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safa_bukhari

I'm hoping to see more from the chapters, and I'm curious to see how they conclude. Anyone can become addicted to the narrative. Continue your excellent job!

2yr
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Rayne_Rue

It's really an intriguing story love the characters, The Fl did some great job in jotting this novel down, Good job author, there are a few mistakes but that can be fixed soon.GReat work & keep writing!!

2yr
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Mourn_Shard

I definitely highly reccomend this to anyone who loves being sucked into a story with incredible imagery and an outstanding vocabulary! I've read 5 chapters and I look forward to reading more! 5/5 so far and that is my genuine opinion!

2yr
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NotBeatrix

Shameless Author Review Here! If you like historical romance, mystery, and a dazzling taste of Temptation then I highly recommend you check out my book! I don't think you'll regret this fun ride!

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Juliet_Omuadona

Intriguing, The structure of this story is great, from the beginning I got caught in even if I was not sure what was going on, the author had a way with words that kept me reading. If you are looking for a book with Mystery this is the one for you.

2yr
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Ice_Princesss

Wah, I'm super impressed. I love the way you structured the story. Your writing style is amazing and you really know how to use similes and metaphors to add a deeper understanding of the characters feelings and the story. The prologue was great. I could feel the emotions Lady Anya was feeling and I immediately fell for her perseverance. Overall, this is a great story with a lot of mystery and emotion. I'm looking forward to further reading .[img=recommend]

3yr
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Professor_slaroM

Awesome novel!! Interesting how the author has structured the novel with a personal taste at the beginning. It pulled me straight in! Love the author's level of vocabulary too, a great gem that more people should read!

3yr
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nikitaniki

well this book is completely different from the books I have read so far I can say that this book is really amazing, I was glued to the chapters, I really appreciate author's imagination and writing style, you deserves more and waiting for more chapters❤❤❤

3yr
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TonyT
LV 2 Badge

This book deserves to be more known than what it is. This is probably one of the more better written books that I've encountered during my time on this site. The story is done well and uses words beautifully to add flair to the characters and the environments as well as the events that take place.

3yr
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daniz_

This novel is amazing. Everything is perfect. The writing style is so mesmerizing that you can't stop reading the book. It deserves to be on top!

3yr
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JJ_Prakoso

Here are my honest thoughts about this based on what I read so far, World Building: I do like the world building is set on the kingdoms or medieval era and there is a setup about political marriage that can add more spice in this book. However, I am sorry to say this, but I suggest the author should give a little bit more description about the environment or the places so it can be more exciting to explore the world itself. Character: So far they quite distinct with one another especially with the dialogue. Reynold is also an interesting character with the ongoing even that happen to his life especially meeting the girl, Erin that have a very complicated parent or life too. Therefore, I do hope I can see more development about their relationship as well as the main character. Overall, it's quite decent read and I really appreciate the metaphorical writing style that make the plot smoother.Thank you very much and Keep up the good work

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3yr
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Akira_Monadelle

This novel is absolutely FLAWLESS. Perfection isn't even adequate to describe this novel. From the synopsis, I was immediately pulled in and with each word I read, I wanted to read more and more. Everything about this was just wonderful. The wording of the sentences were top notch and the dialogues were extremely realistic. I absolutely loved this hidden gem I gratefully got the chance to read. I'm looking forward to future updates. [img=recommend]

3yr
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Book_Pen

Vocabulary and Writing Skills....Superb!!! The author's writing style and skill is what highlighted in the novel. The conversations between Erin and her mom were excellent and funny. The character design and environment description was done perfectly. Though the start was bit slow, later on the story picked up speed. Enjoyed Reading!! Keep Going!!

3yr
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Leigh_Green

A wonderful read. This got me going continuously to the every next chapter. It's beautifully written in a wonderful pace. The characters are well described. The setting is modern contemporary. I've enjoyed so much reading this. I adore your book. Hope you pen a new one.

3yr
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Blackpaint

Definitely a hidden gem in this site. The details are just...woah. Every word flows oh so smoothly. Writing quality is definitely a 5/5. I end up reading more than what I intend to before doing the review. The characters are well crafted. Although I feel that the pace of the story is a bit slower than I expected, it adds to the charm of the story as the readers are able to savor each moments in the book. Great job Author!

3yr
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d_elfe

If you like confrontation and mystery, this book is for you. The writing quality is top notch, and the characters quite fiery. I'm not too sure where this is going, though, and will await further development.

3yr
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safa_bukhari

I'm hoping to see more from the chapters, and I'm curious to see how they conclude. Anyone can become addicted to the narrative. Continue your excellent job!

2yr
View 1 Replies
Rayne_Rue

It's really an intriguing story love the characters, The Fl did some great job in jotting this novel down, Good job author, there are a few mistakes but that can be fixed soon.GReat work & keep writing!!

2yr
View 1 Replies
Mourn_Shard

I definitely highly reccomend this to anyone who loves being sucked into a story with incredible imagery and an outstanding vocabulary! I've read 5 chapters and I look forward to reading more! 5/5 so far and that is my genuine opinion!

2yr
View 1 Replies
NotBeatrix

Shameless Author Review Here! If you like historical romance, mystery, and a dazzling taste of Temptation then I highly recommend you check out my book! I don't think you'll regret this fun ride!

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2yr
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Juliet_Omuadona

Intriguing, The structure of this story is great, from the beginning I got caught in even if I was not sure what was going on, the author had a way with words that kept me reading. If you are looking for a book with Mystery this is the one for you.

2yr
View 1 Replies
Ice_Princesss

Wah, I'm super impressed. I love the way you structured the story. Your writing style is amazing and you really know how to use similes and metaphors to add a deeper understanding of the characters feelings and the story. The prologue was great. I could feel the emotions Lady Anya was feeling and I immediately fell for her perseverance. Overall, this is a great story with a lot of mystery and emotion. I'm looking forward to further reading .[img=recommend]

3yr
View 2 Replies
Professor_slaroM

Awesome novel!! Interesting how the author has structured the novel with a personal taste at the beginning. It pulled me straight in! Love the author's level of vocabulary too, a great gem that more people should read!

3yr
View 1 Replies
nikitaniki

well this book is completely different from the books I have read so far I can say that this book is really amazing, I was glued to the chapters, I really appreciate author's imagination and writing style, you deserves more and waiting for more chapters❤❤❤

3yr
View 1 Replies
TonyT
LV 2 Badge

This book deserves to be more known than what it is. This is probably one of the more better written books that I've encountered during my time on this site. The story is done well and uses words beautifully to add flair to the characters and the environments as well as the events that take place.

3yr
View 1 Replies
daniz_

This novel is amazing. Everything is perfect. The writing style is so mesmerizing that you can't stop reading the book. It deserves to be on top!

3yr
View 1 Replies
JJ_Prakoso

Here are my honest thoughts about this based on what I read so far, World Building: I do like the world building is set on the kingdoms or medieval era and there is a setup about political marriage that can add more spice in this book. However, I am sorry to say this, but I suggest the author should give a little bit more description about the environment or the places so it can be more exciting to explore the world itself. Character: So far they quite distinct with one another especially with the dialogue. Reynold is also an interesting character with the ongoing even that happen to his life especially meeting the girl, Erin that have a very complicated parent or life too. Therefore, I do hope I can see more development about their relationship as well as the main character. Overall, it's quite decent read and I really appreciate the metaphorical writing style that make the plot smoother.Thank you very much and Keep up the good work

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3yr
View 1 Replies
Akira_Monadelle

This novel is absolutely FLAWLESS. Perfection isn't even adequate to describe this novel. From the synopsis, I was immediately pulled in and with each word I read, I wanted to read more and more. Everything about this was just wonderful. The wording of the sentences were top notch and the dialogues were extremely realistic. I absolutely loved this hidden gem I gratefully got the chance to read. I'm looking forward to future updates. [img=recommend]

3yr
View 1 Replies
Book_Pen

Vocabulary and Writing Skills....Superb!!! The author's writing style and skill is what highlighted in the novel. The conversations between Erin and her mom were excellent and funny. The character design and environment description was done perfectly. Though the start was bit slow, later on the story picked up speed. Enjoyed Reading!! Keep Going!!

3yr
View 1 Replies
Leigh_Green

A wonderful read. This got me going continuously to the every next chapter. It's beautifully written in a wonderful pace. The characters are well described. The setting is modern contemporary. I've enjoyed so much reading this. I adore your book. Hope you pen a new one.

3yr
View 1 Replies
Blackpaint

Definitely a hidden gem in this site. The details are just...woah. Every word flows oh so smoothly. Writing quality is definitely a 5/5. I end up reading more than what I intend to before doing the review. The characters are well crafted. Although I feel that the pace of the story is a bit slower than I expected, it adds to the charm of the story as the readers are able to savor each moments in the book. Great job Author!

3yr
View 1 Replies
d_elfe

If you like confrontation and mystery, this book is for you. The writing quality is top notch, and the characters quite fiery. I'm not too sure where this is going, though, and will await further development.

3yr
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