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Write a reviewTiene potencial, me gusto por el momento. Gracias por el capitulo ♥️. Espero que no dejes la historia, porque la trama si es muy buena. Al principio estaba dudando en pasar del primer capítulo, pero tiene una buena premisam
not really a bad novel BUT really misleading. MC doesnt have the power/memories or anything of Ikaris. maybe he was Ikaris before, but now... he is not. Also, slow novel + slow updates = 👎, if you are going for a slow novel at least have a decent update.
Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.
Reveal Spoilerits written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.
Reveal SpoilerI like the premise… but Ikaris isn’t Ikaris…. This is just a weak af male oc ….. Plus the love triangle BS….. The story is taking too long.
Tiene potencial, me gusto por el momento. Gracias por el capitulo ♥️. Espero que no dejes la historia, porque la trama si es muy buena. Al principio estaba dudando en pasar del primer capítulo, pero tiene una buena premisam
not really a bad novel BUT really misleading. MC doesnt have the power/memories or anything of Ikaris. maybe he was Ikaris before, but now... he is not. Also, slow novel + slow updates = 👎, if you are going for a slow novel at least have a decent update.
Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.
Reveal Spoilerits written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.
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I like the premise… but Ikaris isn’t Ikaris…. This is just a weak af male oc ….. Plus the love triangle BS….. The story is taking too long.