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White Online Blanco en línea Un hombre apuesto de cabello blanco garabateaba en un libro. En la tapa del libro aparecían las palabras "The Tales of White Online" y luego, dio vuelta la última página y comenzó a escribir los párrafos finales
Honestly surprised I haven't already written a review for this book. I've read it 3 times now and it's always as good as the last I read it, though I will say there are a few parts where things felt rushed especially the ending. Overall though the book is a fun read and I'll probably end up reading it again at a later date
This book was amazing! With all the twists and turns, and following Issac as he got stronger! I couldn’t stop reading! The writing was great with how everything was described! This is now my favorite book/series! Can’t wait to read more from the author!
Worst Noval dude, whole Noval is about praising mc how awesome he is but he is just childish idiot. it's like some 8 year old kid wrote it in classroom out of bordem. Don't waste your time it's super childish Noval ever
everything was good except the mc.He was tge biggest letdown of the whole novel. And reason is author wasn't able to portray what he wanted to show. Like from the start of the novel he was hailed as a genius and intelligent guy but throughout the whole novel only thing we saw us how stupid he is. The author even dumbed down the whole world's iq and eq to make him look like a genius yet that wasn't able to hide the flaw of his character. You have to think out of the box to properly write a intelligent character which unfortunately the author wasn't able to.
Absolutely amazing, the book was written beautifully and really hooked me in for the long haul
genius without an overpowered tag. It's genuinely frustrating. I don't understand how he gets beaten up in every turn even with his monster like talent.
Loved it from start to finish, one of the best in this genre with great characters and ideas throughout.
Well it has been 9 months since I read my first webnovel that being this book and I am now here for a reread and I would just like to say that as this book may be boring at times and have a mid storyline I think it is one of if not the best vrmmorpg webnovels on this platform and I belive that for all reading this it is a worthwhile read.
excellent book well wrote and a great story I enjoyed every minute of it may read again well worth it.
Little rushed at the end, with a few dropped story arcs. but overall excellent read!
this was great, alot of the fights were a little confusing, but overall I enjoyed the story
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Over all a good read. Did a good job keeping me engauged and the action flowing.
such a confusing storyline. plot points are added then dropped so fast I question what I'm reading. the pacing of the whole story is just weird. Sometimes being fast sometimes being incredibly slow.
i beg you bro please start working on "Ghost Rider in Twilight" again please i am begging you bro first time in a month i got intrested in a novel but got backstabed because it was last time uploaded 1 year ago please start working on it again please..........
LOVED IT. IDK WHAT THIS FEELING IS BUT I L-O-V-E-D IT. The way the author sends me some very good goosebumps every time is amazing
9.9/10. I enjoyed this story despite the ending leaving a lot of unanswered questions so it felt rushed. I also feel like the martial arts system novel has more potential, however, this story was written better from beginning to end. I highly recommend it as one of the best novels out there.
The ending was a bit fast-paced but otherwise the story is one of the best i have read, sigh... why did it end?..................................
Everything is fantastic at the start, great world. I really liked the fact that the blood of the people in there was blue instead of red. However, on the later chapters (100-200 for me), There are so many writing errors and grammatic issues.
Reveal Spoiler
After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review. I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000. Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood. Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those. Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those. Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters. Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.
White Online Blanco en línea Un hombre apuesto de cabello blanco garabateaba en un libro. En la tapa del libro aparecían las palabras "The Tales of White Online" y luego, dio vuelta la última página y comenzó a escribir los párrafos finales
Honestly surprised I haven't already written a review for this book. I've read it 3 times now and it's always as good as the last I read it, though I will say there are a few parts where things felt rushed especially the ending. Overall though the book is a fun read and I'll probably end up reading it again at a later date
This book was amazing! With all the twists and turns, and following Issac as he got stronger! I couldn’t stop reading! The writing was great with how everything was described! This is now my favorite book/series! Can’t wait to read more from the author!
Worst Noval dude, whole Noval is about praising mc how awesome he is but he is just childish idiot. it's like some 8 year old kid wrote it in classroom out of bordem. Don't waste your time it's super childish Noval ever
everything was good except the mc.He was tge biggest letdown of the whole novel. And reason is author wasn't able to portray what he wanted to show. Like from the start of the novel he was hailed as a genius and intelligent guy but throughout the whole novel only thing we saw us how stupid he is. The author even dumbed down the whole world's iq and eq to make him look like a genius yet that wasn't able to hide the flaw of his character. You have to think out of the box to properly write a intelligent character which unfortunately the author wasn't able to.
Absolutely amazing, the book was written beautifully and really hooked me in for the long haul
genius without an overpowered tag. It's genuinely frustrating. I don't understand how he gets beaten up in every turn even with his monster like talent.
Loved it from start to finish, one of the best in this genre with great characters and ideas throughout.
Well it has been 9 months since I read my first webnovel that being this book and I am now here for a reread and I would just like to say that as this book may be boring at times and have a mid storyline I think it is one of if not the best vrmmorpg webnovels on this platform and I belive that for all reading this it is a worthwhile read.
excellent book well wrote and a great story I enjoyed every minute of it may read again well worth it.
Little rushed at the end, with a few dropped story arcs. but overall excellent read!
this was great, alot of the fights were a little confusing, but overall I enjoyed the story
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Over all a good read. Did a good job keeping me engauged and the action flowing.
such a confusing storyline. plot points are added then dropped so fast I question what I'm reading. the pacing of the whole story is just weird. Sometimes being fast sometimes being incredibly slow.
i beg you bro please start working on "Ghost Rider in Twilight" again please i am begging you bro first time in a month i got intrested in a novel but got backstabed because it was last time uploaded 1 year ago please start working on it again please..........
LOVED IT. IDK WHAT THIS FEELING IS BUT I L-O-V-E-D IT. The way the author sends me some very good goosebumps every time is amazing
9.9/10. I enjoyed this story despite the ending leaving a lot of unanswered questions so it felt rushed. I also feel like the martial arts system novel has more potential, however, this story was written better from beginning to end. I highly recommend it as one of the best novels out there.
The ending was a bit fast-paced but otherwise the story is one of the best i have read, sigh... why did it end?..................................
Everything is fantastic at the start, great world. I really liked the fact that the blood of the people in there was blue instead of red. However, on the later chapters (100-200 for me), There are so many writing errors and grammatic issues.
Reveal Spoiler
After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review. I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000. Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood. Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those. Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those. Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters. Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.