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Write a reviewTHIS BOOK IS AMAZING. Why? The story telling is great, It makes you feel like your in the movies. There is little to no grammar errors. The only downside is NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS :,( This is a diamond in a rough book.
Its unexpectedly really good. It has kingdom building like Release that Witch, but without harem so far and more detail on the war scene. I heard multiple point of view from human race will took too many chapters. if its interesting like Overlord, it will be nice.
Chap 90 Don’t worry he won’t save all females and the Chinese names for the army aren’t premanet the romance is pretty non existent one or 2 little dramas from the 2 girls in 90 chaps the mc is focus on building his kingdom he doesn’t have time for love 😂 he only has time for war and management of the races and government, infrastructure etc… he still has the Chinese name but it doesn’t affect anything hope it helps 👍
So much promise. Background, kingdom building, wars. However the stupid insert forced nonsense from the author changed so much. Whether keeping his chinese name in an Orc world but being called something else by everyone else. And also naming his orc legions (azure vermillion, etc). Not even the worst as he constantly saves female damsels in distress that are humans and puts his people in danger. Oh and the over sexualizing of the females in the novel is beyond frustarting. Author will never respond to any complaint from numerous readers up to chapter 22 at least. Thats when I dropped this headace
This book is solid, I really like it, but I had to drop it. Why? Because the MC won't use his system at all, if that was going to be the case, then don't put a system to begin with. His allies, his brothers that he cries for, his brethren that follow him with endless loyalty are dying before his very eyes every time he encounters the followers of the demons that have stupidly strong powers, but instead of buying a skill so he can fight head to head with them, like the Spell "[Haste]" that he purchased since the beginning of the novel, he just watches his brothers die in battle. The goblin abomination is a fat lard that uses his fat to deflect sword and spears? Then buy a piercing skill. The warlocks are crazy strong with their feline summons? Then buy a strengthening skill or a speed augmentation skill. The experience would have been so much more enjoyable if I didn't have to constantly think "why aren't you buying skills and just looking at your people and yourself being thrashed around?!?!?!" But world building is amazing, character design really great, very good writing with historical accurate descriptions of roman legions and soldiers from other civilizations. A little annoying that the MC uses Chinese names for everything but author quickly changes it by chapter ~120. I really like this book but my constant frustration at the mc not using his system really ruins it for me. I read until chapter 168 or something like that. If MC changes later on in the story it would be great and perhaps I would retake it. But for now just thinking about the frustration of seeing him not using the system when his soldiers are dying makes me upset.
Reveal Spoilernot bad.not good either.read till chap 142. for me lot of unnecessary details.u can skip like 5 chaps and still get the story.but the biggest reason for dropping this book is there is no romance.(for me it's like a dish without salt.).so yeah.keep up author.good luck....
Awalan yang bagus tapi terlalu banyak perang dan perang terus menerus ini membuatku bosan karena ceritanya semakin luas tapi unsur pembangunan kerajaannya makin hilang karena deskripsi tentang perang yang tak pernah habis aku suka ditailnya tentang keadaan perangnya tapi kalau terlalu banyak detail yang berulang akan menjadi membosankan aku melewati berapa bab tapi masih paham jalan cerita . kurangi bab perang dan fokus ke stabilitas kerajaan ekonomi kerajaan dan lain lain
i enjoyed it _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I love this novel it's a genuinely a good read I do hope you never drop it and instead finish it
Yo I really enjoy this story one thing I’m confused on tho is whether this story is based on Wow or not but I really like it either way I’m just struggling to find good WoW fanfic as I’m interested in reading such works
Excellent pacing; the character actually develops his tactics and technologies. he starts with a leg up, but he doesn't just automatically have these things; he has to actually develop then over time and employ through his knowledge. A fantastic plot. My only 2 complaints are that the characters don't feel as fleshed out as they could be, and the updating stability
Look I liked it at first but come on he’s a slave to his system not just that but he kills more nun humans then he does humans not just that but the rewards and punishments are uneven
this is a really great novel if you like military and war. I only hope that he will think more like of an orc (I don't mind smart orc) not how a human think and be savage towards his enemies. he should have characteristics of a real orc but smarter... sometimes he acts like a mediocre mc that's why i feel dull sometime to the mc.
Skip ch94-104 waist of money (just fillers) Story is ok MC doesn’t use his system which ridiculous. I think the author just included the system just to have the tag.
So easy everything is so easily solved with the system and plot armor. I personally prefer an MC growing through hardship mastering skills on his own rather than relying on the sys tem. Well the novel isn’t for me but it’s not terrible either
It was so good but sadly i cannot read it anymore. im new to this App and though Reading chapter is free
Hello! Just came to say that Chapters 51, 52 and 53 are the same and the original chapters 52 & 53 are missing. Thanks and hope this get's seen and the chapters get fixed!
Grammar and stuff is good, better than some novels by Americans and fellow brits. Annoyed me that the MC suddenly became stupid when he met a human girl with a harem coming in, despite my dislike of the genre. What really annoyed me was how the “human merchant” did not act like a merchant at all, acting like a child despite being twenty, wearing her emotions on her cuff, making verbal promises with no collateral as assurance and immediately calming to the presence of seemingly a mutant orc. Suddenly, the men become either annoying enemies with superficial personalities, arrogant etc, or if they are his subordinates their entire personality becomes righteousness and loyalty while the women become “fierce, cute, etc.” It’s quite demeaning really, and even I as a man think that, reading about these women that adorn the main character like jewellery
Great idea for a book, Especially the reason for the behavior of the orcs. I hope there will be more detailed dialogues with other races (In one of the chapters after thanks from .... they disappeared from the book) I also hope you will change his Chinese name to orcish
THIS BOOK IS AMAZING. Why? The story telling is great, It makes you feel like your in the movies. There is little to no grammar errors. The only downside is NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS :,( This is a diamond in a rough book.
Its unexpectedly really good. It has kingdom building like Release that Witch, but without harem so far and more detail on the war scene. I heard multiple point of view from human race will took too many chapters. if its interesting like Overlord, it will be nice.
Chap 90 Don’t worry he won’t save all females and the Chinese names for the army aren’t premanet the romance is pretty non existent one or 2 little dramas from the 2 girls in 90 chaps the mc is focus on building his kingdom he doesn’t have time for love 😂 he only has time for war and management of the races and government, infrastructure etc… he still has the Chinese name but it doesn’t affect anything hope it helps 👍
So much promise. Background, kingdom building, wars. However the stupid insert forced nonsense from the author changed so much. Whether keeping his chinese name in an Orc world but being called something else by everyone else. And also naming his orc legions (azure vermillion, etc). Not even the worst as he constantly saves female damsels in distress that are humans and puts his people in danger. Oh and the over sexualizing of the females in the novel is beyond frustarting. Author will never respond to any complaint from numerous readers up to chapter 22 at least. Thats when I dropped this headace
This book is solid, I really like it, but I had to drop it. Why? Because the MC won't use his system at all, if that was going to be the case, then don't put a system to begin with. His allies, his brothers that he cries for, his brethren that follow him with endless loyalty are dying before his very eyes every time he encounters the followers of the demons that have stupidly strong powers, but instead of buying a skill so he can fight head to head with them, like the Spell "[Haste]" that he purchased since the beginning of the novel, he just watches his brothers die in battle. The goblin abomination is a fat lard that uses his fat to deflect sword and spears? Then buy a piercing skill. The warlocks are crazy strong with their feline summons? Then buy a strengthening skill or a speed augmentation skill. The experience would have been so much more enjoyable if I didn't have to constantly think "why aren't you buying skills and just looking at your people and yourself being thrashed around?!?!?!" But world building is amazing, character design really great, very good writing with historical accurate descriptions of roman legions and soldiers from other civilizations. A little annoying that the MC uses Chinese names for everything but author quickly changes it by chapter ~120. I really like this book but my constant frustration at the mc not using his system really ruins it for me. I read until chapter 168 or something like that. If MC changes later on in the story it would be great and perhaps I would retake it. But for now just thinking about the frustration of seeing him not using the system when his soldiers are dying makes me upset.
Reveal Spoilernot bad.not good either.read till chap 142. for me lot of unnecessary details.u can skip like 5 chaps and still get the story.but the biggest reason for dropping this book is there is no romance.(for me it's like a dish without salt.).so yeah.keep up author.good luck....
Awalan yang bagus tapi terlalu banyak perang dan perang terus menerus ini membuatku bosan karena ceritanya semakin luas tapi unsur pembangunan kerajaannya makin hilang karena deskripsi tentang perang yang tak pernah habis aku suka ditailnya tentang keadaan perangnya tapi kalau terlalu banyak detail yang berulang akan menjadi membosankan aku melewati berapa bab tapi masih paham jalan cerita . kurangi bab perang dan fokus ke stabilitas kerajaan ekonomi kerajaan dan lain lain
i enjoyed it _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I love this novel it's a genuinely a good read I do hope you never drop it and instead finish it
Yo I really enjoy this story one thing I’m confused on tho is whether this story is based on Wow or not but I really like it either way I’m just struggling to find good WoW fanfic as I’m interested in reading such works
Excellent pacing; the character actually develops his tactics and technologies. he starts with a leg up, but he doesn't just automatically have these things; he has to actually develop then over time and employ through his knowledge. A fantastic plot. My only 2 complaints are that the characters don't feel as fleshed out as they could be, and the updating stability
Look I liked it at first but come on he’s a slave to his system not just that but he kills more nun humans then he does humans not just that but the rewards and punishments are uneven
this is a really great novel if you like military and war. I only hope that he will think more like of an orc (I don't mind smart orc) not how a human think and be savage towards his enemies. he should have characteristics of a real orc but smarter... sometimes he acts like a mediocre mc that's why i feel dull sometime to the mc.
Skip ch94-104 waist of money (just fillers) Story is ok MC doesn’t use his system which ridiculous. I think the author just included the system just to have the tag.
So easy everything is so easily solved with the system and plot armor. I personally prefer an MC growing through hardship mastering skills on his own rather than relying on the sys tem. Well the novel isn’t for me but it’s not terrible either
It was so good but sadly i cannot read it anymore. im new to this App and though Reading chapter is free
Hello! Just came to say that Chapters 51, 52 and 53 are the same and the original chapters 52 & 53 are missing. Thanks and hope this get's seen and the chapters get fixed!
Grammar and stuff is good, better than some novels by Americans and fellow brits. Annoyed me that the MC suddenly became stupid when he met a human girl with a harem coming in, despite my dislike of the genre. What really annoyed me was how the “human merchant” did not act like a merchant at all, acting like a child despite being twenty, wearing her emotions on her cuff, making verbal promises with no collateral as assurance and immediately calming to the presence of seemingly a mutant orc. Suddenly, the men become either annoying enemies with superficial personalities, arrogant etc, or if they are his subordinates their entire personality becomes righteousness and loyalty while the women become “fierce, cute, etc.” It’s quite demeaning really, and even I as a man think that, reading about these women that adorn the main character like jewellery
Great idea for a book, Especially the reason for the behavior of the orcs. I hope there will be more detailed dialogues with other races (In one of the chapters after thanks from .... they disappeared from the book) I also hope you will change his Chinese name to orcish