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please learn grammar English before trying to write a book in English god th8s novel just gives me a headache trying to read you can tell just by the synopsis
I would honestly more like it if yujiro hanma was the person Who got isekaid in that world. Like, I get he is a normal person in a completely different world but at least show some balls. Punch teeths out, brake noses with knees, ect.
Review at 55 chapters: Overall the story is great, MC is not overpowered and stick well to his beliefs. World is cool and it clearly gives capacity to bring many things. Author should Take Care about the repetition of scenario. Exemple : In every village/city that MC arrives, he get almost kidnapped. Ok he is man, but maybe After the 4th time he could dress to hide his gender. If I understood well, he is not branded with a mark so he has no owner. +++ He has powers and knowledge from and another World with advanced technology. His market value as a man is incommensurable in a World like that. It's a bit strange that the knights have not bought him clothes to hide his face and his body to protect him. So ok his gives us content, but having the same thing too much will make it boring after too many times. To end this review, there is a massive problem with the writing quality. Sometimes it just doesnt make sence, grammaticaly, or with some mistakes with the verb/preterit. You have a good story, good characters, good update, but you NEED to work on your writing. It can throw people out the story. If you manage to fixe that, your story will me a HUGE success. 😉😉😉😉
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This is an interesting though it needs improvements. The author has a nice idea he just needs guidance. Love to see how this goes.
So I think someone said it before but I’m going to repeat it. If you are reading this you need patience. Because the plot is good. Shout out to the author you should work harder.
Well from the chapters I’ve read this book have a nice plot I must say. But it needs work on its grammar. So I’ll say give it a try but be patient as you do.
storyline quite goods as well as world setting power level setting are not quite right kind of weird main question how the womens wins the main war main character is totally pathetic no deceiveness,, no boldness, no calm thinking ,he is just hot headed
the grammar is disgustingly bad. the story is somehow worse. i wouldn't mind if the grammar was just bad, but it has reached an extent where I as a reader, am forced to decipher the meaning every sentence. This is not reading, this is torture.
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it would be fine if there was just horrible grammar but even worse is that the story itself just sucks so bad it's unbelievable.......................
This is an interesting tale from this author. Should be fun to see where it goes. There are always small ways to improve any work, but over all this one is decent.
It could have been good but it's written like a middle school fan fiction by an author who slept through English classes. Either that or it's been through google translate. It doesn't seem to be translation though it's pretty strange. I can only assume the author is a teenager or child who understands how to spell but not how sentence struture works.
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The english is terrible. As a native english speaker I can say that with the utmost confidence. It's strange though. There are no spelling mistakes, but the actual sentences are mashed together like bundles of words out of order. So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping. I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. I am mad at the author for not releasing hundreds of chapters for me to read. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping. I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
The book has really bad grammar and the MC is extremely arrogant which gets him into bad scenarios .
When you read the book's title, it gave a Valkyrie feeling… lol Although I like to read about strong males, and I've never read about a man alone in a place full of women. It's kinda interesting feeling. Hope the ML can reach a great height surrounding by women. Go and conquer the world full of women… (Just kidding…) Keep going!!!
First off people forget not all of us professionals, but that can be remedied with learning along the way. I also like it when the MC has nice names so Chase alone is a plus for me. I would suggest shorter sentences which I am always told is better *advice from my proofreader* I notice a lot of times the reader might be confused because we don't see their emotion being read just their dialogue readout which is the most jarring part for me. My immersion isn't complete though. I hope the author takes more time to study other books and continue to grow with their work, but there is always time.
So far so good. There is quite a bit of swearing, but that's nothing to be surprised about. I just hope that the mc keeps his self-worth and doesn't start degrading himself to act according to what this worlds society expects of him.
Finding this type of book is rare and always interesting love it so far plus there is no harem if you were reading the story you know what I meant by that
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Nice read....i loved the pace of the novel...the chapters were a bit hard to read at times which made it tiring to read but still i was a nice read. Kudos dear author
please learn grammar English before trying to write a book in English god th8s novel just gives me a headache trying to read you can tell just by the synopsis
I would honestly more like it if yujiro hanma was the person Who got isekaid in that world. Like, I get he is a normal person in a completely different world but at least show some balls. Punch teeths out, brake noses with knees, ect.
Review at 55 chapters: Overall the story is great, MC is not overpowered and stick well to his beliefs. World is cool and it clearly gives capacity to bring many things. Author should Take Care about the repetition of scenario. Exemple : In every village/city that MC arrives, he get almost kidnapped. Ok he is man, but maybe After the 4th time he could dress to hide his gender. If I understood well, he is not branded with a mark so he has no owner. +++ He has powers and knowledge from and another World with advanced technology. His market value as a man is incommensurable in a World like that. It's a bit strange that the knights have not bought him clothes to hide his face and his body to protect him. So ok his gives us content, but having the same thing too much will make it boring after too many times. To end this review, there is a massive problem with the writing quality. Sometimes it just doesnt make sence, grammaticaly, or with some mistakes with the verb/preterit. You have a good story, good characters, good update, but you NEED to work on your writing. It can throw people out the story. If you manage to fixe that, your story will me a HUGE success. 😉😉😉😉
Reveal Spoiler This is an interesting though it needs improvements. The author has a nice idea he just needs guidance. Love to see how this goes.
So I think someone said it before but I’m going to repeat it. If you are reading this you need patience. Because the plot is good. Shout out to the author you should work harder.
Well from the chapters I’ve read this book have a nice plot I must say. But it needs work on its grammar. So I’ll say give it a try but be patient as you do.
storyline quite goods as well as world setting power level setting are not quite right kind of weird main question how the womens wins the main war main character is totally pathetic no deceiveness,, no boldness, no calm thinking ,he is just hot headed
the grammar is disgustingly bad. the story is somehow worse. i wouldn't mind if the grammar was just bad, but it has reached an extent where I as a reader, am forced to decipher the meaning every sentence. This is not reading, this is torture.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it would be fine if there was just horrible grammar but even worse is that the story itself just sucks so bad it's unbelievable.......................
This is an interesting tale from this author. Should be fun to see where it goes. There are always small ways to improve any work, but over all this one is decent.
It could have been good but it's written like a middle school fan fiction by an author who slept through English classes. Either that or it's been through google translate. It doesn't seem to be translation though it's pretty strange. I can only assume the author is a teenager or child who understands how to spell but not how sentence struture works.
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The english is terrible. As a native english speaker I can say that with the utmost confidence. It's strange though. There are no spelling mistakes, but the actual sentences are mashed together like bundles of words out of order. So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping. I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. I am mad at the author for not releasing hundreds of chapters for me to read. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping. I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
The book has really bad grammar and the MC is extremely arrogant which gets him into bad scenarios .
When you read the book's title, it gave a Valkyrie feeling… lol Although I like to read about strong males, and I've never read about a man alone in a place full of women. It's kinda interesting feeling. Hope the ML can reach a great height surrounding by women. Go and conquer the world full of women… (Just kidding…) Keep going!!!
First off people forget not all of us professionals, but that can be remedied with learning along the way. I also like it when the MC has nice names so Chase alone is a plus for me. I would suggest shorter sentences which I am always told is better *advice from my proofreader* I notice a lot of times the reader might be confused because we don't see their emotion being read just their dialogue readout which is the most jarring part for me. My immersion isn't complete though. I hope the author takes more time to study other books and continue to grow with their work, but there is always time.
So far so good. There is quite a bit of swearing, but that's nothing to be surprised about. I just hope that the mc keeps his self-worth and doesn't start degrading himself to act according to what this worlds society expects of him.
Finding this type of book is rare and always interesting love it so far plus there is no harem if you were reading the story you know what I meant by that
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Nice read....i loved the pace of the novel...the chapters were a bit hard to read at times which made it tiring to read but still i was a nice read. Kudos dear author