Tales Of A Supreme Lord

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Kings_daughter

The initial chapter has you wondering, but once you get passed that, you're hooked. (I'm serious! get passed the first chapter!) The story pace is good, really good. The author need to update more! you can't leave at the Cliffhanger like that! (that's chapter 5, by the way). Overall, it's a very wonderful read, definitely read it.

LV 12

LegalWolf

I read the whole 11 chapters and the book isn't bad. I just can't wait for what's in store in the upcoming chapters

LV 3

bibiyenini

I have been giving reviews for a lot of books, and I've been thoroughly honest with it. I have to say a lot of things, but not to the point you have to scrape off everything and start from scratch. First, your title. It's vague. It's capitalized, so the readers will find a hard time finding the book because it isn't in lowercase. Webnovel caters titles with an overview of what the novel is about, and your title gives off a TINY intriguing factor. It is necessary for authors to write the novel with a powerful title at start. Try showing off what you have in store. Think outside the box. What if the title had a 'Vampire' and 'Prophecy' combined in it? What if the title has a Lord or a fantasy element on it that will surely bait the readers to read your book from start to end? Make sure it's decent. Something that the readers will remember for a long time. Second, your synopsis. It needed a lot of re-organization. I'm nothing against with the content, but the structure can be paraphrased. The sentences can be arranged to a general-specific sequence. Try to unravel a wide plot point to the start, and narrow it down to the core. You should set examples from the popular books on how they write their synopsis. Make sure to follow a certain format, or don't be afraid to copy a writing style (don't copy the content, just the style!) Third, the cover. It isn't good looking at the thumbnail. It looked meh on me, Try to find pictures in Pinterest, something that is interesting and eye-catchy. If you are invested to make the novel good and not just farming MGS, make sure you find enough time to pursue having a good cover and content. Fourth, the first chapter is pulling in, but the sentences needed to be reorganized, You used a lot of 'He' in the first sentence. Your always starting the sentence with the subject. Try using another word for it not to be redundant. Redundancy was making the flow rough and the readers might drop it halfway, Best descriptions are the way to the reader's heart. So that's all of the things I've seen through your novel. Best of luck!

LV 11

Phoenix_10

Not bad. This book is promising. It has a good storyline and plot. The author has a way with words and is good at description. Definitely a good read.

LV 3

Reet_Amber

Good job author! The staring was interesting and suspense was full on. First chapter is enough to hooked the readers and add this book into collection.

LV 2

ChenJian

Action packed start, with fun characters and a cool MC. Would love to read more when new chapters come out. Good job author sama! Keep writing!

LV 11

AuroraCross

I have read the first chapter and so far the story is imaginative and gives powerful visuals. There are some spelling issues, but once you look at what the author is trying to say it is an awesome story.

LV 1

Notion_Theory

the story is really descriptive and builds atmosphere as you read and the writing quality is also top tier. the plot takes a while to get into motion but once it starts moving it's pretty good. good job author

LV 1

Novelistilia

oh my, the first chapter is already heart wrenching. the author is very good in describing each scenes. there are errors in grammar. but its a good read. would definitely add this in my library! good job, dear author!! ❤️❤️❤️

LV 3

0Mashroom

Very descriptive the story is kinda of intresting to say the least the capters are kina short at first. characters are well written and appearance. overall i decent read for a quick break of the day.

LV 3

Shamira_Farhath

Excellent narration and well blended story. Its really fascinating to encounter such fresh imagination. I thoroughly loved your world background and Characters. I wish you take care of punctuations. keep it up Author! Best of luck!

LV 1

Tracy_Tauro

The plot scene is quite descriptive. I like to read the fantasy novel and these book got me hooked. I would be waiting for more update on this book. Adding you in the library.