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Wow! This plot is to op! I couldn't stop reading it. Reaching the end of every chapter pushed me into reading the next. I won't mention the real plot here, no spoilers, but it is full of twists. You won't regret reading this story. It is very well thought of and one of the best novels in terms of realistic plots and twists. Spoiler alert The mc is fuming hot and so is his sister! Gives me Korean models vibe.
The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
I like the story very much. It is very well written. The thing that hooked me was about amelia running away. I hope the author continues this work
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It's a story about a run away bride...but wait it isn't it was all apart of the plan and creates the chaotic mystery that set up the future of the story, a brilliant twist on a cliche opening and it keeps me hooked hoping to learn more about the real reason for the mystery...
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I love the art I think it's absolutely beautiful it's an amazing story. I loved the development of the plot...😍😍 I'm obsessed with just reading a few chapters, 10/10 would recommend. You are always sitting on the edge of your seat to find out what happens next.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I must admit that I love twisted stories. With this, I was well served! Style, characters, background, everything makes you want to know more! I'm waiting for the next chapters author! Good job! Keep it up!
Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I read, World Background: So far the world background is mostly fine, I mean the author actually gives some description about it. But, I believe the author will expand more about the world itself especially the place where the mc living. Character: So far I do appreciate that author give the main character Alexender and Amelia a significant appearance which is quite interesting. The character also have distinct personalities especially on the two main cast. But, I do believe the author will give more context about the character's background and the relationship to make this romance novel more exciting to read. As for the writing, in my opinion, it's quite smooth to follow, but there are some flaws that the author can fix easily and I am sorry for saying this. Based on what I read, some paragraphs only contained one long sentence. Therefore, I prefer the author to separate it into 2-3 sentences, so it can make the reader more efficient to read. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!
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Very good story .I love the MC 's character This story is full of twist and has very good potential .Need more chapters author .good work ..
AMAZING !! I just read two chapters and I was in !! The plot is very intriguing and engaging. Really loved the progression of the story !! Keep up the work ! I am eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters !!
Confusion was on my face straight throughout lol but it's a good thing, really made me want to keep reading just to find out what Amelia and her bestfriend was up to and why she keeps abandoning her weddings. Not sure if I should feel sorry for Oliver or not lol. Overall a novel worth the time to indulge in.
Hello! It's my first time seeing a webnovel by another Pakistani! Although I'm not into romance novels, your writing quality and story is quite good. I would recommend it to those who like a good modern day action romance novel. P.S I would appreciate it if you check out my novel and please leave a review even if a negative one how I can improve. Thanks!
HI author❤ Great work by you, even the synopsis, looks suspicious, haaa I love everything about your book, even tho not too many chapters yet but still I'm loving It, the plot is just outstanding, I love Alexander's character! he is really suspicious😂😍
Not gonna lie! every chapter make you more curious about what would happen next, love the plot and story twists, updating stability on point, story development just WOW ❗ 💯
I just have to say, WOW🤗 I love these kind of stories, the plot, twists, everything is on top, love love love love love it 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Gave you 5 stars because you deserve it, I'm loving he story already, Alexander is everywhere, the master mind, jus love his character so much loving he arguments of Amelia and Lucas Would Love to read more from you [img=update][img=recommend]
I'm new on webnovel and it's the first story l've tried reading, 💕💕💕 Not regretting my decision Superb story plot The twists The characters Loveing it 💙
Author has great skills, not kidding❤ Even tho it's just a start but the story is already top class, I'll recommend this to everyone, great story, great plot, I like the twists and how you designed the characters 🤘 Literally the best novel I've read so far💝💝💝💝💝💝💝
I won't deny the fact that this story already caught my interest. I know it will be a good, popular story as time goes by. Despite having minor errors, I know Author is working on it now. (Note: Don't worry, most of us struggle with this stuff.) But overall, I am encouraging everyone to give a try to this story and you will never regret reading it. You nailed it, Author! Don't forget to upload chapters daily! 💕❤
Although its currently only a few chapters but the pace and plot revealed in these few chapters are captivating enough leaving us wanting more.
There is still soon for a review, after all only 3 chapters are published but the only words I have for the author is to keep patient and write at his own pace,
Hi author here👋 it's a twisted story of two best friends hope y'all like it💛 I'm trying to do my best, if you have any questions regarding my book i would love to answer, do read and add your review that would be great💜 Reminder [ English is not the author's language ]_💚
Wow! This plot is to op! I couldn't stop reading it. Reaching the end of every chapter pushed me into reading the next. I won't mention the real plot here, no spoilers, but it is full of twists. You won't regret reading this story. It is very well thought of and one of the best novels in terms of realistic plots and twists. Spoiler alert The mc is fuming hot and so is his sister! Gives me Korean models vibe.
The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
I like the story very much. It is very well written. The thing that hooked me was about amelia running away. I hope the author continues this work
Reveal Spoiler It's a story about a run away bride...but wait it isn't it was all apart of the plan and creates the chaotic mystery that set up the future of the story, a brilliant twist on a cliche opening and it keeps me hooked hoping to learn more about the real reason for the mystery...
Reveal Spoiler I love the art I think it's absolutely beautiful it's an amazing story. I loved the development of the plot...😍😍 I'm obsessed with just reading a few chapters, 10/10 would recommend. You are always sitting on the edge of your seat to find out what happens next.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I must admit that I love twisted stories. With this, I was well served! Style, characters, background, everything makes you want to know more! I'm waiting for the next chapters author! Good job! Keep it up!
Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I read, World Background: So far the world background is mostly fine, I mean the author actually gives some description about it. But, I believe the author will expand more about the world itself especially the place where the mc living. Character: So far I do appreciate that author give the main character Alexender and Amelia a significant appearance which is quite interesting. The character also have distinct personalities especially on the two main cast. But, I do believe the author will give more context about the character's background and the relationship to make this romance novel more exciting to read. As for the writing, in my opinion, it's quite smooth to follow, but there are some flaws that the author can fix easily and I am sorry for saying this. Based on what I read, some paragraphs only contained one long sentence. Therefore, I prefer the author to separate it into 2-3 sentences, so it can make the reader more efficient to read. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!
Reveal Spoiler Very good story .I love the MC 's character This story is full of twist and has very good potential .Need more chapters author .good work ..
AMAZING !! I just read two chapters and I was in !! The plot is very intriguing and engaging. Really loved the progression of the story !! Keep up the work ! I am eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters !!
Confusion was on my face straight throughout lol but it's a good thing, really made me want to keep reading just to find out what Amelia and her bestfriend was up to and why she keeps abandoning her weddings. Not sure if I should feel sorry for Oliver or not lol. Overall a novel worth the time to indulge in.
Hello! It's my first time seeing a webnovel by another Pakistani! Although I'm not into romance novels, your writing quality and story is quite good. I would recommend it to those who like a good modern day action romance novel. P.S I would appreciate it if you check out my novel and please leave a review even if a negative one how I can improve. Thanks!
HI author❤ Great work by you, even the synopsis, looks suspicious, haaa I love everything about your book, even tho not too many chapters yet but still I'm loving It, the plot is just outstanding, I love Alexander's character! he is really suspicious😂😍
Not gonna lie! every chapter make you more curious about what would happen next, love the plot and story twists, updating stability on point, story development just WOW ❗ 💯
I just have to say, WOW🤗 I love these kind of stories, the plot, twists, everything is on top, love love love love love it 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Gave you 5 stars because you deserve it, I'm loving he story already, Alexander is everywhere, the master mind, jus love his character so much loving he arguments of Amelia and Lucas Would Love to read more from you [img=update][img=recommend]
I'm new on webnovel and it's the first story l've tried reading, 💕💕💕 Not regretting my decision Superb story plot The twists The characters Loveing it 💙
Author has great skills, not kidding❤ Even tho it's just a start but the story is already top class, I'll recommend this to everyone, great story, great plot, I like the twists and how you designed the characters 🤘 Literally the best novel I've read so far💝💝💝💝💝💝💝
I won't deny the fact that this story already caught my interest. I know it will be a good, popular story as time goes by. Despite having minor errors, I know Author is working on it now. (Note: Don't worry, most of us struggle with this stuff.) But overall, I am encouraging everyone to give a try to this story and you will never regret reading it. You nailed it, Author! Don't forget to upload chapters daily! 💕❤
Although its currently only a few chapters but the pace and plot revealed in these few chapters are captivating enough leaving us wanting more.
There is still soon for a review, after all only 3 chapters are published but the only words I have for the author is to keep patient and write at his own pace,
Hi author here👋 it's a twisted story of two best friends hope y'all like it💛 I'm trying to do my best, if you have any questions regarding my book i would love to answer, do read and add your review that would be great💜 Reminder [ English is not the author's language ]_💚