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This is my first review I’ve ever made so I guess that show how much I enjoyed the novel. I really liked the mc. This is the best Naruto I’ve read so far. The harem can become a sort of Pokémon situation towards the end but I still enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading the authors other works. Hoping this isn’t dropped premenantly.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
sorry man, can't give 4 or 5 stars. I think this is quite new, with mc from a different dimension who doesn't know naruto anime. However, the way the romance is a bit boring to me. what i see is mc only takes 'used' women from other men (except Tenten and Hanabi). Moreover, your MC character is too serious which makes me more bored too.... well, sorry.... I've been thinking a lot recently and I'm a bit bored right now. Well, I wish you continued success. I will also read again if the opportunity arises.
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dropped at chapter 124. the start of story is really amazing. the author setting up the plot and situations around the character amazingly well, and that setup make development of each of characters through their exploration of their personality, goal, interaction of each other and relationship with each other progress logical and relatable enough for me to immerse in the story and such experience make beginning of the story 5 star for me. but that experience of the amazing beginning slowly becoming worse and worse the longer story progress, one of the biggest reason because lack of great setup along with lack of great exploration that author did really well at the beginning that become less and less and less. and story progress, its become " hey there is some sudden development of the story without any setup or built up rally and I am not gonna show it to you, so deal with it". like tsunade first meeting with the mc, or mc background hidden development of his technique for example. and a lot of these sudden background development or any sudden development really, happen a lot more at a cost of another great potential development that a lot more interesting and a lot more make a sense that fit better for the plot or setup that author already did for the first place. overall it's good story but really disappointing one.
This isn’t an actual review. Just want to know why you’re Fan-fic doesn’t appear in the power rankings when it obviously deserves to be there. It should have well over 15k words. I’m posting this because I only stumbled upon this by chance. Very enjoyable, but yes the story did suffer bc the audience wanted a harem lol 😂
This fic is basically a sociopathic Gary Stu hunting for waifus and make them as strong as possible while being a fighting maniac. It's very well written and for a harem fic with so many waifus it's girls are also mostly well established and characterized. The only problem I have is the end of Orochimaru and what happened with Guren and this Yuki girl from Oto because they apparently were forgotten.
If I had money I'd definitely support this author in any way... Unfortunately I can only enjoy the freebies.I love your novels sir please don't stop raining us with your creations╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯
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Another great book by Ein. The writing quality is top notch and the chapters are long and detailed which I appreciate. Good balance between action and slice of life, so you don't get bored of feel like things are dragging on. I think this novel is great take on the Narutoverse.
This story has a lot of BIG STICK energy... It is an absolute memefest, but still manages to have a coherent story which isn't too force. Overall nice read.
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Hahahahaha!!! I knew! Ein ain't gonna remain silent. Just hope this one to be as epic as EPIC. Fingers crossed 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
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Author is the Best fanfic writer on webnovel in my opinion This fanfic started like 2 weeks ago and has 50+ chapters ( Probably 20% of Author’s power) And ofcourse the fanfic is just perfection With more than daily uploades and an amazing detailed writing it fully immerses you into the story
My favorite fanfic on the site right now! Take a look if you want to read a great story! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
As usual,another one of Lord Eins wonderful creations.......................................................................................
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Overall it’s an ok novel to pass the time, my only issue with it is that it doesn’t have any stakes. Everything just somehow works out for the main character. Plot points just happen without any explanation. You show us the result but not any of the, I guess inner monologue. It doesn’t really go into detail on things. Like the timeskip, you show us that Ino and Sakura try to better them selves. But you do nothing about Sasukes perspective especially since Uchiha’s are more emotional than any other clan. Same for how Naruto, somehow got over Sakura. The juicy parts are just skipped over for plot progression. It reads less like a Naruto Fanfiction and more like a Naruto Cast in a AU world without the nitty gritty bits that made the universe so good. (Delete Boruto, and war arc).
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...............................................................................................................................
Full 5, hands down. The quality is unmatched, updates are frequent and I've never seen such smooth dialogue ever, not even from real authors. This is easily one of the best works I've read, you even make Harem's work, you have the Midas touch.
Написано довольно хорошо, но после того, как мои надежды и ожидания были разбиты (Хината, Ино, Сакура), я хотел бы объявить о своем не столь почетном уходе от чтения этой, несомненно, знаменитой книги. П.с. Конечно это были лишь мои ожидания по поводу гарема, так, как помню прошлую книгу автора, но всё же пока брошу этот роман. П.п.с Автору удачи!
I'm really enjoying this story so far, it is really well written. A lot of the the bad reviews seem to be because certain girls aren't confirmed to be a part of the Harem. Honestly I have no problem with it. Let the author write what they want.
big stick make me come here, sun wukong make me add this novel to my collection.............................................................
I appreciate your work and even though there are some that are not according to my personal wishes, but I will still rate this as good enough. . keep it up author....
I left it... I did my best to stay biased and read the entire novel but I couldn't, seriously, the mc has zero respect for him, accept being second choice, taking advantage of him, if you had made the girls break up with their partner, In order to take his time and redevelop a romantic relationship with the mc, I would have accepted it, but accepting to be the second option and allowing him to use it like this, killed all my desire to read any novel by this author. [Google translator ]
This is my first review I’ve ever made so I guess that show how much I enjoyed the novel. I really liked the mc. This is the best Naruto I’ve read so far. The harem can become a sort of Pokémon situation towards the end but I still enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading the authors other works. Hoping this isn’t dropped premenantly.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
sorry man, can't give 4 or 5 stars. I think this is quite new, with mc from a different dimension who doesn't know naruto anime. However, the way the romance is a bit boring to me. what i see is mc only takes 'used' women from other men (except Tenten and Hanabi). Moreover, your MC character is too serious which makes me more bored too.... well, sorry.... I've been thinking a lot recently and I'm a bit bored right now. Well, I wish you continued success. I will also read again if the opportunity arises.
i like the cover btw 👍👍👍👍🤤🤤👍👍👍👍👍♥️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🤏🤏🤏🤏🤏😇😇😇😇😇😇😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💞🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🥰😘🥰🥰♦️💞♥️😶♥️😍♥️😍😍😍👉😍♥️♥️♥️😍😍😍😍
dropped at chapter 124. the start of story is really amazing. the author setting up the plot and situations around the character amazingly well, and that setup make development of each of characters through their exploration of their personality, goal, interaction of each other and relationship with each other progress logical and relatable enough for me to immerse in the story and such experience make beginning of the story 5 star for me. but that experience of the amazing beginning slowly becoming worse and worse the longer story progress, one of the biggest reason because lack of great setup along with lack of great exploration that author did really well at the beginning that become less and less and less. and story progress, its become " hey there is some sudden development of the story without any setup or built up rally and I am not gonna show it to you, so deal with it". like tsunade first meeting with the mc, or mc background hidden development of his technique for example. and a lot of these sudden background development or any sudden development really, happen a lot more at a cost of another great potential development that a lot more interesting and a lot more make a sense that fit better for the plot or setup that author already did for the first place. overall it's good story but really disappointing one.
This isn’t an actual review. Just want to know why you’re Fan-fic doesn’t appear in the power rankings when it obviously deserves to be there. It should have well over 15k words. I’m posting this because I only stumbled upon this by chance. Very enjoyable, but yes the story did suffer bc the audience wanted a harem lol 😂
This fic is basically a sociopathic Gary Stu hunting for waifus and make them as strong as possible while being a fighting maniac. It's very well written and for a harem fic with so many waifus it's girls are also mostly well established and characterized. The only problem I have is the end of Orochimaru and what happened with Guren and this Yuki girl from Oto because they apparently were forgotten.
If I had money I'd definitely support this author in any way... Unfortunately I can only enjoy the freebies.I love your novels sir please don't stop raining us with your creations╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] okay fanfic[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap].
Another great book by Ein. The writing quality is top notch and the chapters are long and detailed which I appreciate. Good balance between action and slice of life, so you don't get bored of feel like things are dragging on. I think this novel is great take on the Narutoverse.
This story has a lot of BIG STICK energy... It is an absolute memefest, but still manages to have a coherent story which isn't too force. Overall nice read.
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Hahahahaha!!! I knew! Ein ain't gonna remain silent. Just hope this one to be as epic as EPIC. Fingers crossed 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
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Author is the Best fanfic writer on webnovel in my opinion This fanfic started like 2 weeks ago and has 50+ chapters ( Probably 20% of Author’s power) And ofcourse the fanfic is just perfection With more than daily uploades and an amazing detailed writing it fully immerses you into the story
My favorite fanfic on the site right now! Take a look if you want to read a great story! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
As usual,another one of Lord Eins wonderful creations.......................................................................................
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GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....................................................................................................................................
Overall it’s an ok novel to pass the time, my only issue with it is that it doesn’t have any stakes. Everything just somehow works out for the main character. Plot points just happen without any explanation. You show us the result but not any of the, I guess inner monologue. It doesn’t really go into detail on things. Like the timeskip, you show us that Ino and Sakura try to better them selves. But you do nothing about Sasukes perspective especially since Uchiha’s are more emotional than any other clan. Same for how Naruto, somehow got over Sakura. The juicy parts are just skipped over for plot progression. It reads less like a Naruto Fanfiction and more like a Naruto Cast in a AU world without the nitty gritty bits that made the universe so good. (Delete Boruto, and war arc).
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...............................................................................................................................
Full 5, hands down. The quality is unmatched, updates are frequent and I've never seen such smooth dialogue ever, not even from real authors. This is easily one of the best works I've read, you even make Harem's work, you have the Midas touch.
Написано довольно хорошо, но после того, как мои надежды и ожидания были разбиты (Хината, Ино, Сакура), я хотел бы объявить о своем не столь почетном уходе от чтения этой, несомненно, знаменитой книги. П.с. Конечно это были лишь мои ожидания по поводу гарема, так, как помню прошлую книгу автора, но всё же пока брошу этот роман. П.п.с Автору удачи!
I'm really enjoying this story so far, it is really well written. A lot of the the bad reviews seem to be because certain girls aren't confirmed to be a part of the Harem. Honestly I have no problem with it. Let the author write what they want.
big stick make me come here, sun wukong make me add this novel to my collection.............................................................
I appreciate your work and even though there are some that are not according to my personal wishes, but I will still rate this as good enough. . keep it up author....
I left it... I did my best to stay biased and read the entire novel but I couldn't, seriously, the mc has zero respect for him, accept being second choice, taking advantage of him, if you had made the girls break up with their partner, In order to take his time and redevelop a romantic relationship with the mc, I would have accepted it, but accepting to be the second option and allowing him to use it like this, killed all my desire to read any novel by this author. [Google translator ]