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very interesting and very very Funny, the personality of the protagonist is amazing I liked it a lot, the other characters especially Alice I really like her and her interaction with the protagonist, I really hope for this novel,I highly recommend
It was good until the author genderbented his Mc all forms, when it was just once I didn’t mind but then nerfing and giving us an excuse of it being a punishment is too much, the excuse even sucked, not my taste maybe yours but whatever
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One of the most perfect stories I'd ever found in this app, each evolution brings a new personality to the protagonist, the only thing I didn't like was the time limit of the evolutions, it could be a little longer like, an hour at most?
One of the best stories I'd ever found in this app, the protagonist, and his evolutions having their personality is such a cool feature, can't wait to read more.
Good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So he's basically the avatar to them but instead of bringing peace he brings chaos to the world.....................................................................
Honestly I came into finding this with low expectations however this really has gone from something that might seem bad to something that’s a pretty good read as I honestly enjoyed reading through (currently at chapter 17) the chapters. Anyway moving on is hoping to see if this will continue or will be dropped as right now your on a roll! Also thank you for you hard work and preserving with conditions that may be un favorable in writing things like this. So really I thank you for your work. Also if your not planning on reading this here have a picture that sums it up.
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Dude I love this fic. This fanfiction has everything to make it entertaining. It has the right proportions of fun, action and a bit of drama without taking the seriousness of the world out of it. It also has Eevee, so what else is there to say, except that it's a masterpiece. Please author-san keep your update stable and keep us all entertained for a looooooong time with this fic. PS: Pls use the ghost Type Mon soon ( It would be the ideal way to get back on our all loved lamina for the fairy Mon joke)
Was a neat and interesting story until the author decided genderbending his main character would be a super cool idea, it's not to my tastes. There will probably be more than one female form for the male(lol?) main character besides the Sylveon one too. I feel like the warning in the summary isn't sufficient in saying the main character is genderbent, a tag wouldn't hurt either.
I can honestly say that this is probably the best written fic i have seen in a while especially since the issues I have with it are mainly opinion based. like i honestly dislike the fact that the mc is pretty much uncontested in the fic so far and I also think 18 eveelutions is a bit much.
Unlike my previous thought based on the title this fan fiction is very well made......................................................................
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Everything is written in a amazing way but the MC is one of the best characters I have read about. He is not some child that was experimented on and was "broken" or was he a talented person that found life "boring" and god forbid if he was teenager that never lost there virginity and only thinks with there PP. Over all the story has promise and will turn out great if you continue to do what you are doing.
nice concept. and its monster girl quest crossover with pokemon. i would love to see a lot of 'Hora Hora' in the future if you know what i mean.
solo 4 capítulos pero me gusta............................................................................................................................
overall the book is goodish my main with the story from where I stopped is author writing an op mc then nerfing idm a weak to strong story but ones where the author just blatantly goes oh hes to strong I should have thought of that let's make up an excuse and nerf him back to weak cause he was steamrolling everyone just because original concept went from a morally grey person being giving a mix of boons and punishments now it's all leaning towards punishment if you take into account the mcs personality even his boon has been turned into a negative for the most part I mean a power that changes who you are and your gender almost everytime you use it I wouldnt consider a boon and considering all the other punishments he had for his personality makes the whole original concept voided so I've dropped it I dont like when it becomes super wishy washy to the authors whims I dont mean the author cant write what they want I just dont like when they keep changing thier minds or blunt force the changes with all the subtlety of a sledge hammer just not my cup of tea overall I will say the chapters are good writing quality is good just to many negatives for me to enjoy
Reveal Spoiler very interesting and very very Funny, the personality of the protagonist is amazing I liked it a lot, the other characters especially Alice I really like her and her interaction with the protagonist, I really hope for this novel,I highly recommend
It was good until the author genderbented his Mc all forms, when it was just once I didn’t mind but then nerfing and giving us an excuse of it being a punishment is too much, the excuse even sucked, not my taste maybe yours but whatever
Reveal Spoiler One of the most perfect stories I'd ever found in this app, each evolution brings a new personality to the protagonist, the only thing I didn't like was the time limit of the evolutions, it could be a little longer like, an hour at most?
One of the best stories I'd ever found in this app, the protagonist, and his evolutions having their personality is such a cool feature, can't wait to read more.
Good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So he's basically the avatar to them but instead of bringing peace he brings chaos to the world.....................................................................
Honestly I came into finding this with low expectations however this really has gone from something that might seem bad to something that’s a pretty good read as I honestly enjoyed reading through (currently at chapter 17) the chapters. Anyway moving on is hoping to see if this will continue or will be dropped as right now your on a roll! Also thank you for you hard work and preserving with conditions that may be un favorable in writing things like this. So really I thank you for your work. Also if your not planning on reading this here have a picture that sums it up.
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Reveal Spoiler Dude I love this fic. This fanfiction has everything to make it entertaining. It has the right proportions of fun, action and a bit of drama without taking the seriousness of the world out of it. It also has Eevee, so what else is there to say, except that it's a masterpiece. Please author-san keep your update stable and keep us all entertained for a looooooong time with this fic. PS: Pls use the ghost Type Mon soon ( It would be the ideal way to get back on our all loved lamina for the fairy Mon joke)
Was a neat and interesting story until the author decided genderbending his main character would be a super cool idea, it's not to my tastes. There will probably be more than one female form for the male(lol?) main character besides the Sylveon one too. I feel like the warning in the summary isn't sufficient in saying the main character is genderbent, a tag wouldn't hurt either.
I can honestly say that this is probably the best written fic i have seen in a while especially since the issues I have with it are mainly opinion based. like i honestly dislike the fact that the mc is pretty much uncontested in the fic so far and I also think 18 eveelutions is a bit much.
Unlike my previous thought based on the title this fan fiction is very well made......................................................................
[изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать]
Reveal Spoiler Everything is written in a amazing way but the MC is one of the best characters I have read about. He is not some child that was experimented on and was "broken" or was he a talented person that found life "boring" and god forbid if he was teenager that never lost there virginity and only thinks with there PP. Over all the story has promise and will turn out great if you continue to do what you are doing.
nice concept. and its monster girl quest crossover with pokemon. i would love to see a lot of 'Hora Hora' in the future if you know what i mean.
solo 4 capítulos pero me gusta............................................................................................................................
overall the book is goodish my main with the story from where I stopped is author writing an op mc then nerfing idm a weak to strong story but ones where the author just blatantly goes oh hes to strong I should have thought of that let's make up an excuse and nerf him back to weak cause he was steamrolling everyone just because original concept went from a morally grey person being giving a mix of boons and punishments now it's all leaning towards punishment if you take into account the mcs personality even his boon has been turned into a negative for the most part I mean a power that changes who you are and your gender almost everytime you use it I wouldnt consider a boon and considering all the other punishments he had for his personality makes the whole original concept voided so I've dropped it I dont like when it becomes super wishy washy to the authors whims I dont mean the author cant write what they want I just dont like when they keep changing thier minds or blunt force the changes with all the subtlety of a sledge hammer just not my cup of tea overall I will say the chapters are good writing quality is good just to many negatives for me to enjoy
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