8Reviews
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
Pretty good so far. I expect it to be pretty good for the foreseeable future too. one fifty words is too much for a person like me. so i am doing this
There are only 14 chapter at the time of this review, but I love reading every single of them. I love the interaction between characters, mc's monologue and pacing of the story. Good luck author and I hope you keep getting better in writing the story.
I think that this novel most definitely has potential. I really enjoy these types of novels so I have some hope for this one. My main critique is the same as a couple of other reviews, both the verb tense and the pov are incredibly inconsistent. This can make what would otherwise be an enjoyable chapter a slog to get through. Best of luck!
not bad, very passionate storytelling and nice world building, my biggest gripe with this novel is The change of point of view from third person to first person that happens constantly, as a reader it throws me off.
The chapter's length was way too long that's why i couldn't connect with the story. But the main plot is really good. I enjoyed it. So if you are a new reader then give it a try.
I can relate with the main character, especially with his world view. The premise is really interesting, in contrast to having transmigrated as the 'strongest character'. The change of point of view from third person to first person surprised me initially, but the story works better if told in first person. Hoping for more description of the new world, especially with how it differs from the real earth. Good job author, keep it up!
So far so good I like the fact transmigrator transmigrated to more unique character it show me a different kind transmigration story making newer better reading experience
[img=recommend] For all those new readers. Read couple of chapters before deciding if this novel is your cup of tea. Don't drop it from the initial chapters. If anyone want to ask me something you can use the comment section under this review
Pretty good so far. I expect it to be pretty good for the foreseeable future too. one fifty words is too much for a person like me. so i am doing this
There are only 14 chapter at the time of this review, but I love reading every single of them. I love the interaction between characters, mc's monologue and pacing of the story. Good luck author and I hope you keep getting better in writing the story.
I think that this novel most definitely has potential. I really enjoy these types of novels so I have some hope for this one. My main critique is the same as a couple of other reviews, both the verb tense and the pov are incredibly inconsistent. This can make what would otherwise be an enjoyable chapter a slog to get through. Best of luck!
not bad, very passionate storytelling and nice world building, my biggest gripe with this novel is The change of point of view from third person to first person that happens constantly, as a reader it throws me off.
The chapter's length was way too long that's why i couldn't connect with the story. But the main plot is really good. I enjoyed it. So if you are a new reader then give it a try.
I can relate with the main character, especially with his world view. The premise is really interesting, in contrast to having transmigrated as the 'strongest character'. The change of point of view from third person to first person surprised me initially, but the story works better if told in first person. Hoping for more description of the new world, especially with how it differs from the real earth. Good job author, keep it up!
So far so good I like the fact transmigrator transmigrated to more unique character it show me a different kind transmigration story making newer better reading experience
[img=recommend] For all those new readers. Read couple of chapters before deciding if this novel is your cup of tea. Don't drop it from the initial chapters. If anyone want to ask me something you can use the comment section under this review