Reviews of The Eternal in Twilight by The_Young_Flash - Webnovel

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Iron_Man_3000

I like the premise… but Ikaris isn’t Ikaris…. This is just a weak af male oc ….. Plus the love triangle BS….. The story is taking too long.

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Danna_Lopez_5221

Tiene potencial, me gusto por el momento. Gracias por el capitulo ♥️. Espero que no dejes la historia, porque la trama si es muy buena. Al principio estaba dudando en pasar del primer capítulo, pero tiene una buena premisam

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PsyLoRD

not really a bad novel BUT really misleading. MC doesnt have the power/memories or anything of Ikaris. maybe he was Ikaris before, but now... he is not. Also, slow novel + slow updates = 👎, if you are going for a slow novel at least have a decent update.

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RandomPasserby_07

Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.

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GoldDragonMachina

its written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.

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MimicReads

Good as in yum Yum as in great Great as in terrific Terrific as in im done

2yr
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Iron_Man_3000

I like the premise… but Ikaris isn’t Ikaris…. This is just a weak af male oc ….. Plus the love triangle BS….. The story is taking too long.

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1yr
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Danna_Lopez_5221

Tiene potencial, me gusto por el momento. Gracias por el capitulo ♥️. Espero que no dejes la historia, porque la trama si es muy buena. Al principio estaba dudando en pasar del primer capítulo, pero tiene una buena premisam

2yr
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PsyLoRD

not really a bad novel BUT really misleading. MC doesnt have the power/memories or anything of Ikaris. maybe he was Ikaris before, but now... he is not. Also, slow novel + slow updates = 👎, if you are going for a slow novel at least have a decent update.

2yr
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RandomPasserby_07

Great idea, bringing Ikaris to Twilight. And nice touch-ups with the backstory of why Arishem have to send him. I love the way you write their POV, it actually does not deviate too much from how I picture Ikaris to be in the movie eternals. Don't know in the later chapters though, with him having a kids body maybe it affect his way of thinking too. But overall it's great and looking forward to more chapters. Pls don't drop it.

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2yr
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GoldDragonMachina

its written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.

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2yr
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MimicReads

Good as in yum Yum as in great Great as in terrific Terrific as in im done

2yr
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