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The story was good until author decided to to genderbend half the form and made the system alive instead of a robot
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Really love it. The MC, despite being selfish, is not evil/extremely chaotic and has his own morals. That's the kind of personality that I wish to find more often. Eeveelutions changing his mindset is also a nice bonus, some being more appreciated than others.
gambeon, thank you for being born and bringing this into the world. tis' a great story, and I heavily recommend it.
Sorry, but not my cup of tea, I really liked the first 20 chapters because of the nerf, I stopped reading, so I will evaluate by the first 20 chapters
According to Torotoro's blog it is possible for the Four Spirits to get pregnant.......................................................................
I liked it but i dropped it after chapter 19not to say the story is bad or anything but I'm just not that big of a fan of genderbending i didn't have a problem with Sylveon Or all the downgrades I just don't like genderbend aside from that what I've read so far was peak and i know it will continue to be. Props to the author for writing such a great storyit was perfect
I liked the entire story up to point he made the evolutions female when they were male so could the author please just copy and paste everything on another novel but leave the gender bent parts and anything about being gender bent except Sylveon gone?
Reveal Spoiler Mega Evolved Eevee - King of Eevee. normal type terrastization - crown. Maybe???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it is a great book and I would recommend good story l, background, characters, although it takes a while to up date it but it is worth it
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I'm so happy this story exists, finding MGQ stories is a pain so thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have to say that reading your fanfic from start to the end of the 39th chapter made me feel a emotion that I haven’t felt sense the end of Aphmau’s Mystreet series and that was a few years ago. I will be here to read your next chapter when you release it. Also, thank you for making a very interesting and injoying fanfic to read you have my thank you. Stay strong, healthy and most importantly of all stay safe.
solo puedo decir 10/10 reamente es un martirio esperar las actualzaciones ya que me encanta esta historia ----------------------------------------------------
Author should have put a gender bender tag because most of his forms are girls. 1/5 rating for this waste of time of a story. If you had the gender bender tag then I would not have bothered to read this story. Author does this at chapter 19. It was funny if it was just one of the forms but the author decided to change that to a bunch of them.
excellent story and hilarious characters there is a bit of problem with the update stability though
the plot development is not what you would expect from a world like that, when you think of that world the first thing that comes to mind is +18 content but this novel is not, everything changes with such a unique main character. the plot development is very interesting and moves away from what you would expect from this world even if it goes the same way as canon, the fact that the mc is a pokemon makes it more interesting and then comes the system that will either make you put the novel down or enjoy it more. the world and the system is both a reward and a punishment the author already said so it will have advantages and disadvantages like the change of genre that many don't like, personally I like that change after all it is a punishment too. regarding the chapter of the first update it's ok how he did it even though it bothers many, he asked for a change just because he doesn't like it, so the "being" decided to punish him, you have to remember that it's a reward and a punishment, they give you a second chance and they give you power, so much power to be one of the most powerful beings so you can't just ask for a change without a logical reason, like for example a mistake, so he ended up punished. (first time to make a review. translator)
Gender bender (cringe).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it is a great story, wish It hade a better updating stability. However... If the author so wishes... ideas are common for me. want a idea for a bonding of a spirit or a battle with its guardian monster, I got you buddy
book is good and is my favorite eevee fanfiction I would love if could make me feel better by making a bonus chapter where Kevin absolutely obliterates and kills a cancer monster girl because cancer is a monster of its own
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overall an amazing story the character has a very interesting personality and actually has a reason to have it instead of seeming super forced. it has a lot of laughs and the only thing I find bad with it is that not enough people have raged about chapter 19 because good God is it hilarious when they do
Wonderful fanfic🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊Keep up the good work it's great👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🦊🦊🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾
overall the book is goodish my main with the story from where I stopped is author writing an op mc then nerfing idm a weak to strong story but ones where the author just blatantly goes oh hes to strong I should have thought of that let's make up an excuse and nerf him back to weak cause he was steamrolling everyone just because original concept went from a morally grey person being giving a mix of boons and punishments now it's all leaning towards punishment if you take into account the mcs personality even his boon has been turned into a negative for the most part I mean a power that changes who you are and your gender almost everytime you use it I wouldnt consider a boon and considering all the other punishments he had for his personality makes the whole original concept voided so I've dropped it I dont like when it becomes super wishy washy to the authors whims I dont mean the author cant write what they want I just dont like when they keep changing thier minds or blunt force the changes with all the subtlety of a sledge hammer just not my cup of tea overall I will say the chapters are good writing quality is good just to many negatives for me to enjoy
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The story was good until author decided to to genderbend half the form and made the system alive instead of a robot
Reveal Spoiler Really love it. The MC, despite being selfish, is not evil/extremely chaotic and has his own morals. That's the kind of personality that I wish to find more often. Eeveelutions changing his mindset is also a nice bonus, some being more appreciated than others.
gambeon, thank you for being born and bringing this into the world. tis' a great story, and I heavily recommend it.
Sorry, but not my cup of tea, I really liked the first 20 chapters because of the nerf, I stopped reading, so I will evaluate by the first 20 chapters
According to Torotoro's blog it is possible for the Four Spirits to get pregnant.......................................................................
I liked it but i dropped it after chapter 19not to say the story is bad or anything but I'm just not that big of a fan of genderbending i didn't have a problem with Sylveon Or all the downgrades I just don't like genderbend aside from that what I've read so far was peak and i know it will continue to be. Props to the author for writing such a great storyit was perfect
I liked the entire story up to point he made the evolutions female when they were male so could the author please just copy and paste everything on another novel but leave the gender bent parts and anything about being gender bent except Sylveon gone?
Reveal Spoiler Mega Evolved Eevee - King of Eevee. normal type terrastization - crown. Maybe???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it is a great book and I would recommend good story l, background, characters, although it takes a while to up date it but it is worth it
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Reveal Spoiler I'm so happy this story exists, finding MGQ stories is a pain so thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have to say that reading your fanfic from start to the end of the 39th chapter made me feel a emotion that I haven’t felt sense the end of Aphmau’s Mystreet series and that was a few years ago. I will be here to read your next chapter when you release it. Also, thank you for making a very interesting and injoying fanfic to read you have my thank you. Stay strong, healthy and most importantly of all stay safe.
solo puedo decir 10/10 reamente es un martirio esperar las actualzaciones ya que me encanta esta historia ----------------------------------------------------
Author should have put a gender bender tag because most of his forms are girls. 1/5 rating for this waste of time of a story. If you had the gender bender tag then I would not have bothered to read this story. Author does this at chapter 19. It was funny if it was just one of the forms but the author decided to change that to a bunch of them.
excellent story and hilarious characters there is a bit of problem with the update stability though
the plot development is not what you would expect from a world like that, when you think of that world the first thing that comes to mind is +18 content but this novel is not, everything changes with such a unique main character. the plot development is very interesting and moves away from what you would expect from this world even if it goes the same way as canon, the fact that the mc is a pokemon makes it more interesting and then comes the system that will either make you put the novel down or enjoy it more. the world and the system is both a reward and a punishment the author already said so it will have advantages and disadvantages like the change of genre that many don't like, personally I like that change after all it is a punishment too. regarding the chapter of the first update it's ok how he did it even though it bothers many, he asked for a change just because he doesn't like it, so the "being" decided to punish him, you have to remember that it's a reward and a punishment, they give you a second chance and they give you power, so much power to be one of the most powerful beings so you can't just ask for a change without a logical reason, like for example a mistake, so he ended up punished. (first time to make a review. translator)
Gender bender (cringe).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it is a great story, wish It hade a better updating stability. However... If the author so wishes... ideas are common for me. want a idea for a bonding of a spirit or a battle with its guardian monster, I got you buddy
book is good and is my favorite eevee fanfiction I would love if could make me feel better by making a bonus chapter where Kevin absolutely obliterates and kills a cancer monster girl because cancer is a monster of its own
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
overall an amazing story the character has a very interesting personality and actually has a reason to have it instead of seeming super forced. it has a lot of laughs and the only thing I find bad with it is that not enough people have raged about chapter 19 because good God is it hilarious when they do
Wonderful fanfic🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾🐾🐾🦊🦊Keep up the good work it's great👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🦊🦊🐾🐾🦊🦊🦊🐾🐾
overall the book is goodish my main with the story from where I stopped is author writing an op mc then nerfing idm a weak to strong story but ones where the author just blatantly goes oh hes to strong I should have thought of that let's make up an excuse and nerf him back to weak cause he was steamrolling everyone just because original concept went from a morally grey person being giving a mix of boons and punishments now it's all leaning towards punishment if you take into account the mcs personality even his boon has been turned into a negative for the most part I mean a power that changes who you are and your gender almost everytime you use it I wouldnt consider a boon and considering all the other punishments he had for his personality makes the whole original concept voided so I've dropped it I dont like when it becomes super wishy washy to the authors whims I dont mean the author cant write what they want I just dont like when they keep changing thier minds or blunt force the changes with all the subtlety of a sledge hammer just not my cup of tea overall I will say the chapters are good writing quality is good just to many negatives for me to enjoy
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are you going to continue with the novel or did you lose motivation