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IsekaiMan1

the story is set out really well but from what I've read his strength increases to slow its system just seems overcomplicated making it tiring to read and this could've been an original bcs I don't see a point of using the fictional worlds with the way this is written

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Own
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All I can say is this novel is criminally underrated, I'm constantly blown away by how it's not as popular as it should be. You get constant trash on the leaderboard books yet this one's been left in the dust. It's a massive shame, I'll always read it anyway. Thanks for the hard work of getting it to over 400 chapters already!

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as123
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Well, I would like to say that the story is very good and I recommend reading it, but I would like to know how the pokemon part happens (pokemon is my weak point and I would not like to see a half/psycho there) even the author saying that the protagonist it's not a killing machine, at least for now is, after all, it's been a few days since I've read but some of his first thoughts there is, (why he couldn't release the power of the dementor and kill all around and take the souls , something like that ) in another series/anime I don't care, but pokemon...

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KALIISTHEBEST

It’s a good fanfic the world is well designed and detailed and the various worlds are blended together masterfully the characters are well portrayed as well it’s an enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone the only thing I have to complain about is the somewhat unenjoyable start as I found the first few chapters to be a bit of a slog to get through but still good nonetheless

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BanTheKitten

The world and character building of this novel is top tier, and the update rate is also great! sometimes there will be small mistakes but nothing that disrupts the reading. I would definitely recommend that you try the novel for yourself.

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Notio
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Real quick review nothing too professional but would like you to listen to it nonetheless. As of writing this review I have completed the 1st Volume which is 64 chapters long and that right there from what I've read is the introduction, now as not to waste time I do consider this as a gud read whether you like a more detailed novel/story or a villainous/darker MC.

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StrikeTheBooks

A very fleshed out novel, with an amazing world building and, to my surprise, another spin on multiversal travel, especially the take on the Pokemon world, which delighted me.Keep it up Author-san!

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Sorcein

I'll say what I don't like about this novel, and in stories like the Terror Infinity genre itself, it's the power system, in this story for me someone can turn off the system at any time and the MC becomes the common mortal. For example, we all know that in Harry Potter wizards can cast all kinds of magic at any time until they get tired, but what if the MC learns a spell? He can only use it in a specific situation, a limited number of times, with a long cooldown, most of the powers are not his, you don't see him studying magic, creating spells, doing rituals and etc, why not, the system takes the original skill, weakens and limits the use and amount of times used, the MC knows how to use the spell but does not know how to use the magic itself. Honestly, I've never read novels of this genre until the end, and I don't know if the MCs even pass their own powers without these cooldowns and numbers of uses per day, I'm almost sure that these limitations are on purpose, but I never manage to read until the end. I read this fanfic until the beginning of the Harry Potter arc, but I stopped because of this personal taste, but it is a very good fanfic and I highly recommend it so that this problem does not arise. (Google Translate)

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DemonOnUrShoulder

One of the best works Ive encountered on this app, the fight scenes and worl building are top notch, and the situations the mc lands in and how he overcomes them makes you forget youre reading a fanfic lol, truly great 5/5 do recommend

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MadLadMax

While I have read and loved many stories on this platform… let me just say this one is different, unique, and all around amazing. From the story and character development to careful planning and foreshadowing. Overall, easily one of my favorites I’ve found lately.

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xNoReadNoLifex

Very detailed and interesting story. I like it

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Arion_Sturmklinge

I think it would be a good idea to name the last volume. Still great book _______________________________________________________________________________

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parsaj

This is one of the best works I have read on this site. There isn't much to complain about here, mostly subjective and personal preferences which have no bearing on the objective quality of the novel. Firstly, grammar, work structure, paragraph placing, and writing quality itself is one of the best on this site and as a whole there are a few typos scattered around a hundred chapters, which is basically nothing. I haven't followed this fanfic from the start, but from what I can see, there are 360 chapters in 8 months, which is a pretty solid update ratio, especially considering the chapters' quality. Story development is original and unexpected. There are some twists there that aren't predictable. The protagonist has interesting abilities, and although very powerful, it isn't to an unreasonable extent and he doesn't steamroll everything he comes across. The start of it however is a little slow, and it takes a while to get into the meat of the story, but pretty solid nonetheless. Every character has their unique personality traits and quirks. The main character is a cold and power hungry individual, my personal favorite. Although his very logical and benefit-oriented view on his relationships with every character is looking to make a very lonely existence out of him at the peak of power he is seeking. However, I think the author has something planned for this, as well. World background is extremely unique, which is unexpected, considering most of the story happens in previously established fiction. The author manages to give these fictions an original flavor. All in all, I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who is a fan of works such as Reverend Insanity, Warlock of the Magus world, and Ultimate Evolution. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4.5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5

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Zero_69

This one is a gem! The writing quality is top-notch. The characters don't act out of their character ( like many characters in other novels). The MC has a troubled past so his personality isn't that of a 'good guy', which is understandable, and I like this kind of development. I just hope that his trust issues would be resolved in the future. Poor MC doesn't even have a living family.

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GRV
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One of the best I have read on webnovel. ............................................................................................................

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Under80

A nice quality story following the likes of Ultimate Evolution with its own unique features.

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Romeo_Ballardini

Consiglio vivamente a tutti di leggere questa novel. Molto ben pensata sia nel riuscire a equilibrare i poteri diversi dei vari mondi che nella storia del mondo che risulta misteriosa e riesce, nonostante non sia molto presente nei capitoli, a dare una concezione unica alla storia

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Sooooyaaaaa

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ShLight

this is awesome but please give me the reader role in discord dang it i already finished the Vol 2 like a week ago (my name is Deimos in discord btw)

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Zader
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Normally don't do reviews but here goes. This story's World building and Characters are unbelievably well done. If your a Infinity genre fan you'll love this. Now for the bad/not so great. The MC... He is one of those that you HATE but NOT because he isn't done well or something it's the complete opposite actually, but it's his choices that are TOTALLY in line with their character and are actually realistic. But still make me personally despise the MC and all that he is, while again STILL enjoying the story greatly. Now I just enjoy it MORE when the MC suffers because of his choices haha. Really give it a try and as long as your at least parcel semi decent person you'll understand what I mean. It's one of those you'd have to read to understand what I talking about. Keep up the good work Author. 👍😁

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MrIIIo

i really dont know what i have to say but this book is amazing, i regret scrolling past this but on the other side i got to have more chapters cus of that. the world building is amazing with the tower having so many secrets and every world the mc visits just goes completely different from canon. updates are daily and the quality of the chapters is amazing both grammar and the writing style. the characters are portrayed very well, both oc's and canon characters making it a lot more immersive. overall this is probably one of if not the best book on this app

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lord_of_all_realm_

A pretty solid novel, with a true villain that doesn't feel like a robot. The side character also have their own stories and depth. The power system is also interesting, it includes a lot of powers from different animes and movies and surprisingly the author was able to balance them without nerfing or making the MC overpowered. Overall it an excellent novel that's definitely worth reading.

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Calle13
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High iq mc and non plant armor reliant. Story plot is deep and logical. Always keeps you on edge. Lots of character progression from the mc.

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SPECTRALE

this is I think my first 5 stars from when this website started a few years, the first few chapters are a pain to read, but once you go past chapter 5 the story starts picking up and only gets better, I even once thought of paying p@treon and I swore never to pay it. in summary just up and I highly recommend

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ElPiwo

Awesome story. Definitely recommend. Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.

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vanthi_ramki

Haven't yet read the novel, but need more dark novels like this with good MCs So support +1 from me, and need more reviews to get this novel to meet the requirements

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pmoh9
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I generally don't write much reviews on Webnovel, but this is, hands down, one of the best works I've ever read. The world building feels so good at times that you may forget it's supposed to be a fanfic rather than an original novel. Also, the writing quality is really good, which I think is a disadvantage on this site as most can't seem to grasp the author's "sophisticated" way of writing. Final conclusion: 10/10 would recommend

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AngelDdy11111

I honestly like everything about this fan-fic and this is an idea that I’ve never really seen before so that’s a plus in my opinion. I hope that he goes to the bleach world soon and stays there for a while😁

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Cartheon

Honestly I've never been much of a fan of multi-verse stories. Mostly because they seem to just be lazy self-inserts with ridiculously OP main characters. I honestly was just going to skip over this story due to this bias but I'm happy I didn't. Well done author-san! This story is way too high quality for webnovel and I'm honestly shocked that I found it here. [img=recommend] I don't really have much more to say honestly your level of writing is far above mine so I can't really find any criticisms. If there would be a criticism it's that I'm sad I almost went right past this novel without trying it. Maybe try a new synopsis? I feel like the one that you have is a little short and doesn't really capture what makes this story such a thrilling ride! Anyways ilu thanks for writing this! :)

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PsiKo
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Happy I found this novel, and it follows the "infinity" genre like Terror infinity, Ultimate evolution etc. I personally love this genre and that automatically gets at least a 4 star from me. In addition, the MC is cool, but quite on the evil/apathetic side and doesn't seem to have any positive emotions to other people/beings (this may be off putting for some). I hope there is a reason for this down the road as he at least cares about his mom. The writing in some parts are a bit confusing but it got better over time.

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IsekaiMan1

the story is set out really well but from what I've read his strength increases to slow its system just seems overcomplicated making it tiring to read and this could've been an original bcs I don't see a point of using the fictional worlds with the way this is written

1yr
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Own
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All I can say is this novel is criminally underrated, I'm constantly blown away by how it's not as popular as it should be. You get constant trash on the leaderboard books yet this one's been left in the dust. It's a massive shame, I'll always read it anyway. Thanks for the hard work of getting it to over 400 chapters already!

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as123
LV 3 Badge

Well, I would like to say that the story is very good and I recommend reading it, but I would like to know how the pokemon part happens (pokemon is my weak point and I would not like to see a half/psycho there) even the author saying that the protagonist it's not a killing machine, at least for now is, after all, it's been a few days since I've read but some of his first thoughts there is, (why he couldn't release the power of the dementor and kill all around and take the souls , something like that ) in another series/anime I don't care, but pokemon...

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KALIISTHEBEST

It’s a good fanfic the world is well designed and detailed and the various worlds are blended together masterfully the characters are well portrayed as well it’s an enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone the only thing I have to complain about is the somewhat unenjoyable start as I found the first few chapters to be a bit of a slog to get through but still good nonetheless

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BanTheKitten

The world and character building of this novel is top tier, and the update rate is also great! sometimes there will be small mistakes but nothing that disrupts the reading. I would definitely recommend that you try the novel for yourself.

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Notio
LV 4 Badge

Real quick review nothing too professional but would like you to listen to it nonetheless. As of writing this review I have completed the 1st Volume which is 64 chapters long and that right there from what I've read is the introduction, now as not to waste time I do consider this as a gud read whether you like a more detailed novel/story or a villainous/darker MC.

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StrikeTheBooks

A very fleshed out novel, with an amazing world building and, to my surprise, another spin on multiversal travel, especially the take on the Pokemon world, which delighted me.Keep it up Author-san!

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Sorcein

I'll say what I don't like about this novel, and in stories like the Terror Infinity genre itself, it's the power system, in this story for me someone can turn off the system at any time and the MC becomes the common mortal. For example, we all know that in Harry Potter wizards can cast all kinds of magic at any time until they get tired, but what if the MC learns a spell? He can only use it in a specific situation, a limited number of times, with a long cooldown, most of the powers are not his, you don't see him studying magic, creating spells, doing rituals and etc, why not, the system takes the original skill, weakens and limits the use and amount of times used, the MC knows how to use the spell but does not know how to use the magic itself. Honestly, I've never read novels of this genre until the end, and I don't know if the MCs even pass their own powers without these cooldowns and numbers of uses per day, I'm almost sure that these limitations are on purpose, but I never manage to read until the end. I read this fanfic until the beginning of the Harry Potter arc, but I stopped because of this personal taste, but it is a very good fanfic and I highly recommend it so that this problem does not arise. (Google Translate)

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DemonOnUrShoulder

One of the best works Ive encountered on this app, the fight scenes and worl building are top notch, and the situations the mc lands in and how he overcomes them makes you forget youre reading a fanfic lol, truly great 5/5 do recommend

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MadLadMax

While I have read and loved many stories on this platform… let me just say this one is different, unique, and all around amazing. From the story and character development to careful planning and foreshadowing. Overall, easily one of my favorites I’ve found lately.

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xNoReadNoLifex

Very detailed and interesting story. I like it

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Arion_Sturmklinge

I think it would be a good idea to name the last volume. Still great book _______________________________________________________________________________

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parsaj

This is one of the best works I have read on this site. There isn't much to complain about here, mostly subjective and personal preferences which have no bearing on the objective quality of the novel. Firstly, grammar, work structure, paragraph placing, and writing quality itself is one of the best on this site and as a whole there are a few typos scattered around a hundred chapters, which is basically nothing. I haven't followed this fanfic from the start, but from what I can see, there are 360 chapters in 8 months, which is a pretty solid update ratio, especially considering the chapters' quality. Story development is original and unexpected. There are some twists there that aren't predictable. The protagonist has interesting abilities, and although very powerful, it isn't to an unreasonable extent and he doesn't steamroll everything he comes across. The start of it however is a little slow, and it takes a while to get into the meat of the story, but pretty solid nonetheless. Every character has their unique personality traits and quirks. The main character is a cold and power hungry individual, my personal favorite. Although his very logical and benefit-oriented view on his relationships with every character is looking to make a very lonely existence out of him at the peak of power he is seeking. However, I think the author has something planned for this, as well. World background is extremely unique, which is unexpected, considering most of the story happens in previously established fiction. The author manages to give these fictions an original flavor. All in all, I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who is a fan of works such as Reverend Insanity, Warlock of the Magus world, and Ultimate Evolution. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4.5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5

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Zero_69

This one is a gem! The writing quality is top-notch. The characters don't act out of their character ( like many characters in other novels). The MC has a troubled past so his personality isn't that of a 'good guy', which is understandable, and I like this kind of development. I just hope that his trust issues would be resolved in the future. Poor MC doesn't even have a living family.

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GRV
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One of the best I have read on webnovel. ............................................................................................................

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Under80

A nice quality story following the likes of Ultimate Evolution with its own unique features.

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Romeo_Ballardini

Consiglio vivamente a tutti di leggere questa novel. Molto ben pensata sia nel riuscire a equilibrare i poteri diversi dei vari mondi che nella storia del mondo che risulta misteriosa e riesce, nonostante non sia molto presente nei capitoli, a dare una concezione unica alla storia

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Sooooyaaaaa

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ShLight

this is awesome but please give me the reader role in discord dang it i already finished the Vol 2 like a week ago (my name is Deimos in discord btw)

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Zader
LV 3 Badge

Normally don't do reviews but here goes. This story's World building and Characters are unbelievably well done. If your a Infinity genre fan you'll love this. Now for the bad/not so great. The MC... He is one of those that you HATE but NOT because he isn't done well or something it's the complete opposite actually, but it's his choices that are TOTALLY in line with their character and are actually realistic. But still make me personally despise the MC and all that he is, while again STILL enjoying the story greatly. Now I just enjoy it MORE when the MC suffers because of his choices haha. Really give it a try and as long as your at least parcel semi decent person you'll understand what I mean. It's one of those you'd have to read to understand what I talking about. Keep up the good work Author. 👍😁

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MrIIIo

i really dont know what i have to say but this book is amazing, i regret scrolling past this but on the other side i got to have more chapters cus of that. the world building is amazing with the tower having so many secrets and every world the mc visits just goes completely different from canon. updates are daily and the quality of the chapters is amazing both grammar and the writing style. the characters are portrayed very well, both oc's and canon characters making it a lot more immersive. overall this is probably one of if not the best book on this app

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lord_of_all_realm_

A pretty solid novel, with a true villain that doesn't feel like a robot. The side character also have their own stories and depth. The power system is also interesting, it includes a lot of powers from different animes and movies and surprisingly the author was able to balance them without nerfing or making the MC overpowered. Overall it an excellent novel that's definitely worth reading.

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Calle13
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High iq mc and non plant armor reliant. Story plot is deep and logical. Always keeps you on edge. Lots of character progression from the mc.

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SPECTRALE

this is I think my first 5 stars from when this website started a few years, the first few chapters are a pain to read, but once you go past chapter 5 the story starts picking up and only gets better, I even once thought of paying p@treon and I swore never to pay it. in summary just up and I highly recommend

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ElPiwo

Awesome story. Definitely recommend. Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.Awesome story. Definitely recommend.

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vanthi_ramki

Haven't yet read the novel, but need more dark novels like this with good MCs So support +1 from me, and need more reviews to get this novel to meet the requirements

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pmoh9
LV 6 Badge

I generally don't write much reviews on Webnovel, but this is, hands down, one of the best works I've ever read. The world building feels so good at times that you may forget it's supposed to be a fanfic rather than an original novel. Also, the writing quality is really good, which I think is a disadvantage on this site as most can't seem to grasp the author's "sophisticated" way of writing. Final conclusion: 10/10 would recommend

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AngelDdy11111

I honestly like everything about this fan-fic and this is an idea that I’ve never really seen before so that’s a plus in my opinion. I hope that he goes to the bleach world soon and stays there for a while😁

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Cartheon

Honestly I've never been much of a fan of multi-verse stories. Mostly because they seem to just be lazy self-inserts with ridiculously OP main characters. I honestly was just going to skip over this story due to this bias but I'm happy I didn't. Well done author-san! This story is way too high quality for webnovel and I'm honestly shocked that I found it here. [img=recommend] I don't really have much more to say honestly your level of writing is far above mine so I can't really find any criticisms. If there would be a criticism it's that I'm sad I almost went right past this novel without trying it. Maybe try a new synopsis? I feel like the one that you have is a little short and doesn't really capture what makes this story such a thrilling ride! Anyways ilu thanks for writing this! :)

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PsiKo
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Happy I found this novel, and it follows the "infinity" genre like Terror infinity, Ultimate evolution etc. I personally love this genre and that automatically gets at least a 4 star from me. In addition, the MC is cool, but quite on the evil/apathetic side and doesn't seem to have any positive emotions to other people/beings (this may be off putting for some). I hope there is a reason for this down the road as he at least cares about his mom. The writing in some parts are a bit confusing but it got better over time.

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