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This story is trash. The MC seems weak all the time, and all the family drama was stupid as hell. The MC losing to the hero after picking a fight was also ridiculous. The writing is bad—grammar, spelling, etc.—and the writing style is poor overall. It also seems like the MC became arrogant after regressing, and all the interactions feel off.
This is a really good novel would definitely recommend it to anyone willing to give it a try
The Mc is far too edgey he goes on for a hundred chapters saying he’s not a hero and not a villain then he goes on about how hard life is as a extra then he complains about how the story is changing when he is literally changing it, it’s so jarring
Its so interesting how the mc does his staff, he has already grown from his first life and there are less rooms for him to mess up. I love how there is always a funny part inbetween the fights[img=update]
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I thought it was interesting but.. the dialogues are bad... the level of english is also not good. the characters are one dimensional
paywall at chapter 20. Low quality for what i could read up to there. English is good but thats all. Just lost some time on this novel…………….
he got great system (not toxic kind) ✔️ he got transmigrator boon ✔️ he knows novel storyline from 1st life ✔️ he got regressor memory from 2nd life ✔️ he got master to teach him ✔️ he got nobility ✔️ but why MC made lots dumb, and stupid action, like being slave and beggar to life (on 2nd life). I seriously doubt MC ability to walk path humanly possible.
this is the best that I have read so far so please keep this updated... love your novel[img=recommend]
the quality is not that bad, but the development of the story as some issues, its like you wanting to watch john wick, with all the anger, intense feeling that comes with it and dind out that the john wick character is being played by mr bean. despite mr bean being a good charcter or actor it definitely does not suite a movie like john wick. that is what the author is trying to do, i got to chapter 29 and i am just forced to write a review, the fighging sequences are not good enough, what was said about some characters at the beginning of the chapters do not blend with them 10 or so chapters later. the mc seems to talk to himself or monologue but the author tends to use that to repeat the same thing by explaining again in a first person perspective. the more i read the more points drop for the review. if only author can reread what they wrote.
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Good Idea. However is let down by the author trying to get us to feel bad for the MC and to put him down. Going over 20 chapters with no real wins for the MC. Paid chapters start at 20 and there is no significant development to tell if you want to pay to continue. In the 20 chapters it still feels like what other books would do with 5. I think it'd a great idea to have already lived the novel. But there is no real power fantasy from having the foresight of the future which makes it feel awkwars
Before ch 85, the story was average. Although the theme has became common, still it was going okay. But then, out of the blue, a quest comes to mc, to act like a villain in front of jeanne. And that part was really stupid. I don't get why author took the story in such a direction?? Just to add some more misunderstandings etc? Even though all system story are forced developments, but this one is too much.
Another 999999 novel where the mc act weak to hide his power not for me but it's not bad try it 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
From beginning to finish this novel was way too cringy. Primarily because of the cliche over the top egotistical arrogant nobles, and the treacherous family, not to mention the broken English and the supposed man-child hypocrite MC trying to get revenge in every chapter. Anyway, I can go on till the end of time telling you how brain-dead this novel is but there are some good parts to this novel they are just overshadowed by garbage filler where the plot frustratingly goes nowhere. My point is if you like the cliche mentioned above read it if not simply don't waste your time on this novel.
Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Nothing new in world background.. Story should have been the plus point but the extremely bad english made it unbearable. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Good novel More Updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Pros: A fun piece of writing to read. Simple paragraphs and a fairly fast pace. Many good scenes and good characters. Cons: Sometimes confusing storyline. The writing quality is not that perfect.
Almost Everything is quite good, the only thing I can complain about is the cost of the chapter
Am really not a fan of this kind of genre but I must say, this one is an intriguing book. The way the author described it painted a good picture while I read it. Nice one, keep up the great work.
Honestly I can see potential for this story but there are glaring flaws from the chapters I have read up to so far, chapter 16 that is. The author keeps switching pronouns of genders, they would describing a character as a he but not even a few sentences later they'll call them a she. Plus there was one time the MC hit his maid for being disrespectful towards him, but straight away on the next chapter that maid is now a butler. I highly suggest the author to proofread through their chapters once or twice before uploading/publishing it on Webnovel.
Not a villain. Doesnt feel like he is an adult, more like a slightly apathetic teen. The plot of the novel he transmigrates into is nonsensical, having the hero betray humans at the end which has forced the mc into the 'inevitable saviour' role or face extinction. His belief after suffering through two lives is that he wont hurt others unless they hurt him first, great logic. 18 chapters in and theres 3 potential females, can already see where that goes, dont know why theres no harem tag. Grammar mistakes a few times each chapter.
Interesting so far . . . . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of the beginning, Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything. Yet, my flame never ends. My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works.
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This story is trash. The MC seems weak all the time, and all the family drama was stupid as hell. The MC losing to the hero after picking a fight was also ridiculous. The writing is bad—grammar, spelling, etc.—and the writing style is poor overall. It also seems like the MC became arrogant after regressing, and all the interactions feel off.
This is a really good novel would definitely recommend it to anyone willing to give it a try
The Mc is far too edgey he goes on for a hundred chapters saying he’s not a hero and not a villain then he goes on about how hard life is as a extra then he complains about how the story is changing when he is literally changing it, it’s so jarring
Its so interesting how the mc does his staff, he has already grown from his first life and there are less rooms for him to mess up. I love how there is always a funny part inbetween the fights[img=update]
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I thought it was interesting but.. the dialogues are bad... the level of english is also not good. the characters are one dimensional
paywall at chapter 20. Low quality for what i could read up to there. English is good but thats all. Just lost some time on this novel…………….
he got great system (not toxic kind) ✔️ he got transmigrator boon ✔️ he knows novel storyline from 1st life ✔️ he got regressor memory from 2nd life ✔️ he got master to teach him ✔️ he got nobility ✔️ but why MC made lots dumb, and stupid action, like being slave and beggar to life (on 2nd life). I seriously doubt MC ability to walk path humanly possible.
this is the best that I have read so far so please keep this updated... love your novel[img=recommend]
the quality is not that bad, but the development of the story as some issues, its like you wanting to watch john wick, with all the anger, intense feeling that comes with it and dind out that the john wick character is being played by mr bean. despite mr bean being a good charcter or actor it definitely does not suite a movie like john wick. that is what the author is trying to do, i got to chapter 29 and i am just forced to write a review, the fighging sequences are not good enough, what was said about some characters at the beginning of the chapters do not blend with them 10 or so chapters later. the mc seems to talk to himself or monologue but the author tends to use that to repeat the same thing by explaining again in a first person perspective. the more i read the more points drop for the review. if only author can reread what they wrote.
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Good Idea. However is let down by the author trying to get us to feel bad for the MC and to put him down. Going over 20 chapters with no real wins for the MC. Paid chapters start at 20 and there is no significant development to tell if you want to pay to continue. In the 20 chapters it still feels like what other books would do with 5. I think it'd a great idea to have already lived the novel. But there is no real power fantasy from having the foresight of the future which makes it feel awkwars
Before ch 85, the story was average. Although the theme has became common, still it was going okay. But then, out of the blue, a quest comes to mc, to act like a villain in front of jeanne. And that part was really stupid. I don't get why author took the story in such a direction?? Just to add some more misunderstandings etc? Even though all system story are forced developments, but this one is too much.
Another 999999 novel where the mc act weak to hide his power not for me but it's not bad try it 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
From beginning to finish this novel was way too cringy. Primarily because of the cliche over the top egotistical arrogant nobles, and the treacherous family, not to mention the broken English and the supposed man-child hypocrite MC trying to get revenge in every chapter. Anyway, I can go on till the end of time telling you how brain-dead this novel is but there are some good parts to this novel they are just overshadowed by garbage filler where the plot frustratingly goes nowhere. My point is if you like the cliche mentioned above read it if not simply don't waste your time on this novel.
Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Nothing new in world background.. Story should have been the plus point but the extremely bad english made it unbearable. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Good novel More Updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Pros: A fun piece of writing to read. Simple paragraphs and a fairly fast pace. Many good scenes and good characters. Cons: Sometimes confusing storyline. The writing quality is not that perfect.
Almost Everything is quite good, the only thing I can complain about is the cost of the chapter
Am really not a fan of this kind of genre but I must say, this one is an intriguing book. The way the author described it painted a good picture while I read it. Nice one, keep up the great work.
Honestly I can see potential for this story but there are glaring flaws from the chapters I have read up to so far, chapter 16 that is. The author keeps switching pronouns of genders, they would describing a character as a he but not even a few sentences later they'll call them a she. Plus there was one time the MC hit his maid for being disrespectful towards him, but straight away on the next chapter that maid is now a butler. I highly suggest the author to proofread through their chapters once or twice before uploading/publishing it on Webnovel.
Not a villain. Doesnt feel like he is an adult, more like a slightly apathetic teen. The plot of the novel he transmigrates into is nonsensical, having the hero betray humans at the end which has forced the mc into the 'inevitable saviour' role or face extinction. His belief after suffering through two lives is that he wont hurt others unless they hurt him first, great logic. 18 chapters in and theres 3 potential females, can already see where that goes, dont know why theres no harem tag. Grammar mistakes a few times each chapter.
Interesting so far . . . . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of the beginning, Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything. Yet, my flame never ends. My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works.
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