No, I'm just a begginer writer. Also thanks for your opinion, I will improve on it.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Kinectic Control
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The door opened to reveal a woman with long jet black hair and red eyes, her appearance resembled that of Ryu's.
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Thanks for the tip, I will make sure to use it.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Fever Dream?
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Either tommrow or the day after it.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Child of Mischief
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Ryu's Grandfather
"HAHA, I am indeed, you've grown into a fine young man Ryu, haven't you?" he said with affection, even with his white beard and mustache, you could still see that he was smiling.
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Ryu's Mother
After a few short minutes, Ryu's mother brought the dinner, "Here is the dinner you two, eat as much as you want."
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Apperence: [Picture in the comments ->]
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Apperence: [Picture in the comments ->]
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There is a reason it's called Mischievous Reversal, you won't know what exactly the result would be.
"On the other hand, have you seen that student? Ryu Shinrinmoto, the one that broke your record in entrance exam." Aizawa said while he looked at All Might.
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It depends really, I'm still planning things, I will tell more when I'm sure about how I want things to go.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Baby Monkey's
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The girls from original series just don't fit the criteria that I want for a love interest for Ryu. I haven't decided yet, but an OC just feels more correct for the direction that I want to go towards.
Suddnely the pink girl appeared from behind Ida, "Hi, I'm Mina Ashido, nice to meet you, I can't believe I'm classmates with the number one examinee in the entrance exam." she excitedly said.
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Don't worry, I'm more towards having an OC love interest, I have some ideas for her.
Suddnely the pink girl appeared from behind Ida, "Hi, I'm Mina Ashido, nice to meet you, I can't believe I'm classmates with the number one examinee in the entrance exam." she excitedly said.
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Hero outfit: [Picture in the the comments - >]
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I will try to do a redo, especially since I have gotten more used to writing now that I have written this much, thanks for your comment and opinion.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: A pile of trash
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It's changed now, it should be much better compared to how it was before.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: A pile of trash
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Shinso was trying to taunt us with his words, he was saying things like "You guys don't deserve to be heroes.", he didn't know, but I knew how his quirk worked, I saw him use it to brainwash Ojiro and Aoyama before it started afterall, and I told Yui, Kojiro and Comic about it.
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Which one? Endevour or Shoto, cause yeah the Shoto one is real forced, I'm gonna change it right away, but I don't know about the Endeavor one.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: A pile of trash
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Sorry, could you elaborate? I don't understand what you mean.
As soon as the timer went off, I started moving forward, and with Delayed Impact, I was thrown forward incredibly fast, I can keep only one Delayed Impact at a time in the ground as the whole ground under my feet counts as one target, I can use it about every 10 steps to give myself a boost. I didn't intend to go all out in the first round, my goal is to analyze other people's quirks, of course I don't intend to lose either, the first obstacle were the Zero Pointers we had faced in the entrance test.
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It's a disguise.
'Kinectic Control, seems self explanatory.'
MHA: Mischievous Reversal
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