The squib who became Iron Lad... In DC

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IINeeRoII

I couldn't keep reading. The Mc is extremely disgusting 😑. 1.- The author does not take into account the background that he gives in the first chapters (he was a genius, betrayed by his family and girlfriend) 2.-extremely unpleasant internal monologues and a character with TDHA. 3.- If he is a reincarnated adult, why does he behave like a 6-year-old child? (I don't get it) The author gives as background an older man who has been through many experiences, so why bother giving him that background. 4.-The magical world doesn't make much sense, huge plot holes. 5.- Excessive trust with his new family (he was betrayed in his life, then why trust blindly again). One would think that the MC would be more careful in this new opportunity but no... Anyway, there are more reasons but I won't bother to write them. I must say that the writing quality is not bad and that the chapters come out periodically.

LV 4

damdidum

rather good but the author had no need for hp x dc crossover. Dc has multiple sources of power has added benefit of non interference when using magic with tech around. The crossover didn't make much sense since MC is a squib. Just make a somewhat rich guy with armor or normal person with magic and armor....

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc is stupid. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Hunter_101

O don't know I'd it's good or not I didn't read it but I had a question why DC x HP I mean I'd the mc had magic than yeah make sense but as a squib not so much. squibs are not liked in magic world so he can only live in the mundane so DC as normal human cause he has no magic. so why over complicate the story

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Universaldao101

great fanfic there are not many good dc fanfics and much less if they are crosses I hope you don't abandon it. Good luck🙂🙂🙂

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Sleepy_Hollow_1472

Its really good and original, love the MC ..............................................................................,..................

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Marvin_Besey

Great story if you are willing to let it develop. I was able to get through it quickly and had a great time doing so. Can't wait to see where you take this 😊

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Fenrirzero9999

Good good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Cj_Ali

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Goldenswiftreader

Iron lad in dcxhp world. What a concept! A world of power, mystery, and danger, even an evil organization that I'm pretty sure anyone can agree needs to be demolished. Am looking forward to where the author takes it.

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G2l

[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]google translator: muy buena novela ,ojalá actualizaras mas amenudo