DaoistsZYgr4

DaoistsZYgr4

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DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
6 days ago
Commented

there should not be any betrayal plot

The problem is… I'm stuck. This will be the 20th chapter, and I want it to feel meaningful before everything falls apart. I'm looking for suggestions on what should happen in these chapters to make the betrayal hit even harder. How should these bonds grow? What pivotal moments would make the loss unforgettable? If you've read fanfics or novels with similar themes, feel free to share examples that could inspire this book. Your ideas could help shape the next part of the story!

A Noble Scum With Lust System

A Noble Scum With Lust System

Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Commented

you can make a discord channel and add illustration there

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Replied to Terlik

I need violet in harem. I am not reading if she is not there

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Replied to Terlik

no. you need to add Luci 1st and 2nd daughter in harem

"How? Is it as comfortable as your mom's?" Isabella asked with a gentle smile and she placed her own soft mounds on my head. When I looked at Isabella, I could swear I saw a goddess with white wings for a second!

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Replied to Terlik

her little daughter too

"How? Is it as comfortable as your mom's?" Isabella asked with a gentle smile and she placed her own soft mounds on my head. When I looked at Isabella, I could swear I saw a goddess with white wings for a second!

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Commented

make her slave

Another abnormally powerful Kaizer ability. Undoubtedly, this indicated that I was quite talented, and setting aside the incredible pain, I tried to control the element as I had read in books. After a few painful minutes, the surrounding air calmed down. When I looked at the transparent window above again, I saw my mother with teary eyes and my father looking at me proudly. Isabella, too, was looking at me with a mixture of concern and pride. In contrast, Fiona was biting her nails, her expression quite anxious, but it was clear that her worry wasn't for me.

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Replied to Terlik

add Luci in harem

"How? Is it as comfortable as your mom's?" Isabella asked with a gentle smile and she placed her own soft mounds on my head. When I looked at Isabella, I could swear I saw a goddess with white wings for a second!

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Replied to Terlik

add her

"Bou bro!" When I looked to my right, I saw the little baby holding my arm with her tiny fingers. This was my new little sister, who was two years old and had black hair and blue eyes, making her a very cute baby.

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik

DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4
1 months ago
Commented

there is not need to make her enemy

Undoubtedly, this woman didn't need my pity... at least not now, but after everything that had happened, I was sure she wasn't a bad person. She walked towards us and took me from Emilia's arms, holding me in her own. While Emilia followed us, Isabella quickly left the scene. At that moment, Fiona's relieved expression made me angry, and I realized who my first enemy in this world was.

The Third Prince Of Darkness

The Third Prince Of Darkness

Fantasy · Terlik