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I love the story and I find it incredible but will there be a sequel? if so I'm looking forward to it please please please please please please please please please please
best percy jackson fanfic i ever read even if it doesn't update anymore i will wait and hope that they update this story because it's just so good
i Love this book and everything about it but i wish it would update again 😞😞😞
This story rocks it’ incredible Please continue it and put out more amazing chapters
Me gusta mucho la personalidad del mc y como interactua con el mundo a su aldedor, a la vez como esta ultima la desarrolla de una manera que es exquisita de leer, me gusto como se llevo a cabo interaccion que el mc tuvo con otros personajes, se siente organico, natural, ademas me gusto como llevaste a cabo el desarrollo del odio de luke hacia los dioses, su miedo, su impotencia, la soledad que sintio, su esperanza, su felicidad al encontrar a otros que lo entendieran, el cariño que desarrollo, la calides que dio y que le fue devuelta, hasta la ira que sintio al no poder proteger a lo unico que le dio luz y calides a su vida dolorosamente solitaria y vacia, solo para quedar con los restos fragmentados y retorcidos de lo que antes fue una estrella brillante, por nada mas que por la hipocresia y indiferencia de la fuente de sus penurias, dios.
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Plz dont drop this i beg you Plus this fanfic is Amazing!……………………………………………………………………..…………………………….………………….……………..…………..……………………………………………………….
The fiction is great but is a tragedy. If that's not what you're looking for, it ain't for you. Not recommended for those with a weak heart. Spoiler from here on: So far, we've watched the MC's mother fall into drug addiction, the MC constantly on the run from monsters and eventually (when she's like 7), she runs away to live on the streets. She's alone for a bit until she meets Annabeth and saves her. Then they stick together until they meet Thalia and Luke. They form their little family and for a while, despite the constant fighting, they're happy. Then when they are finally almost at camp half-blood, the MC's arms are burned off as a result of being cursed by Aphrodite. Then, on the border of the camp, she is forced to watch hellhounds rip Thalia to pieces. The MC spirals into insanity (one of the effects of the curse, coupled with the pain she endured) and now she's basically so broken, that... well. I don't know how to describe it but she's really really broken. That's where the story is currently. It's basically a story of heartbreak and insanity. Not recommended for those with a weak heart.
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Honestly I very much liked all that the author has done in this story. The character development and world building, fleshing out unique personalities of the characters such that it made me hooked with each and every one of them, especially the current main 4. The stroke of realism is what made the world building upgrade an entire tier. I quite like the mc and am hyped into what she would turn out to do. SO many possibilities, imagining them makes me drool despite my lack of creativity. Good luck with writing the novel Author-san, I'll enjoy with my popcorn anticipating how everything turns out. Did I mention I have a thing for deep psychological character development of tragic mc's? Oops, teehee 💙 (Haven't written lots of reviews, so excuse me)
It’s a good Percy Jackson fanfic with a more serious and darker focus. Its really enjoyable and id recommend those who are interested to give it a try. Really looking forward to how the book will progress ( made at CHAPTER 48 )
I Love this novel this is in my Opinion the best Percy Jackson FF and is in my Personal top 3 novel becaus the story is good and the Mc is not Stupidly Op also are the Charakter interactions not forced and overall well Writien my Only Problem with this Novel is that there is not enough and i want more 10/10 woud recomend
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So far what I have read has enchanted me. You have managed to write very realistic scenes that have made me sad at the same time as they have enchanted me. I apologize if my English is not very good since I am Spanish. You deserve five stars.
Love this story! A good good Percy Jackson fanfic! I cannot wait for more chapters I hope we get more very shortly looking forward to reading more of this story!!
I’m kinda confused on the syn of the fatal part of the Percy Jackson stories bc in my view it was like a very good interpretation of modern Greek so I really enjoyed it[img=faceslap]
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An amazing book but it’s giving me depression so I’m going to stop reading Praise lady Ranni
good so far but timeline-wise if you want to add the Magnus chase books then it takes place after the Percy Jackson books because in book one Magnus chase is 16 like his sister Annabeth chase (confirmed in the second book to be the actual one) and in the second book which is only a few months later she was talking about how a god descended and now they have to deal with some roman emperors which is obviously the trials of apollo books which takes place a while after the great prophecy so yeah don't add Magnus chase just yet and there cousins
I love the story very much. I never really read PJ story before even the book though I watch the 2 movie so I have a little bit of a grasp about how percy get into the camp and he's adventure but let's step that aside cause he's not the mc here and speaking of mc, she's awesome. I love her and her character and I think there will be a lot of development around her character so I love it. The updating stability is good. the author release 1-3 chapter a day, it really depend so... yeah! overall it's an amazing story. I'll totally recommend this and IT'S. A. YURI! this is the reason why I discover this story so ALL HAIL YURI!!! <3
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Why all Female MC gotta have yuri?????????????????????. Z Z Z Z Z Z Zmzmf D G E F Ed T F F G E G R T T T T T T T T T T T T Okay I just woke him down
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Honestly one of the best books I have ever read but the updating stability isn't great.
I love the story and I find it incredible but will there be a sequel? if so I'm looking forward to it please please please please please please please please please please
best percy jackson fanfic i ever read even if it doesn't update anymore i will wait and hope that they update this story because it's just so good
i Love this book and everything about it but i wish it would update again 😞😞😞
This story rocks it’ incredible Please continue it and put out more amazing chapters
Me gusta mucho la personalidad del mc y como interactua con el mundo a su aldedor, a la vez como esta ultima la desarrolla de una manera que es exquisita de leer, me gusto como se llevo a cabo interaccion que el mc tuvo con otros personajes, se siente organico, natural, ademas me gusto como llevaste a cabo el desarrollo del odio de luke hacia los dioses, su miedo, su impotencia, la soledad que sintio, su esperanza, su felicidad al encontrar a otros que lo entendieran, el cariño que desarrollo, la calides que dio y que le fue devuelta, hasta la ira que sintio al no poder proteger a lo unico que le dio luz y calides a su vida dolorosamente solitaria y vacia, solo para quedar con los restos fragmentados y retorcidos de lo que antes fue una estrella brillante, por nada mas que por la hipocresia y indiferencia de la fuente de sus penurias, dios.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Plz dont drop this i beg you Plus this fanfic is Amazing!……………………………………………………………………..…………………………….………………….……………..…………..……………………………………………………….
The fiction is great but is a tragedy. If that's not what you're looking for, it ain't for you. Not recommended for those with a weak heart. Spoiler from here on: So far, we've watched the MC's mother fall into drug addiction, the MC constantly on the run from monsters and eventually (when she's like 7), she runs away to live on the streets. She's alone for a bit until she meets Annabeth and saves her. Then they stick together until they meet Thalia and Luke. They form their little family and for a while, despite the constant fighting, they're happy. Then when they are finally almost at camp half-blood, the MC's arms are burned off as a result of being cursed by Aphrodite. Then, on the border of the camp, she is forced to watch hellhounds rip Thalia to pieces. The MC spirals into insanity (one of the effects of the curse, coupled with the pain she endured) and now she's basically so broken, that... well. I don't know how to describe it but she's really really broken. That's where the story is currently. It's basically a story of heartbreak and insanity. Not recommended for those with a weak heart.
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Honestly I very much liked all that the author has done in this story. The character development and world building, fleshing out unique personalities of the characters such that it made me hooked with each and every one of them, especially the current main 4. The stroke of realism is what made the world building upgrade an entire tier. I quite like the mc and am hyped into what she would turn out to do. SO many possibilities, imagining them makes me drool despite my lack of creativity. Good luck with writing the novel Author-san, I'll enjoy with my popcorn anticipating how everything turns out. Did I mention I have a thing for deep psychological character development of tragic mc's? Oops, teehee 💙 (Haven't written lots of reviews, so excuse me)
It’s a good Percy Jackson fanfic with a more serious and darker focus. Its really enjoyable and id recommend those who are interested to give it a try. Really looking forward to how the book will progress ( made at CHAPTER 48 )
I Love this novel this is in my Opinion the best Percy Jackson FF and is in my Personal top 3 novel becaus the story is good and the Mc is not Stupidly Op also are the Charakter interactions not forced and overall well Writien my Only Problem with this Novel is that there is not enough and i want more 10/10 woud recomend
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So far what I have read has enchanted me. You have managed to write very realistic scenes that have made me sad at the same time as they have enchanted me. I apologize if my English is not very good since I am Spanish. You deserve five stars.
Love this story! A good good Percy Jackson fanfic! I cannot wait for more chapters I hope we get more very shortly looking forward to reading more of this story!!
I’m kinda confused on the syn of the fatal part of the Percy Jackson stories bc in my view it was like a very good interpretation of modern Greek so I really enjoyed it[img=faceslap]
Reveal Spoiler An amazing book but it’s giving me depression so I’m going to stop reading Praise lady Ranni
good so far but timeline-wise if you want to add the Magnus chase books then it takes place after the Percy Jackson books because in book one Magnus chase is 16 like his sister Annabeth chase (confirmed in the second book to be the actual one) and in the second book which is only a few months later she was talking about how a god descended and now they have to deal with some roman emperors which is obviously the trials of apollo books which takes place a while after the great prophecy so yeah don't add Magnus chase just yet and there cousins
I love the story very much. I never really read PJ story before even the book though I watch the 2 movie so I have a little bit of a grasp about how percy get into the camp and he's adventure but let's step that aside cause he's not the mc here and speaking of mc, she's awesome. I love her and her character and I think there will be a lot of development around her character so I love it. The updating stability is good. the author release 1-3 chapter a day, it really depend so... yeah! overall it's an amazing story. I'll totally recommend this and IT'S. A. YURI! this is the reason why I discover this story so ALL HAIL YURI!!! <3
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Why all Female MC gotta have yuri?????????????????????. Z Z Z Z Z Z Zmzmf D G E F Ed T F F G E G R T T T T T T T T T T T T Okay I just woke him down
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Reveal Spoiler Bloody amazing first time I’ve seen a real amazing fem PJ fanfic with skill good job keep it up Yea yea yup yea yea I yea yea yup yup yea yea yup yea I agree yea yea yup yea
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Honestly one of the best books I have ever read but the updating stability isn't great.