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Why did this novel die it was fucking GOOD. It had two of my most favorite things. My most loved character yoruichi shihouin. And my favorite game fallout new Vegas.😞
This is an excellent fanfic and I recommend this for people who love character development and can wait, the thing that bothers me is that every single fanfic that is fantastic and is going very good just stops midway on either chapter 30 or 20 and no further explanation is given, I mean at least tell us if the fanfic is dropped or not don't just leave us hanging for more while you are just gone in the wind. previously when the author was regularly updating it was satisfactory but now wait for months is really too much
The MC is a sidekick, guys don't believe the 5 star reviews, they are blatantly lying. MC seems to be a Japanese beta virgin and also acts and thinks like the typical flattering sidekick. The author makes the "MC" follow Yoruichi like a S.I.M.P. no brain of its own. It's a shame to see a Fallout fanfic in ruins like this fanfic (Google translate)
Yep. Blushing virgin Average Joe sidekick to OP Miss Perfect, who will solve everything. Yeah, no. I have no interest reading about Japanese Kim Possible and more pathetic Ron Stopable in Fallout. Like, what is the point? From what I have read, MC is not even a main character. He is a sidekick SIMP!!! All he does is follow Yoruichi around while praising her for her godlike beauty and ability. There is nothing special about him. Even the system is pathetic. Author is a Yoruichi simp. He could have made a good story. Idea is interesting. He could have made MC equal to Yoruichi and given him actual personality and goals. Instead we have this.
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Know what? i had my doubts about this... BUT man that its a fun read. Grammar is above average and quite good. The story... well its just starting. The character design of the MC leaves something to be desired as unless i missed it, we have no idea how MC looks, other that he is taller than yoruichi by 30 cm or a feet. Yoruichi is amazing =P. As for world background, its ok but improvements can be made... Updates? SLOW... But chapters are very long, like 2 or 3 chapters worth. Now... Its the fallout 4 system in New Vegas, which is good MC can max out everything... But i hope that author can do some original stuff to it and don't follow the game plot... i mean, why? i could just play the game. What i mean is that he makes some ORIGINAL content. Like, since its a world and not a game, there could be titanic creatures that have like 15 on all stats and much more. So i wish to see author create a world... Fallout new vegas was 8 square miles big and fallout 4 was 9 square miles big... To put it in perspective... the map of both games together is only 20 times smaller than new york... I wish author can expand it to go further beyond and create original content. Like wishing to find a place that was not hit by the nukes like a big island. THey are near the coast, so going to hawaii may be a good idea.
I dont understand the 5 star reviews. The MC isnt even really an MC. Anything he can do yoruichi CAN and DOES do better. Theres no point in reading about a protagonist that cant and doesnt grow in skill and strength because hes constantly over shadowed by his love interest lol Especially since he just follows her around praising her in his mind for her beauty or skills. This is just boring and the MC has no goal or reasoning to even be here, the author may as well have made yoruichi the MC instead cause the actual MC has no place in the story.
everything is just fantastic keep it up, the emotions are really there you can feel what the mc is feeling so hats off bro good luck. XDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
please don't drop there isn't enough fallout fics .............................................................................................
I haven't played or watched Fallout but this story is great. Although the character is weak, it is not completely weak, even if it is strong, it is not very strong, I think it goes very well. He is very good at explaining, and he can make it read even to someone who is not related to me. The best part is that even if I don't know anything, it doesn't bother you that everything is well detailed, but it is informative enough, for example, the perks part. The only bad thing is that the main character's personality is very weak, like the assistant mod in skyrim, not the main character.
Basic fallout fanfic nothing great about it but not the worse. mc is a doormat that fallows yoruichi around like a puppy. Story would probably be way better if she was the mc. But other then that it’s a ok story but I have low expectations for webnovel novel stories so
yes yes yes yes YES *INSERT EPIC JOJO MUSIC* . ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
me gusta bastante como inicia y creo que tiene mucho potencial, espero que continues con la historia
everything is fantastic except the update schedule please don't drop and keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I truly love this book you've started, it's my favorite in a very, very long time. I can't quite find the word to praise your writing and describe my enjoyment of it, but if it were food...drool would be leaking all down my chin! I've never really written a review in all my years (6 ish) on webnovel but for you I'm going to give it a go! *Writing Quality* I find the quality to be truly top notch. No spelling or grammatical errors jumped out at me and the flow of the story has been smooth and uninterrupted. Conversations between characters are natural and immerse you into the world that's being created. Inner thoughts, monologs, and settings are all easily differentiated so no confusion on who or what is talking. Admittedly, we're only 15 chapters in at this point, each chapter is quite large however so im confident the quality will remain. *Story Development* The novel has introduced background information and world building without becoming boring or going too deep into minutiea. Basically, no Goku charging his spirit bomb for 8 chapters haha. In my opinion there's a healthy balance of action, character building, and slice of life. The romance is being built up well, as in two people actually getting to know each other and bonding/crushing on each other. Although it hasn't really made it to that point yet. Outside the main leads the supporting characters are well done and make it so the story isn't empty. Everyone seems to add something to the story and it really comes together well. *Character design* Character descriptions let you picture what people in the novel look like and what they're feeling too. I haven't noticed and cookie cutter type ones thrown in. *Udpating Stability* Well, I wish there were more chapters but since I really love this book no matter how many there were I'd want more... That said the updates are fairly slow but steady. I have no complaints due to the fact that chapters keep coming. I'm willing to wait for awesomeness *World Background* I think I already talked about this in the other ones. So I'm gonna skip it. AUTHOR KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! I support you 100%, I'll legit be a cheerleader and sing you motivational songs with pom poms and everything to keep you going haha
I love your story. I am very happy to see your back in action! Every update is awaited with eagerness and joy. Keep up the good work ! Also the take you have on this story is so cool!
fallout... nuff sayd __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
color me impressed i never thought this could happend but here we are reading one of the best fallout fanfic ever i really love your work author-sama i would advise making the character a bit stronger cauz for a fallout gamer he kinda slow on the murder and grinde for exp as well as equipments but i still love it <3
Probably my favorite fanfiction on this website. The concept of Yoruichi as the main character in Fallout was something I never expected to see in my entire lifetime, much less with a reincarnation. I love the slow development of the characters, and the flaws within them. This story feels alive, as is almost certainly worth your time, I won't stop supporting you author!
Al principio me sentí un poco dudoso acerca de agregar personajes de otros mundos sin hacer un cruce completo, pero hasta ahora me sorprendió gratamente. Buen ritmo hasta ahora con carácter prometedor y construcción mundial. Continuaré leyendo mientras la historia continúe.
this fallout fanfic has just the right about of different sprinkled into it and is very well written. good job author. fhkyfjyfgfdjgfjdjgxjgxjgxjgjdjcjc
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Pretty good i just finished rereading it...................................By yours truly S. Illiterate ............................................................................................................................................
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At first felt a bit iffy about adding characters from other worlds without fully doing a crossover, but so far pleasantly surprised. Good pacing so far with promising character and world building. Will be continuing to read as long as story goes on
Really liking the story so far there only a couple fallout fan-fics so I hope you don't drop it 🙏 .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like this one and hope for continuation. I am interested how you are going to start both DLCs if you do. For example, how are you going to get him into Big Empty. Will he go through the same procedures like MC of Fallout NV?
Dude great 👍 love this book wish you keep writing it but looks like you dropped it that really sucks [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] please
Why did this novel die it was fucking GOOD. It had two of my most favorite things. My most loved character yoruichi shihouin. And my favorite game fallout new Vegas.😞
This is an excellent fanfic and I recommend this for people who love character development and can wait, the thing that bothers me is that every single fanfic that is fantastic and is going very good just stops midway on either chapter 30 or 20 and no further explanation is given, I mean at least tell us if the fanfic is dropped or not don't just leave us hanging for more while you are just gone in the wind. previously when the author was regularly updating it was satisfactory but now wait for months is really too much
The MC is a sidekick, guys don't believe the 5 star reviews, they are blatantly lying. MC seems to be a Japanese beta virgin and also acts and thinks like the typical flattering sidekick. The author makes the "MC" follow Yoruichi like a S.I.M.P. no brain of its own. It's a shame to see a Fallout fanfic in ruins like this fanfic (Google translate)
Yep. Blushing virgin Average Joe sidekick to OP Miss Perfect, who will solve everything. Yeah, no. I have no interest reading about Japanese Kim Possible and more pathetic Ron Stopable in Fallout. Like, what is the point? From what I have read, MC is not even a main character. He is a sidekick SIMP!!! All he does is follow Yoruichi around while praising her for her godlike beauty and ability. There is nothing special about him. Even the system is pathetic. Author is a Yoruichi simp. He could have made a good story. Idea is interesting. He could have made MC equal to Yoruichi and given him actual personality and goals. Instead we have this.
Reveal Spoiler Know what? i had my doubts about this... BUT man that its a fun read. Grammar is above average and quite good. The story... well its just starting. The character design of the MC leaves something to be desired as unless i missed it, we have no idea how MC looks, other that he is taller than yoruichi by 30 cm or a feet. Yoruichi is amazing =P. As for world background, its ok but improvements can be made... Updates? SLOW... But chapters are very long, like 2 or 3 chapters worth. Now... Its the fallout 4 system in New Vegas, which is good MC can max out everything... But i hope that author can do some original stuff to it and don't follow the game plot... i mean, why? i could just play the game. What i mean is that he makes some ORIGINAL content. Like, since its a world and not a game, there could be titanic creatures that have like 15 on all stats and much more. So i wish to see author create a world... Fallout new vegas was 8 square miles big and fallout 4 was 9 square miles big... To put it in perspective... the map of both games together is only 20 times smaller than new york... I wish author can expand it to go further beyond and create original content. Like wishing to find a place that was not hit by the nukes like a big island. THey are near the coast, so going to hawaii may be a good idea.
I dont understand the 5 star reviews. The MC isnt even really an MC. Anything he can do yoruichi CAN and DOES do better. Theres no point in reading about a protagonist that cant and doesnt grow in skill and strength because hes constantly over shadowed by his love interest lol Especially since he just follows her around praising her in his mind for her beauty or skills. This is just boring and the MC has no goal or reasoning to even be here, the author may as well have made yoruichi the MC instead cause the actual MC has no place in the story.
everything is just fantastic keep it up, the emotions are really there you can feel what the mc is feeling so hats off bro good luck. XDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
please don't drop there isn't enough fallout fics .............................................................................................
I haven't played or watched Fallout but this story is great. Although the character is weak, it is not completely weak, even if it is strong, it is not very strong, I think it goes very well. He is very good at explaining, and he can make it read even to someone who is not related to me. The best part is that even if I don't know anything, it doesn't bother you that everything is well detailed, but it is informative enough, for example, the perks part. The only bad thing is that the main character's personality is very weak, like the assistant mod in skyrim, not the main character.
Basic fallout fanfic nothing great about it but not the worse. mc is a doormat that fallows yoruichi around like a puppy. Story would probably be way better if she was the mc. But other then that it’s a ok story but I have low expectations for webnovel novel stories so
yes yes yes yes YES *INSERT EPIC JOJO MUSIC* . ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
me gusta bastante como inicia y creo que tiene mucho potencial, espero que continues con la historia
everything is fantastic except the update schedule please don't drop and keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I truly love this book you've started, it's my favorite in a very, very long time. I can't quite find the word to praise your writing and describe my enjoyment of it, but if it were food...drool would be leaking all down my chin! I've never really written a review in all my years (6 ish) on webnovel but for you I'm going to give it a go! *Writing Quality* I find the quality to be truly top notch. No spelling or grammatical errors jumped out at me and the flow of the story has been smooth and uninterrupted. Conversations between characters are natural and immerse you into the world that's being created. Inner thoughts, monologs, and settings are all easily differentiated so no confusion on who or what is talking. Admittedly, we're only 15 chapters in at this point, each chapter is quite large however so im confident the quality will remain. *Story Development* The novel has introduced background information and world building without becoming boring or going too deep into minutiea. Basically, no Goku charging his spirit bomb for 8 chapters haha. In my opinion there's a healthy balance of action, character building, and slice of life. The romance is being built up well, as in two people actually getting to know each other and bonding/crushing on each other. Although it hasn't really made it to that point yet. Outside the main leads the supporting characters are well done and make it so the story isn't empty. Everyone seems to add something to the story and it really comes together well. *Character design* Character descriptions let you picture what people in the novel look like and what they're feeling too. I haven't noticed and cookie cutter type ones thrown in. *Udpating Stability* Well, I wish there were more chapters but since I really love this book no matter how many there were I'd want more... That said the updates are fairly slow but steady. I have no complaints due to the fact that chapters keep coming. I'm willing to wait for awesomeness *World Background* I think I already talked about this in the other ones. So I'm gonna skip it. AUTHOR KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! I support you 100%, I'll legit be a cheerleader and sing you motivational songs with pom poms and everything to keep you going haha
I love your story. I am very happy to see your back in action! Every update is awaited with eagerness and joy. Keep up the good work ! Also the take you have on this story is so cool!
fallout... nuff sayd __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
color me impressed i never thought this could happend but here we are reading one of the best fallout fanfic ever i really love your work author-sama i would advise making the character a bit stronger cauz for a fallout gamer he kinda slow on the murder and grinde for exp as well as equipments but i still love it <3
Probably my favorite fanfiction on this website. The concept of Yoruichi as the main character in Fallout was something I never expected to see in my entire lifetime, much less with a reincarnation. I love the slow development of the characters, and the flaws within them. This story feels alive, as is almost certainly worth your time, I won't stop supporting you author!
Al principio me sentí un poco dudoso acerca de agregar personajes de otros mundos sin hacer un cruce completo, pero hasta ahora me sorprendió gratamente. Buen ritmo hasta ahora con carácter prometedor y construcción mundial. Continuaré leyendo mientras la historia continúe.
this fallout fanfic has just the right about of different sprinkled into it and is very well written. good job author. fhkyfjyfgfdjgfjdjgxjgxjgxjgjdjcjc
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Pretty good i just finished rereading it...................................By yours truly S. Illiterate ............................................................................................................................................
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At first felt a bit iffy about adding characters from other worlds without fully doing a crossover, but so far pleasantly surprised. Good pacing so far with promising character and world building. Will be continuing to read as long as story goes on
Really liking the story so far there only a couple fallout fan-fics so I hope you don't drop it 🙏 .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like this one and hope for continuation. I am interested how you are going to start both DLCs if you do. For example, how are you going to get him into Big Empty. Will he go through the same procedures like MC of Fallout NV?
Dude great 👍 love this book wish you keep writing it but looks like you dropped it that really sucks [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] please