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Write a reviewPlease contiune though you need to start ending loose ends like with the ancient ruins and the one doctor having an idea about a better genartor. Also can you make the chapters longer and not have like 3 povs just have a few mcs and leave the rest for narrator info dump
top 10 for me in writing quality this is great love the story love the pretext that there's more to Mass effect than just guns and war politics business world building that's all stuff I like the idea of advancing the alliance to the point that the other races have to look up to them I like the alliance is less prejudice view of the other prejudice is good at least for the moment love your book love your story love the heavy Halo influence! glad to see this book is alive can't wait to read new chapters ( big fan!)
A truely gifted author. Easily the best Mass Effect story I've ever read. The author is as good as, of not better, than all the authors that rank in the top five on this site. Whether its the characters, the world building, the plot or the progression everything is amazingly well done. The author could make a living off this story if not for one issue. The update speed. While the chapters are lengthy, the author only updates every two to three weeks. This keeps the story from getting the exposure that it deserves and will never be ranked where it ought to be, which is a shame. There will be so many people that will never read this novel as this story deserves.
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This story is absolutely awesome. If you are like me you will most likely get hooked by the very first chapter. If not it will probably take a few. P.S. Read this amazing book.
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I love this book. I am a big fan of mass effect and it's world as a whole. This novel is does so much for the games and honestly fleshes it out with success, this novel quite simply does the games, and its fans justice.
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Politics, Economics, Active updates, Amazing writing quality, and an author who knows their Mass Effect history/lore. An amazing story to say the least!
Amazing story so far, it's a breath of fresh air compared to other Mass effect stories. while I wish the author would update more, maybe giving the story more attention might encourage action by the author. Just read the story, you won't regret it.
Author you should add Tags and I love this story been a while since I have read a good mass effect stories that's not abandoned, keep it up, This a hidden gem Fanfic. "Its great"...
so far a really good fan fiction of the mass effect universe writing is solid and story is interesting. if you are a fan of mass effect i would recommend reading.
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This is probably the best mass effect fanfic out there by a long shot. I’m in love with the world and ideas. I’m also a sucker for politics and especially business fics. I read a lot especially fanfics and this site doesn’t have the best rep for quality but this fic is a masterpiece. And I can’t get enough. Love Goose
Great fanfic long chapters tho it's a shame they come out so rarely mc is good and likable and I like how you showed politics in here. Just great fanfic one of my favourites for sure
Great story!!!! Mc It's not Japanese or Chinese ( He is a businessman and politician, who does the impossible, which is to prepare all of humanity for the imminent war. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
im loving your take on mass effect and i read that our grapes are like poison to the turians because they arent dextro based. i please keep going your story is amazing the onky think i would love is more chapters without compromising on the quaoity of them
I'm someone who has never watch or played any mass effect. So the fact that this is good to me says that the book is just amazing in general. [img=update]
amazing story so far the world is the same everyone know mass effect but its a new prespective im loving so far the only thing i would like would be more chapters but the quality you are putting in each of them its amazing so far 13 chapters so im looking foward to the next chapters. and thank you for posting your story where we can read it
Not the quality i find on this website usually...and boy am i happy to find this. So much potential in the development of the characters and so much thought went into the storyline. Its f*****g inspiring. I hope to read more of this, if not, more stories of you make, one of the two or both Doesn't mater to me im a fan
Man, I've been searching for some Mass Effect/Halo fanfiction, and this one took the cake. It may not be one where the mc is fighting others through gun and steel or whatever sci-fi weapons you could imagine, this one is just a business management plus political intrigue, which is my cup of tea. I just dislike the little amount of chapters. Big props to the Author and keep up this awesome work.
Honestly I am loving this FF and I don't even follow mass effect lore but can still read and enjoy.I do hope author can post more...........
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This is really good, the character feels alive, the info dump doesn't feel forced, everything is good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally!! Finally!!!! A mass effect fan-fic and that too form where mc is a rich and powerful person. Can't wait to see kingdom building in mass effect.
First why why is there no more chapters as of writeing this it is only 11 please up date more and faster but don't tire yourself out. Second this is the fist book I have found that hits this spot of a mass effect novel that the mc is not just another gun or fighter. If anyone knows of more please tell me. Third the book is over all good the story goes at a good pace and there is nothing like huge jumps of tech alot of it does take years and the reduction on time are all there such as smart and inovative people, scrape from others, and good luck but not reapted or out there lv of luck. I hope that the mc does not go a xenophobic rote. Posiable ideas for future knowlage and other stuff shadow broker, can't think of how to spell the names working with qu to make hazmat suit, study medicen posable cure for them with nanite immune system, space city/ship city/ forttress, they are also known for being able the best at make do with scrapes and revurse engenering these could all be fields to work togather in, krogan ground combat training, teraforming experament for there home, and last are the power schools. That is just from mass effect you could take things from all forms of scfi and fantasy as the powers are highly unexplord but the basic of how they work leave a lot to work with.
Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!
Please contiune though you need to start ending loose ends like with the ancient ruins and the one doctor having an idea about a better genartor. Also can you make the chapters longer and not have like 3 povs just have a few mcs and leave the rest for narrator info dump
top 10 for me in writing quality this is great love the story love the pretext that there's more to Mass effect than just guns and war politics business world building that's all stuff I like the idea of advancing the alliance to the point that the other races have to look up to them I like the alliance is less prejudice view of the other prejudice is good at least for the moment love your book love your story love the heavy Halo influence! glad to see this book is alive can't wait to read new chapters ( big fan!)
A truely gifted author. Easily the best Mass Effect story I've ever read. The author is as good as, of not better, than all the authors that rank in the top five on this site. Whether its the characters, the world building, the plot or the progression everything is amazingly well done. The author could make a living off this story if not for one issue. The update speed. While the chapters are lengthy, the author only updates every two to three weeks. This keeps the story from getting the exposure that it deserves and will never be ranked where it ought to be, which is a shame. There will be so many people that will never read this novel as this story deserves.
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This story is absolutely awesome. If you are like me you will most likely get hooked by the very first chapter. If not it will probably take a few. P.S. Read this amazing book.
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I love this book. I am a big fan of mass effect and it's world as a whole. This novel is does so much for the games and honestly fleshes it out with success, this novel quite simply does the games, and its fans justice.
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Politics, Economics, Active updates, Amazing writing quality, and an author who knows their Mass Effect history/lore. An amazing story to say the least!
Amazing story so far, it's a breath of fresh air compared to other Mass effect stories. while I wish the author would update more, maybe giving the story more attention might encourage action by the author. Just read the story, you won't regret it.
Author you should add Tags and I love this story been a while since I have read a good mass effect stories that's not abandoned, keep it up, This a hidden gem Fanfic. "Its great"...
so far a really good fan fiction of the mass effect universe writing is solid and story is interesting. if you are a fan of mass effect i would recommend reading.
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This is probably the best mass effect fanfic out there by a long shot. I’m in love with the world and ideas. I’m also a sucker for politics and especially business fics. I read a lot especially fanfics and this site doesn’t have the best rep for quality but this fic is a masterpiece. And I can’t get enough. Love Goose
Great fanfic long chapters tho it's a shame they come out so rarely mc is good and likable and I like how you showed politics in here. Just great fanfic one of my favourites for sure
Great story!!!! Mc It's not Japanese or Chinese ( He is a businessman and politician, who does the impossible, which is to prepare all of humanity for the imminent war. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
im loving your take on mass effect and i read that our grapes are like poison to the turians because they arent dextro based. i please keep going your story is amazing the onky think i would love is more chapters without compromising on the quaoity of them
I'm someone who has never watch or played any mass effect. So the fact that this is good to me says that the book is just amazing in general. [img=update]
amazing story so far the world is the same everyone know mass effect but its a new prespective im loving so far the only thing i would like would be more chapters but the quality you are putting in each of them its amazing so far 13 chapters so im looking foward to the next chapters. and thank you for posting your story where we can read it
Not the quality i find on this website usually...and boy am i happy to find this. So much potential in the development of the characters and so much thought went into the storyline. Its f*****g inspiring. I hope to read more of this, if not, more stories of you make, one of the two or both Doesn't mater to me im a fan
Man, I've been searching for some Mass Effect/Halo fanfiction, and this one took the cake. It may not be one where the mc is fighting others through gun and steel or whatever sci-fi weapons you could imagine, this one is just a business management plus political intrigue, which is my cup of tea. I just dislike the little amount of chapters. Big props to the Author and keep up this awesome work.
Honestly I am loving this FF and I don't even follow mass effect lore but can still read and enjoy.I do hope author can post more...........
Good book ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is really good, the character feels alive, the info dump doesn't feel forced, everything is good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally!! Finally!!!! A mass effect fan-fic and that too form where mc is a rich and powerful person. Can't wait to see kingdom building in mass effect.
First why why is there no more chapters as of writeing this it is only 11 please up date more and faster but don't tire yourself out. Second this is the fist book I have found that hits this spot of a mass effect novel that the mc is not just another gun or fighter. If anyone knows of more please tell me. Third the book is over all good the story goes at a good pace and there is nothing like huge jumps of tech alot of it does take years and the reduction on time are all there such as smart and inovative people, scrape from others, and good luck but not reapted or out there lv of luck. I hope that the mc does not go a xenophobic rote. Posiable ideas for future knowlage and other stuff shadow broker, can't think of how to spell the names working with qu to make hazmat suit, study medicen posable cure for them with nanite immune system, space city/ship city/ forttress, they are also known for being able the best at make do with scrapes and revurse engenering these could all be fields to work togather in, krogan ground combat training, teraforming experament for there home, and last are the power schools. That is just from mass effect you could take things from all forms of scfi and fantasy as the powers are highly unexplord but the basic of how they work leave a lot to work with.
Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!