genosha, since when?
The Phoenix Force rampaged wildly, and wherever it passed, whether it was people or objects, they turned to dust. The entire island of Genosha began to shake uncontrollably.
Marvel: I can learn anything
Movies · Naruto11
i think you skip a chapter or 2. ace was not even fatally wounded on the last chapter
hmp! with this kind of attitude, many might actually not support you at all. not just for this work but for all your present and future work. threatening your reader with the blackmail of dropping this work when they are not that invested in this work might actually have a opposite reaction to the effect you intended to illicit
As something warm and white entered her mouth and slid down her throat, Elektra lost consciousness.
Marvel: Xenomorphs
Anime & Comics · GreekGreenGlass
using dress-up instead of requip makes it mess up. just use the original name, don't make it weird!
(Magic name: Requip: The Knight, but I will use dress-up magic to make it easier)
Fairy Tail: Heaven-Defying Talent
Anime & Comics · Ayan41x
He was the kind of person you'd find grumbling in the back row at a town meeting or trying to haggle over a cabbage. John was, for lack of a better term, a peasant.
Marvel: My Genius Is Almost Frightening!
Anime & Comics · Lucas_7159
D@mn!! that's it? where is the next chapter? hope he killed shanks first out of the 4 yonkos
why not come up with a new supernatural being in the remake? there are many out the that is worth the time. i suggest having 1 or 2 per country. since Merica is a melting pot of culture, they will not be out of place at all
So, I'm going to rewrite this, have actual hunts in the story, have him go through childhood, etc.
Reborn as Sam Winchester in Supernatural TV
TV · Samael_Son_of_Dawn
also this is a translation, the uploader has no control over this.
i think lacks too much information on many things. certain things are forced to happen or used just because, they don't even feel natural at all. this FF needs a lot or work to be considered good writing quality 3/5 the point of shift too suddenly without prior warning sometimes causing confusion when reading the story stability of update 5/5 it has daily updates story development 3/5 i feel like the story has no real goal at all. does he focus on science or politics to get power. understanding something doesn't equate you can control or even view it. just because he understands spatial-temporal law doesn't mean he can see the time flow. character design 2/5 the MC has no personality, is he cunning, lewd or what? world background 2/5 not enough description on what kind of earth the MC resides. General lacks too may information. 1. about the MC or the world where he lives 2. what is rule runes? 3. too little information on the system. i think it is better to name the system "automatic knowledge brain upload"
Marvel: I can learn anything
Movies · Naruto11