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A grest story with semi-consistent uploads, set in the world of Destiny it's got a unique take on the pre-story and lore that's quite enjoyable to read, the character development is well-paced and the interactions between characters always brings a chuckle.Overall rating: 8/10Recommend picking this book up!*Inserting mandatory JoJo GIF*
Still love it~ Just wish the updates were like a heavy rain in Mawsynram and as frequent. Much love~
The only bad thing about this story is that the updates are kinda inconsistent but regarding everything else this story is a masterpiece. Also MC plays my favourite subclass so a little biased. Author is you read this, please don't drop the story
This is a good destiny story and one of the stories that are actually going for long not to just go for hiatus and Thank you ! for that and your hard work the story is beautiful but would appreciate it if there more quick updates well I would like updates every minute but well that can't happen so .........
Destiny enthusiast and Titan Main here, very much like this story! Good character interaction and although I’m not a lore expert, the characters I do know and make an appearance have the personality that matches them in the game. No romance (so far), bummer, but it’s about a fantasy game so it’s whatever. Void(mc) is a very interesting character, I myself am not much of a hunter player anymore but I can appreciate some stealth abusing, heh. Good English as well, keep up the good work! The only ‘problem’ I have is inconsistency of updates, not a big problem but it’s the only complaint I have lol.
I absolutely love this story and how many good memories of d1 it brought back. I stopped playing d2 when stasis came out and haven’t came back to it. So this story is my way of reliving one of the best games I’ve played.
As a fan of destiny it’s hard to find good / any story’s for the game. This has to be one of if not the best you can find.
It’ s very good and original I would recommend this to anyone even if they’ve never played destiny. Another good thing is how the author incorporates things from the Legendary Mechanic which is my favorite vrmmo transmigration novels ever. My only problem is that I’m addicted and the chapters come out pretty slow.
One of my fav fanfics. I like the mc's personality very much and the world background writing of the Author is amazing, connecting all the different events in destiny is an amazing feat. Very good novel the only category i have to 4 stars in is Update stability.
good story and character-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-im tired af and i really don't want to go into detail but its pretty good in my opinion
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I like destiny, having played over a hundred hours of the first game on my ps4, and even never paying attention to the story this novel still allows you to know what’s going on. Everything is well thought out with basically no grammar errors. Even if you have no idea what destiny is this novel will still be good. Although I am a little biased, hunters my favourite class.
I am writing this review because this story finally hit a million views!! Well, it's 1.1 million now, but that's a huge milestone. I didn't expect to hit these numbers so fast. I would like to thank all the readers for the support, the comments, and especially the reviews. You guys really keep me going, even when I don't feel like it sometimes. I know I haven't updated in 2 weeks, but life comes at me fast sometimes, and just know that I won't drop this story. I have a lot of stuff planned out but it's just hard to get going right now. Keep reading for more to come, the destiny universe is vast so let's explore it together with Void and Obsidian!!
I've been looking for a book like the legendary mechanic for awhile now and this is honestly the best one I've seen, give it a try if you have the time.
I'm translating this, the story is the best I've read in terms of the Destiny universe and I like how the plot progresses and how the mc discovers the world and how his presence slightly changes the events I look forward to each update of the fic even though the author sometimes takes time due to his personal life, it is something I am willing to wait for the necessary time
I really wish that every book could be this good. I barely played destiny literally just the beginning and I can follow along with the story thanks to the author. sending all my love to this book❤️❤️❤️❤️
Top tier and one of the best fan fics I've ever read. It's very original and you should give it a try. My only problem with it is that I want more and I'm addicted now.
I don't know much about this genre though I have read many system novels, however, I must say that the writer has potential, the info dump wasn't there and neither it was complicated nor boring. Seeing how the book has a million views, the writer must continue writing because there are comparatively less chapters that would satisfy the readers. The one thing I am sure of is description of scenes, it's vivid and clear, interesting to read.
the story is amazing the characters are well written as is the mc. the interactions between different characters is always great to read. unbelievabley consistent too, im not sure ive seen any errors yet.
Absolutely riveting story. (I always wanted to use that word) Updates can be a bit spastic going from daily chapters to no chapters for weeks. But the story is still amazing. MC also seems to have a decent lore knowledge of the Destiny series. Useful because we're currently (at ch42) still pre-Destiny-1 and that lore comes in useful in recognizing people and stuff. Also, it might be just me, but the time scale of this fic feels slightly irritating. It feels weird that so many things (which isn't a lot, but still) happens in like just a couple months. But hey, the story is fun so who cares.
This is one of the absolute best fanfictions I have read. It feels like an actual Bungie licensed book detailing what happened before the events of the games from a singular point of view
Great fic set before "The Guardian" appears. Even when i haven't followed much of the lore of destiny, i can still follow the story. it'll be interesting to see how the MC will change the world due to his existence
the author is doing pretty well so far. the story is great and enjoyable too, I look forward to the future events, also if you intend to do romance I'd say Mara Sov, absolutly.
A grest story with semi-consistent uploads, set in the world of Destiny it's got a unique take on the pre-story and lore that's quite enjoyable to read, the character development is well-paced and the interactions between characters always brings a chuckle.Overall rating: 8/10Recommend picking this book up!*Inserting mandatory JoJo GIF*
Still love it~ Just wish the updates were like a heavy rain in Mawsynram and as frequent. Much love~
The only bad thing about this story is that the updates are kinda inconsistent but regarding everything else this story is a masterpiece. Also MC plays my favourite subclass so a little biased. Author is you read this, please don't drop the story
This is a good destiny story and one of the stories that are actually going for long not to just go for hiatus and Thank you ! for that and your hard work the story is beautiful but would appreciate it if there more quick updates well I would like updates every minute but well that can't happen so .........
Destiny enthusiast and Titan Main here, very much like this story! Good character interaction and although I’m not a lore expert, the characters I do know and make an appearance have the personality that matches them in the game. No romance (so far), bummer, but it’s about a fantasy game so it’s whatever. Void(mc) is a very interesting character, I myself am not much of a hunter player anymore but I can appreciate some stealth abusing, heh. Good English as well, keep up the good work! The only ‘problem’ I have is inconsistency of updates, not a big problem but it’s the only complaint I have lol.
I absolutely love this story and how many good memories of d1 it brought back. I stopped playing d2 when stasis came out and haven’t came back to it. So this story is my way of reliving one of the best games I’ve played.
As a fan of destiny it’s hard to find good / any story’s for the game. This has to be one of if not the best you can find.
It’ s very good and original I would recommend this to anyone even if they’ve never played destiny. Another good thing is how the author incorporates things from the Legendary Mechanic which is my favorite vrmmo transmigration novels ever. My only problem is that I’m addicted and the chapters come out pretty slow.
One of my fav fanfics. I like the mc's personality very much and the world background writing of the Author is amazing, connecting all the different events in destiny is an amazing feat. Very good novel the only category i have to 4 stars in is Update stability.
good story and character-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-im tired af and i really don't want to go into detail but its pretty good in my opinion
Reveal Spoiler I like destiny, having played over a hundred hours of the first game on my ps4, and even never paying attention to the story this novel still allows you to know what’s going on. Everything is well thought out with basically no grammar errors. Even if you have no idea what destiny is this novel will still be good. Although I am a little biased, hunters my favourite class.
I am writing this review because this story finally hit a million views!! Well, it's 1.1 million now, but that's a huge milestone. I didn't expect to hit these numbers so fast. I would like to thank all the readers for the support, the comments, and especially the reviews. You guys really keep me going, even when I don't feel like it sometimes. I know I haven't updated in 2 weeks, but life comes at me fast sometimes, and just know that I won't drop this story. I have a lot of stuff planned out but it's just hard to get going right now. Keep reading for more to come, the destiny universe is vast so let's explore it together with Void and Obsidian!!
I've been looking for a book like the legendary mechanic for awhile now and this is honestly the best one I've seen, give it a try if you have the time.
I'm translating this, the story is the best I've read in terms of the Destiny universe and I like how the plot progresses and how the mc discovers the world and how his presence slightly changes the events I look forward to each update of the fic even though the author sometimes takes time due to his personal life, it is something I am willing to wait for the necessary time
I really wish that every book could be this good. I barely played destiny literally just the beginning and I can follow along with the story thanks to the author. sending all my love to this book❤️❤️❤️❤️
Top tier and one of the best fan fics I've ever read. It's very original and you should give it a try. My only problem with it is that I want more and I'm addicted now.
I don't know much about this genre though I have read many system novels, however, I must say that the writer has potential, the info dump wasn't there and neither it was complicated nor boring. Seeing how the book has a million views, the writer must continue writing because there are comparatively less chapters that would satisfy the readers. The one thing I am sure of is description of scenes, it's vivid and clear, interesting to read.
the story is amazing the characters are well written as is the mc. the interactions between different characters is always great to read. unbelievabley consistent too, im not sure ive seen any errors yet.
Absolutely riveting story. (I always wanted to use that word) Updates can be a bit spastic going from daily chapters to no chapters for weeks. But the story is still amazing. MC also seems to have a decent lore knowledge of the Destiny series. Useful because we're currently (at ch42) still pre-Destiny-1 and that lore comes in useful in recognizing people and stuff. Also, it might be just me, but the time scale of this fic feels slightly irritating. It feels weird that so many things (which isn't a lot, but still) happens in like just a couple months. But hey, the story is fun so who cares.
This is one of the absolute best fanfictions I have read. It feels like an actual Bungie licensed book detailing what happened before the events of the games from a singular point of view
Great fic set before "The Guardian" appears. Even when i haven't followed much of the lore of destiny, i can still follow the story. it'll be interesting to see how the MC will change the world due to his existence
the author is doing pretty well so far. the story is great and enjoyable too, I look forward to the future events, also if you intend to do romance I'd say Mara Sov, absolutly.