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There is really nothing to complain about this and the author's other stories, they are simply excellent. If there was something annoying is that they are so good and entertaining that they always leave you wanting more. 👌👍😍
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Not really a 5 star, just felt that this deserved a better rating than it had because it's actually grammatically legible rather than the standard grok you find. I swear every time you start a story on this site it's like flipping a coin on whether the writer actually understands english or not.
It's not that bad. It's just that this appeals to very specific preferences that I do not have. Namely, overpowered and chad protagonists who are addicted to s*x. The description of the world is also basically abysmal so there's no point in reading this if you don't know what happens in Invincible. That's kind of the point of fanfics, though, so there's nothing wrong with that, but, in this case, the lack of descriptions combined with the rushed storytelling makes an overall bland world background that feels artificial. It's just boring imo.
Is it harem?👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🖕🖕🖕🖕👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I’m sure it’s a perfectly well written novel but as someone who has never watched the show I just can’t understand what is going on. I may come back and read it if I ever watch the show.
Great Mfkin job, no more questions asked. Tho mc had a very fast pace of rising to power, I hope you could explore the invincible universe more and interact with them characters
Just one word : OP with more OP Fkdjajsjhs kahdjdhcjx bakcidbdbj cicjxjsbs amkdjdhsov wjwiehfi wjzncbcjd bdnfocjsb djdbekvjd djfbekbf djfdkddi s difbd
In my opinion it's good espesially that he technically just do whatever he wants and he only kills people that annoys him or trator and stuff so im fine with it
I like the story, The Invincible Universe is great and so little used in fics... I just hope we get a little more character development, for example Hela; she only left with the mc after they destroyed her kingdom like It was nothing. Literally, she just left with him and the matter was forgotten, not even if you want there was a moderately romantic interaction. Maybe more character development and a little more invincible universe, the guy had like 500 children and we didn't get to see that she was going to think thragg about so many new Viltrumite. Excuse the bad English, I don't speak it at all. Greetings from Costa Rica.
Reveal Spoiler What I like? Story is written by this author (forgot name as I'm writing this.). Nuff said. What I dislike? Nothin'. If someone is reading this review, stop wasting time and read the story, along with all the author's other stories.
The story is rather entertaining with suitable character development, entertaining premice, fun, a nice changing of “scenery” and a nice power scale. My only real issue is like how you started to do after a certain point in Grunts story near the end you kinda just said f natural progression and it’s affected your further works. Here you are definitely trying to put some back in because unlike the other stories he doesn’t have the cheat of Grunts full blown meta power but it feels a little too fast paced making it “feel” rushed…
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I really liked the start and thought it would be an interesting story but i was proven wrong. There is no developemnt of the characters in anyway. The story is pretty much im here now so bend to my knee. The whole Flaxan thing while is practical an a very good idea it does not allow for amy growth or for anything interesting to happen. He becomes the ruler like its nothing. I understand he is extremely OP but its so basic an unoriginal. There are some funny moments an even moments i enjoy but it is so heavily outweighed by the other boring writing. I just personally expected more of a story and less of a since im here i win. I hope the author continues writing for people who like it but i am personally out
i loved EVERY BIT OF THE 14 chapters i read the mc is super opportunistic and i love it the interactions are believable and the passing is nice, i am loking forword to the DC arc
Yikes. Read the first few chapters expecting something good only to be met with the same generic villain protagonist concept and with the usual sociopathic tendencies and God complex
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Fantastic, I love the personality of the MC, I thought he would be the typical moralistic prince... but I was surprised by the path he took. Keep it up.
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Perfect. I have been looking for a good invincible SI for so long! Loving it![img=recommend] [img=update]
There is one that has reliable updates somewhat it called invincible me. There is one that has reliable updates somewhat it called invincible me.
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Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!
Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No need to read it if you have read his other stories if you haven't then you must read the one with the GROGAN on the front to become WOCK to his awesomeness
The story's great dude keep writing the bad**s slightly f***** in the head characters. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME.
There is really nothing to complain about this and the author's other stories, they are simply excellent. If there was something annoying is that they are so good and entertaining that they always leave you wanting more. 👌👍😍
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Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author Alpha Chad Author
Not really a 5 star, just felt that this deserved a better rating than it had because it's actually grammatically legible rather than the standard grok you find. I swear every time you start a story on this site it's like flipping a coin on whether the writer actually understands english or not.
It's not that bad. It's just that this appeals to very specific preferences that I do not have. Namely, overpowered and chad protagonists who are addicted to s*x. The description of the world is also basically abysmal so there's no point in reading this if you don't know what happens in Invincible. That's kind of the point of fanfics, though, so there's nothing wrong with that, but, in this case, the lack of descriptions combined with the rushed storytelling makes an overall bland world background that feels artificial. It's just boring imo.
Is it harem?👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🖕🖕🖕🖕👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I’m sure it’s a perfectly well written novel but as someone who has never watched the show I just can’t understand what is going on. I may come back and read it if I ever watch the show.
Great Mfkin job, no more questions asked. Tho mc had a very fast pace of rising to power, I hope you could explore the invincible universe more and interact with them characters
Just one word : OP with more OP Fkdjajsjhs kahdjdhcjx bakcidbdbj cicjxjsbs amkdjdhsov wjwiehfi wjzncbcjd bdnfocjsb djdbekvjd djfbekbf djfdkddi s difbd
In my opinion it's good espesially that he technically just do whatever he wants and he only kills people that annoys him or trator and stuff so im fine with it
I like the story, The Invincible Universe is great and so little used in fics... I just hope we get a little more character development, for example Hela; she only left with the mc after they destroyed her kingdom like It was nothing. Literally, she just left with him and the matter was forgotten, not even if you want there was a moderately romantic interaction. Maybe more character development and a little more invincible universe, the guy had like 500 children and we didn't get to see that she was going to think thragg about so many new Viltrumite. Excuse the bad English, I don't speak it at all. Greetings from Costa Rica.
Reveal Spoiler What I like? Story is written by this author (forgot name as I'm writing this.). Nuff said. What I dislike? Nothin'. If someone is reading this review, stop wasting time and read the story, along with all the author's other stories.
The story is rather entertaining with suitable character development, entertaining premice, fun, a nice changing of “scenery” and a nice power scale. My only real issue is like how you started to do after a certain point in Grunts story near the end you kinda just said f natural progression and it’s affected your further works. Here you are definitely trying to put some back in because unlike the other stories he doesn’t have the cheat of Grunts full blown meta power but it feels a little too fast paced making it “feel” rushed…
🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
I really liked the start and thought it would be an interesting story but i was proven wrong. There is no developemnt of the characters in anyway. The story is pretty much im here now so bend to my knee. The whole Flaxan thing while is practical an a very good idea it does not allow for amy growth or for anything interesting to happen. He becomes the ruler like its nothing. I understand he is extremely OP but its so basic an unoriginal. There are some funny moments an even moments i enjoy but it is so heavily outweighed by the other boring writing. I just personally expected more of a story and less of a since im here i win. I hope the author continues writing for people who like it but i am personally out
i loved EVERY BIT OF THE 14 chapters i read the mc is super opportunistic and i love it the interactions are believable and the passing is nice, i am loking forword to the DC arc
Yikes. Read the first few chapters expecting something good only to be met with the same generic villain protagonist concept and with the usual sociopathic tendencies and God complex
Reveal Spoiler Fantastic, I love the personality of the MC, I thought he would be the typical moralistic prince... but I was surprised by the path he took. Keep it up.
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Perfect. I have been looking for a good invincible SI for so long! Loving it![img=recommend] [img=update]
There is one that has reliable updates somewhat it called invincible me. There is one that has reliable updates somewhat it called invincible me.
Reveal Spoiler Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!!Awsome give me more!
Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No need to read it if you have read his other stories if you haven't then you must read the one with the GROGAN on the front to become WOCK to his awesomeness
The story's great dude keep writing the bad**s slightly f***** in the head characters. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME. FOR ROME.