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I Received System to Become Dragonborn

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Author: Diyen_Pi

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Five years have passed since the Elves invaded Earth.

The poor and criminals of the Republic of Ascaria are forced to join the ranks of the soldiers on the front lines while the rich and high-ranking government officials hide behind walls.

Erend Drake is a young man who must go out and fight so his family can live in a squalid shelter within the walls.

One night in the battle Erend had to die because he was killed by the Elves.

But suddenly he wakes up the next day with a mysterious power.

[Congratulations, you have been chosen to be the holder of Systema.]

[Please choose the available skills]

[ Dragon Armor ]

[ Dragon Claw ]

[ Dragon Eyes ]

[ Dragon Wings ]

[ Fire Breathing ]

Erend did not expect that he would become a Dragonborn. The strongest race was feared by the Elves and the humans. Even feared by all Gods.

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Korstar26

loving the novel so far. would love to see a chapter or few detailing the lore of the two worlds at some point, like is there anything more than the walled city or what happened in the early days of the war with the elves. maybe even a few details about the elves world just so we have a better understanding of what might be happening in the world d even of the Mc doesn't.

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Amadeo_Trevino

the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author

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Apns444
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Childish, naive and average. There is literally no background to anything. No information about the world or how it came to the state it is now. No information about any sort of past of our MC. The MC himself is naive and beta. Alien race (elves) attacks earth, kills millions of ppl, kills his comrades in arms in a prolonged war, and he decides to trust and help the aliens, because of a woman he met twice and barely even spoke to. The entire idea that a random lieutenant can agree to an invitation to peace talks from enemies, without reporting anything or orders from high command is a joke. There is no immersion, and all the characters, MC included, are 2D (not only do we have no background, the entire plot is rushed and fast paced, we have no idea about MCs feelings or inner thoughts). The plot itself, at least until what I've read (30 chapters) was cliche.

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Astralek

First off, the title is very deceptive. The Author used the term 'Dragonborn' to draw in people thinking it'd be linked to The Elder Scrolls. It isn't. It's a sh*tty cliche ridden story with as much creativity and depth to it as a five year old's crayon drawing. The Protagonist is a insufferable fool with no spine, there is no proper world building or background AT ALL, and it uses so many tropes that if this novel were a building it would be foreclosed then bulldozed. One of the examples is how the protagonist supposedly was fighting on the front lines against the Elves for five years, witnessing the deaths of many friends and fellow humans but he fell in love at first sight with a Elven Princess from the race that murdered millions of Humans in an unprovoked war of aggression. Not only that but the Princess of the Elves somehow knew that he was the system user, teleported to him then then betrayed her race by telling him about an upcoming attack on that city simply because she felt his magic dragon transformation due to her super special secret talent and desperarely wanted his dragon c*ck-*cough* I mean dragon magic. Even worse is how Erend is STILL an incompetant coward that shakes in his boots and freezes up when the Elves attack after five years of fighting on the frontline. He even gets shouted at to remind him to shoot at the enemy in the first chapter! 2/5 Stars.

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JesusMan

Nice book . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Deaboro
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the story is good and all but like come one... so many things just don't make sense and are so stupid and frustrating 😫

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JumpsFromCliff

Good idea but author threw it out the window, but deceide for yourself:-MC gets OP system that helps him turn into the only dragon, from early on-The elves attacked the humans because one puny thief stole some key-MC with his new powers, helps the elves(for no reason,he also says that). And waits for human commands because he is a soilder...-The president protects the thief........so yeah i really dont know how stupid the MC can be to not kill at least some of them. No brainer.

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Howtofoxxy

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Northsouth

sorry to say this bro because i hate to be a bad guy. but your story pace is so slow and fighting is too slow and prolonged i feel like MC and every good guy is stupid and idiot beyond reason. you may enjoy a long and winding and slow and very very delayed battle but i sure not enjoy it. . i give honest star review at least, but for now i dropping your story for good

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Latidy
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So far the story is really enjoyable, but I feel like at the beginning it was too fast-paced. Everything felt a little rushed. But other than that it's a good read.

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Epic_Buddie123

Nice novel with and interesting story. Recomanded to read! nothing: 5igjy4e7irtd6hiv6d4d6vivtg7b7h6zjuh7h7g7vug7hug6h7czg67u9jug7hohe6tofw6gug7vzg7hic6v7v7vivuvijih7h7vibibibi

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hi author I just want to ask if there will be harem or no ..............................................................................

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jonathan_wise

So I kind of liked it at the beginning, like the first 5 chapters because I felt the mc was cautious and would develop well. Then, the power he gains is poorly developed, and by power, I don't mean the dragon powers. I mean the system, it had serious potential, but the way it is designed leads to werid and unable to be understood power, and the way he gains exp is simple but bad in the grand scheme of things only allowing slow growth. plus, nothing is explained at all. How much power do you gain when activating your dragon power? oh, I don't know, a lot, I think.. oh then, how much speed do you gain when you put points into agility? oh, I don't know, but now I'm faster than a human. OK, how fast is a normal human in this fantasy setting, then? oh, I don't know. listen, I know that humans, on average, are around the 20 to 25 mph mark, but this doesn't have to be true in his world. as an example, the elf guy prince is so fast that it's hard to see him move. Next is the world in the first 40 chapters isn't flushed out, all you get to know is that there is 2 worlds and on the human side they have a wall and a palace and on the elf side there is fantasy land with a elf palace and other races.next is the Mc doesn't have a reason to do anything. He says he has a family but can't see them. he saves the elves for no reason. he trusts 3 randos just because and fights for humanity with blind faith for no reason, never even questions humanity even when shown evidence. I get that he is human and has been fighting for 5 years, but the people behind the wall and the people defending are different and have a sorta mistrust between them. it could have shown that Mc isn't blinded and is just cautious if he had doubts about the inside of the wall. if for a moment he didn't trust the upper echelon of the military and stayed awake because of it. all of these points are from 1ch to 35ch. Now, the story has potential for growth, but I must drop this because I won't pay for a maybe. I wish that the author continues to write but adds more info and really describes the abilities and how they affect the Mc more.

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Geicho

Things were fun and game until you died and wake up to the sound "Hey you, finally awake?"

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Shanew07

The system is kind of a mess of leveling up could be good but average

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AllWhite

Just commenting to tell you there’s 2 errors in your cover.

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  2. 2
    Revived with System 2 years ago
  3. 3
    Unbelievable Strength 2 years ago
  4. 4
    Easy Fight 2 years ago
  5. 5
    No Choice 2 years ago
  6. 6
    A Heavy Resistance 2 years ago
  7. 7
    Taking Supplies Mission 2 years ago
  8. 8
    The Elves want to Talk 2 years ago
  9. 9
    Peace Talk? 2 years ago
  10. 10
    In the Elf Realm 2 years ago
  11. 11
    Aurdis's Help 2 years ago
  12. 12
    Suspicious Recording 2 years ago
  13. 13
    A Restless Night 2 years ago
  14. 14
    Their Enemy is Moving Again 2 years ago
  15. 15
    Ambush 2 years ago
  16. 16
    Ambush Turn Slaughter 2 years ago
  17. 17
    Elf Counter Attack 2 years ago
  18. 18
    Camp Slaughter 2 years ago
  19. 19
    Daily Quest 2 years ago
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    New Skill 2 years ago
  21. 21
    As expected 2 years ago
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    Another Plan 2 years ago
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    Aurdis's Emergency Call 2 years ago
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    Green Pale and Fat Creature 2 years ago
  25. 25
    Dragon Transformation 2 years ago
  26. 26
    The End of Turmoil 2 years ago
  27. 27
    Feelings 2 years ago
  28. 28
    The call 2 years ago
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    Going to Steal 2 years ago
  30. 30
    To the Oval Palace 2 years ago
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    Inside the Palace 2 years ago
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    His Bad Feeling 2 years ago
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    Asking for Help 2 years ago
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    To Hold them Off 2 years ago
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    On the Other Side 2 years ago
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    Uncle Laston 2 years ago
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    Daily Quest, Slime 2 years ago
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    Slime is tough 2 years ago
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    New Attack 2 years ago
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    Prepare For Trouble 2 years ago
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    The Trouble arrived 2 years ago
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    Dark Garden 2 years ago
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    Different Light 2 years ago
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    Eternal Garden Slaughter 2 years ago
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    A Survivor 2 years ago
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    Solution 2 years ago
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    Daily Quest, Birdman 2 years ago
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    Scorched Bird 2 years ago
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    A Massage 2 years ago
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    Intruders 2 years ago
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    Taking Care of the Intruders 2 years ago
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    Possibility 2 years ago
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    Next Step after Failure 2 years ago
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    Saeldir's confirmation 2 years ago
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    Curiosity 2 years ago
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    Concurrences 2 years ago
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    Daily Quest, Shellob 2 years ago
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    Slime Companion 2 years ago
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    The Slime's talent 2 years ago
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    Back to 2 years ago
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    Meeting Elis 2 years ago
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    Convinced 2 years ago
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    Broken Shield 2 years ago
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    Escape 2 years ago
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    [Bonus chapter]Failed to Escape 2 years ago
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    Will Stay 2 years ago
  67. 67
    Taking Responsibilities 2 years ago
  68. 68
    The Fire Dragon 2 years ago
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    A Scheme 2 years ago
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    Little Taste of Dragon's Might 2 years ago
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    The Dome is Repaired 2 years ago
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    Inside a Dark Cave 2 years ago
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    Purposes 2 years ago
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    Pleading 2 years ago
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    In Mount Calamity 2 years ago
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    Getting Worse 2 years ago
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    Finally Escape 2 years ago
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    Too Many Problems 2 years ago
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    Next Few Days 2 years ago
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    Before the Day 2 years ago
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    Back To Take The Key 2 years ago
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    Get the Key Back 2 years ago
  83. 83
    Another Task 2 years ago
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    Fight With the Dark Mage 2 years ago
  85. 85
    Getting Serious 2 years ago
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    Beyond Expectations 2 years ago
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    Three head 2 years ago
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    Aerchon is Back 2 years ago
  89. 89
    A Conversation 2 years ago
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    Each Other Reinforcement 2 years ago
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    Another Party 2 years ago
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    Adventurers 2 years ago
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    Difficult Daily Quest, complete 2 years ago
  94. 94
    Taking The Dark Mage's Relics 2 years ago
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    Obtaining New Skill 2 years ago
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    Heated Meeting 2 years ago
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    After That Meeting 2 years ago
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    The figure 2 years ago
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    Elf With Dark Magic? 2 years ago
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    Explanation 2 years ago
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    Next Step 2 years ago
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    Unusual Circumstance 2 years ago
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    Seduction Attempt 2 years ago
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    Dragon Power is sealed? 2 years ago
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    Dying? 2 years ago
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    The Name 2 years ago
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    Unnoticed Sentiments 2 years ago
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    Dream About A Calamity 2 years ago
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    First Dungeon Run 2 years ago
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    Finding The Boss Room 2 years ago
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    First Dungeon Death 2 years ago
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    On The Way 2 years ago
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    Enough Dungeon for Now 2 years ago
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    Come Back Home 2 years ago
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    Shadowchilds 2 years ago
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    End of The Childs 2 years ago
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    Unusual Transport 2 years ago
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    Go inside The Headquarters. 2 years ago
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    Plan To Visit 2 years ago
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    Starting the Journey 2 years ago
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    An Act of Gratitude 2 years ago
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    Small Hope 2 years ago
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    A Prophecy 2 years ago
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    Birdman Ambush 2 years ago
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    [Bonus chapter] Another Strange Thing 2 years ago
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    A Gift From God? 2 years ago
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    From Behind The Fog 2 years ago
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    Almost Human Inhabitants 2 years ago
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    Heading To The Slum 2 years ago
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    Back Home 2 years ago
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    His Family 2 years ago
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    Weird Trolls 2 years ago
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    The Root-like Things 2 years ago
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    Back In The Palace 2 years ago
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    At The End of Wyldwood 2 years ago
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    Battle at The Meadow 2 years ago
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    The Assassin's Hesitation 2 years ago
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    Didn't See That Coming 2 years ago
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    Simultaneously 2 years ago
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    He Comes 2 years ago
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    It's The Dragonborn 2 years ago
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    The Beginning of A Corruption 2 years ago
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    Aurdis's Move 2 years ago
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    Facing Their Enemy 2 years ago
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    Still Going 2 years ago
  146. 146
    Near The End of Battle 2 years ago
  147. 147
    Also Near The End 2 years ago
  148. 148
    The End of The Fight 2 years ago
  149. 149
    Under The Big Tree 2 years ago
  150. 150
    Talk Between Them 2 years ago
  151. 151
    Talk With Aerchon 2 years ago
  152. 152
    In the Palm of A Dragon 2 years ago
  153. 153
    Light Kiss 2 years ago
  154. 154
    Into The Forest Elf Kingdom 2 years ago
  155. 155
    Entering The Forest Elf Palace 2 years ago
  156. 156
    Confrontation 2 years ago
  157. 157
    Confession 2 years ago
  158. 158
    The Fight Broke 2 years ago
  159. 159
    Evil Smoke 2 years ago
  160. 160
    The Undead Curse 2 years ago
  161. 161
    Approved 2 years ago
  162. 162
    Back To The Palace 2 years ago
  163. 163
    Chaos Spreading 2 years ago
  164. 164
    Furious Princess 2 years ago
  165. 165
    Resolve 2 years ago
  166. 166
    Laston's Words 2 years ago
  167. 167
    Raging Storm 2 years ago
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    Concerns 2 years ago
  169. 169
    An Expensive Spell 2 years ago
  170. 170
    In the Middle of Despair 2 years ago
  171. 171
    Arrive at The Scene 2 years ago
  172. 172
    Meeting Again 2 years ago
  173. 173
    Fighting Laston 2 years ago
  174. 174
    Changing 2 years ago
  175. 175
    Struggle in vain 2 years ago
  176. 176
    Running Away 2 years ago
  177. 177
    Glimpse From Another Side 2 years ago
  178. 178
    What Remains 2 years ago
  179. 179
    To The Temple 2 years ago
  180. 180
    Circle on The Temple 2 years ago
  181. 181
    Three Mysterious Corpses 2 years ago
  182. 182
    Letting it Be 2 years ago
  183. 183
    Confusion 2 years ago
  184. 184
    Telling Them 2 years ago
  185. 185
    The Man In Power 2 years ago
  186. 186
    Project Apple 2 years ago
  187. 187
    Small Orbs 2 years ago
  188. 188
    Another Test Subjects 2 years ago
  189. 189
    Stunning Results 2 years ago
  190. 190
    Subject's Unexpected Development 2 years ago
  191. 191
    Clashing 2 years ago
  192. 192
    A Successful Experiment 2 years ago
  193. 193
    Erend's Proposal 2 years ago
  194. 194
    Daily Quest, Wolves 2 years ago
  195. 195
    Burned Wolves 2 years ago
  196. 196
    Summoning Partner 2 years ago
  197. 197
    Lumpy Feeling 2 years ago
  198. 198
    Their Useless Efforts 2 years ago
  199. 199
    Wolves Killed 2 years ago
  200. 200
    Their Family 2 years ago
  201. 201
    The Two Meets 2 years ago
  202. 202
    An Advice 2 years ago
  203. 203
    Struggle In The Dungeon 2 years ago
  204. 204
    Lightning Dragon 2 years ago
  205. 205
    New Thing Emerged 2 years ago
  206. 206
    Shadowy Figure 2 years ago
  207. 207
    Talking 2 years ago
  208. 208
    The Dungeon Boss Identity 2 years ago
  209. 209
    To the Next Trial 2 years ago
  210. 210
    Under The Dark Cloud 2 years ago
  211. 211
    The Pouring Rain 2 years ago
  212. 212
    New Discovery 2 years ago
  213. 213
    Again 2 years ago
  214. 214
    His Ability 2 years ago
  215. 215
    Hunch 2 years ago
  216. 216
    Next Morning 2 years ago
  217. 217
    Unexpected 2 years ago
  218. 218
    Something To Reveal 2 years ago
  219. 219
    Don't Look Good 2 years ago
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    Sparring 2 years ago
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    Lesson 2 years ago
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    Training 2 years ago
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    Daily Quest, Sharkman 2 years ago
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    Sudden Appearance 2 years ago
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    Daily Quest Complete 2 years ago
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    Arrive at Barry's 2 years ago
  227. 227
    Another Hunch 2 years ago
  228. 228
    Another Training 2 years ago
  229. 229
    Real Opponent 2 years ago
  230. 230
    The Record Sent 2 years ago
  231. 231
    Finally Meet Again 2 years ago
  232. 232
    Night Talk 2 years ago
  233. 233
    Unfortunate Beings 2 years ago
  234. 234
    More Problems 2 years ago
  235. 235
    Red Root 2 years ago
  236. 236
    In the Town 2 years ago
  237. 237
    Approaching Doom 2 years ago
  238. 238
    Lycans Attack 2 years ago
  239. 239
    Come Too Late 2 years ago
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    Slim Chances 2 years ago
  241. 241
    A Helpful Companion 2 years ago
  242. 242
    Arrival 2 years ago
  243. 243
    Shocking Things 2 years ago
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    Unexpected 2 years ago
  245. 245
    Another Type of Attack 2 years ago
  246. 246
    What He After 2 years ago
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    Transformations 2 years ago
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    Intense 2 years ago
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    Torn Apart 2 years ago
  250. 250
    Chaos Magic, Again 2 years ago
  251. 251
    Death Of The Lycan 2 years ago
  252. 252
    Oath 2 years ago
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    New Leadership 2 years ago
  254. 254
    Back 2 years ago
  255. 255
    The Worrying Red Thing 2 years ago
  256. 256
    The Predicament of Her Feeling 2 years ago
  257. 257
    Leaked 2 years ago
  258. 258
    On Ship 2 years ago
  259. 259
    Its Started 2 years ago
  260. 260
    Didn't See That Coming 2 years ago
  261. 261
    Urgent Quest Finally Updated 2 years ago
  262. 262
    What A Leader... 2 years ago
  263. 263
    His Decision 2 years ago
  264. 264
    Dive Down 2 years ago
  265. 265
    Sea Creatures 2 years ago
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    Had Enough 2 years ago
  267. 267
    Closed 2 years ago
  268. 268
    There are Survivors 2 years ago
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    After the Incident 2 years ago
  270. 270
    Treatment Room 2 years ago
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    Little Secret 2 years ago
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    Dreaming 2 years ago
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    Tired of Reading 2 years ago
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    He Back 2 years ago
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    Going To Interrogation 2 years ago
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    Odd Feeling 2 years ago
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    Change? 2 years ago
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    His Call 2 years ago
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    Need to Go 2 years ago
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    Interference 2 years ago
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    Arrived At Their World 2 years ago
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    Improvement 2 years ago
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    Reaching Him 2 years ago
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    Next Move 2 years ago
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    Sprinkle 2 years ago
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    Foreign Energy 2 years ago
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    Preparation 2 years ago
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    Her Feeling 2 years ago
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    Looks Darker 2 years ago
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    Another Ability 2 years ago
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    Spreading 2 years ago
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    A Man In Gold 2 years ago
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    The Inevitable 2 years ago
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    Tut's Voice 2 years ago
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    Predicament 2 years ago
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    Reasons 2 years ago
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    Getting Close 2 years ago
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    Entering The Farm 2 years ago
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    Inside The Facility 2 years ago
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    Failed Surprise 2 years ago
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    Contact 2 years ago
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    Alarmed 2 years ago
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    Appeared 2 years ago
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    Broken Walls 2 years ago
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    Fights 2 years ago
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    Stronger Than They Thought 2 years ago
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    Clash of Fire 2 years ago
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    Peeled off 2 years ago
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    Water Power 2 years ago
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    Beyond Helping 2 years ago
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    Another Rage 2 years ago
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    Bigger Water Attack 2 years ago
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    Scorched More 2 years ago
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    Unexpected Help 2 years ago
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    Her Magic 2 years ago
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    The Cause of Hesitation 1 years ago
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    A Sword In the Tree 1 years ago
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    Surprising 1 years ago
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    Discovery 1 years ago
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    Removing His Magic 1 years ago
  321. 321
    Easily Escaped 1 years ago
  322. 322
    On The Way 1 years ago
  323. 323
    Aftermath 1 years ago
  324. 324
    About the Inevitable 1 years ago
  325. 325
    A Lot Will Happen 1 years ago
  326. 326
    When They Arrived 1 years ago
  327. 327
    Daily Quest, Sharkman 1 years ago
  328. 328
    A Bigger Shark 1 years ago
  329. 329
    Retreating 1 years ago
  330. 330
    A Warning 1 years ago
  331. 331
    Morning of the Next Day 1 years ago
  332. 332
    President's Arrival 1 years ago
  333. 333
    Calmed Down 1 years ago
  334. 334
    People He Cares About 1 years ago
  335. 335
    A Presence 1 years ago
  336. 336
    An Unlucky Burglar? 1 years ago
  337. 337
    Meet The General Again 1 years ago
  338. 338
    Do It Again 1 years ago
  339. 339
    Goodbye 1 years ago
  340. 340
    Awake 1 years ago
  341. 341
    Unexpected Agreement 1 years ago
  342. 342
    Threatening Vision 1 years ago
  343. 343
    Failed Temptation 1 years ago
  344. 344
    Meeting 1 years ago
  345. 345
    Not What They Expected 1 years ago
  346. 346
    Arty's Worry 1 years ago
  347. 347
    Practice 1 years ago
  348. 348
    Nuisance 1 years ago
  349. 349
    Magic Training (1) 1 years ago
  350. 350
    Magic Training (2) 1 years ago
  351. 351
    Splitting The Wave 1 years ago
  352. 352
    Strong Smell 1 years ago
  353. 353
    On A Peaceful Dinner 1 years ago
  354. 354
    The President's Predicament 1 years ago
  355. 355
    Monster Appearances 1 years ago
  356. 356
    Killing Monsters 1 years ago
  357. 357
    Using Magic 1 years ago
  358. 358
    Saved 1 years ago
  359. 359
    To The Rescue 1 years ago
  360. 360
    Arrived At The Hospital 1 years ago
  361. 361
    One More To Rescue 1 years ago
  362. 362
    The Figure Behind 1 years ago
  363. 363
    Saw Opportunity 1 years ago
  364. 364
    Surprisingly 1 years ago
  365. 365
    Furious Beast Voice 1 years ago
  366. 366
    Giant Flesh Wolf 1 years ago
  367. 367
    Events 1 years ago
  368. 368
    Planning 1 years ago
  369. 369
    To Start A Day 1 years ago
  370. 370
    Disturbance 1 years ago
  371. 371
    His Anger 1 years ago
  372. 372
    Feeding 1 years ago
  373. 373
    Reassurance 1 years ago
  374. 374
    A Sudden Call 1 years ago
  375. 375
    Influence 1 years ago
  376. 376
    Almost Done 1 years ago
  377. 377
    Caught 1 years ago
  378. 378
    A Glimpse 1 years ago
  379. 379
    Have To Retreat 1 years ago
  380. 380
    Unexpected Meeting 1 years ago
  381. 381
    Suspicious Help 1 years ago
  382. 382
    Her Power 1 years ago
  383. 383
    Talks 1 years ago
  384. 384
    Realized 1 years ago
  385. 385
    News From The Other Side 1 years ago
  386. 386
    Residual 1 years ago
  387. 387
    Discovered 1 years ago
  388. 388
    Threat 1 years ago
  389. 389
    Seperated 1 years ago
  390. 390
    She Also Have the Rage 1 years ago
  391. 391
    Escape 1 years ago
  392. 392
    Rift 1 years ago
  393. 393
    Bad News 1 years ago
  394. 394
    To The Castle 1 years ago
  395. 395
    Figured Out The Danger 1 years ago
  396. 396
    Involved 1 years ago
  397. 397
    Visit Svaros 1 years ago
  398. 398
    Enter The Castle 1 years ago
  399. 399
    Chaotic Fight 1 years ago
  400. 400
    Destroyed 1 years ago
  401. 401
    Dark Clouds 1 years ago
  402. 402
    Found Her 1 years ago
  403. 403
    Saved 1 years ago
  404. 404
    Confronting 1 years ago
  405. 405
    Wreak Havoc 1 years ago
  406. 406
    Mad Goddess 1 years ago
  407. 407
    Bringing Ruin 1 years ago
  408. 408
    One After Another 1 years ago
  409. 409
    Struggles 1 years ago
  410. 410
    Joined The Fight 1 years ago
  411. 411
    Dire 1 years ago
  412. 412
    Found Him 1 years ago
  413. 413
    Held hostage 1 years ago
  414. 414
    It's Over 1 years ago
  415. 415
    Predicament 1 years ago
  416. 416
    Making Move 1 years ago
  417. 417
    Concerning 1 years ago
  418. 418
    Forgotten 1 years ago
  419. 419
    To The Sylvan Haven 1 years ago
  420. 420
    Monkey Army 1 years ago
  421. 421
    Almost There 1 years ago
  422. 422
    Detour 1 years ago
  423. 423
    A Flamefoul 1 years ago
  424. 424
    Battles End 1 years ago
  425. 425
    Annoyed 1 years ago
  426. 426
    Gorilla's End 1 years ago
  427. 427
    Talks 1 years ago
  428. 428
    Direwolves Pack 1 years ago
  429. 429
    Arrived 1 years ago
  430. 430
    The King's Thought 1 years ago
  431. 431
    Premonition Of A Trouble 1 years ago
  432. 432
    A Concern 1 years ago
  433. 433
    A Coversation 1 years ago
  434. 434
    On The Way Back 1 years ago
  435. 435
    Power of Light 11 months ago
  436. 436
    The King Is Back 11 months ago
  437. 437
    Depart Again 10 months ago
  438. 438
    Back At The Palace 10 months ago
  439. 439
    Start of The Quest 10 months ago
  440. 440
    Behind The Shadow 10 months ago
  441. 441
    Evolved Goblins 10 months ago
  442. 442
    Mysterious Man 10 months ago
  443. 443
    Telling Him 10 months ago
  444. 444
    Underground 10 months ago
  445. 445
    At The Exit 10 months ago
  446. 446
    Passed Through A Town 9 months ago
  447. 447
    Shocking Cause 9 months ago
  448. 448
    A Young Talent 9 months ago
  449. 449
    Arrived 9 months ago
  450. 450
    Waiting 8 months ago
  451. 451
    Permission 8 months ago
  452. 452
    Intriguing 8 months ago
  453. 453
    A Precious Material 8 months ago
  454. 454
    About The Metal 8 months ago
  455. 455
    The Show 8 months ago
  456. 456
    Under 7 months ago
  457. 457
    Forging The Weapons 7 months ago
  458. 458
    Urgent Quest 7 months ago
  459. 459
    An Impostor 7 months ago
  460. 460
    Almost 7 months ago
  461. 461
    Trying To Escape 7 months ago
  462. 462
    Get Hold Of Her 7 months ago
  463. 463
    The Burden 7 months ago
  464. 464
    Time To Go 7 months ago
  465. 465
    Anomalies 7 months ago
  466. 466
    The Other Journey 7 months ago
  467. 467
    Arrived At The Kingdom 7 months ago
  468. 468
    The News 7 months ago
  469. 469
    Meet The King 7 months ago
  470. 470
    His Effort 7 months ago
  471. 471
    Consolidating Words 7 months ago
  472. 472
    Shared Fear 7 months ago
  473. 473
    Plans And Doubt 7 months ago
  474. 474
    Scout Reports 7 months ago
  475. 475
    Back To Their Family 7 months ago
  476. 476
    Its Coming 7 months ago
  477. 477
    Old Friend 7 months ago
  478. 478
    The Vision 7 months ago
  479. 479
    Its Coming 7 months ago
  480. 480
    The Fog 7 months ago
  481. 481
    Bugs Fight 6 months ago
  482. 482
    The Risk 6 months ago
  483. 483
    Descending 6 months ago
  484. 484
    Through The Storm 6 months ago
  485. 485
    Combined 6 months ago
  486. 486
    Reach 6 months ago
  487. 487
    New Hope 6 months ago
  488. 488
    Attacking 6 months ago
  489. 489
    Not Over 6 months ago
  490. 490
    Begin The Searching 6 months ago
  491. 491
    Founding 6 months ago
  492. 492
    Adrius's Words 6 months ago
  493. 493
    After The News 6 months ago
  494. 494
    Rising 6 months ago
  495. 495
    Again 6 months ago
  496. 496
    Underground 6 months ago
  497. 497
    Catch It 6 months ago
  498. 498
    End of First 6 months ago
  499. 499
    Happen In Another Place 6 months ago
  500. 500
    Erupting Chaos 6 months ago
  501. 501
    The Giant Beast 6 months ago
  502. 502
    Closing In 6 months ago
  503. 503
    Collapsed 5 months ago
  504. 504
    Chaotic Battlefield 5 months ago
  505. 505
    Dead 5 months ago
  506. 506
    Call 5 months ago
  507. 507
    Detecting 5 months ago
  508. 508
    A Name 5 months ago
  509. 509
    Source 5 months ago
  510. 510
    The One Who Coming Back 5 months ago
  511. 511
    Combined Attack 5 months ago
  512. 512
    Reanimated 5 months ago
  513. 513
    Once Again 5 months ago
  514. 514
    Die Again 5 months ago
  515. 515
    Break 5 months ago
  516. 516
    Turn Serious 5 months ago
  517. 517
    Laugh 5 months ago
  518. 518
    Screaming Instinct 5 months ago
  519. 519
    Erend Arrived 5 months ago
  520. 520
    Trapping Him 5 months ago
  521. 521
    Weakening 5 months ago
  522. 522
    Threat To His Home 5 months ago
  523. 523
    No Rest 5 months ago
  524. 524
    Good News 5 months ago
  525. 525
    Back To The Palace 5 months ago
  526. 526
    Informing Them 5 months ago
  527. 527
    Arrived At The World 5 months ago
  528. 528
    The Clearing 5 months ago
  529. 529
    Two 5 months ago
  530. 530
    Lay Dead 5 months ago
  531. 531
    Next Level 5 months ago
  532. 532
    Shooting Venoms 5 months ago
  533. 533
    Mountain Of Rock 5 months ago
  534. 534
    Shedding Its Armor 4 months ago
  535. 535
    Crumbling Down 4 months ago
  536. 536
    Oasis 4 months ago
  537. 537
    Enjoying The Drinks 4 months ago
  538. 538
    Continue The Journey 4 months ago
  539. 539
    Decision To Leave 4 months ago
  540. 540
    Next Phase Begin 4 months ago
  541. 541
    Fiery Boulders 4 months ago
  542. 542
    Anxiously Hoping 4 months ago
  543. 543
    A Reunion? 4 months ago
  544. 544
    Thrilled 4 months ago
  545. 545
    Vision Of The Past 4 months ago
  546. 546
    Chaotic Releash 4 months ago
  547. 547
    Will Handle It Alone 4 months ago
  548. 548
    Separate Dimension 4 months ago
  549. 549
    Channeling The Chaotic Magic 4 months ago
  550. 550
    Had Enough 4 months ago
  551. 551
    Black Lightning 4 months ago
  552. 552
    Giant Power 4 months ago
  553. 553
    The End Of Her 4 months ago
  554. 554
    Shrinking 4 months ago
  555. 555
    Resting 4 months ago
  556. 556
    Not Time To Rest 4 months ago
  557. 557
    Vision Again 4 months ago
  558. 558
    Across The Land Near Them 4 months ago
  559. 559
    Spread To Destinations 4 months ago
  560. 560
    In The Valley 4 months ago
  561. 561
    One Tendril Done 4 months ago
  562. 562
    Send Messages 4 months ago
  563. 563
    Dive Deeper 4 months ago
  564. 564
    Shocking 4 months ago
  565. 565
    The Apex 4 months ago
  566. 566
    Under Me 3 months ago
  567. 567
    Outside 3 months ago
  568. 568
    Battle In The Sky, Again 3 months ago
  569. 569
    Absorbing Their Souls 3 months ago
  570. 570
    Weakening 3 months ago
  571. 571
    The End 3 months ago
  572. 572
    The Looming Threat 3 months ago
  573. 573
    The Moment 3 months ago
  574. 574
    Calm Time? 3 months ago
  575. 575
    Foreboding 3 months ago
  576. 576
    Summoned 3 months ago
  577. 577
    Back Again 3 months ago
  578. 578
    The Sand Again 3 months ago
  579. 579
    On The Other Side 3 months ago
  580. 580
    The Need 3 months ago
  581. 581
    Bad Aura Coming From It 3 months ago
  582. 582
    Faster Then Anticipated 3 months ago
  583. 583
    The Three Intruders 3 months ago
  584. 584
    Their Plea 3 months ago
  585. 585
    The Dangerous Temptation 3 months ago
  586. 586
    One Last 3 months ago
  587. 587
    Come Back 3 months ago
  588. 588
    Their Plea 3 months ago
  589. 589
    Hearing Hope 3 months ago
  590. 590
    Return Home 3 months ago
  591. 591
    Discussion 3 months ago
  592. 592
    King's Permission 3 months ago
  593. 593
    Step Into The Ash 3 months ago
  594. 594
    Four Invaders 3 months ago
  595. 595
    Through The Winding Tunnel 3 months ago
  596. 596
    Tales Of Their Suffering 3 months ago
  597. 597
    The Squads 3 months ago
  598. 598
    For The Moment 3 months ago
  599. 599
    They Are Moving 3 months ago
  600. 600
    Stealing Materials And Supplies 3 months ago
  601. 601
    Small Victory 3 months ago
  602. 602
    A Plan And An Uneasy Man 3 months ago
  603. 603
    The Day 3 months ago
  604. 604
    The Executioner 3 months ago
  605. 605
    Mysterious Power 3 months ago
  606. 606
    Next Phase 3 months ago
  607. 607
    Greeting 3 months ago
  608. 608
    Darker Intentions 3 months ago
  609. 609
    What Buried Under 3 months ago
  610. 610
    What Need To Be That Send 3 months ago
  611. 611
    Taken Captive 3 months ago
  612. 612
    The Skeleton 3 months ago
  613. 613
    Uneasy War Room 3 months ago
  614. 614
    The Ancient Sin 3 months ago
  615. 615
    Sending Messages 3 months ago
  616. 616
    Back Again 3 months ago
  617. 617
    Getting Ready 3 months ago
  618. 618
    Arrived At The Other World 3 months ago
  619. 619
    Long Hidden 3 months ago
  620. 620
    Waiting 3 months ago
  621. 621
    Messages And Thoughts 2 months ago
  622. 622
    Taken Somewhere 2 months ago
  623. 623
    Arrived 2 months ago
  624. 624
    Their Torture 2 months ago
  625. 625
    Relaying Their Power 2 months ago
  626. 626
    Will Begin Soon 2 months ago
  627. 627
    Arrival 2 months ago
  628. 628
    Opening The Rift 2 months ago
  629. 629
    Calling And Rejecting 2 months ago
  630. 630
    The Words 2 months ago
  631. 631
    The Unknown Danger 2 months ago
  632. 632
    Entering The Rift 2 months ago
  633. 633
    Departing 2 months ago
  634. 634
    The Retaliation 2 months ago
  635. 635
    The Crumbling Defense 2 months ago
  636. 636
    Push Through The Rift 2 months ago
  637. 637
    The Strange Ground 2 months ago
  638. 638
    In Front Of A Black Door 2 months ago
  639. 639
    Under The Skeleton 2 months ago
  640. 640
    Stirred Awake 2 months ago
  641. 641
    The Second 2 months ago
  642. 642
    Enough Seeing 2 months ago
  643. 643
    The Power Hidden There 2 months ago
  644. 644
    Fury 2 months ago
  645. 645
    They Entered 2 months ago
  646. 646
    The Sealed Realm 2 months ago
  647. 647
    Found One 2 months ago
  648. 648
    Extinguished 2 months ago
  649. 649
    Mist And Vines 2 months ago
  650. 650
    Overwhelmed 2 months ago
  651. 651
    Too Soon 2 months ago
  652. 652
    Don't Have Much Time 2 months ago
  653. 653
    Necessary 2 months ago
  654. 654
    Clash of Powers 2 months ago
  655. 655
    Red 2 months ago
  656. 656
    The Threat 2 months ago
  657. 657
    Spreading Mist 1 months ago
  658. 658
    Inferno 1 months ago
  659. 659
    The Black Sphere 1 months ago
  660. 660
    Flickering Flame 1 months ago
  661. 661
    Final Stand 1 months ago
  662. 662
    Call To Sanity 1 months ago
  663. 663
    Ominous Messages 1 months ago
  664. 664
    Coming Back Outside 1 months ago
  665. 665
    The Goodbye 1 months ago
  666. 666
    Farewell 1 months ago
  667. 667
    Back To The Chamber 1 months ago
  668. 668
    A Permission 1 months ago
  669. 669
    Coming Home 1 months ago
  670. 670
    Guests 1 months ago
  671. 671
    Notification 1 months ago
  672. 672
    Foreign 1 months ago
  673. 673
    Strangeness And Similarities 1 months ago
  674. 674
    Preparations On Both Sides 1 months ago
  675. 675
    An Idea 1 months ago
  676. 676
    The Same Problem 1 months ago
  677. 677
    Alarm 1 months ago
  678. 678
    The Appearance 1 months ago
  679. 679
    Ten Birds 1 months ago
  680. 680
    Metal Birds 1 months ago
  681. 681
    The Angry Kid 1 months ago
  682. 682
    Explosions 29 days ago
  683. 683
    Rage 29 days ago
  684. 684
    The Worries 28 days ago
  685. 685
    Skepticism 27 days ago
  686. 686
    Back Here 25 days ago
  687. 687
    The Offer 24 days ago
  688. 688
    Hum Of Last Preparations 23 days ago
  689. 689
    Another Faction Joins 22 days ago
  690. 690
    The Weird People 19 days ago
  691. 691
    The Departure 19 days ago
  692. 692
    Feeling Lost 18 days ago
  693. 693
    Information 18 days ago
  694. 694
    Communication 17 days ago
  695. 695
    Detected 17 days ago
  696. 696
    Terrible Possibility 16 days ago
  697. 697
    The Uncertainty 14 days ago
  698. 698
    Entering The Tower 13 days ago
  699. 699
    Above The Clouds 12 days ago
  700. 700
    Undetected 11 days ago
  701. 701
    Need More Time 11 days ago
  702. 702
    Going Deeper 10 days ago
  703. 703
    He Showed Up 10 days ago
  704. 704
    Eryndor 9 days ago
  705. 705
    Not Enough 9 days ago
  706. 706
    Rebirth 8 days ago
  707. 707
    Keep Attacking 6 days ago
  708. 708
    Artifact Used 6 days ago
  709. 709
    Something Else 5 days ago
  710. 710
    Found An Army 5 days ago
  711. 711
    Already 4 days ago
  712. 712
    Explosion 4 days ago
  713. 713
    Have To Escape 3 days ago
  714. 714
    Come Outside 3 days ago
  715. 715
    Buying Time 1 days ago
  716. 716
    Streak 1 days ago
  717. 717
    He's Here 1 hours ago
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