_dragon77

it's so good , it's really a pleasure to have read the story.

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DaoistyhmT6N

Chinese garbage ........................

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David_Salinas_9358

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Fool_Personified

uhmmm... this is a wierd one. I was hopeful but can't find the strength to get past the "what the f* "moments.I understand that its a fan-fic( although from what i read so far, the "fan" part is Debatable). But do you have to bombard the base story with ANY great(Debatable) idea you have.

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GreedElff

This novel had a good start and base to go off of but the translator either didn't read the translations before posting or didn't care and butchered obvious titles, names and locations such as Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor with Florin' cold drink shop.

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Dante00

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Lagash

Sudden girlfriend without any build up. It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The mc only talks to Chinese charecters. There are also poor translations.

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Nevarus

so.... I'm not sure how this was translated or if it's accurate, but..... this needs editing...... heavy editing. can I understand it? yes, but only through auto-correction that my brain does.... constant misuse of he/she, use of the term senior or junior when upper/underclassmen is the appropriate term, 7th grader instead of 7th year as examples of the many issues..... there are more issues, but I won't go too far into. the short version? please make it readable regardless of what the original text says..... p.s. writing quality can't go lower for some reason....

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ButterKnight

There isn't much to say about this novel. The author is chinese and he is an incel. From the very beginning there is chinese propaganda, something, something chinese girls, something, something chinese food, etc.

1mth
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2Anjos

ExcellentπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– Finally the end... I really liked the novel, even though there weren't many fights. The protagonist doesn't go around killing anyone at will, just his enemies, even when some friends are against him, they aren't enemies, they just have different ideas. The MC makes friends, allies and subordinates, values ​​those he spends time with, plans all movements well. Furthermore, I really liked the harem, it has a light romance, it develops the characters' relationships and basically remembers them, the best of all is that there is no smut, I was tired of always looking for a cool novel to read, and ending up reading basically one then. Google tlanslate

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Yero_Vargas_2822

I want this fic to continue 😭, is was One of the best

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Aranha

Thanks, I'm sad it's over. Perfect 🫑🫑. I wanted to see at least a snippet of the characters' future romance, but I still really liked it, thank you.[img=Mad]

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Jose_Nazario

Quite honestly one of the best Chinese fanfics I've read so far. I've seen comments complaining about nationalism, well, that's a lie. The very few times China is ever mentioned is when the MC misses the food. Writing Quality: The translator did a very good job. Very few instances where gender is mistranslated. From what I read in other reviews, the translator took it upon themselves to correct any inconsistencies in the story during translation. Props for that, very few areas were missed. Story Development: The system aspect is mid-range OP. You won't see the story stagnating on the boring parts most H.P. fanfics get stuck on. It's a rather fluid slice of life style with a system. Very few combat scenes. The main focus is the MC developing his personal relationships with his harem, as well as, his political/underworld relationships. Character Development: You can expect an intelligent and comedic MC. One that is ruthless and cunning when he needs to be. In my personal opinion the cast was rather true to canon. World Background: pretty sure the author tried their best to stick to canon as close as possible. Other than getting the RoR location incorrect, there isn't much fault I can find. With that said, there isn'tuch to praise either. Just my personal preference, but I prefer AU style fanfics. I won't hate too much though, the author still did well. Harem: Read below if you want names. I'd say a good 45% of this book is him building his relationship and caring for these girls. I'd give the development a 4/5. The relationships feel rushed due to many, many times skips. Can't do much when you're stuck in a boarding school though, so I believe the author handled it quite well. Could have added a few more chapters to better cement things between a few of them though. The most fleshed out were 1, 3, and 4 (Read below to find the names). As a simp for 4, I can rate that development at a 4.5, could have used more screen time though. . . . . . 1st: Cho Chang 2nd: Hermione Granger 3rd: Fleur Delacour 4th: Luna Lovegood 5th: Cassandra Vole 6th: Astoria Greengrass The book also mentions him sleeping with Nagini multiple times, but never making anything official.

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Darkaline

Great fanfic! Among one of the best fanfics I've ever read! If I had known I wouldn't have let it linger on my "to read" list for so long! I've finished it and highly recommend it! Don't listen to the comments that criticise her just because she's Chinese and most of these comments have only read a few chapters, in this fanfic there's no racism and no patriotism, just the author putting her own taste into her character(and it's pretty light), it's normal! It's like complaining that a resident of the United States likes hamburgers!

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soumya_patranabish

one of few stories that have a complete ending, although not the best fanfic I have read it still can be considered a fairly good story. The protagonist's journey is a bit smooth sealing, with not many challenges, and the worldview is a bit abrupt good story for passing the time reading.

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DaoistUEC5in

Nice translation and intresting story but mising a completed end to the story.

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Youtube_U

This is unbearably bad. If you’re coming into this actually expecting a Harry Potter fic just leave, the author has no knowledge on the actual setting Ex. Light creation spell = Lumos. It’s also hard to understand what the author tries to say like somehow Old Bee is maybe Dumbledore?

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M_Shaz_3A

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Lance_Bussell

I loved it JJ jazz officers of of of of Fr to

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BlackRaven_

Walking to Cho's side, and looking at Cho's surprised eyes, Alvin sat down and hugged Cho tightly. whispered to her "I am coming." "Welcome to Ravenclaw!" Cho was very excited, seeing that the boy in front of him had become the first person in Hogwarts history to openly change the will of the Sorting Hat because of herself. Very moved. I laughed so hard here, he said it like he bust a nut🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

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TheSpiritOfWater

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Apisit_Chaivichit

ΰΈ‚ΰΈ­ΰΈšΰΈ„ΰΈΈΰΈ“ ΰΈͺΰΈ³ΰΈ«ΰΈ£ΰΈ±ΰΈšΰΈ™ΰΈ΄ΰΈ’ΰΈ²ΰΈ’ΰΈͺนุกๆ ΰΈ­ΰΉˆΰΈ²ΰΈ™ΰΉ€ΰΈžΰΈ₯ินฑาก ΰΈ•ΰΈ΄ΰΈ”ΰΈ•ΰΈ²ΰΈ‘ΰΈ™ΰΈ΄ΰΈ’ΰΈ²ΰΈ’ΰΉ€ΰΈ£ΰΈ·ΰΉˆΰΈ­ΰΈ‡ΰΈ•ΰΉˆΰΈ­ΰΉ„ΰΈ›ΰΈ‚ΰΈ­ΰΈ‡ΰΈ„ΰΈΈΰΈ“ΰΈ„ΰΈ£ΰΈ±ΰΈš ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ— ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ— ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ— ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ— ΰΈ—ΰΈ—ΰΈ—

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reyesreyj

Historia entretenida 5/5 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Brent_6064

as long as you see a harem tag it's 80 to 99% Chinese ff .

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Camilo_Nieto

Oye amigo deje de verlo ase mucho tiempo apenas lo acabo de retomar y me encantΓ³ claro ubo algunas cosas malas pero en fin fue buena la historia o novelas ligera como les guste decirle gracias por todo el tiempo que invertiste y por finalizarlo

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FrozenTidez

Proofreading needed, paragraph reconstruction, removal of blantant pedophile tendeices and characteristics. Execution of non Harry Potter scripts are quite good and build an intrest where it is going tobecome something.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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Deathwatch99999

Great story. There are some errors with the consistency of the genders of the characters, and the build-up of the main character seems a little much, but other than that, it is very good.

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Yahia_Diaa

I finished the bookπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜†πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‡πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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Quimeric_dragon77

it's so good , it's really a pleasure to have read the story.

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DaoistyhmT6N

Chinese garbage ........................

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David_Salinas_9358

Excelente [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Fool_Personified

uhmmm... this is a wierd one. I was hopeful but can't find the strength to get past the "what the f* "moments.I understand that its a fan-fic( although from what i read so far, the "fan" part is Debatable). But do you have to bombard the base story with ANY great(Debatable) idea you have.

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GreedElff

This novel had a good start and base to go off of but the translator either didn't read the translations before posting or didn't care and butchered obvious titles, names and locations such as Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlor with Florin' cold drink shop.

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Dante00

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Lagash

Sudden girlfriend without any build up. It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The mc only talks to Chinese charecters. There are also poor translations.

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