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One of the best novels i have read, would recommend anyone who sees this to read it
writing quality:4/5 story development:2.5/5 character design:3/5 world background:2/5 enjoyability:4?/5 I'm enjoying this story but at the same time finding my patience waring thin. idk why. I just feel like actions are repeating themselves in similar but different ways, and all the lines that include somthing along the lines of "in the future, unknown to anyone, soon to be world breaking" ruin the fun of the unknown future. and as much as we keep pushing the mc is smart he seems rather dence and unintelligent when it's needed, and I am willing to accept its lack of world experience but at some point its hard to accept he hasn't learned anything from his life lessons, or close calls. and many things seem rushed in both story plot and in story game updates. where sure things stay "fresh" but then we just repeat somthing and call it new. and we get brought in on some rely coold things that make all the stuff the mc does seem like a side character rather then the MC of the novel. it's hard to judge fully at chapter 250 at this time. but if the next 50 can't change my mind I probably won't continue. (I'll update later if I do [I have up to chapter 300 unlocked so that why it's 50] if I don't well I'll just update it as dropped)
good story. loved the concept. would have loved to see sorcerer get his just desserts
Tags: yandere, romance, no hardem, comedy, Genius ML, vrmmorpg, 5stars. there's no need to check anything else. stop looking at this review and start reading.
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Brain dead mc bro where is the part where he is brilliantly smart i dont see it hes dense too bro
This story managed to keep me smiling all the way. The characters are great and the world unique, I just fee that the author could have gone a little deeper on some parts and a bit slower in the end. Thanks for the read!
I loved the story. It was great, but I hate the ending where he just relies on the power of others, and nerver truly gets his own power. with his power, the can be freely taken away at some b#### will and him left with nothing
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I really enjoyed this until the last few hundred chapters. It went downhill fast from there and the ending was lackluster and rushed. Disappointing after a very good start.
i must admit, the first 100 chs weren't all too bad but were similar to run of the mill vr mmo real-life etc novels. after that with the detailing of things like legacies especially of one so inconspicuous as White Death (who is/was a real person (look it up)), this isn't so much a review as an applause for the author to utilize such unknown celebrities in a way to design a story. there are some subtle issues such as in the story it said that Simo Hayha had a 10 shot gun that could be reloaded in 5 seconds. while the name of the gun (a Mosin Nagant M/28-30) was correct, the gun in question had a 5 round clip that wasn't all too easy to reload. i understand it's necessary for the story that a mythical weapon has to be good but it isn't really accurate. i love the use of uncommon "heroes" and await more
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This is an amazing book. It is very well written. It does have some spelling mistakes and some repeated paragraphs, but it is a very good read. Highly recommend.
Great book lots of action love the different mysteries. Character development is solid and the pace is perfect
An Enjoyable ride that will keep your rapt attention, and one I would recommend in finding an enjoyable read, although it isn’t perfect. I believe it was worth the time I gave it.
I am now engrossed with the story as i read it non-stop, and i can tell how you tell the description of the architects building and it's interior so well that i can easily imagine it. And i will have to say that i hope this story will have more views and even more people seeing it, as i can envision this novel either having a manga/webtoon comic adaptation, and even a anime/ movie adaptation. But all along, i will have to say is that this is one of the most interesting novel that i had ever read. Including the fact that the character is inspired ( i believe so) by the famous historical sniper, " the white death". Author Alekzi, i hope your story get more popular
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I love game like novels and I just found this gem. Hope it wouldn't disappoint and I am going in. I will give the proper review after reading it.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
please continue the martial arts system since you have finished this white online and the martial arts system novel seem more interesting ......
The story was great for the vast majority, while the ending was a bit rushed overall a great novel.
it's not a bad. My only complaint is how many loose ends there are and pacing.
How does this novel irritate me? MC is stupid and slow. He is hailed as a genius but does not use his skills in battle. An overrated novel. He doesn't level up after getting the Mythic Helmet, but is a waste of time. I don't understand why there are so many positive reviews. The novel is extremely long. for a drop of the plot, a whole sea of useless information.
The main problem I had with this story was the ending, it felt like the author was done/bored and it just ends instantly and very anticlimactic without much of a fight. (They throw a couple punches and boom it ends) and there is stuff that is never answered.
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This novel is amazing, it has great character development and the depth of detail that went into this novel is insane!! I highly recommend!!!
Are you going to continue the martial arts novel you stopped. If so when new chapters be released.
All in all is it a very good book. I would definitely like more from this author
I'm one of those readers that don't add reviews but man I just finished reading this beautiful work of art and highly recommend reading this novel and just taking in the breathtaking journey both the author(s) and characters went through 10/5❤️
One of the best novels i have read, would recommend anyone who sees this to read it
writing quality:4/5 story development:2.5/5 character design:3/5 world background:2/5 enjoyability:4?/5 I'm enjoying this story but at the same time finding my patience waring thin. idk why. I just feel like actions are repeating themselves in similar but different ways, and all the lines that include somthing along the lines of "in the future, unknown to anyone, soon to be world breaking" ruin the fun of the unknown future. and as much as we keep pushing the mc is smart he seems rather dence and unintelligent when it's needed, and I am willing to accept its lack of world experience but at some point its hard to accept he hasn't learned anything from his life lessons, or close calls. and many things seem rushed in both story plot and in story game updates. where sure things stay "fresh" but then we just repeat somthing and call it new. and we get brought in on some rely coold things that make all the stuff the mc does seem like a side character rather then the MC of the novel. it's hard to judge fully at chapter 250 at this time. but if the next 50 can't change my mind I probably won't continue. (I'll update later if I do [I have up to chapter 300 unlocked so that why it's 50] if I don't well I'll just update it as dropped)
good story. loved the concept. would have loved to see sorcerer get his just desserts
Tags: yandere, romance, no hardem, comedy, Genius ML, vrmmorpg, 5stars. there's no need to check anything else. stop looking at this review and start reading.
Good but not perfect wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Brain dead mc bro where is the part where he is brilliantly smart i dont see it hes dense too bro
This story managed to keep me smiling all the way. The characters are great and the world unique, I just fee that the author could have gone a little deeper on some parts and a bit slower in the end. Thanks for the read!
I loved the story. It was great, but I hate the ending where he just relies on the power of others, and nerver truly gets his own power. with his power, the can be freely taken away at some b#### will and him left with nothing
Reveal Spoiler I really enjoyed this until the last few hundred chapters. It went downhill fast from there and the ending was lackluster and rushed. Disappointing after a very good start.
i must admit, the first 100 chs weren't all too bad but were similar to run of the mill vr mmo real-life etc novels. after that with the detailing of things like legacies especially of one so inconspicuous as White Death (who is/was a real person (look it up)), this isn't so much a review as an applause for the author to utilize such unknown celebrities in a way to design a story. there are some subtle issues such as in the story it said that Simo Hayha had a 10 shot gun that could be reloaded in 5 seconds. while the name of the gun (a Mosin Nagant M/28-30) was correct, the gun in question had a 5 round clip that wasn't all too easy to reload. i understand it's necessary for the story that a mythical weapon has to be good but it isn't really accurate. i love the use of uncommon "heroes" and await more
Reveal Spoiler This is an amazing book. It is very well written. It does have some spelling mistakes and some repeated paragraphs, but it is a very good read. Highly recommend.
Great book lots of action love the different mysteries. Character development is solid and the pace is perfect
An Enjoyable ride that will keep your rapt attention, and one I would recommend in finding an enjoyable read, although it isn’t perfect. I believe it was worth the time I gave it.
I am now engrossed with the story as i read it non-stop, and i can tell how you tell the description of the architects building and it's interior so well that i can easily imagine it. And i will have to say that i hope this story will have more views and even more people seeing it, as i can envision this novel either having a manga/webtoon comic adaptation, and even a anime/ movie adaptation. But all along, i will have to say is that this is one of the most interesting novel that i had ever read. Including the fact that the character is inspired ( i believe so) by the famous historical sniper, " the white death". Author Alekzi, i hope your story get more popular
Reveal Spoiler I love game like novels and I just found this gem. Hope it wouldn't disappoint and I am going in. I will give the proper review after reading it.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
please continue the martial arts system since you have finished this white online and the martial arts system novel seem more interesting ......
The story was great for the vast majority, while the ending was a bit rushed overall a great novel.
it's not a bad. My only complaint is how many loose ends there are and pacing.
How does this novel irritate me? MC is stupid and slow. He is hailed as a genius but does not use his skills in battle. An overrated novel. He doesn't level up after getting the Mythic Helmet, but is a waste of time. I don't understand why there are so many positive reviews. The novel is extremely long. for a drop of the plot, a whole sea of useless information.
The main problem I had with this story was the ending, it felt like the author was done/bored and it just ends instantly and very anticlimactic without much of a fight. (They throw a couple punches and boom it ends) and there is stuff that is never answered.
Reveal Spoiler This novel is amazing, it has great character development and the depth of detail that went into this novel is insane!! I highly recommend!!!
Are you going to continue the martial arts novel you stopped. If so when new chapters be released.
All in all is it a very good book. I would definitely like more from this author
I'm one of those readers that don't add reviews but man I just finished reading this beautiful work of art and highly recommend reading this novel and just taking in the breathtaking journey both the author(s) and characters went through 10/5❤️
Nice.