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Solomon_David

An entertaining story overall. However, the grammer is a bit lacking. At least the right pronouns are used. A lot of novels that are translated mix up the he, her, she, and him pronouns, making me wonder if the person is a hermaphrodite. At least, so far, I haven't encountered this problem in this novel yet. If you don't mind the grammatical errors of using the wrong tense, which are the majority of the mistakes, you might enjoy this fantasy novel.

1yr
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mookalya

Fun op mc romp in a xianxia world. I like the mc he amuses me

1yr
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Bashir_Jajere

this is just sooo addictive....the mc is smart,cool and strong. story development is awesome. I mean I don't even have enough words for this book

1yr
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Zerk8126

this book has terrible grammar the story is pretty good and makes sense but the grammar is killing me. Definitely needs an editor

1yr
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MajidX200

I didn't read the story (not my style) but I respect the author's passion and perseverance.❤ (Thanks to Google Translate)

1yr
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Daoist8b2ZUY

is it harem?‽?????????????????????????????? so far its good but i dont want to see a harem

1yr
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Amateur_03

This novel has good points and bad. Good points were these: •Does MC has great fighting and defense sense? Well, he has guts when facing the enemy, he knows how to retreat and ignore taunting from the cliche classic young master of the enemy. •What about his Overall Strength? He can't even utilize his full potential, In this one situation, time was tight and the enemy are on the 2 to 3 full realms stronger than him, he can breakthrough anytime to surpass the gap because he had the strength that can fight 2 realms in the gap but of course, it is limited only when facing 1 to 3 enemies, but in multiple, he has good grasps in formation and some forbidden arts to accelerate his realm into 2 realms in an instant. Of course, that would burn his strength and it's only limited as well. He keeps insisting on holding back from his breakthrough because of this some important heaven essences what you called that from the Mythical Frozen Domain etc. So he's holding back from breaking through. Well, what more he could ask, he had the Gate Beyond Heaven (a spatial world that was left by his parents, and it has unlimited resources). So he can train to the point he was strong enough to erase the restriction of the Mythical Frozen Domain chuchu. He has wasted enough time increasing his strength and too many emotional strings that could keep him from getting stronger. •The MCs character is a simp, he was someone who has an Emperor's Destiny, and the things that were left by his parents literally could make him on top and the world beyond worlds. But he was even hesitating when he was asked to take a useless woman to be his master. Well maybe because he wants to take that granny in his harem because she was the no. 1 beauty chuchu in her prime and of course, he was capable enough to cure her. You can read what would the author has in mind, it's a harem route in the end.

1yr
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Roman123

Everything would not be what, well, the naivety and forgetfulness of Mac sometimes just amazes, I have read up to 500 chapters, I will not go on

1yr
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Dluxe
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Really good story for those interested in the genre. Very high quality with consistent daily uploads since I began reading early on. The author clearly has a story plan where things become clear as time passes and there is plenty of time for the character to learn and develop more. I’m always curious to know what is going to happen next and there is so much more room in the world background to discover in the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author, one of the only stories that I’ve kept up with since joining Webnovel.

2yr
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Tenthousandsuns

Ya'll its been so long reading cultivation novels where i haven't wanted to just rush and skip to when the mc upgrades. This story is actually good!!!!! The first few chapters had me questioning but after 8 or even 9 broooo

2yr
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crimsontail_01

Whenever mc goes on his adventures, someone always watch his back/monitor him, and then he goes like 'I have bad premonition' but then he still act like idiot and then run for his life🥴

2yr
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Kar_Min

To be honest, the start wasn't really bad but when the academy arc comes it goes wrong. Mc become really stupid in that arc. He shouldn't have use shadow movement technique as his main movement and show it off. Not only that his intelligence team also use that technique which can easily be traced back to him. And he looked down on monarch when he can't even defeat saint one easily. It's becoming really painful to read.

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mert_mert_1022

I recommend you read the novel, you will not regret it. It's a good novel. good luck to the author.

2yr
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usman7881

Great Story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

2yr
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Sahin_Ahmed_5099

After 650+ chapters I'm back to give another review. ~Mc isn't stupid, he doesn't chase skirts like most of the Cultivation novel MC's. He is hardworking, shameless, shows kindness and doesn't show mercy to his enemies. ~Side characters who's their own problems and life. They are not there to only shine the MC but they are flesh out characters who has their own uniqueness. Character development is really good. ~World building is also a strong point of the novel. There are another world's ready to be explored, there are multiple continents with their own uniqueness. And you can expect much more in the future. ~ Enemies are strong, really strong with great backgrounds and has massive armies. There are more than couple of enemies that MC has to face before continuing his journey. One more powerful than the other. ~Battle scenes are really good. It takes his intelligence as well his strength to come out on the positive side of the battles. ~English is the the best but it's not the worst either with few grammatical errors. ~Romance has potential. Trust me on this but i see that author knows his stuff and you can expect a gradual building relationship between characters. ~It is a well paced story neither slow nor fast. ~MC has his plot armor but that will not make him OP, though it will give him an immense potential on his journey to the top.He isn't seeking strength for some b*lls**t reasons but to save his life and the lives of his subordinates. ~MC is not omnipotent he will make mistakes, he has his own flaws. But let me remind you without flaws there will be a limited space for character growth. Overall a very good gem of a novel.If you've read this far that give it a try you'll surely love it.

2yr
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ShuraZero

This is Harem o no harem??...................................................................................................... ............................................................................................... ...............................................................................................

2yr
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naruto_shippuden_6468

amazing read , has a great story line with alot of mystery . the story has a lot of room for a long entertainmenting storyline and l Hope the Arthur continues to the end

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Lucefero

This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.

2yr
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blackceleste

This is interesting. Not the typical reincarnation stories and the mc don't have a system to rely on. Still, he is strong enough to learn things on his own. I also like the part where he has strong enemies at the start, not the usual ones who start along with an MCs role---from small rivals. If u know what I mean.

2yr
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fud0shiki

But the important thing is................................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . DOES IT HAVE LEMONSSSS

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Axzile
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Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Spoiler Alert !!!!!!!!!!! For those who had read Against The Gods prepare to be "TRIGGERED" because of the non-stop trouble coming after MC one after another without a second of delay(and i MEANT IT), beautiful women with past problems/troubles that just keep coming into the life of MC( i've no problem with the ones from his sect ), also his women(basically his entire sect) or those that he care get hurts while he gone even when he literally less than 1KM away from them they still get hurts without him knowing anything. Seriously, i'm really TTTTRRRRIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGEEEEEERRRREEEEEDDDD right now........

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theyasuke_

There's no need to hesitate to hop on this novel. it's carry entertaining and impressive, not the best but still good The mc isn't brain dead like usual and the side characters are good.

2yr
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Sahin_Ahmed_5099

First of all thank you Author for this novel, really appreciate your work. If you're looking for a story with great story, world building, interesting characters,great fight scene ,regular update and of course mature and intelligent mc than this is a gem for you. I'm in chap 304 now, author did a great job with his till now and if you haven't read this novel you're missing one of the best novel in this site of this genre. Atleast do try it out before you decide you should read or not. You'll not regret it. Author looking forward to your hard work thanks 🙏

2yr
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thats_right_3880

overall i like the story but i have watched 150 chapter and overall mc does have his value due to his 'plot armor' but everytime time in front of the enemy he is pathetic, mc is cool but i dont whem he will be equal to his enemy like according to every cultivation novel in this time of story where mc can fight higer level than his own cultivation cultivator he would always be on the run like just from reading 150 chapter i got to know his first enemy is strong and he needs to reach high level cultivation but he discovered that his enemy has a backer who is several times stronger than them and due to mc sect having divine artifact whole class sect also after him like i hate this kind of story where mc is always on th run and can only sign of relief and not be vigilent when he reached top of the omniverse and until then it would have already 1500 chapter and when he relaxed this would only be 3 chater like evrytime time i read cultivation novel the thing i want to see only happens in a overpowered mc cultivation novel or only at the end of every normal cultivation novel.....anyway this is my opinion ....... ... for those who are interested in cultivation novel, intelligent mc novel, little bit op mc(only because of his 'plot armor'), and no harem? i dont know .... it is extremly good read..

2yr
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EVILCLOWN

Good novel give it a chance it's about a mc with low talent getting transmigrated without a cheat. Only problem I feel is the unnecessary hype surrounding mc mysterious situation. I just read a fanfic where the author created hype about MC's father and didn't reveal him. And when the father finally got revealed, it was disappointing (he was revealed in ch 150).

3yr
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LeiShem

harem????? ´ç.;/~23425784323356832412468uytfdgczfs\ ew gdbfw er5ervlglcx h4wtrsdffsgcockvjhygrtdesrtfkgvbkjkbhuftdysestrdyghjblkhiugyt7r6fguihjoçkiu9yoiji lçj9powi4çlkhetsafv-98poeirstjf93´qow~çcf fjíco3vqejgfc80uioqwedfnc7iuwecx vcuxgfsacbugqchefs9pohc98poiyc89

3yr
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Cabelinho

I liked it a lot, I loved it, the story and plot are very original, I like the protagonist's personality and the interaction between the sect and him and the world too, I highly recommend it

3yr
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GodErebus

Yo who da Fl? - - - - - - - -—— - - - - - -— - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 1 1 1 11 ‘;;’;!:&&;!;&;&;’:&/

3yr
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Solomon_David

An entertaining story overall. However, the grammer is a bit lacking. At least the right pronouns are used. A lot of novels that are translated mix up the he, her, she, and him pronouns, making me wonder if the person is a hermaphrodite. At least, so far, I haven't encountered this problem in this novel yet. If you don't mind the grammatical errors of using the wrong tense, which are the majority of the mistakes, you might enjoy this fantasy novel.

1yr
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mookalya

Fun op mc romp in a xianxia world. I like the mc he amuses me

1yr
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Bashir_Jajere

this is just sooo addictive....the mc is smart,cool and strong. story development is awesome. I mean I don't even have enough words for this book

1yr
View 0 Replies
Zerk8126

this book has terrible grammar the story is pretty good and makes sense but the grammar is killing me. Definitely needs an editor

1yr
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MajidX200

I didn't read the story (not my style) but I respect the author's passion and perseverance.❤ (Thanks to Google Translate)

1yr
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Daoist8b2ZUY

is it harem?‽?????????????????????????????? so far its good but i dont want to see a harem

1yr
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Amateur_03

This novel has good points and bad. Good points were these: •Does MC has great fighting and defense sense? Well, he has guts when facing the enemy, he knows how to retreat and ignore taunting from the cliche classic young master of the enemy. •What about his Overall Strength? He can't even utilize his full potential, In this one situation, time was tight and the enemy are on the 2 to 3 full realms stronger than him, he can breakthrough anytime to surpass the gap because he had the strength that can fight 2 realms in the gap but of course, it is limited only when facing 1 to 3 enemies, but in multiple, he has good grasps in formation and some forbidden arts to accelerate his realm into 2 realms in an instant. Of course, that would burn his strength and it's only limited as well. He keeps insisting on holding back from his breakthrough because of this some important heaven essences what you called that from the Mythical Frozen Domain etc. So he's holding back from breaking through. Well, what more he could ask, he had the Gate Beyond Heaven (a spatial world that was left by his parents, and it has unlimited resources). So he can train to the point he was strong enough to erase the restriction of the Mythical Frozen Domain chuchu. He has wasted enough time increasing his strength and too many emotional strings that could keep him from getting stronger. •The MCs character is a simp, he was someone who has an Emperor's Destiny, and the things that were left by his parents literally could make him on top and the world beyond worlds. But he was even hesitating when he was asked to take a useless woman to be his master. Well maybe because he wants to take that granny in his harem because she was the no. 1 beauty chuchu in her prime and of course, he was capable enough to cure her. You can read what would the author has in mind, it's a harem route in the end.

1yr
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Roman123

Everything would not be what, well, the naivety and forgetfulness of Mac sometimes just amazes, I have read up to 500 chapters, I will not go on

1yr
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Dluxe
LV 15 Badge

Really good story for those interested in the genre. Very high quality with consistent daily uploads since I began reading early on. The author clearly has a story plan where things become clear as time passes and there is plenty of time for the character to learn and develop more. I’m always curious to know what is going to happen next and there is so much more room in the world background to discover in the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author, one of the only stories that I’ve kept up with since joining Webnovel.

2yr
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Tenthousandsuns

Ya'll its been so long reading cultivation novels where i haven't wanted to just rush and skip to when the mc upgrades. This story is actually good!!!!! The first few chapters had me questioning but after 8 or even 9 broooo

2yr
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crimsontail_01

Whenever mc goes on his adventures, someone always watch his back/monitor him, and then he goes like 'I have bad premonition' but then he still act like idiot and then run for his life🥴

2yr
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Kar_Min

To be honest, the start wasn't really bad but when the academy arc comes it goes wrong. Mc become really stupid in that arc. He shouldn't have use shadow movement technique as his main movement and show it off. Not only that his intelligence team also use that technique which can easily be traced back to him. And he looked down on monarch when he can't even defeat saint one easily. It's becoming really painful to read.

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2yr
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mert_mert_1022

I recommend you read the novel, you will not regret it. It's a good novel. good luck to the author.

2yr
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usman7881

Great Story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

2yr
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Sahin_Ahmed_5099

After 650+ chapters I'm back to give another review. ~Mc isn't stupid, he doesn't chase skirts like most of the Cultivation novel MC's. He is hardworking, shameless, shows kindness and doesn't show mercy to his enemies. ~Side characters who's their own problems and life. They are not there to only shine the MC but they are flesh out characters who has their own uniqueness. Character development is really good. ~World building is also a strong point of the novel. There are another world's ready to be explored, there are multiple continents with their own uniqueness. And you can expect much more in the future. ~ Enemies are strong, really strong with great backgrounds and has massive armies. There are more than couple of enemies that MC has to face before continuing his journey. One more powerful than the other. ~Battle scenes are really good. It takes his intelligence as well his strength to come out on the positive side of the battles. ~English is the the best but it's not the worst either with few grammatical errors. ~Romance has potential. Trust me on this but i see that author knows his stuff and you can expect a gradual building relationship between characters. ~It is a well paced story neither slow nor fast. ~MC has his plot armor but that will not make him OP, though it will give him an immense potential on his journey to the top.He isn't seeking strength for some b*lls**t reasons but to save his life and the lives of his subordinates. ~MC is not omnipotent he will make mistakes, he has his own flaws. But let me remind you without flaws there will be a limited space for character growth. Overall a very good gem of a novel.If you've read this far that give it a try you'll surely love it.

2yr
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ShuraZero

This is Harem o no harem??...................................................................................................... ............................................................................................... ...............................................................................................

2yr
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naruto_shippuden_6468

amazing read , has a great story line with alot of mystery . the story has a lot of room for a long entertainmenting storyline and l Hope the Arthur continues to the end

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2yr
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Lucefero

This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.

2yr
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blackceleste

This is interesting. Not the typical reincarnation stories and the mc don't have a system to rely on. Still, he is strong enough to learn things on his own. I also like the part where he has strong enemies at the start, not the usual ones who start along with an MCs role---from small rivals. If u know what I mean.

2yr
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fud0shiki

But the important thing is................................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . DOES IT HAVE LEMONSSSS

2yr
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Axzile
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Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ Spoiler Alert !!!!!!!!!!! For those who had read Against The Gods prepare to be "TRIGGERED" because of the non-stop trouble coming after MC one after another without a second of delay(and i MEANT IT), beautiful women with past problems/troubles that just keep coming into the life of MC( i've no problem with the ones from his sect ), also his women(basically his entire sect) or those that he care get hurts while he gone even when he literally less than 1KM away from them they still get hurts without him knowing anything. Seriously, i'm really TTTTRRRRIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGEEEEEERRRREEEEEDDDD right now........

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theyasuke_

There's no need to hesitate to hop on this novel. it's carry entertaining and impressive, not the best but still good The mc isn't brain dead like usual and the side characters are good.

2yr
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Sahin_Ahmed_5099

First of all thank you Author for this novel, really appreciate your work. If you're looking for a story with great story, world building, interesting characters,great fight scene ,regular update and of course mature and intelligent mc than this is a gem for you. I'm in chap 304 now, author did a great job with his till now and if you haven't read this novel you're missing one of the best novel in this site of this genre. Atleast do try it out before you decide you should read or not. You'll not regret it. Author looking forward to your hard work thanks 🙏

2yr
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thats_right_3880

overall i like the story but i have watched 150 chapter and overall mc does have his value due to his 'plot armor' but everytime time in front of the enemy he is pathetic, mc is cool but i dont whem he will be equal to his enemy like according to every cultivation novel in this time of story where mc can fight higer level than his own cultivation cultivator he would always be on the run like just from reading 150 chapter i got to know his first enemy is strong and he needs to reach high level cultivation but he discovered that his enemy has a backer who is several times stronger than them and due to mc sect having divine artifact whole class sect also after him like i hate this kind of story where mc is always on th run and can only sign of relief and not be vigilent when he reached top of the omniverse and until then it would have already 1500 chapter and when he relaxed this would only be 3 chater like evrytime time i read cultivation novel the thing i want to see only happens in a overpowered mc cultivation novel or only at the end of every normal cultivation novel.....anyway this is my opinion ....... ... for those who are interested in cultivation novel, intelligent mc novel, little bit op mc(only because of his 'plot armor'), and no harem? i dont know .... it is extremly good read..

2yr
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Max_129474

This,............. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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EVILCLOWN

Good novel give it a chance it's about a mc with low talent getting transmigrated without a cheat. Only problem I feel is the unnecessary hype surrounding mc mysterious situation. I just read a fanfic where the author created hype about MC's father and didn't reveal him. And when the father finally got revealed, it was disappointing (he was revealed in ch 150).

3yr
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LeiShem

harem????? ´ç.;/~23425784323356832412468uytfdgczfs\ ew gdbfw er5ervlglcx h4wtrsdffsgcockvjhygrtdesrtfkgvbkjkbhuftdysestrdyghjblkhiugyt7r6fguihjoçkiu9yoiji lçj9powi4çlkhetsafv-98poeirstjf93´qow~çcf fjíco3vqejgfc80uioqwedfnc7iuwecx vcuxgfsacbugqchefs9pohc98poiyc89

3yr
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Cabelinho

I liked it a lot, I loved it, the story and plot are very original, I like the protagonist's personality and the interaction between the sect and him and the world too, I highly recommend it

3yr
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GodErebus

Yo who da Fl? - - - - - - - -—— - - - - - -— - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 1 1 1 11 ‘;;’;!:&&;!;&;&;’:&/

3yr
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