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Umm this novel ok I have so many complains in this novel first of all it's stupid it sucks and how can she find true love so sudden may the writer headed his or her head before writing this novel cause it makes no sense at all it's stupid but I will rate this novel just because am kind umm 2 out of 5 ok?😏👌am a girl and girls like me are really talented
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I see you've done those character panel thingies yet have not put actual pictures of said characters...at least put some of the MC and her wives no? Pretty please.
As someone who read this when it was only at 350 chapters before recently coming back to it: I really like it but after about chapter 400 ish it starts feeling extremely repetitive and AI generated. This sucks because it feels like the writing has taken a step back and it’s not like it’s the end of the world but it’s definitely something you’ll notice and start getting bothered by.
If you don't like polyamory in a story or harem, don't read this story, it totally ruined my experience of reading this novel, at least make it clear in the synopsis, it wasn't supposed to be the story of a Villain and her maid
I really hate webnovel in that most of the books here are terrible translated novels or very poorly written but occasionally you find a new gem and I really enjoy this novel, thanks for the lemons, keep up the great work author!
Just starting out and loving the character interactions and quickly adapting to her new family and life that she chose for herself. Even makes cleaning interesting! Like Happy Gilmore for golf
This is a VERY fantastic novel, ive been reading this when it used to have 30 or something chapters only, i dont remember but i think you should hire someone to do illustrations for you, every fantastic novel i know has done illustrations on some of its chapters. To be honest last time i read this was chapter 450 something and im going to get back to reading this soon.
(Vague spoilers from up to chapter 700) This is going to be super long, but it isn't really negative and should all be constructive, so buckle up lol. First and foremost, I love some of the fluff bits. I'd even go as far as to say it's one of this novel's strong points. But like you said, there are times where it just feels like nothing is moving forwards, and I think I know why. I think a part of the problem is the pacing. One of the reasons for that is that sometimes, this isn't really treated as only Kat's story. Rather this is Kat, Jahi, Anput and Leone's collective story. Switching to their perspective so often and needing to cover how they progress slows things down a bit because it's almost like you're writing 1 3/4's of a story. There are times when we have several chapters back to back that all take place in the same day just from everyone's pov. Now don't get me wrong, I don't think that's a problem. That's just an objective observation. In fact I'm glad you do it so it doesn't feel like they are just side characters instead of true romantic love interests. Their relationship wouldn't work as well as it does without the insight into them individually. That said, it does slow things down, especially when this story often goes at a pace of only a few days passing at a time. Sometimes even day to day. Basically, I just think there needs to be larger time skips every so often. These girls are supposed to live for hundreds if not thousands of years, so it's kind of wild that not a single one of them is even in the double digits yet. If I'm not mistaken it's only been like, what, three, maybe four months or so since Kat returned from her involuntary sight seeing trip? And yet that was almost 300 chapters ago soon. She left around 270 or so. Spent a few months, at most, away and returned 420. So about 150 chapters to cover a few months. Not too bad, until you consider several years passed before that event until they got to school. And that everything after that all takes place during the same year. I'm not sure an entire year has passed since they got to school and certainly not since they passed their tests. Going by logic at least, a year should have passed, but it doesn't really feel like it. It actually feels like more should have passed by, but the characters make it seem like less actually has. And that leads to my final point. I think you're both making them grow too fast while also trying to prevent them from doing that exact same thing. They're only 8 (at least Leone was confirmed to still be 8) and have only been training for, what, 3 to 4 years now? If I'm not completely remembering things wrong, Kat "woke up" when she was 5, right? So how come after only 3 years are they even remotely close to a knight's level? It just kind of undermines the power level of the entire world, ya know? I get they're all very special in their own ways. Once in a lifetime talents. But 3 years of training, even from the best teachers, really shouldn't have them where they are now. I just feel like that was from a combination of not wanting them to grow too quickly through huge passages of time, but also needing them to be that strong to even progress in the first place. So you're stuck in a place where they are making a lot of progress but no time is actually passing. A bit of a conundrum if you will. Now, I don't have too much in the way of solutions this far into the story but I would recommend just biting the bullet and giving the other characters levels or at least level approximations. Effective levels if you will. This is only because, as it is currently, it's really hard to judge how strong anyone is in this story. We know the peek with the empress, but we don't really know how far away that peek actually is. Kat is making progress but when you don't really have anything to visually compare that with, it feels like it might as well not even matter. When you have her effectively on a similar level to Jahi, then have Jahi constantly sparring with her mother, it just feels like they're already near the top. Even if logically we know how much her mother has to be holding back, without any actual indication, it's hard to place. In fact, due to Chodeva essentially being treated as a plaything by Lady Fenryas just like everyone else, it just makes it feel like they're around the same level. I would recommend giving her someone serious to fight that the girls can't help with to truly show the gap between them and more importantly, how far they all still have to grow. There's a reason most action novels have some kind of ranking system. Cultivation, adventurer ranks, knight ranks, mage tiers, levels, etc. In any case this ran a lot longer than I thought but I hope it helps.
I really like this book!! The yanfdere, it is quite rare to find this kind of book, esptecially yuri. HAHAHAHA. Thank you author for making this book! ^_^
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Desprecio con todo mi ser y toda mi alma a cualquier MC sumiso o sumisa .[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I vouch that at chpt 525, that this story is non stop action, Yuri fantasy growth action with fantastic story development. What's more there are constant updates (so much love from the author), and English compositing is great. I am not deciphering and thus allows me to enjoy the story plot. We have even started loving some characters so much, or particular story and chapters. It is a very nice community here. You will not be disappointed if you are here for some Yuri. You will not be disappointed if you are here for some Isekai action. You will not be disappointed if you are here for character building and not instant OP characters. It is well thought out, and develops nicely. One of my top 3 web novels, easily. awesome awesome awesome.
This story really moves away from the typical op isekai mc troupes. You can see the lead character actually learning things and having above average common sense sorely lacking in today's characters. The mc isn't anything special (powerwise) even being at the bottom of the heirachy among her own group.The lemons arent forced and the plot is really intriguing. Characters are flawed and they all have their own arcs to grow. Overall this story is a complete package.
I love the story of the mc trying to help the villaness to achieve in to greatness .
The fact that the story don't use a lot of jargons is already a plus, I mean how do you read a story full of 'elegant' words that you don't understand. That's the main thing I appreciate the most. Then, I would like to recommend Empire to Ashes by Sleeping With Sirens as it fits the story quite well, I heard the song was used(?) in GOT and coincidentally the Empire is related to Ash! It was nice seeing a Yuri with intricate work. It's very rare, yo good dude!
I got up to around chapter 20 before the number of action sentences starting with "ing" verbs got too grating to keep reading. After that, I jumped ahead just to see if it stuck around since the author said they started to take the story more seriously at some point, and it's STILL an issue of most sentences that are used for describing someone taking an action. The story COULD be fine, but I will never know because... it's just really, REALLY annoying to read.
Somsthing that irked me was she has a system and is still so weak compared to others her age with the stat points gained she should be stronger and hide or strength while acting like a maid the system feels useless
Great book . ... Please ... PLEASE make Kat grow dig Bick . .I don't care where she gets it but I rlly want her to top Leone or Anput I beg of you author. .. .I CAN NOT REST WITHOUT IT. Any ways keep up the good work
I'm happy to find that story. I'm curently in 168 chapter and i must say it is relly good:D. I give 5 stars.................................
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I absolutely love this novel thank you so so so much for writing it I know this big ask but could you make a discord server.
Every chapter is a barrel of laughs. My only critique is how quickly things escalate between the main character and her master. Then again that could be part of this novels charm.
Words, love those. Simply put; I. Am. Speechless. For the most part! The story is well written, love the writing style, and the characters are very interesting! I love the dynamics and how the author slowly builds up to some plot points. In the beginning, the story is slow, but not filled with useless blabber. The author takes their time easing you into the world, which while it is described pretty vaguely (as of C105) I'll say it has a few interesting concepts. The magic system is just AMAZING! I saw a review stating it was boring, and honestly(not to throw shade), I completely disagree. It is well thought out, unique and has a very interesting premise to it. Overall, it is a breath of fresh air. Now I don't typically indulge in harem novels, and I still haven't because this is a semi-harem novel (or was it a lite-harem? Forgot what the author dubbed it lol) There are only four main lovers, and the mc isn't technically the leader of this pseudo harem, that is also a breath of fresh air. Then there is a small detail, well not so small detail mentioned in one of the earlier chapters, one that makes this novel a bit more unique on web-novel, I won't say what it is(for the author I'll admit it involves humans), and it doesn't really affect the story much, but it's still dope. Okay... so I wasn't speechless, right. Am I missing anything? Oh yeah! Did I mention just how much of a breath of fresh air this novel is. I urge you to read it. It isn't for everyone, and there are minor grammar errors once in a blue moon, but yeah!
very good story with well written and developed characters with a quite good plot.
I super loveee where this story is headed, and I can definitely wait for the YURI to get a chance to know all of the characters better, it seems worth it. let's get it !!
Umm this novel ok I have so many complains in this novel first of all it's stupid it sucks and how can she find true love so sudden may the writer headed his or her head before writing this novel cause it makes no sense at all it's stupid but I will rate this novel just because am kind umm 2 out of 5 ok?😏👌am a girl and girls like me are really talented
Reveal Spoiler I see you've done those character panel thingies yet have not put actual pictures of said characters...at least put some of the MC and her wives no? Pretty please.
As someone who read this when it was only at 350 chapters before recently coming back to it: I really like it but after about chapter 400 ish it starts feeling extremely repetitive and AI generated. This sucks because it feels like the writing has taken a step back and it’s not like it’s the end of the world but it’s definitely something you’ll notice and start getting bothered by.
If you don't like polyamory in a story or harem, don't read this story, it totally ruined my experience of reading this novel, at least make it clear in the synopsis, it wasn't supposed to be the story of a Villain and her maid
I really hate webnovel in that most of the books here are terrible translated novels or very poorly written but occasionally you find a new gem and I really enjoy this novel, thanks for the lemons, keep up the great work author!
Just starting out and loving the character interactions and quickly adapting to her new family and life that she chose for herself. Even makes cleaning interesting! Like Happy Gilmore for golf
This is a VERY fantastic novel, ive been reading this when it used to have 30 or something chapters only, i dont remember but i think you should hire someone to do illustrations for you, every fantastic novel i know has done illustrations on some of its chapters. To be honest last time i read this was chapter 450 something and im going to get back to reading this soon.
(Vague spoilers from up to chapter 700) This is going to be super long, but it isn't really negative and should all be constructive, so buckle up lol. First and foremost, I love some of the fluff bits. I'd even go as far as to say it's one of this novel's strong points. But like you said, there are times where it just feels like nothing is moving forwards, and I think I know why. I think a part of the problem is the pacing. One of the reasons for that is that sometimes, this isn't really treated as only Kat's story. Rather this is Kat, Jahi, Anput and Leone's collective story. Switching to their perspective so often and needing to cover how they progress slows things down a bit because it's almost like you're writing 1 3/4's of a story. There are times when we have several chapters back to back that all take place in the same day just from everyone's pov. Now don't get me wrong, I don't think that's a problem. That's just an objective observation. In fact I'm glad you do it so it doesn't feel like they are just side characters instead of true romantic love interests. Their relationship wouldn't work as well as it does without the insight into them individually. That said, it does slow things down, especially when this story often goes at a pace of only a few days passing at a time. Sometimes even day to day. Basically, I just think there needs to be larger time skips every so often. These girls are supposed to live for hundreds if not thousands of years, so it's kind of wild that not a single one of them is even in the double digits yet. If I'm not mistaken it's only been like, what, three, maybe four months or so since Kat returned from her involuntary sight seeing trip? And yet that was almost 300 chapters ago soon. She left around 270 or so. Spent a few months, at most, away and returned 420. So about 150 chapters to cover a few months. Not too bad, until you consider several years passed before that event until they got to school. And that everything after that all takes place during the same year. I'm not sure an entire year has passed since they got to school and certainly not since they passed their tests. Going by logic at least, a year should have passed, but it doesn't really feel like it. It actually feels like more should have passed by, but the characters make it seem like less actually has. And that leads to my final point. I think you're both making them grow too fast while also trying to prevent them from doing that exact same thing. They're only 8 (at least Leone was confirmed to still be 8) and have only been training for, what, 3 to 4 years now? If I'm not completely remembering things wrong, Kat "woke up" when she was 5, right? So how come after only 3 years are they even remotely close to a knight's level? It just kind of undermines the power level of the entire world, ya know? I get they're all very special in their own ways. Once in a lifetime talents. But 3 years of training, even from the best teachers, really shouldn't have them where they are now. I just feel like that was from a combination of not wanting them to grow too quickly through huge passages of time, but also needing them to be that strong to even progress in the first place. So you're stuck in a place where they are making a lot of progress but no time is actually passing. A bit of a conundrum if you will. Now, I don't have too much in the way of solutions this far into the story but I would recommend just biting the bullet and giving the other characters levels or at least level approximations. Effective levels if you will. This is only because, as it is currently, it's really hard to judge how strong anyone is in this story. We know the peek with the empress, but we don't really know how far away that peek actually is. Kat is making progress but when you don't really have anything to visually compare that with, it feels like it might as well not even matter. When you have her effectively on a similar level to Jahi, then have Jahi constantly sparring with her mother, it just feels like they're already near the top. Even if logically we know how much her mother has to be holding back, without any actual indication, it's hard to place. In fact, due to Chodeva essentially being treated as a plaything by Lady Fenryas just like everyone else, it just makes it feel like they're around the same level. I would recommend giving her someone serious to fight that the girls can't help with to truly show the gap between them and more importantly, how far they all still have to grow. There's a reason most action novels have some kind of ranking system. Cultivation, adventurer ranks, knight ranks, mage tiers, levels, etc. In any case this ran a lot longer than I thought but I hope it helps.
I really like this book!! The yanfdere, it is quite rare to find this kind of book, esptecially yuri. HAHAHAHA. Thank you author for making this book! ^_^
Reveal Spoiler Desprecio con todo mi ser y toda mi alma a cualquier MC sumiso o sumisa .[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I vouch that at chpt 525, that this story is non stop action, Yuri fantasy growth action with fantastic story development. What's more there are constant updates (so much love from the author), and English compositing is great. I am not deciphering and thus allows me to enjoy the story plot. We have even started loving some characters so much, or particular story and chapters. It is a very nice community here. You will not be disappointed if you are here for some Yuri. You will not be disappointed if you are here for some Isekai action. You will not be disappointed if you are here for character building and not instant OP characters. It is well thought out, and develops nicely. One of my top 3 web novels, easily. awesome awesome awesome.
This story really moves away from the typical op isekai mc troupes. You can see the lead character actually learning things and having above average common sense sorely lacking in today's characters. The mc isn't anything special (powerwise) even being at the bottom of the heirachy among her own group.The lemons arent forced and the plot is really intriguing. Characters are flawed and they all have their own arcs to grow. Overall this story is a complete package.
I love the story of the mc trying to help the villaness to achieve in to greatness .
The fact that the story don't use a lot of jargons is already a plus, I mean how do you read a story full of 'elegant' words that you don't understand. That's the main thing I appreciate the most. Then, I would like to recommend Empire to Ashes by Sleeping With Sirens as it fits the story quite well, I heard the song was used(?) in GOT and coincidentally the Empire is related to Ash! It was nice seeing a Yuri with intricate work. It's very rare, yo good dude!
I got up to around chapter 20 before the number of action sentences starting with "ing" verbs got too grating to keep reading. After that, I jumped ahead just to see if it stuck around since the author said they started to take the story more seriously at some point, and it's STILL an issue of most sentences that are used for describing someone taking an action. The story COULD be fine, but I will never know because... it's just really, REALLY annoying to read.
Somsthing that irked me was she has a system and is still so weak compared to others her age with the stat points gained she should be stronger and hide or strength while acting like a maid the system feels useless
Great book . ... Please ... PLEASE make Kat grow dig Bick . .I don't care where she gets it but I rlly want her to top Leone or Anput I beg of you author. .. .I CAN NOT REST WITHOUT IT. Any ways keep up the good work
I'm happy to find that story. I'm curently in 168 chapter and i must say it is relly good:D. I give 5 stars.................................
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I absolutely love this novel thank you so so so much for writing it I know this big ask but could you make a discord server.
Every chapter is a barrel of laughs. My only critique is how quickly things escalate between the main character and her master. Then again that could be part of this novels charm.
Words, love those. Simply put; I. Am. Speechless. For the most part! The story is well written, love the writing style, and the characters are very interesting! I love the dynamics and how the author slowly builds up to some plot points. In the beginning, the story is slow, but not filled with useless blabber. The author takes their time easing you into the world, which while it is described pretty vaguely (as of C105) I'll say it has a few interesting concepts. The magic system is just AMAZING! I saw a review stating it was boring, and honestly(not to throw shade), I completely disagree. It is well thought out, unique and has a very interesting premise to it. Overall, it is a breath of fresh air. Now I don't typically indulge in harem novels, and I still haven't because this is a semi-harem novel (or was it a lite-harem? Forgot what the author dubbed it lol) There are only four main lovers, and the mc isn't technically the leader of this pseudo harem, that is also a breath of fresh air. Then there is a small detail, well not so small detail mentioned in one of the earlier chapters, one that makes this novel a bit more unique on web-novel, I won't say what it is(for the author I'll admit it involves humans), and it doesn't really affect the story much, but it's still dope. Okay... so I wasn't speechless, right. Am I missing anything? Oh yeah! Did I mention just how much of a breath of fresh air this novel is. I urge you to read it. It isn't for everyone, and there are minor grammar errors once in a blue moon, but yeah!
very good story with well written and developed characters with a quite good plot.
I super loveee where this story is headed, and I can definitely wait for the YURI to get a chance to know all of the characters better, it seems worth it. let's get it !!