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Frackshure

First, the story is amazing. It is based on a unique concept where the MC is sort of a side character, and I love it. This has fast become my favorite book I'm reading and I eagerly await each upload. The characters are well thought out and the way emotion is depicted among them is realistic. Many of them have realistic shortcomings, some that they realize and others that they don't. I highly recommend this book for anyone looking for a romance (poly not harem), adventure/action, and magical world all combined perfectly. Also, I personally have found plot armor to be almost nonexistent. The characters have actually explained growth and strengths/weaknesses, not just "Poof you're OP now." Anyway, go read it now, give all your fast passes and power stones and coins. You won't regret it. Note: There are very minor spelling/grammar errors, but none that detract from the story. Maybe 1 or 2 every other chapter. Otherwise, the book is pretty much perfect

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Raven_Master

just my opinion I really can't stand it sorry I tried at least bye

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GodKingHuruu

Everything is top tier, author didnt rush the story nor the development of characters, the world is a fantasy type filled with monsters and cute slimes, as of chapter 66, I have saw no flaws in this story, though I wasnt looking for any in particular. This story is also yuri, which already gets it a thums up from me, author also likes all my random comments which dosent make me happy AT ALL. Short review but really jus read the it.

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Maureen_Akansiaba

great story I love everything about it it's so unique šŸ˜ šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

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LumineSu

why are all your characters submissive? I like to be submissive, but I don't like the protagonist to be. I know it sounds like I'm contradicting myself, but that's my taste anyway, I just wanted to ask if you're going to play a domineering character someday? Thanks ## translated from google translate##

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Onlyuri
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I really love this story, the characters are all super well written and thought out. Even though hasn't been a main villain or anything like that I find myself very invested in the story. But most of all the way the relationships and harem are handled are next level. I love how so much time and effort is spent showing the depth of love between the two main characters, and also how Kat is treated as not just another harem member. The whole mc hiding power trope usually annoys me but how it's handled here actually makes sense cause she's not a protagonist she's a maid! Keep up the good work :)

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tatsuya277353

im tired of high and mighty protagonist that become unstavle uncontrollable becauseno one can stop them its not like i wont read any of it its just not my mood today thats why i discover this boook loove it

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QGara
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Well i am not good with review... but i liked your novels ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Ryughaa
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Going to be real here who ever likes yuri Is down bad by another level I donā€™t mind if itā€™s god tier novel but never have I ever went for a novel with yuri if itā€™s yuri I back up and make sure I never stumble upon the novel again sorry to say just not into it and the story dosnt make up for the yuri either I wasnā€™t digging the mc at all I think at max itā€™s a 4 but I canā€™t since I never really liked it

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zack_yang

This is an amazing story that has some of the best yuri romance I have read on this app.

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notA_mockingame47

Hello, i have a question before I start reading.. i read in a comment that the mother of the protagonist will suffer. Is it like something depressing/dark type of situation? i will read no matter the answer :)

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Panda_Stories

Write Quality: basic with no flare or anything original in it - 3 stars Story development: slow where it shouldn't be and fast-paced where more could be included - 2 stars Character design: plain and basic with everyone cut from the same card - 2 stars World background: Basic fantasy - 3 stars Personal opinion: led around by the nose from the start by a child, the main character doesn't show the emotional intelligence of an adult who has had dozens of physical relationships and instead acts like pre pubescent boy who has seen a naked body for the first time.

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Aria_Heart

this story is just all around top quality and I'm in love with it. the character development is amazing and cute. can't wait too read more. šŸ’–

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King_linley123

Great story, with an interesting plot and world building. Only thing I would comment on is making sure Kat STAYS NUMBER 1. Please donā€™t let the other 2 just barge in and stand on equal footing with her.

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LokeErBest

Well, at the start we are in the MCs POV. Yet the entire story feels like it isnā€™t based on the reincarnated MC. I mean who read this novel and wants to read about how her mother gets screwed a lot? Iā€™m dissatisfied and disappointed since even after 30 chapters sheā€™s young. The cherry on top has to be that itā€™s a harem, yet it isnt the MCs harem. This story has wasted potential in my opinion and feels like it isnt going anywhere. I also donā€™t the choices the author makes. So now after deciding to drop after 30 chapters ish, Iā€™m annoyed, sad and a little angry.

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david_cuenca

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BAM_AMVS

First of all i would like too mention that mc will be submissive to the fmc. One of my favorite yuri novels not only for the plot but also for the update stability and the interactions between the kat(mc) and jahi .,., this is novel is harem but at same time it's not as the author mentioned in chapter 25 that the jahi will marry two other women due to political resonons and the author as also mentioned that the hareme will not be more than 3 including kat and the one who own the harem will be jahi(not kat) and about the world background the author is slowly telling about the world thats all i have to say as of now i am in chap 25

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LazyReader_

Its a good story but im not really comfortable with harem on both sides usually i only see harem on oneside......................................

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Gozilo
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very good story , l love yuri and this one is good , a little sad to see a harem but l love so it's not a problem , thank for this story . ...

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Sako_6179

I see Yuri and I see potential yandere. Speak no more im in ;3................................................................................................................

2yr
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Reddragon34

Already loving this book!! Interesting concept and excited to see where this story takes us in the future!!! Cannot wait for more chapters!!

2yr
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Frackshure

First, the story is amazing. It is based on a unique concept where the MC is sort of a side character, and I love it. This has fast become my favorite book I'm reading and I eagerly await each upload. The characters are well thought out and the way emotion is depicted among them is realistic. Many of them have realistic shortcomings, some that they realize and others that they don't. I highly recommend this book for anyone looking for a romance (poly not harem), adventure/action, and magical world all combined perfectly. Also, I personally have found plot armor to be almost nonexistent. The characters have actually explained growth and strengths/weaknesses, not just "Poof you're OP now." Anyway, go read it now, give all your fast passes and power stones and coins. You won't regret it. Note: There are very minor spelling/grammar errors, but none that detract from the story. Maybe 1 or 2 every other chapter. Otherwise, the book is pretty much perfect

2yr
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Raven_Master

just my opinion I really can't stand it sorry I tried at least bye

2yr
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GodKingHuruu

Everything is top tier, author didnt rush the story nor the development of characters, the world is a fantasy type filled with monsters and cute slimes, as of chapter 66, I have saw no flaws in this story, though I wasnt looking for any in particular. This story is also yuri, which already gets it a thums up from me, author also likes all my random comments which dosent make me happy AT ALL. Short review but really jus read the it.

2yr
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Maureen_Akansiaba

great story I love everything about it it's so unique šŸ˜ šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

2yr
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LumineSu

why are all your characters submissive? I like to be submissive, but I don't like the protagonist to be. I know it sounds like I'm contradicting myself, but that's my taste anyway, I just wanted to ask if you're going to play a domineering character someday? Thanks ## translated from google translate##

2yr
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Onlyuri
LV 15 Badge

I really love this story, the characters are all super well written and thought out. Even though hasn't been a main villain or anything like that I find myself very invested in the story. But most of all the way the relationships and harem are handled are next level. I love how so much time and effort is spent showing the depth of love between the two main characters, and also how Kat is treated as not just another harem member. The whole mc hiding power trope usually annoys me but how it's handled here actually makes sense cause she's not a protagonist she's a maid! Keep up the good work :)

2yr
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tatsuya277353

im tired of high and mighty protagonist that become unstavle uncontrollable becauseno one can stop them its not like i wont read any of it its just not my mood today thats why i discover this boook loove it

2yr
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QGara
LV 3 Badge

Well i am not good with review... but i liked your novels ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
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Ryughaa
LV 14 Badge

Going to be real here who ever likes yuri Is down bad by another level I donā€™t mind if itā€™s god tier novel but never have I ever went for a novel with yuri if itā€™s yuri I back up and make sure I never stumble upon the novel again sorry to say just not into it and the story dosnt make up for the yuri either I wasnā€™t digging the mc at all I think at max itā€™s a 4 but I canā€™t since I never really liked it

2yr
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zack_yang

This is an amazing story that has some of the best yuri romance I have read on this app.

2yr
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notA_mockingame47

Hello, i have a question before I start reading.. i read in a comment that the mother of the protagonist will suffer. Is it like something depressing/dark type of situation? i will read no matter the answer :)

2yr
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Panda_Stories

Write Quality: basic with no flare or anything original in it - 3 stars Story development: slow where it shouldn't be and fast-paced where more could be included - 2 stars Character design: plain and basic with everyone cut from the same card - 2 stars World background: Basic fantasy - 3 stars Personal opinion: led around by the nose from the start by a child, the main character doesn't show the emotional intelligence of an adult who has had dozens of physical relationships and instead acts like pre pubescent boy who has seen a naked body for the first time.

2yr
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Aria_Heart

this story is just all around top quality and I'm in love with it. the character development is amazing and cute. can't wait too read more. šŸ’–

2yr
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King_linley123

Great story, with an interesting plot and world building. Only thing I would comment on is making sure Kat STAYS NUMBER 1. Please donā€™t let the other 2 just barge in and stand on equal footing with her.

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2yr
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LokeErBest

Well, at the start we are in the MCs POV. Yet the entire story feels like it isnā€™t based on the reincarnated MC. I mean who read this novel and wants to read about how her mother gets screwed a lot? Iā€™m dissatisfied and disappointed since even after 30 chapters sheā€™s young. The cherry on top has to be that itā€™s a harem, yet it isnt the MCs harem. This story has wasted potential in my opinion and feels like it isnt going anywhere. I also donā€™t the choices the author makes. So now after deciding to drop after 30 chapters ish, Iā€™m annoyed, sad and a little angry.

2yr
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david_cuenca

woo esto suena Ć©pico jejejej ,,, zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

2yr
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BAM_AMVS

First of all i would like too mention that mc will be submissive to the fmc. One of my favorite yuri novels not only for the plot but also for the update stability and the interactions between the kat(mc) and jahi .,., this is novel is harem but at same time it's not as the author mentioned in chapter 25 that the jahi will marry two other women due to political resonons and the author as also mentioned that the hareme will not be more than 3 including kat and the one who own the harem will be jahi(not kat) and about the world background the author is slowly telling about the world thats all i have to say as of now i am in chap 25

2yr
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LazyReader_

Its a good story but im not really comfortable with harem on both sides usually i only see harem on oneside......................................

2yr
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Gozilo
LV 12 Badge

very good story , l love yuri and this one is good , a little sad to see a harem but l love so it's not a problem , thank for this story . ...

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2yr
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Sako_6179

I see Yuri and I see potential yandere. Speak no more im in ;3................................................................................................................

2yr
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Reddragon34

Already loving this book!! Interesting concept and excited to see where this story takes us in the future!!! Cannot wait for more chapters!!

2yr
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