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I’m currently on chapter 1196 and I’d like to express my appreciation as well as my dissatisfaction for this great piece Overall it is a great book buh it’s slowing falling apart in my opinion , characters feel alive, world building and lore is excellent. But my turn off is how certain characters behave at certain times. Take the moon princess for one, she might think she’s doing him good buh she’s slowly pushing him to madness, when the dragon of death was escaping she could have prompted him buh nope “he has to learn his lesson the hard way” what if jue Kong managed to kill one of his people in the future??? And also with the guy who managed to control the earth, she knew he was no match and could have intervened when he begged but no, it served as an avenue for the author to pull new powers outta his bottom to add more plot armor… and let’s not forget that the moon princess lived because he sacrificed part of the power that could have mad him more stronger so in the end she’s an ungrateful selfish individual who thinks she’s doing it for the ‘bigger picture’.. and Xing Chen’s character feels forced and a bit overpowered I mean, unless the author states that he can see some snippets of the future I would say he is a fraudulent character… MC is a Simp Welp this is just me venting 😤
nice novel but the hype about Mc is too much and the story line development is slow
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Read it, you won't regret it.....................................................................................................................................................................
it is a good novel. everything is good like story world background cultivation etc but the main problem for me is the romance part and mc personality. I heard that mc and his relationship with fmc will change drastically after 1000 chp later, so I am not going to read it anymore. mc personality is not that good either he was a killer in his past life, and now, this life, he was talking about morals like he didn't want to change hist with his foster mother so can you can understand she wasn't his real mother and he also knows that she loves him romantically but he didn't want to change his relationship with his mother because of morals that small thing ruined my mood completely
Hello author! Could you tell me approximately how many chapters the work will have? ................................................................
this novel feels like heavy influenced by another Chinese novel AGAINST THE GODS with less faceslap and brain dead young masters . Any way I like this novel except sometimes bcs of too much kindness of mc. mystery behind beyond heaven king force readers to countinue reading this novel. If anyone want to read similar to Against the gods novel this one is worth spending time. i have many questions but there is no discord for this novel. like why mc didn't practice his main cultivation technique so far he only unlocked level 2 and there are 7 level more left and he is already top of divine realm.
First Review - Chapter 308 . . . A Book Worth Reading, It's a good Eastern Fantasy for anyone that likes this gener . ( Below things are all Personal Opinion) Pros - 1. Well Written With Few Mistakes in writing quality. 2. Good Power ups With Steady Pace , need improvement but Works. 3. Not biased on only one or two characters . 4. No overly done sensitive things for kids so kids can read as well . 5. Characters aren't 2 dimensional cons- 1. Same word mistakes for hundreds of chapters with no improvement . ( Ex: ConsOriginal that should be Conspiracy ) 2. Characters feel alive but none feel too important. 3. Lack of Minor details that create suspense or thrill . but the author did try can't deny. 4. World Building needs more work and details . that's it for now , I'll make another review later after throughout observation and reading there are more then 2000 chapters already after all .
Mc is to stupid. He is the type of guy that the Author tries to portray as Smart but then does the most brainless Actions.
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Author! Could you tell me which realm Yun Lintian is currently in? According to the Wiki he is at fourth rank divine king, but that was in chapter 1700 and something...
can aurhor sama atleast let his wives not be a vase man they are quite useless almost all of his companion became irelevant on wars xoxoxoxo
Author! Please tell me what happened to Lynn and Yang ning, I'm going into a deep depression here.... Will they meet yun lintian again????????????????
Author! Which girls are currently in the harem??? .................................................... .................................................... .......
Author! How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?
this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this
Overall the best cultivation novel I’ve read. It reminds me of Journey to Becoming a True God except that it’s much more refined in the story development, grammar and writing quality, and the fact that the Harem isn’t so abnormally large that I forget some of the women’s names. I truly want this novel to reach a satisfying conclusion and not end in the middle of the story like some novels. Thank you for such a great story author 🙏🏼
I think its good good luck auther I read first 4 chapter and it has good idea good characters and good world i think ………………………………………………
Took this man 1362 chapters to get together with someone he loves and they arent even blood related to be okay with it...just stupid. MC is not really likeable....I tried for 50 chapters or so but he isnt willing to take initiative for women. Then he starts hating on some other people for being simps but he himself cant bring up courage for the person he likes. Also initially its tedious since he doesnt have any battle capability for 50 chapters. He is so weak almost anyone can kill him....He keeps saying he wants cheats like other transmigrators but he doesnt work hard or train....He does have other medical, formation etc knowledge but his strength is so weak....I mean he sometimes acts smart but then other times makes idiotic decisions. He has grown up in a comfortable environment protected by sect master and just chills. He has his past knowledge but didnt even try for 16 years to ask if they have enemies etc. I mean he finds out 16 years later he has been chilling in sect enjoying life but there are so many people coming to kill off his sect....I mean he goes to a inheritance sight and the old ancestor spirit is like go and get the treasure....but he is like no and tries to leave because he doesnt want to take risks...I mean his sect got basically destroyed, and sect master who he loves had to burn her lifespan but we have this duma** doing nothing. I got sick of it
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
not liked but I guess it's good overall. The plot is 50/50. You should have made the plot more interesting.
One of the best Novels I have read. One is this novel and the other one is Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor. (Yeah, only those two that caught my eyes and was intrigued to never give up any of these Novels) The story building and setting is 10/10. The ability to create curiosity is also 10/10. And then mystery and every other thing you can think of 10/10. But there is one thing I didn't understand. And that is the first chapter. It was a bit difficult to understand for me. (I may understand the chapter if i have read it again. But didn't do it for the time being as i didn't wanted to read and experience the later chapters. And I still didn't read it.) So I will give the first chapter 7/10. But that won't affect my overall score of 10/10. And my question regarding the first chapter is You (Author) described some figures filled with mist. I lost the count there and the one who spoke melodically and the one who was cold. And Author, let me give you some advice as a fan, So far you have written the novel really well (I mean up to the point I have read it's really interesting). So, when one day you reach the end of the novel, don't rush for an ending. i have seen many novels that has started well at the beginning but due to different reasons (like Fans losing interest etc.). they decide to finish the novel quickly and thus resulting in wavering their undefeated Dao Heart. So don't lose hope or rush things... I can see this novel is doing really well and maybe you won't need this advice. But nothing is absolute. So, if you write the novel without losing interest, one day someone will find this novel and read it until the end because the ending is good and systematical. So Good Luck On your future endeavors. Will buy the privilege chapters once I caught up.
I've read up to ch.925 and I'm quite curious if there's an improvement in the harem part of the story?? will he have single digit members or will it reach double digits??i hope someone could tell me
Interesting world building and character deaign, but I find the plot a bit lacking. The MC seems to blindly follow his "destiny" as he gradually accepts the inheritance of the strongest expert ever, while there are various seniors who find it necessary to never tell him anything while forcing him to fight vastly overpowered foes, who he manages to defeat either by lack or by the senior's intervention... Meanwhile, the MC is surrounded by women apparently in love with him, without any conflicts, but he keeps a distance since he still grieves for his lost love...
Cih the prologue ruin the story, I believe you will get more fans if not for the prologue...
The story so far has been very engaging and the premise of the protagonist, Yun Lintian that "supposedly" reincarnates without cheat powers is very interesting for an eastern fantasy novel. The author managed to keep us enthralled by dropping hints about the protagonist's mysterious past and hopefully, future "cheat powers" which the protagonist so comically complains about not having so often. The protagonist, being an avid Xianxia reader himself has entertained us with modern jokes combined with "fourth wall breaking" within his inner monologues, has never failed to leave me with a chuckle. His well-written character development gives you an insight into how really each person’s relationship to him is, to a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. One can ignore its minor grammatical quirks, as this novel has impressed me with how well written it is as an original novel, and with its world-building and attention to detail, it definitely made me feel as though i was reading a translated Chinese novel. Its in-depth plot, pacing, interesting characters, and especially the very likable and smart protagonist leaves me with an impression of: "This is a quality novel". This is a great read overall and I am looking forward to the unveiling of its mysteries, the protagonist’s future development and his connection with the other characters. This is a Xianxia novel with abundant potential. Keep up the great work author!
I’m currently on chapter 1196 and I’d like to express my appreciation as well as my dissatisfaction for this great piece Overall it is a great book buh it’s slowing falling apart in my opinion , characters feel alive, world building and lore is excellent. But my turn off is how certain characters behave at certain times. Take the moon princess for one, she might think she’s doing him good buh she’s slowly pushing him to madness, when the dragon of death was escaping she could have prompted him buh nope “he has to learn his lesson the hard way” what if jue Kong managed to kill one of his people in the future??? And also with the guy who managed to control the earth, she knew he was no match and could have intervened when he begged but no, it served as an avenue for the author to pull new powers outta his bottom to add more plot armor… and let’s not forget that the moon princess lived because he sacrificed part of the power that could have mad him more stronger so in the end she’s an ungrateful selfish individual who thinks she’s doing it for the ‘bigger picture’.. and Xing Chen’s character feels forced and a bit overpowered I mean, unless the author states that he can see some snippets of the future I would say he is a fraudulent character… MC is a Simp Welp this is just me venting 😤
nice novel but the hype about Mc is too much and the story line development is slow
Reveal Spoiler Read it, you won't regret it.....................................................................................................................................................................
it is a good novel. everything is good like story world background cultivation etc but the main problem for me is the romance part and mc personality. I heard that mc and his relationship with fmc will change drastically after 1000 chp later, so I am not going to read it anymore. mc personality is not that good either he was a killer in his past life, and now, this life, he was talking about morals like he didn't want to change hist with his foster mother so can you can understand she wasn't his real mother and he also knows that she loves him romantically but he didn't want to change his relationship with his mother because of morals that small thing ruined my mood completely
Hello author! Could you tell me approximately how many chapters the work will have? ................................................................
this novel feels like heavy influenced by another Chinese novel AGAINST THE GODS with less faceslap and brain dead young masters . Any way I like this novel except sometimes bcs of too much kindness of mc. mystery behind beyond heaven king force readers to countinue reading this novel. If anyone want to read similar to Against the gods novel this one is worth spending time. i have many questions but there is no discord for this novel. like why mc didn't practice his main cultivation technique so far he only unlocked level 2 and there are 7 level more left and he is already top of divine realm.
First Review - Chapter 308 . . . A Book Worth Reading, It's a good Eastern Fantasy for anyone that likes this gener . ( Below things are all Personal Opinion) Pros - 1. Well Written With Few Mistakes in writing quality. 2. Good Power ups With Steady Pace , need improvement but Works. 3. Not biased on only one or two characters . 4. No overly done sensitive things for kids so kids can read as well . 5. Characters aren't 2 dimensional cons- 1. Same word mistakes for hundreds of chapters with no improvement . ( Ex: ConsOriginal that should be Conspiracy ) 2. Characters feel alive but none feel too important. 3. Lack of Minor details that create suspense or thrill . but the author did try can't deny. 4. World Building needs more work and details . that's it for now , I'll make another review later after throughout observation and reading there are more then 2000 chapters already after all .
Mc is to stupid. He is the type of guy that the Author tries to portray as Smart but then does the most brainless Actions.
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Author! Could you tell me which realm Yun Lintian is currently in? According to the Wiki he is at fourth rank divine king, but that was in chapter 1700 and something...
can aurhor sama atleast let his wives not be a vase man they are quite useless almost all of his companion became irelevant on wars xoxoxoxo
Author! Please tell me what happened to Lynn and Yang ning, I'm going into a deep depression here.... Will they meet yun lintian again????????????????
Author! Which girls are currently in the harem??? .................................................... .................................................... .......
Author! How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?
this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this
Overall the best cultivation novel I’ve read. It reminds me of Journey to Becoming a True God except that it’s much more refined in the story development, grammar and writing quality, and the fact that the Harem isn’t so abnormally large that I forget some of the women’s names. I truly want this novel to reach a satisfying conclusion and not end in the middle of the story like some novels. Thank you for such a great story author 🙏🏼
I think its good good luck auther I read first 4 chapter and it has good idea good characters and good world i think ………………………………………………
Took this man 1362 chapters to get together with someone he loves and they arent even blood related to be okay with it...just stupid. MC is not really likeable....I tried for 50 chapters or so but he isnt willing to take initiative for women. Then he starts hating on some other people for being simps but he himself cant bring up courage for the person he likes. Also initially its tedious since he doesnt have any battle capability for 50 chapters. He is so weak almost anyone can kill him....He keeps saying he wants cheats like other transmigrators but he doesnt work hard or train....He does have other medical, formation etc knowledge but his strength is so weak....I mean he sometimes acts smart but then other times makes idiotic decisions. He has grown up in a comfortable environment protected by sect master and just chills. He has his past knowledge but didnt even try for 16 years to ask if they have enemies etc. I mean he finds out 16 years later he has been chilling in sect enjoying life but there are so many people coming to kill off his sect....I mean he goes to a inheritance sight and the old ancestor spirit is like go and get the treasure....but he is like no and tries to leave because he doesnt want to take risks...I mean his sect got basically destroyed, and sect master who he loves had to burn her lifespan but we have this duma** doing nothing. I got sick of it
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
not liked but I guess it's good overall. The plot is 50/50. You should have made the plot more interesting.
One of the best Novels I have read. One is this novel and the other one is Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor. (Yeah, only those two that caught my eyes and was intrigued to never give up any of these Novels) The story building and setting is 10/10. The ability to create curiosity is also 10/10. And then mystery and every other thing you can think of 10/10. But there is one thing I didn't understand. And that is the first chapter. It was a bit difficult to understand for me. (I may understand the chapter if i have read it again. But didn't do it for the time being as i didn't wanted to read and experience the later chapters. And I still didn't read it.) So I will give the first chapter 7/10. But that won't affect my overall score of 10/10. And my question regarding the first chapter is You (Author) described some figures filled with mist. I lost the count there and the one who spoke melodically and the one who was cold. And Author, let me give you some advice as a fan, So far you have written the novel really well (I mean up to the point I have read it's really interesting). So, when one day you reach the end of the novel, don't rush for an ending. i have seen many novels that has started well at the beginning but due to different reasons (like Fans losing interest etc.). they decide to finish the novel quickly and thus resulting in wavering their undefeated Dao Heart. So don't lose hope or rush things... I can see this novel is doing really well and maybe you won't need this advice. But nothing is absolute. So, if you write the novel without losing interest, one day someone will find this novel and read it until the end because the ending is good and systematical. So Good Luck On your future endeavors. Will buy the privilege chapters once I caught up.
I've read up to ch.925 and I'm quite curious if there's an improvement in the harem part of the story?? will he have single digit members or will it reach double digits??i hope someone could tell me
Interesting world building and character deaign, but I find the plot a bit lacking. The MC seems to blindly follow his "destiny" as he gradually accepts the inheritance of the strongest expert ever, while there are various seniors who find it necessary to never tell him anything while forcing him to fight vastly overpowered foes, who he manages to defeat either by lack or by the senior's intervention... Meanwhile, the MC is surrounded by women apparently in love with him, without any conflicts, but he keeps a distance since he still grieves for his lost love...
Cih the prologue ruin the story, I believe you will get more fans if not for the prologue...
The story so far has been very engaging and the premise of the protagonist, Yun Lintian that "supposedly" reincarnates without cheat powers is very interesting for an eastern fantasy novel. The author managed to keep us enthralled by dropping hints about the protagonist's mysterious past and hopefully, future "cheat powers" which the protagonist so comically complains about not having so often. The protagonist, being an avid Xianxia reader himself has entertained us with modern jokes combined with "fourth wall breaking" within his inner monologues, has never failed to leave me with a chuckle. His well-written character development gives you an insight into how really each person’s relationship to him is, to a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. One can ignore its minor grammatical quirks, as this novel has impressed me with how well written it is as an original novel, and with its world-building and attention to detail, it definitely made me feel as though i was reading a translated Chinese novel. Its in-depth plot, pacing, interesting characters, and especially the very likable and smart protagonist leaves me with an impression of: "This is a quality novel". This is a great read overall and I am looking forward to the unveiling of its mysteries, the protagonist’s future development and his connection with the other characters. This is a Xianxia novel with abundant potential. Keep up the great work author!