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One of the best novels recently. Vers well thought out world and story building.
this is not story. this is info dump wish fulfillment about technologies and government in india in 17th century. early chapters are somewhat ok cause you can actually see MC doing something, but in later chapters you will just see info dump after info dump without any story about MC.
me encanta esta historia al igual que me es fascinante la historia de la india
je suis tellement impatient de lire la suite domage qu on doit attendre 24 h pour relire
this is a pretty good novel, i think this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
It’s a very good story and I wish to see the map of akhand bharatiya empires political map
Read until 150 chapters. I like the plot, but the author is too racist and can not stop dropping racist remarks against other cultures and religions.
for those who can't afford to buy locked chapters you could fololowmy strategy for Free read: lvl4 account gives you 3 ads daily means 3 chapter unlocks you should open another WN account and it will give you another 3 chapters unblock daily. You could buy at least 2 free pass weakly basis that means in 10 days you get 6×10+2= 62 chapters which means 186 monthly. You can catch up with latest chapters in like 2-3 months. Author at least deserve this much dedication from my prospective at least. By the way author, nice work , keep going 🥰[img=update][img=update] And you should know Australia and New Zealand is free estate in 17th century 😉😉
After reading 400+ chapters, I can say that this novel is definitely a gem. Good grammar, good plot and good character design and world building. I highly recommend reading this novel.
bro you should provide maps and illustrations. It will make story more immersive. It will help people imagine geopolitical landscape of your Alternate timeline.
This story is very good. Finally seeing an Indian empire yo its glory. Please keep up the work.
Reading the novel since 138th chapter was posted and I am hopelessly hooked with the novel. First of a kind book which shows the alternative India and how it should have been if the subcontinent had been united under a competent ruler. Some mistakes here and there , but overall the novel is good. Sometimes wish I would have been reborn in this novel in 21st century.
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Author some suggestions for the end of the war arc as you will be barricading the borders of the Bhartiya empire. I'd much rather prefer joining the hindukush mountain range to Himalayas and barricading the part in between essentially bringing most of Afghanistan in control as by this time the land is majority held by Mughals and very less occupation by central asian kingdoms and safavid dynasty. Thus we can nip the Durrani Empire(Afghani empire) in the bud. Moreover form a rigorous and boisterous northern defence frontier made of hindukush mountain range in east, Afghani brutal terrain in northeast and Himalayas in its entirety for North and northeast. On the east side we can have the Ahom kingdom to go for parts of the northern burma and yunan area. While we can for the future conquests capture burma and Malaysia, thus we will be bordering two friendly nations on the east side iIe. Ahom kingdom and Siam kingdom(of the future). Moreover we can also capture the Singaporean choke point and control over trade in the entirety of the Indian ocean as a future Naval superpower.
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Good pace and continuity of the story with regular updates , Appreciate the regularity and hope you continue with same enthusiasm and similar level of constructive story-line. Best of luck Bro.[img=strong][img=Feeling it] As of now chapter 388 MC has a heir would like to see more of Empress Kavya in governing and helping MC as a leading business women and strategist. Also it can be fun if Vijay also gets some female General or something like that , what's your take on that . Would like to know.
I have been following this novel, and it's amazing! I myself am writing modern alternate history novels, and I am definitely inspired by it. P.S.: If you don't mind me asking, how much do you make with Webnovel contract? I made about 800 rupees till now with UPI. And, what is better, Patreon or Webnovel contract ?
such an bad third class, totally predictable waste of novel space on we novel. Auther you should read more novel of similar genre. then you understand how much you need to improve and how much cheap at present it is. but as a initial attempt of writing this novel I will clap for you to encourage you.
Awesome book but author if we check history rice want that famous as it is now like people used to eat millets more than rice because rice was once known as rich people's crop at those times I heard this from my grandma check this info and make changes like when u give rice as compensation for work .and also wheat is more used in north and north western india than rice
One of the best novels recently. Vers well thought out world and story building.
this is not story. this is info dump wish fulfillment about technologies and government in india in 17th century. early chapters are somewhat ok cause you can actually see MC doing something, but in later chapters you will just see info dump after info dump without any story about MC.
me encanta esta historia al igual que me es fascinante la historia de la india
je suis tellement impatient de lire la suite domage qu on doit attendre 24 h pour relire
this is a pretty good novel, i think this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
It’s a very good story and I wish to see the map of akhand bharatiya empires political map
Read until 150 chapters. I like the plot, but the author is too racist and can not stop dropping racist remarks against other cultures and religions.
for those who can't afford to buy locked chapters you could fololowmy strategy for Free read: lvl4 account gives you 3 ads daily means 3 chapter unlocks you should open another WN account and it will give you another 3 chapters unblock daily. You could buy at least 2 free pass weakly basis that means in 10 days you get 6×10+2= 62 chapters which means 186 monthly. You can catch up with latest chapters in like 2-3 months. Author at least deserve this much dedication from my prospective at least. By the way author, nice work , keep going 🥰[img=update][img=update] And you should know Australia and New Zealand is free estate in 17th century 😉😉
After reading 400+ chapters, I can say that this novel is definitely a gem. Good grammar, good plot and good character design and world building. I highly recommend reading this novel.
bro you should provide maps and illustrations. It will make story more immersive. It will help people imagine geopolitical landscape of your Alternate timeline.
This story is very good. Finally seeing an Indian empire yo its glory. Please keep up the work.
Reading the novel since 138th chapter was posted and I am hopelessly hooked with the novel. First of a kind book which shows the alternative India and how it should have been if the subcontinent had been united under a competent ruler. Some mistakes here and there , but overall the novel is good. Sometimes wish I would have been reborn in this novel in 21st century.
Super but if I can ready freely it's better because I can't afford to buy chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author some suggestions for the end of the war arc as you will be barricading the borders of the Bhartiya empire. I'd much rather prefer joining the hindukush mountain range to Himalayas and barricading the part in between essentially bringing most of Afghanistan in control as by this time the land is majority held by Mughals and very less occupation by central asian kingdoms and safavid dynasty. Thus we can nip the Durrani Empire(Afghani empire) in the bud. Moreover form a rigorous and boisterous northern defence frontier made of hindukush mountain range in east, Afghani brutal terrain in northeast and Himalayas in its entirety for North and northeast. On the east side we can have the Ahom kingdom to go for parts of the northern burma and yunan area. While we can for the future conquests capture burma and Malaysia, thus we will be bordering two friendly nations on the east side iIe. Ahom kingdom and Siam kingdom(of the future). Moreover we can also capture the Singaporean choke point and control over trade in the entirety of the Indian ocean as a future Naval superpower.
Reveal Spoiler Good pace and continuity of the story with regular updates , Appreciate the regularity and hope you continue with same enthusiasm and similar level of constructive story-line. Best of luck Bro.[img=strong][img=Feeling it] As of now chapter 388 MC has a heir would like to see more of Empress Kavya in governing and helping MC as a leading business women and strategist. Also it can be fun if Vijay also gets some female General or something like that , what's your take on that . Would like to know.
I have been following this novel, and it's amazing! I myself am writing modern alternate history novels, and I am definitely inspired by it. P.S.: If you don't mind me asking, how much do you make with Webnovel contract? I made about 800 rupees till now with UPI. And, what is better, Patreon or Webnovel contract ?
such an bad third class, totally predictable waste of novel space on we novel. Auther you should read more novel of similar genre. then you understand how much you need to improve and how much cheap at present it is. but as a initial attempt of writing this novel I will clap for you to encourage you.
Awesome book but author if we check history rice want that famous as it is now like people used to eat millets more than rice because rice was once known as rich people's crop at those times I heard this from my grandma check this info and make changes like when u give rice as compensation for work .and also wheat is more used in north and north western india than rice
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