I'm Unbeatable After I Have Full Defense

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Iamaniceperson

Basically a rip off version of Bofuri or I don’t want to get hurt so I’ll max out my defense it’s like it but worse all the things that made Bofuri good this novel can said to arguably not have them your honestly better off just watching or reading Bofuri instead

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Wopeh

I read the first twenty. It is okay. Would read more. Currently would not pay to read more. Might be good, might be a shield girl clone. Need more chapters to decide.

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mooseinatree

i took the plunge for everyone who is curious about this novel as of now(chap 86) i would like to say the story is aight its as most people have said like the shield girl one but a little less cringe but with more chinese influence although it has an american background at some point in the 30's-40's it wasnt even a novel anymore it feels like a machine translation where one sentence its completely wrong and the next its the right grammar as the story is progressing the mc is slowly going from reg player who got supremely lucky to cliche arrogant chinese mc who looks down on everyone i also really hoped that there wouldnt be any "im rich so everyone caters to me and i can throw money around like it's nothing so everyone is my servant" kind of side villians but you do see it every few chapters at the beginning the author or translater (by how the novel is reading) was doing pretty well and keeping up with stats and skills but later has just totally given up on correcting mistakes and just copy pasteing mtls i would like to say that ill continue holding out and hoping that maybe it would get better but as of now id say theres no hope, u gotta pay for chapters 20 chapters early and theres no effort being put into the grammar so that people who have a hard time reading will have an even harder time id say just give up dont read it if ur curious go ahead its not like im your boss

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IDDanil

For game that claimed 100% realism, it's not realistic at all. To move you need agility, to wield weapon you need strength. To learn skill you need int. It's impossible for all stat to 0. You need minimum point for caracter to work. When you dump all points to def it's like you become statue. You have hard Rock skin but can't move

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Bored_into_sub

it's just a rip off of bofuri and they didn't try to hide it so I assumed it would at least be of some decent quality. it's not it's got everything bofuri had. except the qualities that made it good

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MiasmaLotus

Has a lot of broken English splashed around into the text. along with miss use of words. it has alot of the vibe of shield girl but it's slower which is nice.

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Tylan_Cline

The first like 5 chapters are understandable and decently well written and then at some point the writer/translater starts writing in nonsense, I was actually enjoying the novel too so its a shame that after ch 10 trying to read it gives me a stroke.

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michael_cox

even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Bad story. Mc chinese. The story is rpgo... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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killed_by_a_devil

I like it it’s just that I have to pay to read the rest 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞🥺🥺🥺🥺😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩

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The_G0at

there are a lot of mistakes i suggest you use grammarly i use it when i wright essay i think it would help you. it works on mobile to .....

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Slushy_Apollo

Basically a rip off version of Bofuri or I don't want to get hurt so I'll max out my defense it's like it but worse all the things that made Bofuri good this novel does not have them you’re honestly better off just watching or reading Bofuri instead

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Servitude07

Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!