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solid novel, only bad point from my side is the somewhat funny stupid way some scenes are written and the missing world buildingbaddition
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4/5 ⭐ Good Fanfic. To keep it short there's three problem imo: 1. Time line Such as age, 4th raikage age is far too old. And 3rd war is not supposed to be that close to 2nd war but author keep saying like it would happen anytime right now. 2. MC power is growing too fast He's already as strong as 5 kages when he still 11. That makes it feel like we're reading chinese fic. 3. Interaction between characters There's not much interaction between MC and other characters, and that makes their relation feels forced. That's all, and Thank you for your hard work author👏👏
I absolutely love this. I love the visualization that I'm getting by just a few words. I like the poetic meanings behind the brotherhood, and most of all, I like the Redemption that the mc has sure he still has a few screw loose there, but still, there are some morals.
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Amazing story, loved your light juman one, so far one of the best thing that I have read on this platform, I definitely recommend my friend this and he loved it
Your fanfics are so good, such that I refuse to believe your a vegan🤭. Honestly bro, good stuff, this one takes the cake though... I can't wait till you do a Mushoku or DBZ fanfic, fingers crossed🤞🏾... This one is Five stars easily.
Hehe ☺️ this is the first time I'm doing a review you see I'm not good at it but I'm sure you'll like it ahem😝 I'm gonna be honest I like it super duper and honestly I like the overall Character Design and Story Development at the same time the world background and the Writing Quality is good because few of the word is misspell but I'm good with it ❣️😍
The update is HORRIBLE. The plot is average. The writing quality is average. World of Naruto. Interesting to read. For fanfiction, this is semi-legendary.
Let's see. I love this novel. That's the review. The end. Just kidding. Let's see. Let's start from some parameters that help you understand the novel. Firstly, the writing quality is fantastic. It is genuinely good. Veganmaster has delivered another beautiful piece. I love the mc. He feels interesting. That's all I can ask for at this point, really. The storyline has quite a lot of potential. I love all the ruthless undertones and brutality in the story. for instance, in a recent chapter, the author described the fight like, "he pulled the heart out of the jonin before twisting his head. Soon after the other two jonins were also found with twisted head. Their headstart couldn't save them." I think that's how that went. So, yeah. It's brutal and I love it. Author, keep up the good work. Also, don't shy away from the gruesome and horrifying parts of the story. We love it. Thumbs up.
It says weak to strong but MC is OP. There are a lot of wierd inconsistencies that kept bothering me and plot was on the cliche/forced side. It’s an okay fanfiction
all in all one of the best fanfictions ive ever read while ,being surpased by some of the older ones, i expect this one to be able to reach that point, maybe even rising above them.
Every aspect is great, there's not really any mistakes that I can remember seeing whilst reading this, this is just a well done story with a bunch of character development.
this novel is very good and potential . If some think i want to add it will be the romance side story of the Mc . i mean a girl who love the mc despite of his face isn't good and iffffff the Mc could find some way to see and handsome it will be great p/s : make it a harem also good
i haven't read it yet but being blind means nothing. I mean it's a world where people change eyeballs like:-
una maravillosa historia y está llendo por un buen camino , ya sea con el desarrollo del personaje , o que este el la tierra de hierro que no es muy comun der ver en fanfic de Naruto, me gusta como el prota no es 100 malvado y se da cuenta de cómo se debían sentir la familia de sus víctimas pero aun siga caminado por ese difecil camino.....por ahora esta de 10 lastima que tarden tantos los capítulos...
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I'm going to give 5his my honest review. writing quality is a solid 5 cause of his previous works and the writing keeps you hooked. The story development is also a 5. I'm giving the character design a 4 cause of the mc face but he makes up for it by the energy and senses. Now the updating is not good if we get lucky we get 2 to 3 chapters a week, but we usually get 1 chapter a week cause he has another fic that he is putting his attention on.(Reborn as Enel). The world background is great cause we get to explore the land of Iron which is not showed mostly in the show. Overall a great fic.
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Kinda mid. Description kinda made me think this will have like a psycho mc, but it's one of these where mc turns kinda good right after reincarnation. At least there is no romance. Revenge plot is kinda overused. And the vow he makes is cringe. Despite what I said, since webnovel is the garbage dump of novels, this can be considered above average.
NGL I thought the character at the front page was the reaper that faried you for a coin to the afterlife in a sense that is what the "red dot" does he kills you for your bounty and all your stories are fire I read all of them and I liked all of them
solid novel, only bad point from my side is the somewhat funny stupid way some scenes are written and the missing world buildingbaddition
Reveal Spoiler 4/5 ⭐ Good Fanfic. To keep it short there's three problem imo: 1. Time line Such as age, 4th raikage age is far too old. And 3rd war is not supposed to be that close to 2nd war but author keep saying like it would happen anytime right now. 2. MC power is growing too fast He's already as strong as 5 kages when he still 11. That makes it feel like we're reading chinese fic. 3. Interaction between characters There's not much interaction between MC and other characters, and that makes their relation feels forced. That's all, and Thank you for your hard work author👏👏
I absolutely love this. I love the visualization that I'm getting by just a few words. I like the poetic meanings behind the brotherhood, and most of all, I like the Redemption that the mc has sure he still has a few screw loose there, but still, there are some morals.
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Amazing story, loved your light juman one, so far one of the best thing that I have read on this platform, I definitely recommend my friend this and he loved it
Your fanfics are so good, such that I refuse to believe your a vegan🤭. Honestly bro, good stuff, this one takes the cake though... I can't wait till you do a Mushoku or DBZ fanfic, fingers crossed🤞🏾... This one is Five stars easily.
Hehe ☺️ this is the first time I'm doing a review you see I'm not good at it but I'm sure you'll like it ahem😝 I'm gonna be honest I like it super duper and honestly I like the overall Character Design and Story Development at the same time the world background and the Writing Quality is good because few of the word is misspell but I'm good with it ❣️😍
The update is HORRIBLE. The plot is average. The writing quality is average. World of Naruto. Interesting to read. For fanfiction, this is semi-legendary.
Let's see. I love this novel. That's the review. The end. Just kidding. Let's see. Let's start from some parameters that help you understand the novel. Firstly, the writing quality is fantastic. It is genuinely good. Veganmaster has delivered another beautiful piece. I love the mc. He feels interesting. That's all I can ask for at this point, really. The storyline has quite a lot of potential. I love all the ruthless undertones and brutality in the story. for instance, in a recent chapter, the author described the fight like, "he pulled the heart out of the jonin before twisting his head. Soon after the other two jonins were also found with twisted head. Their headstart couldn't save them." I think that's how that went. So, yeah. It's brutal and I love it. Author, keep up the good work. Also, don't shy away from the gruesome and horrifying parts of the story. We love it. Thumbs up.
It says weak to strong but MC is OP. There are a lot of wierd inconsistencies that kept bothering me and plot was on the cliche/forced side. It’s an okay fanfiction
all in all one of the best fanfictions ive ever read while ,being surpased by some of the older ones, i expect this one to be able to reach that point, maybe even rising above them.
Every aspect is great, there's not really any mistakes that I can remember seeing whilst reading this, this is just a well done story with a bunch of character development.
this novel is very good and potential . If some think i want to add it will be the romance side story of the Mc . i mean a girl who love the mc despite of his face isn't good and iffffff the Mc could find some way to see and handsome it will be great p/s : make it a harem also good
i haven't read it yet but being blind means nothing. I mean it's a world where people change eyeballs like:-
una maravillosa historia y está llendo por un buen camino , ya sea con el desarrollo del personaje , o que este el la tierra de hierro que no es muy comun der ver en fanfic de Naruto, me gusta como el prota no es 100 malvado y se da cuenta de cómo se debían sentir la familia de sus víctimas pero aun siga caminado por ese difecil camino.....por ahora esta de 10 lastima que tarden tantos los capítulos...
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I'm going to give 5his my honest review. writing quality is a solid 5 cause of his previous works and the writing keeps you hooked. The story development is also a 5. I'm giving the character design a 4 cause of the mc face but he makes up for it by the energy and senses. Now the updating is not good if we get lucky we get 2 to 3 chapters a week, but we usually get 1 chapter a week cause he has another fic that he is putting his attention on.(Reborn as Enel). The world background is great cause we get to explore the land of Iron which is not showed mostly in the show. Overall a great fic.
Reveal Spoiler Kinda mid. Description kinda made me think this will have like a psycho mc, but it's one of these where mc turns kinda good right after reincarnation. At least there is no romance. Revenge plot is kinda overused. And the vow he makes is cringe. Despite what I said, since webnovel is the garbage dump of novels, this can be considered above average.
NGL I thought the character at the front page was the reaper that faried you for a coin to the afterlife in a sense that is what the "red dot" does he kills you for your bounty and all your stories are fire I read all of them and I liked all of them