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I decided to write a review anyway... The first 150 chapters are well written. I stopped reading after reading them. And just recently I went back and skimmed through chapter 300 and gave up again. This is certainly not a Chinese novel with a thousand chapters where the plot is stretched to the impossible. Vice versa. Characters start to turn too fast, and sometimes not much enough. Saving character is not such a big problem, but fury already in the first 100 chapters had to do something with the main character. He poses too much in front of them. Too many events connected with him. If not a fury, then the hydra would definitely do something. TVA and Ancient were for the most part all the same. If the plot is not important to you, you do not like the harem and any mention of your favorite plot turns you on that this is for you.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I'm totally loving the story so far but i was curious about something and that was if its possible for you to bring in the monster hunter franchise into the marvel world since the Witcher is their. The idea of everybody hunting and crafting new weapons and armor with all the types of material from monster hunter and modern technology sounds simpley amazing to me and was wondering if that is a possibility for you to bring to life. if able to respond to question thank you for your time.
It's just my preferences but I think your stories are really enjoyable and your writing and the way you incorporate whole bunch of plot is commendable, not perfect of course (sometimes you messed up the pronouns and forget some characters because there are too many) but still great for casual reader like me. Your writing pace also amazing, gotta go to your Patreon for those 200 chaps but I'm still reading your other works 😁 Keep up the good works! Have a nice day
Protagonist(male) gets impregnated by an alien and gives аnаl birth to 18 giants bugs (yes, seriously). 10/10 writing
The story is good it’s just that the grammar is atrocious. I mean grammarly is free so poor grammar isn’t really an excuse
La historia es buena hasta el capitulo 140 ya que ahi te das cuenta que solo el mc es un repaso a la lectura del mundo de Avengers y otros mundos solo es ¿Que pasaría si otros personajes van a marvel?
Started good, but mc wants to save everyone and has some kind of no-kill rule like that of dc. Maybe author is a fan of dc. But this is not my cup of tea.
I feel like the MC just depended on others, He could have taken over their powers and could have been a stand-alone hero which makes more sense and doesn't affect the plot as a whole, and will be more interesting to know about the influence of a self-made character than an existing one.
Me encanta,La amo me enctaria que apareciera Blacknoir and Namor tambien😍....Si no es un problema🥺...Desde ya gracias por todo y me encanta tu creación.
I did not enjoy the story because the mc does not gain any personal strength,also author I understand some stories are not for everyone.
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Good novel but hes exposed himself instead hiding that he know the supernatural or superhuman. One more thing, I hope their are romance,if not it taste bland
This fic is great to just sit down and immerse yourself in for a couple hours. It’s a great read👍🏻
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I feel sad that the first power he chose is from one piece, instead chosing saitama body power, so much potential not used, please bring saitama, i wanna see villains receiving "One Punch"
W book, love how he has to trick his friends and doesn't freely use all his summons and is human, down to earth and can learn, but bro he gotta bang Emma man and have children
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Que puedo decir capítulos cortos personajes un poco faltantes de personalidad y relevancia así como falta de mostrar sus verdaderas capacidades según juegos o mangas. Las pelis y animes se muestra bien pero no saca mucho a relucir los despues que aparecen por primera vez. Pero tiene una historia argumentativa buena que te atrapa te absorbe dentro y te impulsa hasta no dormir por seguir leyendo en mi caso que leí en tres días desde el principio hasta el 540 casi sin dormir. Es buena pero pudo ser mejor.
Me encanta la historia, al principio estaba un poco dudoso de lo bueno del fanfic pero despues no me pude despegar de el, espero que el autor siga dando contenido tan bueno 👍
I have read quite a few (hundreds) of fan fiction novels but it is one of the few novels I look forward to being updated. The author did a very good job of integrating the different aspects and elements of different characters of various animes/movies seamlessly and smoothly . good job 👏 👍 author. and keep up the good work.
Круто ...................................................... Потрясающе ......................................... Жду продолжение................................
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This is ONE OF THE BEST MARVEL FANFIC I'VE EVER READ BEFORE!! Keep up the work author! Don't let judgment and criticism from others get the best on you. Just ignored those. You have POTENTIAL to go BEYOND!
Can't say much about this and I'm not particularly good at giving revs but know that this is peak marvel fic, maybe it's still not yet perfect but hey its understandable as handling so much characters and fitting them in is hard but the author did so well sooo totally recommended.(definitely my fav marvel fic so far)
This book is one of the best books on multiple crossovers and still the story makes sense and it is enjoyable. it is a great novel.
I decided to write a review anyway... The first 150 chapters are well written. I stopped reading after reading them. And just recently I went back and skimmed through chapter 300 and gave up again. This is certainly not a Chinese novel with a thousand chapters where the plot is stretched to the impossible. Vice versa. Characters start to turn too fast, and sometimes not much enough. Saving character is not such a big problem, but fury already in the first 100 chapters had to do something with the main character. He poses too much in front of them. Too many events connected with him. If not a fury, then the hydra would definitely do something. TVA and Ancient were for the most part all the same. If the plot is not important to you, you do not like the harem and any mention of your favorite plot turns you on that this is for you.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I'm totally loving the story so far but i was curious about something and that was if its possible for you to bring in the monster hunter franchise into the marvel world since the Witcher is their. The idea of everybody hunting and crafting new weapons and armor with all the types of material from monster hunter and modern technology sounds simpley amazing to me and was wondering if that is a possibility for you to bring to life. if able to respond to question thank you for your time.
It's just my preferences but I think your stories are really enjoyable and your writing and the way you incorporate whole bunch of plot is commendable, not perfect of course (sometimes you messed up the pronouns and forget some characters because there are too many) but still great for casual reader like me. Your writing pace also amazing, gotta go to your Patreon for those 200 chaps but I'm still reading your other works 😁 Keep up the good works! Have a nice day
Protagonist(male) gets impregnated by an alien and gives аnаl birth to 18 giants bugs (yes, seriously). 10/10 writing
The story is good it’s just that the grammar is atrocious. I mean grammarly is free so poor grammar isn’t really an excuse
La historia es buena hasta el capitulo 140 ya que ahi te das cuenta que solo el mc es un repaso a la lectura del mundo de Avengers y otros mundos solo es ¿Que pasaría si otros personajes van a marvel?
Started good, but mc wants to save everyone and has some kind of no-kill rule like that of dc. Maybe author is a fan of dc. But this is not my cup of tea.
I feel like the MC just depended on others, He could have taken over their powers and could have been a stand-alone hero which makes more sense and doesn't affect the plot as a whole, and will be more interesting to know about the influence of a self-made character than an existing one.
Me encanta,La amo me enctaria que apareciera Blacknoir and Namor tambien😍....Si no es un problema🥺...Desde ya gracias por todo y me encanta tu creación.
I did not enjoy the story because the mc does not gain any personal strength,also author I understand some stories are not for everyone.
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Good novel but hes exposed himself instead hiding that he know the supernatural or superhuman. One more thing, I hope their are romance,if not it taste bland
This fic is great to just sit down and immerse yourself in for a couple hours. It’s a great read👍🏻
readable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I feel sad that the first power he chose is from one piece, instead chosing saitama body power, so much potential not used, please bring saitama, i wanna see villains receiving "One Punch"
W book, love how he has to trick his friends and doesn't freely use all his summons and is human, down to earth and can learn, but bro he gotta bang Emma man and have children
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Que puedo decir capítulos cortos personajes un poco faltantes de personalidad y relevancia así como falta de mostrar sus verdaderas capacidades según juegos o mangas. Las pelis y animes se muestra bien pero no saca mucho a relucir los despues que aparecen por primera vez. Pero tiene una historia argumentativa buena que te atrapa te absorbe dentro y te impulsa hasta no dormir por seguir leyendo en mi caso que leí en tres días desde el principio hasta el 540 casi sin dormir. Es buena pero pudo ser mejor.
Me encanta la historia, al principio estaba un poco dudoso de lo bueno del fanfic pero despues no me pude despegar de el, espero que el autor siga dando contenido tan bueno 👍
I have read quite a few (hundreds) of fan fiction novels but it is one of the few novels I look forward to being updated. The author did a very good job of integrating the different aspects and elements of different characters of various animes/movies seamlessly and smoothly . good job 👏 👍 author. and keep up the good work.
Круто ...................................................... Потрясающе ......................................... Жду продолжение................................
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This is ONE OF THE BEST MARVEL FANFIC I'VE EVER READ BEFORE!! Keep up the work author! Don't let judgment and criticism from others get the best on you. Just ignored those. You have POTENTIAL to go BEYOND!
Can't say much about this and I'm not particularly good at giving revs but know that this is peak marvel fic, maybe it's still not yet perfect but hey its understandable as handling so much characters and fitting them in is hard but the author did so well sooo totally recommended.(definitely my fav marvel fic so far)
This book is one of the best books on multiple crossovers and still the story makes sense and it is enjoyable. it is a great novel.