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This is epic. What a MC...... Hah. His mother and sisters are of another level. And that symbiotic ancestor is too crazy. Overall good novel.
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it is best novel for me as it has everything one need ...but chapter are few please upload more chapters
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Like the story but I regret giving so many golden tickets and votes only to see this has been all but dropped by the author..................
3.4 Why do I feel like things are happening for no reason? And why did I even read this? Nothing makes sense anymore. Especially the mothers reaction, and how could mc impregnate his own mother?! From what ik its hard to impregnate close relatives (close as in blood relationships) And mc over here just 1, 2 shots and now, bam. He's got another sibling. All women in this:
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i will rate it 5 first as i will add it in my reading list and i didn't really add it in my library because i've seen lewd on the title.... really...
I am just here for the culture, every other thing kills my brain cells......................................................................
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it's great, just some grammar problems I would genuinely fix his grammar for free. seriously, this Nivel has much potential, and writing quality is quite important. ok that's all I have to say
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es una historia interesante y divertida tiene una buena trama y y los personajes tienen una buena personalidad El H esta bien escrito aunque esta un poco repetitivo las ecena iguales en si la historia merece ser leída
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Overall, I love it. Writing quality is awesome. The storyline you can get a clique vibe for the first time but just know that this is an original work. Characters? Why, I don't want to spoil it to you. Just read em. I've read a couple of system novel so... I don't know much but at least the system is actually driving the plot. To the author, don't stop writing, story must be told!
This is epic. What a MC...... Hah. His mother and sisters are of another level. And that symbiotic ancestor is too crazy. Overall good novel.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
it is best novel for me as it has everything one need ...but chapter are few please upload more chapters
You know it's good when it's made by Perverted Fella ..................................................................................
Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
I am the Exp of my sword... EXP is my blood... EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless Reviews... Unknown to death,nor to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless Reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so i pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
Like the story but I regret giving so many golden tickets and votes only to see this has been all but dropped by the author..................
3.4 Why do I feel like things are happening for no reason? And why did I even read this? Nothing makes sense anymore. Especially the mothers reaction, and how could mc impregnate his own mother?! From what ik its hard to impregnate close relatives (close as in blood relationships) And mc over here just 1, 2 shots and now, bam. He's got another sibling. All women in this:
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i will rate it 5 first as i will add it in my reading list and i didn't really add it in my library because i've seen lewd on the title.... really...
I am just here for the culture, every other thing kills my brain cells......................................................................
Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read? Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
it's great, just some grammar problems I would genuinely fix his grammar for free. seriously, this Nivel has much potential, and writing quality is quite important. ok that's all I have to say
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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
es una historia interesante y divertida tiene una buena trama y y los personajes tienen una buena personalidad El H esta bien escrito aunque esta un poco repetitivo las ecena iguales en si la historia merece ser leída
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Overall, I love it. Writing quality is awesome. The storyline you can get a clique vibe for the first time but just know that this is an original work. Characters? Why, I don't want to spoil it to you. Just read em. I've read a couple of system novel so... I don't know much but at least the system is actually driving the plot. To the author, don't stop writing, story must be told!