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I like it, but it hasn't been updated in three months. I will still read it and keep it in my library. I hope the author continues this series.
I just stard reading but alread fells some emotion conection with this one so wull give a 5 stars cause a great One Piece fanfic should be able to evoke strong emotions in the reader. Whether it's joy, sadness, excitement, or fear, the best fanfics can create a powerful emotional connection with their readers.
I finally catched up! Amazing fanfic. Please keep this up and be proud of your work because it's really good. Also this is already good, and this is just a suggestion but can you please add in just a speck of romance for Rin? It doesn't have to change anything in the story/plot. Just to like, appeal female viewers such as myself.
The story was touching, and really make me feel connected to the mc. sadly I dropped the story at chapter 41... great ff overall!
The biggest problem is that there isn't more of it. ...................................................................................................
best one-piece fantic so far and one of only 2 books I've read for more than 20 chapters, if the author starts uploading again it will definitely be something I read, amazing book, amazing work
Not a great, but a good fiction nonetheless 👍 But I would like more structure, the system is ... Whimsical. I still don't understand how can mc afford a devil fruit... At best she earned 1mln berry, but a simple paramecia is 100 mln berry, not to mention logia. Mc is also a moron for... forgetting she has a system... And even then she doesn't use it fully... Adding a twin to the mix is.. bs. Just add her from the very beginning if you want... As for tomas... I only have one problem with him. He doesn't have a body... On the other hand you have a mc with devil fruit that can grant him his body... Why did you make Tomas cheat from the very beginning by giving him the ability to create his own body?... By your logic he then can also recreate Kado body and possess it. Author - stop cheating! You have to follow the rules of the world!
Thanks for this fanfic much better than many. Hope u keep writing it and update more often.
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I like that fic a lot, hope you keep a good job 👍 Thought i think it's a bit slow, but it's still better than 3/4 of the others stories in this site
dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped?
Yeni bölüm nerde yeni bölüm istirem ağağağağa yeni bölümmm one piçi seviyorum ve bunu okumakta eğlenceli cidden eglenceli okurken sıkılmıyorum
I love the story very much!!! I wish i can read another chap. Keep ur spirit up author! I'm waiting for ur new update [img=recommend]. Stay healthy too <3
I'll keep it short, an amazing find like that of a treasure box filled with golds, jewels, etc. Can't say much more, though it won't let me post if I don't put enough words...
Love this fanfics so far its now in my library and i'm excited to see where you will go with this fanfics
Loved the story so far hope to read more soon, keep up the good work =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =)
i love that there are no boring details . when are you going to write again ? i hope it's soon
I like it, but it hasn't been updated in three months. I will still read it and keep it in my library. I hope the author continues this series.
I just stard reading but alread fells some emotion conection with this one so wull give a 5 stars cause a great One Piece fanfic should be able to evoke strong emotions in the reader. Whether it's joy, sadness, excitement, or fear, the best fanfics can create a powerful emotional connection with their readers.
I finally catched up! Amazing fanfic. Please keep this up and be proud of your work because it's really good. Also this is already good, and this is just a suggestion but can you please add in just a speck of romance for Rin? It doesn't have to change anything in the story/plot. Just to like, appeal female viewers such as myself.
The story was touching, and really make me feel connected to the mc. sadly I dropped the story at chapter 41... great ff overall!
The biggest problem is that there isn't more of it. ...................................................................................................
best one-piece fantic so far and one of only 2 books I've read for more than 20 chapters, if the author starts uploading again it will definitely be something I read, amazing book, amazing work
Not a great, but a good fiction nonetheless 👍 But I would like more structure, the system is ... Whimsical. I still don't understand how can mc afford a devil fruit... At best she earned 1mln berry, but a simple paramecia is 100 mln berry, not to mention logia. Mc is also a moron for... forgetting she has a system... And even then she doesn't use it fully... Adding a twin to the mix is.. bs. Just add her from the very beginning if you want... As for tomas... I only have one problem with him. He doesn't have a body... On the other hand you have a mc with devil fruit that can grant him his body... Why did you make Tomas cheat from the very beginning by giving him the ability to create his own body?... By your logic he then can also recreate Kado body and possess it. Author - stop cheating! You have to follow the rules of the world!
Thanks for this fanfic much better than many. Hope u keep writing it and update more often.
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I like that fic a lot, hope you keep a good job 👍 Thought i think it's a bit slow, but it's still better than 3/4 of the others stories in this site
dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped? dropped?
Yeni bölüm nerde yeni bölüm istirem ağağağağa yeni bölümmm one piçi seviyorum ve bunu okumakta eğlenceli cidden eglenceli okurken sıkılmıyorum
I love the story very much!!! I wish i can read another chap. Keep ur spirit up author! I'm waiting for ur new update [img=recommend]. Stay healthy too <3
I'll keep it short, an amazing find like that of a treasure box filled with golds, jewels, etc. Can't say much more, though it won't let me post if I don't put enough words...
Love this fanfics so far its now in my library and i'm excited to see where you will go with this fanfics
Loved the story so far hope to read more soon, keep up the good work =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =) =)
i love that there are no boring details . when are you going to write again ? i hope it's soon