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thanks for the 1st Bhartiya kingdom building novel I read after reading hundreds of Chinese versions. I am currently at chapter 610+ Story is very well written with extensive research on most of the topics...Author has improved very well through novel and our civilization spirit has been understood by the Author. the only flaw I would say is that after conquering northern part of the country a few chapters describing how development is promoted there was expected by many...which was not given....and northern states are like neglected. Rest everything is to my liking and I would give a 5 star for this novel.
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I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.
Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️
Glad to know someone took initiative to write fanfiction genre on Indian history Writing quality is good And every characters background and there POV is explained throughly waiting for next update
I hope vijay occupy all of this , also oil regions. This is a good story I like it, I hope he can possibly make both American continents into multiples small countries,not like USA, cananda , Brazil, Argentina, mexico, they have potential to be superpower and pose threat.
Warning! this is a story for only indians. it started well until chapter 150 where the author started being biased on all other religions calling it man made, he goes to the length that he even put the Mc rewrite The quran and the bible. shrug i mean did he takes all Muslims and christian to have low iq that they will accept a book founded in a cave and started believing that it is the real one because it is written in the same language as that religions and suddenly all the world started believing it, the mc even started executing (murdering)the old Muslims just for the old one to be forgotten,if not a tyrant then what( even the prisoners and withnesses where murdered to clear all evidence.). and the thing about dharmic islam and christian make it worse that why i said this is a novel only for indians. if the holy books where easily tempered with then many emperor in the world would have put their names in the book as prophets or something.
Reveal Spoiler
Great novel, 👏👏 Here are ideas you can consider for the future, 1) India should guarantee Tibet's independence so that there is a buffer state between future China and India. 2)The country you are planning for Jews should be the current day Israel including Sinai Peninsula so that you can at least indirectly control future Suez canal to guarantee access to Mediterranean sea. 3) For above mentioned reason India should also control Socotra island and have naval presence in Red sea. 4) India should control or guarantee independence of Hawaii island to limit future US interference in East asia(if US will exist in this timeline that is) 5) If India continues it's vendetta against Britain and it's friendship with Spain then India should guarantee full control of Gibralter to Spain to guarantee access to Atlantic.
Good overall…recommend to read at least free chapters and you will definitely love it
nice story and plots. Although a bit of harem would be appreciated, just saying.
Author you should also consider situation about china ..... because until 1720 Tibet was not part of Qing Dynasty. Bharat should either absorb Tibet or at least guarantee independence to them/ defence pact so that there will be buffer between two nations. In present day china often use dams built on brahmaputra river to blackmail/threaten north eastern states with floods.
this book is so good P.S I have been giving 3 power stones daily for a now 🐧
One of the best novels recently. Vers well thought out world and story building.
this is not story. this is info dump wish fulfillment about technologies and government in india in 17th century. early chapters are somewhat ok cause you can actually see MC doing something, but in later chapters you will just see info dump after info dump without any story about MC.
me encanta esta historia al igual que me es fascinante la historia de la india
je suis tellement impatient de lire la suite domage qu on doit attendre 24 h pour relire
this is a pretty good novel, i think this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
It’s a very good story and I wish to see the map of akhand bharatiya empires political map
thanks for the 1st Bhartiya kingdom building novel I read after reading hundreds of Chinese versions. I am currently at chapter 610+ Story is very well written with extensive research on most of the topics...Author has improved very well through novel and our civilization spirit has been understood by the Author. the only flaw I would say is that after conquering northern part of the country a few chapters describing how development is promoted there was expected by many...which was not given....and northern states are like neglected. Rest everything is to my liking and I would give a 5 star for this novel.
🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠🦠[img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
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I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.
Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️
Glad to know someone took initiative to write fanfiction genre on Indian history Writing quality is good And every characters background and there POV is explained throughly waiting for next update
I hope vijay occupy all of this , also oil regions. This is a good story I like it, I hope he can possibly make both American continents into multiples small countries,not like USA, cananda , Brazil, Argentina, mexico, they have potential to be superpower and pose threat.
Warning! this is a story for only indians. it started well until chapter 150 where the author started being biased on all other religions calling it man made, he goes to the length that he even put the Mc rewrite The quran and the bible. shrug i mean did he takes all Muslims and christian to have low iq that they will accept a book founded in a cave and started believing that it is the real one because it is written in the same language as that religions and suddenly all the world started believing it, the mc even started executing (murdering)the old Muslims just for the old one to be forgotten,if not a tyrant then what( even the prisoners and withnesses where murdered to clear all evidence.). and the thing about dharmic islam and christian make it worse that why i said this is a novel only for indians. if the holy books where easily tempered with then many emperor in the world would have put their names in the book as prophets or something.
Reveal Spoiler Great novel, 👏👏 Here are ideas you can consider for the future, 1) India should guarantee Tibet's independence so that there is a buffer state between future China and India. 2)The country you are planning for Jews should be the current day Israel including Sinai Peninsula so that you can at least indirectly control future Suez canal to guarantee access to Mediterranean sea. 3) For above mentioned reason India should also control Socotra island and have naval presence in Red sea. 4) India should control or guarantee independence of Hawaii island to limit future US interference in East asia(if US will exist in this timeline that is) 5) If India continues it's vendetta against Britain and it's friendship with Spain then India should guarantee full control of Gibralter to Spain to guarantee access to Atlantic.
Good overall…recommend to read at least free chapters and you will definitely love it
nice story and plots. Although a bit of harem would be appreciated, just saying.
Author you should also consider situation about china ..... because until 1720 Tibet was not part of Qing Dynasty. Bharat should either absorb Tibet or at least guarantee independence to them/ defence pact so that there will be buffer between two nations. In present day china often use dams built on brahmaputra river to blackmail/threaten north eastern states with floods.
this book is so good P.S I have been giving 3 power stones daily for a now 🐧
One of the best novels recently. Vers well thought out world and story building.
this is not story. this is info dump wish fulfillment about technologies and government in india in 17th century. early chapters are somewhat ok cause you can actually see MC doing something, but in later chapters you will just see info dump after info dump without any story about MC.
me encanta esta historia al igual que me es fascinante la historia de la india
je suis tellement impatient de lire la suite domage qu on doit attendre 24 h pour relire
this is a pretty good novel, i think this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
It’s a very good story and I wish to see the map of akhand bharatiya empires political map
very bad .....,.................................