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Plot holes and bad writing,
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It’s called bad writing 👍
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Kinda blocky dialogue
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Well this is depressing
Takeshita herself slowly blinks and takes almost five seconds to truly recognise her grandfather... Unfortunately, the damage she'd sustained in the attack had left her speech slurred, if she even managed to put together a comprehensible sentence... For all intents and purposes, the girl had been reduced to someone with a mental capacity half her age.
Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
Book&Literature · Niggross
Maybe cut out the spaces with the gang name, then you could keep the rest of the tattoo ?
I idly rub my arm which'd already completely healed as I make my way into the dojo hall. I had to admit the tattoo was nicely done, but the glaring ABB marks and labels left a bad taste in my mouth. The only good thing about it was the fact it completely covered up my Case 53 tattoo, though, my current monstrous form made it obvious enough already.
Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
Book&Literature · Niggross
Oh god dammǐt
Unfortunately, that's where my appreciation for the changes ended. Atop my head and at my coccyx were appendages that didn't belong to regular humans. Perky white cat ears that unconsciously twitched when I paid attention to them, as if nervous under my focus. They were fluffy and still somewhat damp from the shower, they even had balls of fluff around the interior, preventing moisture from entering the ear canal.
Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
Book&Literature · Niggross
Maybe he’s working with the organization
Hah
Typical girls. What a waste for a career.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14