Journey On Pokemon Island[Hiatus]

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Art_Alvarez_2613

it was a fresh perspective on the approach of how people would react to pokemon. The MC seem like will show the world how a person should interact with this creatures everyone is so afraid of.

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Radioactive_Noodle

i tought this was typical chinese Mtl novel story but its not the character isint samoane name feng or lu and theres no basically racist china talking about it being on top every chapter the story has an interesting new(sorta) concept and is like if pokemon got integrated into an au earth that didint have the anime and mangas.

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GonadSmasher08

WRITING QUALITY though there some grammar error here and there. some missing words. but overall it is quite good . . . STABILITY OF UPDATES not regularly . . . STORY DEVELOPMENT needs a lot of work. . battle scene needs more details . what happen why did the MC transmigrated . how come the researches chooses the most absurd way on how to study the new species that appears . what is the cause or how the island appear . . . CHARACTER DESIGN little to none . most action doesn't have any reason why it was done. . . . WORLD BACKGROUND too little details on world background . not even describing on how big is the island . how the environment is distributed . was there pokemon in the ocean . can the pokemon escape the island on their own . . . P.S. please make the pokemon fight without the "MASTER" commanding them. it goes against your portrayal that pokemon are "SMART" the "MASTER" commanding them makes the story lame . . Please don't give them "POKEBALL" giving them pokeball solidify the "MASTER-SLAVE" relationship . if you treat somebody as your friend, you must not have a control in their freedom. if you can restrict their freedom or even their life, no matter how strong your feeling of friendship for that someone, it is not a real friendship it is "MASTER-SLAVE" relationship

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Azathothgrim

a really different take on Pokemon fan fiction reminds me of Bear Grylls adventures and survival documentary but with Pokemon theme. looking forward for more chapters.

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Spotlight

...................So far this is one of better pokemon fanfics that I've read...... ....... ..... . ........ . ...........

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SilentWraithz

First thinking of the novel as a Chinese one, it left me very confuse about actions, reactions of people, and the naming of the Pokemon (like they didn't question or the chat are also one sided, it would be nice if they comment every now and then.) Upgrades regularly and story development is slow and steady. Background is decent and lacking in details. I don't believe there is anything wrong with the Character Design and seems ok to me. World background: Pokemon has always been a favorite game as a kid and wanted to try what people came up with, so I have a biased rating. There might be changes in the future, which I'm looking forward to.

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ImProcrastinating

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Ttnumber2

Overall this is one of the best pokemon fanfics i have read not only that it’s something different and worth wild to read so I recommend this

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zcxx

Finally something different. It's good reading something new like this every once in a while, specially because of how the author make the story so interesting. The system didnt take 80% of the chapter (like how other fic w/ a system does), have a touch of modern earth + scientists but didn't have conspiracy (i didnt see up to the latest chapter), a slice of life but still have a bit of adventure perfect for light reading. It also has the quality most chinese fanfic have the live stream effect/feature or whatever it is, but unlike a typical chinese fic the audience isnt as irritating.

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Hellcy

MC is not an idiot!!! Finally! Fanfic really has potential. The world doesn't know Pokemon and the protagonist takes advantage of that. He clearly knows how to survive in the wild and is intelligent. What more could I want?

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gille90

love this kind of story. pokemon fantic + streaming + exploration + new world order/ invasion. This reminds me of some of those Chinese/Korean cultivation novels where dungeons pop on Earth. Except the MC is not a murder hobo. Also haven't seen any 'Young Masters'... yet. I also hope that the author doesn't make the System a main point in the story. It's fine at the start of a story, but it gets really old and repetitive really fast. The best use of a system that I've seen is in 'Mech Touch' where the MC uses it religiously at the start. But at some point, he decided to not rely on it at even suspect it of using him for its own goals. I'm gonna go to Patreon now to buy the rest, you've earned my curiosity.

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Spicy_Lasangua

Awesome. A fresh new story with a crisp new idea. So far it's been a really good and satisfying read. Keep up the awesome work author. -----

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Ballad

An Incredibly Fun Idea and Concept Im loving it. It's very refreshing and enjoyable to read and just seeing MC cheating with Knowledge haha can't wait for Evolutions reaction.

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Meerkat

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laboonlaboon

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Skye12_

5 Star myself --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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oscar_moreno

story is good asking with the pacing. The interaction between the characters is good; nothing feels forced. I can't wait for the next chapter.